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Chapter 41 | The Tale of Two Kingdoms

Arrangements

"What!" exclaimed Ellika.

"Have we ever even met him?" said Temmin blankly.

"I should say we haven't!" said Ellika hotly. "How could you!"

"Ellika," said Ansella warningly.

"No, Mama, no!" cried Ellika rising to her feet. "Papa, how could you be so heartless!"

"We are the king," he answered coldly. "We cannot afford to have a heart, and we are in need of improving our alliance with Sairland."

"So you're just going to give your daughter, your favorite daughter--oh it's all right, Papa, I'm glad you love one of the three of us--you're going to give Seddy to a stranger, as if she was a prize horse!" shouted Ellika, brown eyes blazing. "If this is how you treat the favorite, I shudder to think what my fate will be!"

"Enough, Ellika!" roared Harsin. "Go to your room!"

"Oh, never worry!" she roared right back. "It is entirely my pleasure to leave the royal presence, your majesty!" Ellika threw her napkin on the table, turned on her heel and stormed out of the room.

Temmin stared after her in astonishment and turned back to his parents. Ansella was crying silent tears, while Harsin's face was the color of his wine. "And do you have any comment, son?" said Harsin in a dangerous voice.

"Not right now, no," said Temmin. "Only that--can't Sedra have some say in the matter, Papa? Even if it's just when she's to marry this Brinnid person? You can't take everything away from her!"

"I can, I shall and I have. I suggest moving to a different subject or taking your leave."

Temmin rose. "I s'pose I'll take my leave, then. Mama, Papa--" he bowed shortly. "I need to see to my sisters." He walked out of the dining room, leaving his father near apoplexy.

Temmin climbed the stairs, his mind moving faster than his feet for once. There was no getting Sedra out of this. They had all known that the girls would be destined for diplomatic marriages; Sedra herself had reminded him what her fate would be only two weeks past. It just seemed too soon! Granted, she was 19, but shouldn't she have some sort of say in it, however small--even just to be given a chance to get to know Brinnid a little before she was yoked to him forever? He sighed and knocked on Sedra's door.

To his surprise, Ellika opened it and pulled him inside without a word. She closed the door, put her back to it and said, "Maybe you can get something out of her."

Temmin turned, but Sedra wasn't anywhere in sight. Instead, Sedra's maid Camma stood in the center of the room, arms crossed. "Camma, what's going on? Where's the princess?"

"I'm sure I don't know, your highness," said Camma firmly.

"That's all she'd tell me, either," said Ellika, echoing Camma's crossed arms. "Camma, please, you must tell us, you know we're on Seddy's side!"

"That's as may be, your highness, but I don't know and if I did I wouldn't say."

"Never mind," said Temmin with sudden realization. "I know where she's gotten to. Elly, stay here. If Mama comes looking for Seddy, keep her busy--keep her busy, both of you." Camma turned pale as he spoke, and when their eyes met, he could see he was on the right track. He gave her a small, grim smile, and headed for the door.

"Don't give her away, I beg you, your highness!" said Camma, low and urgent.

"Never worry, Camma," said Temmin as he shut the door on Ellika's puzzled face. He ran down to the mud room, slipped off his good shoes and put on a pair of sturdy boots, tucking in his pants legs--there would be no repeat of the last time he ran after Sedra--took off out the door and walked across the lawn at a purposeful pace toward the King's Woods. He desperately wanted to break into a run, but he didn't want to draw any more attention to himself than necessary. As it was, he was worried, but he hoped that if either of his parents were watching or enquired after him, it would be dismissed as a sulk. Best to play it up just in case, he thought; he stuffed his hands deep into his pockets, hunched his shoulders angrily and put a bit of stomp to his step, but as soon as he got into the Woods proper, he dropped the attitude and began looking for Sedra in earnest. It didn't take him long before he spotted the bright caravans of the Travelers, clumped in a clearing.

Temmin was afraid of the Travelers, and, he felt, for good reason. He didn't know if they possessed magic now, but at one time at least a couple of them had, and apparently it was hereditary if the Teacher was any example. The last thing he wanted was to become enchanted. Even so, love and concern for his oldest sister stiffened his back. And, after all, he was the Heir. Even Travelers should think twice before meddling with him, he told himself.

He set his shoulders, drew himself up as tall as possible, and strode into the encampment. A dozen heads turned, and a dozen pairs of eyes looked him up and down. "I am Temmin, Heir of Tremont," he said in a voice much stronger than he felt, "and I have reason to believe my sister the Princess Sedra is in this camp."

A wiry middle-aged man stood up from where he had been examining the axle of one of the caravans. "Oh, yeh do, do yeh? Your highness, beg pardon?" he added sardonically. A rippling snigger went through some of the men; the women simply watched with lazy smiles, some patting the heads of the little children clinging to their skirts.

You have the habit of command, Allis said so, you have the habit of command, he repeated to himself. "I do," said Temmin firmly. "And you will take me to her."

"No need to order folk about, she's right here," came a creaky voice. It belonged to an ancient woman, who looked very much like the Traveler Queen in the book--almost identical, in fact. She was leaning on the arm of a tall, handsome young man with rusty hair who could have been the twin of the Traveler Prince. On his other arm was Sedra, her expression closely matching the one her father had been wearing when last Temmin had seen him.

Temmin spoke to the old woman. "You are the Queen of these people, I presume?" he said frostily. "Does one address you as 'your majesty'?"

The Travelers let out a great mutter, and more than a few hands male and female went to their daggers. "Oh, stop it, Temmin. Show some respect, for age if not for rank," said Sedra. "How did you know where I was? Camma couldn't have told you."

"No, she didn't," said her brother. "She was as tight-lipped as a clam. It was a good guess on my part, I'd have to say," and here his proud royal front collapsed. "Seddy, you can't run away with the Travelers! You yourself told me Papa would never let you go with anyone he didn't choose, let alone a Traveler!" He gestured at the young man, whose arm Sedra was steadily squeezing tighter and tighter. "You'll get these people slaughtered!"

At this, the muttering turned to out-and-out laughter. "Kings stopped trying to kill us ages ago, your highness," said the tall young man, smirking. "Besides, we haven't agreed to take the princess anywhere. Yet."

"And you are?" said Temmin pointedly.

"Oh, I do beg your pardon, your highness," said the young man, making a sweeping bow. "My name is Connin." Names and looks run strong in the blood apparently, thought Temmin. Ah well, when he took the throne he'd be the sixth of his name; royalty must be the same all over. He just hoped the magic hadn't followed along the same lines.

"I'm not here to run away," said Sedra impatiently. "I'm here for advice--advice and comfort." She leaned her head on Connin's shoulder.

"Oh, Seddy, I feel awful about this, Ellika and I both do, we had a terrible fight with Papa, Ellka actually shouted at him!" said Temmin, taking her free hand. "Even he didn't look happy about this, I can tell you."

"He's not," said Sedra. "He's miserable about it. He told me so. But if I were in his place, I would marry a daughter off to the king of Sairland, too. Strategically, he's in the right, and I told him so. It--it's just hard, being the daughter and not the king."

"But why must you go to Sairland?"

"Sairland is our oldest ally, but the last marriage between our houses was more than three centuries ago. The alliance needs strengthening, especially now that the Nijan Empire has finally decided to end its isolation. We need the Sairish navy with us, and they need us to stand by them on their mainland. Not to mention that we don't want Nija muscling in on our trade relationships."

"But what has that got to do with you getting married?" said Temmin impatiently.

"Eddin's blood, you're a ninny," she said contemptuously. "Is Teacher not teaching, or are you not listening? I rather suspect the latter. Family ties trump all, and the Nijan Emperor never lets his children marry outside the Nijan nobility. It's the only thing we can offer that Nija cannot. Honestly, Temmin, if you're going to be king you must learn to pay attention."

"I do pay attention," he said sullenly. Sedra would be better at this ruling thing, why wasn't she a boy? he thought. If she was the heir, he could go into the cavalry without a backwards glance and never worry about any of this. "So you're going to accept this marriage?"

"How can I refuse it?" she said bitterly.

"Well," said Temmin, "maybe it won't be so bad. Perhaps Brinnid of Sairland is a brainy bookworm like you are. Who knows, perhaps the two of you can while away the Sairish winter buried in books together."

"I have heard that on the contrary, Brinnid is excessively fond of dancing and gaiety, and despises intellectual pursuits," she grimaced. "I shall be very surprised if we have two things to say to one another."

"Look at Mama and Papa," said Temmin, desperately casting about for some glimmer of hope. "Theirs was an arranged marriage, and they have absolutely nothing in common--except us, I s'pose you'll have children some day, so there's that!--but they like one another well enough!"

"If by 'all right' you mean they each have their own separate lives with their own lovers and Papa gets his way in everything, I suppose you'd call it a crashing success. My heart wants more," she said, unconsciously flexing her fingers on Connin's arm, "though my head knows it's hopeless."

She looked so sad, thought Temmin. "Will they at least let you take Camma with you?"

Sedra looked at him fully for the first time. "I don't know," she said, eyes tearing up. "Oh, Temmy, I'm frightened!" She threw herself into his arms, and for the first time in memory, Temmin comforted his oldest sister.

"It's all right, Seddy, we'll think of something," he murmured. "We'll figure out some way to make it better, you'll see."

"I love you, Temmy!" she sobbed.

"I love you, too." He kissed the top of her head and looked up into Connin's somehow familiar blue eyes. He raised an eyebrow and Connin spread his arms and made an old-fashioned, graceful leg. "What exactly are you to my sister, sir?" Temmin said coldly.

"Temmin, don't," said Sedra into his shirtfront.

"It's all right, your highness. A friend," said Connin.

Temmin stared at him a little longer, then kissed his sister's hair again. "Let's get you home," he said, "Ellika's worried sick and Camma is beside herself with fear I'll do something rash and tell everyone where you went. You lot," he said to the Travelers, "I know you've got the run of the King's Woods, but I strongly suggest you clear off. I'm not going to say anything, but if the king finds out, custom won't protect you."

"We don't need custom to protect us and your father knows it, I assure you," said the crone with a grim smile. "Sedra, just remember what I've taught you, there's a good girl, off you go." And she shooed the siblings out of the camp with her apron, just as if they were a pair of chickens.

"What she taught you?" said Temmin as they walked together back through the woods. "Sedra, what have you been doing?"

"Never mind, Temmin," answered Sedra, leaning on his arm. Her eyes were heavy and swollen. "Please, just never mind right now."

"You promise you will talk to me at some point?"

"I promise."

"All right, then."

They walked in silence until Temmin's stomach growled so loud it made Sedra jump. She burst out laughing. "Poor Temmy, I made you miss your lunch. Make sure you get something in the kitchens before you go back upstairs." Temmin squeezed her arm and they went the rest of the way without speaking.

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

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Comments

Sharkinabox's picture

Grmph

I am frustrated with Temmin's patience, but that is just an artifact of my own curiosity. I really don't fault him for being willing to wait before being told what exactly is going on. But I wish I could. I could know more, faster, that way.

J.'s picture

Mmmm, interesting development

Mmmm, interesting development here. I begin to wonder if the Travelling Queen (or descendant thereof - I'm not going to automatically assume it is the same woman) has been teaching Sedra woman's wisdom (which is not the same thing as women's magic, though it may seem so to befuddled men).

It seems clear all parties directly involved (Sedra, the Travellers in question), knew this would come, so it brings one to wonder how long Sedra has been meeting the Travellers, to wonder what depth of knowledge/experience/wisdom? she may have gained from them.

Curiosity, as ever, eats at me.

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

The Travellers

They make for an interesting bunch. I'm not so sure about Connin, but I would speculate that, like Teacher, at least the Travellers' Queen herself is indeed the same person from the stories of old.

IIRC, Teacher mentioned that Sedra has been the go-between for him and the Travellers' Queen for a good while, and I am quite curious to know what it is Sedra got tought by them.

BCT's picture
Devotee

Hmm...

I'd love to see more of Sedra. She's not quite as...flamboyant is the wrong word, but it's very late, too late for exacting vocabulary. She's definitely more stoic, which is obvious. One of the big mysteries is what went wrong between her and Teacher.

Quick typo check: "we had a terrible fight with Papa, Ellka actually shouted at him!" Needs an i.

Could we get a world map, or at least a vague description of distances between the countries? How far away Sairland is from Tremont determines how often the siblings can see each other. That is, if Sedra doesn't run away. And, from what little we know about her, I don't think she will.

We see a bit of Harsin through Sedra - obviously, Harsin talks to his eldest child differently than to his other kids. You mentioned in an earlier chapter, Harsin is very intellectual, and can only talk on such a level with very few people. Hence the different tactics between Sedra and Temmin, and seemingly, he doesn't talk to Ellika at all. I know I know, Captain Obvious. Sticking out tongue

- BCT

D's picture

More Sedra

If I remember correctly, Meilin herself said that we would be seeing more of Sedra in the next 'book', The Queen who ruled herself, or was it by herself. I dont remember. I am really looking forward to that. She is one character that we haven't really seen a lot of and I find her to be one of the more interesting ones, mostly because, I think, she doesn't wear her emotions on her sleeve.
Once we switch POVs we should be able to see what she is thinking and how she feels about things.

My alignment is Chaotic Awesome.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

world map

I'm hoping to produce one soon, because *I* need to know where everything is so I don't cut my own tow rope. Sairland is far enough away that a visit would be a major to-do and would mean long stays once you're there. Brinnid isn't coming for a couple of weeks; he's coming for several months. Officially it's to "win" Sedra, but that's already a foregone conclusion. The treaty's been in the works for a year or more. Once she's married, there may be visits, but not for some time. Sedra would be expected to produce at least a couple of children, if not an heir, before she could return home for a visit, Harsin plans to have Ellika married off soon, and Temmin is too busy with his studies to be allowed to go anywhere. It's likely that Ansella would be the one to do most of the visiting. Other than that, letters would have to suffice.

V's picture
Embodiment

Yay for maps

Makes sense. The alliance is the real reason, and a stay of several months allows the groom to explore and learn about his bride's country...cement the understanding and the friendships that are the true benefits of these marriages.

I was thinking about asking for some sort of map...glad to hear one's in the works. It'll help a lot, even if only as a quick reference so I can look up names.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

Lanir's picture

Suddenly Betrothed

The haste here is the part that sounds kind of odd. Who would be pushing Sedra and Brinnid to get married fast?

Jagroq's picture

I'm guessing that the king

I'm guessing that the king has been in contact with Nijan or some other country and knows or suspects war is going to break out soon and wants to sure up his alliances. Either that or he realy does have a heart and waited till the last moment to tell Sedra to save her worrying about her upcoming wedding.

The only thing I can't figure out is, if my first guess is true why Temmy isn't half way to cavelry boot camp by now.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Alliances must always be tended

Whether there's war or no. There hasn't been a marriage between the two houses in 300-400 years, and though trade ties are strong, the re-awakening of Nija means creating stronger ties with everyone else. Nija is the only other country big/strong enough to be a world power, and it's kept to itself. So Harsin will be looking to strengthen alliances with Sairland and the Far Isles (the full name of the country) and several other countries in anticipation of competition with the Nijan Empire. (Note: The country's name is Nija; its empire, language and its inhabitants are Nijan.)

V's picture
Embodiment

Is it sudden?

Who's pushing them to get married fast? I haven't seen anything about a rapid wedding...just a sudden announcement. Could your objection be restated: "Well, I think the two kingdoms should have introduced them while keeping the plans a secret, let them get to know each other, THEN told them that they had to get married"? I'd find that situation much odder than this one. While it's marginally more romantic, it's far more practical to announce the marriage once it has been decided...which it has been. As everyone in the story seems to admit, the feelings of Sedra and Brinnid towards each other are one of the least concerns in affairs of state. Better to marry a stranger than risk having to marry one you already know you dislike.

Jagroq: Even if the king has a pressing urge to shore up his alliances, that doesn't mean the entire kingdom will be mobilizing for war. War may be imminent but the marriage will forestall it when Nija sees their combined strength. War may be imminent but contained near Sairland.

And even if there is war...that might cause Temmin's education to be accelerated, but I don't think it would be drastically changed. Putting the regent's only male son in mortal danger is generally frowned upon...note that it was Prince Harry that served in Iraq, not Prince William.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

wendal's picture

The King

Does he have any people skills? If he does I haven't seen any. I get the feeling he thinks that of others only in how they are of use to him.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

When he needs to

...which isn't often, he can be quite charming. His power in Tremont is absolute.

Shade's picture
Supplicant

I, too, like Sedra. It's

I, too, like Sedra. It's refreshing to see a character with some sense Sticking out tongue Not that the others are completely lacking, but I generally enjoy cool-headed people more.

I'm also insanely curious to know just what she was doing with the travellers Laughing out loud

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

Dense

You'd think Temmin would catch on after a while; he's incredibly dense about some things. I mean, Teacher, the Traveler Queen, and Connin, all the same as in the story, and he knows perfectly well about their proclivity for enchantments and magics, but he can't believe they are 800+ years old, and won't even entertain the thought of it?

Eesh.

And he's brash in his command. Maybe he'll chill out a bit as he gets used to it and temper that tone with some insight and polite words. A high-and-mighty tone is really the least part of leading people....

I'll let you know when I figure it out.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

He was scared

When he's scared he acts like a dope, hence the brash commanding style. He's 16. He's learning. Smiling

Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

Ok, now you've got me thinking.

What good reason would someone have to live for more than 800 years? I can think of one, very implausible one.

There is a lot of talk about the embodiments of the gods in this story. But from what I can tell the embodiments are chosen by mere people. What if Teacher, Connin, and the Queen are true embodiments. As in having actual power imbued from the gods themselves. Of course, that begs the question of which gods. And why would one of them be bound to the Kings of Tremont? Now there is a story I'd like to hear. (Yes, I know I have 50 points now. No, that is not the story I'm asking for. And no, I haven't decided what is yet.)

Trystia's picture

I was actually thinking

I was actually thinking something somewhat along those lines, but actually thought of demigods. Clearly the gods of this world are fairly promiscuous, that's been brought up. Perhaps Teacher and the Queen are the children of gods and draw their longevity from that? And if Teacher was a Tremont, that would certainly tie him to the family and explain his magic. There'd still be plenty of questions left to answer, but that could be a starting point perhaps.

Kunama's picture
Petitioner

Travellers

"He raised an eyebrow and Connin spread his arms and made an old-fashioned, graceful leg."

What leg?

Bwahahaha. Temmin is lucky to be related to Sedra, seems treating Travellers like that is walking a very fine line, rashness of youth or no.

I'm going to guess Sedra is learning women's magic from the Traveller Queen. She is royalty after all. If Temmin shows signs of being able to manipulate magic, why can't Sedra?

MeiLin's picture
Most High

To make a leg

...is to put one leg out, I believe it's the right one, and bow over it. It's an old-fashioned men's bow, and in the days of tights and breeches displayed a handsome, well-formed leg to great advantage.

Kunama's picture
Petitioner

teh leg

Ohhhh. I think I've seen that before. Always thought of it as bowing with a flourish, or the male version of a curtsey. Interesting.

Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

Hmm

I always thought it was putting one leg back.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

that's probably the actual movement

But the effect is an extended leg to the front.

Frank's picture

Hmm ...

It seems to me that Ellika would be more of a match for this Brinnid fellow. Eye-wink

raecchi's picture
Devotee

I was just thinking that

I was just thinking that myself! Why not marry her off to this guy? At least they'd have something in common, or be more likely to than he and Sedra would.

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

I suspect two things. (a)

I suspect two things.
(a) Value(first daughter) > Value(second daughter)
(b) Sedra is closer in age to a (perhaps) older prince.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

Also

Also, it makes better political sense to put a hare-brained party king with a solid and sensible queen than it does to stick the profligate with the belle-of-the-ball. That guy and Ellika would probably spell political disaster.

I'll let you know when I figure it out.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

now, now

Where does it say that Brinnid is hare-brained? We haven't even met the guy yet! I myself have had just the barest introduction. Smiling

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

Hrmph

From this part: "Brinnid is excessively fond of dancing and gaiety, and despises intellectual pursuits." Excess and spite make me think he's hare-brained. He might be fun at a party though, if he's not a brat.

Of course, maybe the information on him is all lies.

I'll let you know when I figure it out.

Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

Lies?

Maybe, but I'm thinking more along the lines of skewed perspective. Look who it is we're talking about marrying him after all.

Daymon's picture
Petitioner

Misunderstanding

Very true it could just be a misunderstanding. Sedra is a smart woman and doesn't attend a lot of social functions I would guess, so anyone that goes to more she might describe as "fond of dancing and gaiety." Also if he doesn't study even half as much as she does she might say he "despises intellectual pursuits."

We will meet him soon enough and then we can see if he is like she describes, or if there is more to him than Sedra said.

Kaisar Ryu's picture
Petitioner

Wait and See

I think we can fairly well count on there being more than was said as what was said was based on hearsay. Now the question raised is going to be will this prince be a better or worse match for Sedra than she currently fears he will. That could be developed either way. Assuming his social proclivities (I think thats the word I'm searching for) are accurate, will he demand she attend such functions with him, or will he be understanding and possibly happy to have a spouse that can happily administer things on his behalf? Two possibilities in a sea of oportunity. What will be most entertaining and most dramatic? Does it matter? MeiLin has already said she has barely met the prince, but does she know where she wants him to develope? I rarely have more than base guidelines for my characters before I start playing them or writing them, depending on thier media. I am still hopefull about the prince.

A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down.

Frank's picture

Well ...

It seems I've started quite the little debate ... I was just making an innocent observation.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

that's a good thing!

Keep making observations, innocent or otherwise!

LAR_Northman's picture

Oh I don't know

I actually liked how he handled the Travalers. He's forceful euogh to let them know he means business, but otherwise respectful. Also he doesn't harsh demands or threats.
He's concerned for his sister and betting they will forgive a little rudeness.

As for what Sedra has been learning? I am going to go out on a limb and say magic. We know Temmin has some magic maybe she does too.

Kaisar Ryu's picture
Petitioner

Temmin and Magic

Several of you have mentioned this connection, but again, if you actualy look back, what Temmin has is the ability to Perceive magic. Not neccesarily the same thing. It may be the start of magic, but best not to assume anything too early. And while it is possible that Sedra is similarly gifted, the suprise seen by Teacher about Temmin would lead me to belive that he had not seen any signs of magic from her. On the other hand, being the intermediary for two beings who seem to be geased into separation, a scholarly person would be interested in learning what she could, and the travelers, their queen in particular, are likely to have a lot of knowledge and, more importantly, that wisdom mentioned early in this pages chain. I'd be more likely to belive the side of wisdomly advice than magical training in this case.

A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down.

LAR_Northman's picture

True

True, I don't have any proof, but it's not a wholly unreasonable speculation either.
One of my reasons for speculating this is that the Teacher has seen other signs. If Sedra has magic it would be a sign.
But this is mostly intuition talking, could be right, could be wrong

DrMorganes's picture
Petitioner

On the subject of magic

According to what we've read, there is magic in the blood of Tremont. However, we have also read that there is a certain magic associated with the rightful king. Warin received a boost in power when his father died; a further indication of his rightful claim to the throne. Teacher himself noted that the rightful King of Tremont also is able to compel Teacher to direct his own magic in various ways. We've seen this through Temmin's red-bound history book.

My point?

Perhaps the thinning magic in the Tremont line had to do with some form of illegitimate claim being laid to the crown, and maybe - just maybe - Temmin's ability to perceive magic (which by Teacher's own admission is more than has been seen in the line for several generations) is the beginning of things being set aright once more?

--The Good Doctor, Morganes

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

On Magic

I prefer to think that the royal blood hasn't thinned over the years, but rather has, in some manner, willingly set aside or locked away its magic for some greater good. I would much prefer to see that sort of rational judgment than an involuntary dissipation of their abilities. I think the Teacher serves in some way as the key to the royal magic.

I'll let you know when I figure it out.

theonefayth's picture

Thinning magic and signs

Maybe the signs that Teacher and The King keep talking about are actually pointing to the older sister. Wouldn't that knock them on their arses?

Trystia's picture

Personally, I was suspecting

Personally, I was suspecting something along the lines of the magic being renounced at one point. One member of the family horribly abused it, and the next king to take the throne renounced the magic, feeling that noone should have such power, but of course couldn't affect the Teacher's magic. And so no member of the royal family has had it since, but it's finally starting to peek out, hoping that maybe it will be accepted now.

Kaisar Ryu's picture
Petitioner

Not horribly off from my thoughts

Its quite a likely explanation, though my slight addendum would have been the gods banning it for a bit as punishment, getting distracted and forgetting to undo their curse on the line.

A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down.

Katie's picture
Supplicant

awww

'but it's finally starting to peek out, hoping that maybe it will be accepted now'

brought to mind my daughter peeking out of time out. 'Am I okay now? I can come out? Peese?'

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Trystia's picture

Memories...

My parents were awful about things like that and could often forget either what they were punishing us for, or that they were punishing us at all. I can't remember a punishment lasting much longer than a full day until I was old enough to drive, and I would always try to take advantage of that by trying to get out of the punishment early by asking to do the thing that was forbidden, hoping they'd forgotten already. Really poor short term memory runs in my family though, so half the time -I- would forget what I was in trouble for.

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