Temmin woke up Nerrday morning with a clear head for the first time since he came home from the Temple. By the time he'd finished his ride and breakfast, he still felt a little raw emotionally, but he no longer felt as if he was bleeding from his pores. A good walloping by Jenks and a good argument with Ellika had been the ticket apparently, he thought as he returned to his study from breakfast.
"So," he said to the Teacher as he seated himself at the library table, "are you well pleased with yourself after last night?"
"I am always well pleased with myself," said the Teacher dryly. "The question is, are you feeling better about life and your relationship to it?"
Temmin played with the history book, sending it spinning in a circle on the table top between his hands. "Yes, I think. I s'pose I have to thank you now?"
"You may thank me by paying attention to your studies."
"I am paying attention!" said Temmin. "If I paid any more attention I'd never come out of this thing. Will I find out today whether that princess ever thanked Warin the Wise?"
"For what?" said the Teacher, raising a brow.
"For what?! For saving her!" said Temmin, echoing the raised brow. "For coming to her rescue!"
"How about thanking him for taking advantage of her enchantment? For lying to her about what he was and not telling her what had happened to her? And she killed Hildin herself, recall."
Temmin threw his hands up in exasperation, stopped the book before it spun off the table's edge, and opened it.
"You had to. You know this," said the Teacher gently. "You could not leave this kingdom to your brother any more than you could have left the Princess with him."
"I came back for her, and only her, truly."
"Then it is a good thing for us all that you found love in the forest, your majesty, for Hildin's regency was indifferent at best and cruel at worst. If he had succeeded in his plans to kill you and inherit the magic--your father's, and control over mine--it would have been an evil, evil thing for the people of this land."
Warin looked out onto the pleasure gardens below his window, then started and stared. Walking hesitantly in the gardens among the flowers was an unfamiliar figure--a young woman dressed richly but all in black, her hair and face covered. She looked up at the castle and Warin realized with a shock it was the princess. "Emmae," he whispered.
The Teacher put a hand on Warin's shoulder. "Don't. Let her be."
"I can't let her be, don't you have any feeling inside you at all?" snapped the new king. He ran to the doors opening out onto the terrace above the garden, and took the steps two at a time. She stopped in her aimless ramble, and looked for a moment as if she might bolt. He checked his stride, and she reluctantly resumed walking.
He fell into step beside her at a respectful distance, but didn't try to take her hand as he would have before. "My lady, you are in mourning."
"My husband is dead, it's only right that I dress in black, your majesty," she replied softly, not meeting his eyes.
"Did you care for him that much, then?"
She looked up at him, eyes hard even through the black veil. "I despised him," she said coldly. She looked down again. "Nevertheless. If I am dowager queen, I cannot completely ignore protocol. I shall wear mourning for him. For one day and one day only." She quirked a corner of her mouth at him and his heart lifted.
"I shall be glad to see you in bright colors again," he said. "I am glad to see you at all, to be truthful."
"I missed you too." They walked on in silence, stopping whenever the princess found a flower too tempting to leave on its stem.
"I'm sorry," Warin finally said.
"For what?"
"I'm sorry I couldn't get here sooner. I'm sorry I just assumed you'd still want to marry me." He chanced a glance at her; she was resolutely not looking at him but focused instead on the forest beyond the gardens. He followed her eyes. The rest of the Travelers had caught up and made camp at the edge of the woods, their caravans bright against the cool green, and he winced. "And most of all, I'm sorry I didn't tell you who I was, or what had happened to you."
"You should be. You should be very sorry." Her voice quavered with suppressed anger. "When did you discover my enchantment?"
"That first night, after--I knew there was something wrong once you'd fallen asleep, and I cast a discovery charm of my own. But I swear I didn't know who you were."
She stopped abruptly, staring at him. "So. The whole time."
"I couldn't lift the spell, its nature was beyond anything I could do, but I couldn't leave you alone and unable to care for yourself in the dead of winter to find the Traveler Queen--nor could I bring you with me. Only think what could have happened if I'd taken you out of the forest!" he pleaded. "I left you alone to come to me of your own free will after that night. I waited, and you came to me. I wanted to win you fairly, and I thought I had, but--I want to win you again. I will do anything you want, anything to earn your forgiveness and for you to love me again!" Warin started to reach for her, but stopped himself. "What must I do?" he whispered.
"I don't know," she said. "I want to be left alone now." She dropped the flowers she'd gathered and ran as fast as she could back to the castle, her long mourning veil tangling in the rose thorns so badly that she left it behind. Warin watched her go. After a moment, he bent down and picked up the discarded blossoms. He patiently detached the veil from the thorns and slowly retraced his steps to his apartments, his expression as black as the cloth in his hands.
"Don't," he said to the Teacher as he came back into the room. "Just, don't."
"I would never reproach you, Warin" came the quiet reply. "You know how to woo a woman, but this one is wounded. Give her time. Be steadfast and patient, and woo her properly. She will be open to your suit in time."
That night, the princess would not come to the great hall for dinner. But when her tray was brought to her in her rooms, she found the flowers she had dropped, arranged in a little nosegay tied up in simple ribbons with a little note:
For a moment, the maidservant thought the princess would throw the flowers across the room, but then her face softened and tears formed in her eyes. She set the little posey back on the tray and said, to the maidservant's relief, "Please find a vase for them."
Even so, she didn't leave her rooms the next day, or the day after that, or indeed, for a whole week. Finally, her father came to her rooms and demanded admittance. "When d'you think you'll be done with this sulk, young lady?" Fredrik said sternly as he swept into the room, though he pulled up short when he saw her bloodshot eyes and pale face.
"Sulk?! Papa, how dare you say such a thing to me!" answered the princess, a little of her old fire returning. "I have spent the last six months a captive, and you dare to call it a sulk when I choose not to sit with one of my captors at dinner!"
"Surely you're not accusing King Warin of holding you captive!" said Fredrik, shocked.
"I don't know," said the miserable princess. "But he knew, Papa, he knew what had happened to me and took advantage, and now I don't know how I feel."
Fredrik patted her hand. "Well, my dear, I suggest you sort out how you feel soon. He has asked for your hand and I have given it--now, don't look at me like that! He has also said that he will only marry you when you agree to it and not a minute before. But I have business of my own to attend to back in Leutefloss. I can't stay here for months and months while you make up your mind. And you are my only heir, barring a miracle from my latest mistress--" here she glared at him-- "Ehm. Well. The fact of the matter, my dear, is that you must marry someone, and soon. You have a month to decide whether that man is to be King Warin. After that, we shall return to Leutefloss, and I will be entertaining suitors for your hand, for the good of the kingdom."
He braced himself, waiting for one of her usual tantrums. Instead she nodded and looked away, shoulders shaking, and his heart broke for her. He gathered her into his arms. "Oh, Papa!" she sobbed as he rocked her in his arms as he hadn't done since her mother died.
The princess continued to eat all of her meals in her apartments looking out over the King's Woods, not far from the room where she'd been held captive. But on every tray, she found some small gift from the new king. One time, it was a little wooden rabbit like the one on her broomhandle, obviously carved by Warin's own hands. Another morning, instead of her usual dainty breakfast, Warin sent her a good thick porridge, and she laughed for the first time since the spell had been broken. The next day, there were three daffodils on her tray; she never learned how far he'd had to send to find daffodils still in bloom. He sent her a little pillow made of rabbit fur and stuffed with lavender, her unfinished embroidery from the cottage--anything he could think of to remind her of the happy days they had had. Finally one morning, he sent her the ring he'd traded his furs for in the village, a simple golden band.
That night, she came down to dinner for the first time since her enchantment ended. She sat on the other side of her father, who sat next to Warin. "My lady, are you well?" the new king asked.
The princess blushed and refused to meet his eyes, but said "Tolerably well, your majesty, thank you." Throughout the dinner, she shyly answered his attempts at conversation, if briefly, and he was overjoyed to see that, just as she had said she would, she had put aside her widow's weeds for a blue dress the color of her eyes.
But, he noted sadly, the ring was not around her right ring finger. He wondered if it ever would be, but he remembered what the Teacher had told him: Be steadfast and patient.
"Well," said Temmin, stretching as he usually did when he came out of the book, "I s'pose I understand her reluctance a little better now. But if she was going to be married off to someone regardless, wouldn't she want it to be someone she knew and liked, and who loved her?"
"Someone who she felt betrayed her," said the Teacher.
"To protect her! He only took advantage the once! Or--well--Pagg's balls, you can't blame the poor man for wanting her, she was willing, beautiful, and right there! Well, not perhaps completely willing. Was she willing? How do you decide these things!"
"You decide them by taking away the most coercive element. Once the the spell was gone, the princess was then able to make up her mind on her own within the choices she had."
"Doesn't seem like much of a choice to me," snorted Temmin.
"And perhaps that's the point," murmured the Teacher. "Go eat your lunch."
The Teacher didn't need to say it twice; Temmin jumped up and was halfway down the stairs before he realized he hadn't even properly taken his leave of his tutor. Oh well, he shrugged, he'd make it up after lunch.
He was last but for Sedra into the dining room; Ellika and his parents were already there, chatting amiably and acting as if she hadn't been whisked off in the middle of the night to do penance for sexually teasing her brother. Temmin mentally rolled his eyes and took his place at the table, his eyes flicking over the empty chair. "Is Sedra coming down?"
"No," said his mother hesitantly, "I don't think so."
Harsin took an impatient sip of his wine. "She'll get over it."
"Get over what?" said Ellika, frowning.
Ansella looked stricken. Harsin finally said, "She's unhappy with a decision we've made about her future."
"You've made about her future," whispered Ansella.
"WE have made about her future!" snapped Harsin. "We are the state, madam, as you know very well." Ansella gazed at her hands, her mouth tightly compressed.
Temmin looked at Ellika, but she seemed as confused as he was. "Papa," he asked, "what is this decision?"
Harsin threw back the rest of his wine and gestured for Affton to refill his glass. "She will be accepting the suit of Brinnid, King of Sairland and the Far Isles. He'll be arriving for the formal courtship ceremonies and wedding some time after Neya's Day."
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So, I started reading over
So, I started reading over the weekend after sort of getting linked to here from ToMU, and would just like to say what a wonderfully engaging story this is, and it has me almost as hooked as ToMU! It's a bit more difficult to identify with Temmin, but I love the world that you've built up so far, and really look forward to reading more.
thanks!
I hope you keep reading!
AAACKKCKKC THHBBBBTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
i just spit soda all over my screen. Married! already! i knew it would come eventualy but so soon? wow that really caught me off gaurd. also Hildin's gifts were a nice touch. I've said it before but i'll repeat it. This story has worked its magics upon me and left me its willing slave. Keep it coming Mei!
It's late, TGC...
I think you mean Warren, not Hilden.
This was an excellent chapter, I have to say. I really like the development of the story-in-story... Your cliffhangers get better every time, MeiLin.
So i did Scarth...so i did.
i realy got to stop staying up till 3 am to read this. It turns my brain to mush. I keep telling myself it'll be there in the morning but then i'm all like well its only 2 more hours.
now stop that
Don't make me come out there.
If you keep that up, young man, I'm going to start updating at noon.
Would that be so bad?
Would that be so bad? Really?
Then again, since it's finals, I'm half tempted to try a 28-hour day and enjoy the fringe benefit of being awake when you update.
oh, man...
Poor Sedra. I wonder what Temmin will have to say about this new turn of affairs? Will he go to comfort Seddy? Confront his father? Kill the suitor?
The next question would be..
..what kind of a man is this King Brinnid?
guess
I'd extrapolate from the title of the next book: the queen who ruled alone (I think . . . .)
I think the title refers to the story-within-the-story
Tale of Two Kingdoms refers to Warin and Emmae/Edmerka's story. I'm assuming the next title will refer to the next bit of intimate history that temmin will begin reading.
On the other hand, I'd
On the other hand, I'd contend that there's likely to be some degree of parallelism between the two.
I haven't seen it stated
I haven't seen it stated anywhere, but I don't think the author's wedded to Temmin as narrator. My memory's a bit fuzzy, but I think she said that the real spark was a desire to tell Emmae's story, and the whole Greater Kingdom evolved around it. Now that she has such a vibrant universe, I could see her taking all sorts of tangents and perspectives...the next book might follow Bessa when she gets married, or even Sedra, for that matter.
in fact
I was going to comment on this in an upcoming blog post but why not now. Temmin will not always be our POV, in fact, with the next book we will probably be moving into multiple POVs. There's just too much to tell you about, and Temmy isn't always there, the creature.
and this is why being a real princess was not all that wonderful
In the fairy tales, happy endings. In real life, you're auctioned off to the most policitally and monetarily advantageous suitor, be he aged, poc-marked, or just plain nasty. I wouldn't trade places with any princess in history. Ansella knows.
Ansella's been there, done
Ansella's been there, done that. Apparent lesbian (w/Ibbit) who stopped having kids with the king once there was a male heir... and he doesn't seem to mind anyway, he's got his own mistresses. Though, we don't know anything about Sedra's sexual interests at all, only that she's interested in books. Seems kind of asexual atm.
Yes, but consider...
You have to watch the nerdy ones carefully. Sometimes they can turn into a real tigress (or tiger) when they're rubbed the right way. As long as he's not aged, pockmarked, or just plain nasty >.<
Mm, true. Could definitely
Mm, true. Could definitely see Seddy taking him out if he's that much of an ass. Between the possibility of women's magic learnt from the Traveler Queen, knowledge gained from reading, and her own brilliance, she could do it. Especially with poison. Hmm... that's one way to rule alone.
I wasn't clear
Nono, you misunderstand. I'm talking not about assassination or violence, but the so-called "tiger in the sack" or, in this case, a potential tigress. Meek and unbecoming outward appearance, but enthusiastic and talented once the bedroom door closes.
Of course
*grin* Ah, yes, of course. This would be a case of not seeing the forest for the trees; I can easily see my nerdy self falling into that category. As, I'm sure, many of us in this forum would. Miss Sedra's got to have some fun, after all.
Seeing a pattern
So, this snapping at Teacher and ignoring his advice, it's a family thing, it seems. Poor Teacher, neither prince nor king will listen to him until they realize too late that he's right. Rather like Cassandra, actually.
ToMU
What is ToMU?
oh my
ToMU is tales of mu another online story. It goes slower taking several chapters to make it through 1 day. It is very good, although I like this one more. I will always follow it, I highly suggest you check it out if you like what you have been reading here.
talesofmu.com
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Tales of MU also seemed to be
Tales of MU also seemed to be where the majority of readers here were coming from according to the last poll. A whopping 77% (207 out of 268 votes, presently) of respondants have said they found Tale of Two Kingdoms via Tales of MU.
Suprise
Well that's a shock though not a total one, Sedra was getting a little old to be hanging around the castle. Some fathers would marry off their daughters at 16 back in olden days of kings, at least she got to wait till she was 19 before her father found a suitor for her to marry.
At least Temmin can learn from Emmae's point of view on what is actually called a choice, compared to little/no choice at all given the spell involved or person.
I am glad Emmae is remembering the happy times with Warin, he may not have handled her enchantment perfectly but he did the best he could while trying to be a gentleman.
right ring finger?
I think it's interesting that, in this story, the wedding band is worn on the right ring finger instead of the left, as it is in our culture. Is there some significance to that?
that's the betrothal finger
if she were to marry Warin, he'd move it to her other hand in the ceremony.
My dad actually wears his
My dad actually wears his wedding band on his right hand. He said it's for the second marriage. It was one the left for the first, now it's on the right for the second.
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