Temmin was late to the dining room, and found himself in the uncomfortable position of eating alone with his sister Ellika. "You'll have to talk to me at some point, Temmy," she murmured, her face unhappy and clouded.
"Very well, please pass the mustard."
"Temmy--"
"Fine! Fine," he said. "We'll talk. You want to talk about the Temple? Fine, we'll talk about the Temple. But not," he hissed under his breath, "in front of the servants at the luncheon table, thank you very much!"
That answer seemed to suit Ellika, and she immediately cheered up. "When?"
"Gods! When I'm ready!"
"Tea?"
"Fine, tea! May I please eat my lunch in peace?!"
Ellika daintily wiped her mouth. "I'm done anyway. I shall expect you for tea, little brother!" She left the dining hall, her long full skirts trailing behind her. Not for the first time Temmin wondered how much of Tremont's textiles industry was solely devoted to his clotheshorse of a sister.
He made quick work of his lunch, pocketed a roll to eat on the way back to his study, and hurried back for more of the story. The Teacher was waiting. "Aren't we eager?"
"Well, you left off just as it was getting interesting!" said Temmin, brushing crumbs off his waistcoat. He opened the book once more.
The company had not been seated long when a commotion from outside cut through the music. Hildin leaned forward and squeezed Emmae's thigh so hard she bit back a cry. "Is it him? Is he come?" he hissed at Gill. The noise grew louder--many raised voices and a clash like weapons. "It must be," laughed Hildin, rising to his feet. "He's come back! Bar the door, give him some fun before he dies!"
But no sooner had the guards barred the doors to the great hall than they burst open , the thick wooden bar snapping in two and sending splinters flying. Framed in the arch stood Warin, panting hard and spattered with blood, the light staff still in his hand. Behind him stood the Travelers and most of the city's guards. The music and conversation stopped dead.
"I've come back, Hildin," said Warin into the quiet.
"I hoped you would, brother," Hildin said gleefully. "Welcome to my coronation celebration. Your timing could not be better. You're too late for both your wedding and your crown, but then, you renounced them both, didn't you?"
"The prophecy turned out to be false," Warin answered, slowly walking up the aisle. "My father is dead, and I didn't kill him."
"And yet, I wear the crown," said Hildin. "I wear the crown, and I've married the little princess."
"I never would have come here if you hadn't taken her from me. The throne could have been yours. I still don't want it. But I will have my woman."
At this, Emmae stood, overturning her heavy chair. She tried to run to him, but Gill caught her and held her tight. She was frightened and angry and elated at the sight of her lover, but underneath it all, coiling like a snake, she felt Hildin growing more and more aroused. An image formed in her mind: Hildin slitting Warin's throat, then throwing her down and fucking her in a pool of his lifeblood, and as soon as the image appeared she knew it was exactly what Hildin wanted. From Warin, she felt a powerful tug, the need to twine herself around him and never let go, but she didn't know if it was Warin's emotion or if it was honestly hers.
She felt nothing at all from Gill, but the tension in his hands said much.
"As of yesterday, Emmae is my lawful wife," said Hildin.
"She was mine before that, in our eyes if not in the eyes of this assembly."
"What?!" squawked King Fredrik from the head table.
"I was the one who found her, not knowing who she was, and I am the one who loves her," said Warin. "And," he added, "she is your wife, Hildin, only as long as you live." He stopped a few yards from the dais.
"Are you challenging your king?" said Hildin, eyes narrowing.
"If getting my Emmae back means I must kill a king and take a throne, I will."
Hildin spread his arms wide. "You all heard it. He's speaking treason. Commander," he called to the head of his guards, "take him." The guardsmen ringing the hall drew their weapons, and the guards and Travelers who'd followed Warin into the hall took up their stances.
"D'you see the blood that decorates our swords?" cried Connin. "It's the blood of troops loyal to Hildin the Usurper! You in this hall are the only ones left. If you want to add to the patterns on my blade, step up, I'll be happy to oblige you!" The guardsmen faltered.
"King Warin!" suddenly cried out Hendas the Younger, to Hendas the Elder's surprise. "Hildin is a usurper! Warin is the rightful king!" A roar went up from the crowd, but Warin silenced them. The guards fell back one by one, sheathing their swords. Hildin turned pale, but his eyes were dilated with excitement.
"My brother is the crowned king. By law, he is king until the day he dies," said Warin. "And that day will be today." He spun the light staff in his hands. "Though you haven't felt the magic, have you, Hildin, our dead father's magic that by rights goes to the new king," he said. "D'you know why? Because it came to me!" He struck the staff on the ground, and a shock wave rippled through the air. It struck the head table and split it right in two; it fell with a crash in a vee, the dishes and goblets sliding down the pieces and piling up in the center. Wine ran down the dais in a red cascade.
"No matter," snarled Hildin, "once you're dead I'll get it anyway. And," he yelled, "I will remember those of you who side against me today. Your heads will hang above the gates at Barle, both Hendas Elder and Younger, and your daughters and sisters will add their maiden blood to the puddle beneath them!"
Young Hendas stepped to the aisle. "Then what have I got to lose?" he called out. The crowd of nobles murmured among themselves, and many stepped to the aisle with the son of Lord Barle.
"Give it up, Hildin," said Warin. "Surrender, and I'll make your death quick and merciful. There is no one who'll stand with you."
"There is one," said Gill, releasing Emmae and drawing his sword.
"And that's enough," smiled Hildin. He pulled a flame from a nearby candle, drew it into a wand, and flung it behind Warin. A curtain of flame rose up, separating Warin from his companions and the rest of the hall.
"You can't burn me, Hildin."
"I don't need to. I just need to even the odds."
Gill stepped down from the dais between the brothers . "Two against one?" said Warin. "How are those odds even?"
Hildin shrugged. "You have our father's magic. I have Gill."
"I can't fight and use my magic at the same time."
"Neither can I," smiled Hildin.
"Oh, so you're going to fight me? Or are you hiding behind this boy, brother?"
Gill swung his sword. "Don't call me 'boy,' cousin," he growled.
"Oh, I'll call you more than that, cousin, for your role in this," said Warin, dismissing his light staff and pulling his sword. "Lapdog! Toady! Lackey! Slave! Rapist! Dead man!"
With an enraged shout, Gill launched himself at Warin. Warin parried his attack with practised ease, fending off thrust after thrust until Gill pulled back, panting. They circled one another, until Warin's back was toward the dais; Gill launched another furious series of thrusts, and Warin beat him back, letting him expend his energy. Hildin pulled a fresh wand from a candle, fashioning it long, curved and slender in his hands. It was a bow, Emmae realized. He pulled another wand, lengthened it into a shaft, and fitted it to the light bow, aiming it at Warin's back. I have to do something, she thought. What can I do?
"There?" cried Temmin. "You're stopping there?!"
The Teacher shrugged. "It's time for tea, and I can hear your stomach grumbling from here. If I keep you much longer, you'll deafen me."
"Augh!" said Temmin, pushing back from the table. "You're going to make me wait until tomorrow?"
"I do love to see an enthusiastic student." Temmin glared. "Well. I suppose I might have mercy on you," said the Teacher. "Eat a good tea, arrange for a late dinner here, and I shall resume the story in an hour or two. How is that?"
Temmin's stomach growled again, loudly. "I s'pose it will have to do."
The Teacher bowed slightly, and, Temmin could almost have sworn, grinned. "And now I believe you are due at Princess Ellika's door, are you not?"
Temmin's heart sank. He followed the Teacher out his study door and trudged slowly to Ellika's apartments.
"Your highness," called the Teacher. "If it's really this hard to talk to your sister, are you sure you won't--"
"Do be quiet," interrupted Temmin in a temper, and knocked loudly on the door. Iddie answered, her gentle smile making Temmin fidget even more for some reason. He brushed past her and threw himself on Ellika's sofa, a tufted apricot satin confection with gilt woodwork that creaked alarmingly under the impact. "I'm here, Elly!" he called, "and I'm hungry!"
"Barbaric boy, I'm changing my clothes! One of my laces snapped! I'll be out when I can!" She popped her head out of the bedchamber, her creamy shoulders bare. "Unless you want to help lace me up?"
Temmin turned pale, and then he turned scarlet. He stood up. "I beg your pardon, I'll return when you're decent," he said angrily. He stalked out of the room and slammed the door after him. Ellika exchanged a knowing look with Iddie and went back to dressing, humming a little dance tune.
Once in the hall, Temmin stopped for a moment, sweaty and breathing hard. Was she doing this on purpose? She had to be. Someone at the Temple had to have told her something, but he never thought she could be this cruel. Setting his jaw, he turned back to his rooms--and nearly ran straight into the Teacher. "Oh gods," he groaned. "Between you and Elly I'll be driven mad, I swear I will." The Teacher merely raised an elegant eyebrow enquiringly; Temmin stared, but his own eyes dropped before the gray ones did. "All right," he grumbled. "I do need to talk to someone, just as long as I get something to eat!"
Returning to his study, Temmin dispatched Jenks to the kitchen for supplies and sprawled on the green velvet sofa. The Teacher took up a position near the fireplace, attentive but unspeaking. Temmin stared at the empty hearth, took in a breath several times as if to begin speaking, and finally said, "I think someone at the Lovers' Temple is spreading stories."
The Teacher tapped a finger on the mantle. "And what makes you think that?"
Temmin played with his watch fob, silent. "It's the way--Ellika's just acting funny."
"In what way?"
"I don't know, as if she knows something she's not supposed to know."
"And what might that be?" The Teacher shifted to the other foot, arms crossed, leaning against the fireplace. Temmin was silent. "If by that you mean she's not supposed to know you find her sexually attractive, I'm afraid she's known that for a long time," the Teacher said gently. "For that matter, so have I."
Temmin felt a clammy shiver run through him all the way to the ends of his hair. Perhaps, he thought, it would have been better to remain ignorant of all of this Temple stuff.
Comments
teasing
I have to agree with Temmin that Ellika's flirting and teasing is cruel. It's so much more fun to read about it happening to someone else than have it happen to me. I may have to read through the story from the beginning again to see if it's a new development or if she's been doing it all along and he's just now noticing...
Seems to me...
...that it's mostly always been there, but he didn't notice it. However, it does seem as though she's being much worse than normal about it since he returned. But then again, if I were affiliated with the lover's temple and new about the trial by fire (so to speak) that they put the newbs through... and I had a brother who's change of demeanor towards me made think what his secret might be... I'd definitely be teasing him more myself just to get back at him for being so bratty.
I was right...
I DO regret telling you to enjoy being evil!!!! Arrrggghhhh.... The most appropriate thing I can find to say is may you find diamonds in dog poop!
Agh
Why did it have to stop there, both in the book, and the conversation. You are too good at cliffhangers. If this was a book in my hands it would have been a stay-up-all-night-to-finish book. Too exciting.
But it only means us coming back for more.
I know the feeling...it's
I know the feeling...it's 20-til-5 in the morning here...and I'm panting for another chapter...as usual.
Not for the first time Temmin
In the first chapter, it says that the royal children go to court when they turn 16 and Temmin went ot court after his sisters, so he is the youngest child. Did I misunderstand something?
Ellika is the younger of
Ellika is the younger of Temmin's older sisters. I sometimes have this trouble when talking about my guys' sisters because they're both older than him. And say 'Rich's youngest older sister' gets kinda...word kinky - and not in a good way.
alternatives
"the younger of his sisters?"
maybe?
family relations
Maybe his older (not oldest) sister?
both sisters qualify under
both sisters qualify under "his older sister."
"The youngest Tremont daughter?"
ETA:
or "his middle sister?"
/agree
In my family it's - from youngest to oldest - my sister, me, then our brother. It was always "older brother" for me and "oldest brother" for him.
"Younger sister" means "younger than I".
I changed it
Believe it or not, I wrestled over just that phrase for quite a while! "Middle sister" makes it sound like he has three sisters. "Older sister" isn't precise enough as he's the youngest of three. "Youngest Tremont girl" is not quite the thing. So I just edited it to "clotheshorse of a sister."
hmmm
It seems everyone but Temmy-poo knew about his taboo love interest. It would make sense, though. A lot of people look for mates that look like themselves or family members because of the familiarity. The human mind is weird and deep.
I like your weird- and deep-ness, MeiLin. <3
C'mon, Warin
C'mon, Warin, kick Hilden's ass! There's a "happily ever after" that's just bursting to get out....
And poor Temmin. It seems like everyone knows more about his affairs than he does. And Ellika's such a shameless flirt-- she's probably is messing with Temmin just to (ahem) get a rise out of him, but I don't think it's out of cruelty or meanness. At least no more mean than any other siblings.
Augh!
I agree with Temmin - you're stopping there?! That's even more cruel than usual!
I was happy to see the chapter had more to it than just the Tale of Two Kingdoms, but then you went and ended it in such a maddening way!
You are evil.
GRRR!
Such a good chapter. Always with the leaving us wanting more. And moreso than usual this time Mei. Your not evil, your sadistic and we love you for it. man i cannot wait for 38 now. The converstation between Temmin and Ellika is shaping up to be EPIC.
Ebil
Was it really necessary to leave us with not one, but TWO cliffhangers? C'mon. That's just cruel.
less than two hours
until you hear what happens next. hee.
But, but...
I'm taking a shower and going to bed so I can be up super early for work. *pouts* Guess I'll just have to wait until I get home tomorrow. *sigh* You suck. Ok, no you don't. It's only the writers I like who I complain about. I know, it's weird, but it just means the story is good enough to leave me wanting more.
cliffhangers
Yes, the double cliffhanger was cruel, but I find myself vastly amused by the reactions, so that makes up for it somewhat.
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