Chapter 36 | The Tale of Two Kingdoms
Old Habits
Eddinday morning after breakfast found Temmin in his study standing staring out the windows, still subdued; he'd spent most of the previous night turning over everything that had happened in the Temple, and everything that had happened since his return home. He still hadn't said more than five words to Ellika since their fight, his father's very presence made him twitch with irritability, and he'd noticed his mother had begun to watch him with her thoughtful blue eyes.
At least things were back to normal with Jenks, who was humming to himself as he gathered up Temmin's discarded riding clothes in the bedchamber. "There is such a thing as a laundry basket, your highness," he called. "It would be a prime thing if you were to actually hit it now and again."
"You're being tiresome, manservant."
"Thank you, your highness," grinned Jenks, passing through the study on his way out the door. The grin momentarily faded as he passed the Teacher on the way in, but returned with a wink for Temmin as he shut the door behind him.
"I hear you've been in a mood, your highness," said the Teacher, striding into the room.
"I've always heard the phrase is generally agreed upon to be 'Good morning,'" said Temmin with a sigh.
"Ah, and I've heard correctly." The Teacher leaned against the back of the sofa, arms crossed. "Anything you want to talk about?"
"I would hardly consider you a close confidante," said Temmin, turning away from the windows at last.
"And yet, I know the Temple and its ways intimately, and the Embodiments as well."
"Oh, not you too!" said Temmin in exasperation.
"I beg your pardon?"
"Never mind, I can't think of anything I want to know about less." Temmin flung himself down into the library table chair. "What excruciatingly detailed and boring trade agreement are we going to tackle today?"
"In a moment. Right now, I want you to understand that I am a very good listener, anything told to me goes no further, and that if you ever do wish to talk about anything--anything--you may always come to me for counsel. It's my job, and I'm very good at it."
Temmin regarded the Teacher warily, then nodded. "All right. Now, let's please do something. I need to stop thinking about this for a while."
"I have noted something about you, your highness, and that is that you ask to do something to take your mind off things, and then don't listen to a word I say." Temmin rolled his eyes. "And yet you know it to be true, Prince Temmin. Here is what I propose. I propose not lecturing to you."
"What?"
"Your father, lecturing was the method that worked best with him. He didn't care for stories. He was interested in the facts, the politics and the machinations that make up history. He wanted to know troop movements and formations, and the intricacies of trade agreements. He wasn't interested in the people behind the events, or how they felt about things. We rarely opened the book," the Teacher said, patting the red-bound History on the table between them. "Your sister was the same--" The Teacher stopped abruptly, then continued. "You on the other hand, that seems to be almost entirely what you care about, at least among things that I can teach you. I propose to stop lecturing you and teach you entirely out of the book. There's quite a bit we can study in it, even about wars, treaties and trade agreements. What do you say?"
Temmin didn't even hesitate. He pulled the book to him and opened it right up.
Today was the day he would kill his brother and take Emmae back, or die in the attempt.
Inside the castle, a flock of serving women tended to Emmae in her new chambers. Emmae looked for old Meg among them, but she wasn't there. Meg was familiar, and though she was loyal to her beloved prince, she'd been kind to Emmae; her absence made Emmae anxious somehow. "Where's Meg?" she asked, but none of the other serving women knew. She sighed, fidgeting under their hands as they tugged and tied her into a gown of dark Tremontine red. At least Jessa wasn't among them, she thought. Her long chestnut hair was left unveiled and combed into a shining torrent to her waist, awaiting the crown Hildin would place on her head. The serving women left in a chattering, excited flood.
Against their tide came Gill, a jewel casket in his hands. He pulled two pearl drop earrings from the casket, fastened them in her ears, and kissed her tenderly. The long, lingering embrace left her breathless and confused. Dipping into the casket again, he pulled out several ropes of pearls and fastened them around her neck. "These belonged to Queen Sella, Hildin's mother," he smiled. She trailed her fingers down the lustrous strands, thinking.
"Gill," she said, moving away to pick at her uneaten breakfast, "I have missed Meg these last two days. No one knows where she is. I should like to have her back among my women. She is one of the few friendly things in this horrid place, and I miss her."
"Ah," said Gill, averting his eyes. "That will not be possible."
"And why is that?" she said. She picked up a silverberry and examined it listlessly.
"Because she is dead," he replied, shutting the casket lid with a click. "I killed her." Emmae dropped the silverberry. "Jessa, too. I knew Meg all my life, and it grieved me to do it. But no one who knew you were here could live, my lady, I'm sure you can see that."
"No," she said hotly, "I can't see that at all! Meg would never have betrayed you! How could you do such a thing? I never wish to be the cause of anyone's death!"
"Then I suggest," said Hildin as he strode into the room, "that you never speak to anyone of Warin, your enchantment, or the circumstances in which we found you. Do you understand? We will kill any confidante of yours, my dear, so confide only in us. I loved Meg. That's why Gill killed her for me. You're right, she would never have knowingly betrayed me, but she was a stupid old thing, and often said things she shouldn't."
"You're beyond disgusting," she whispered. "You're heartless."
"Depend on it, lady," Hildin answered with a feral grin. He took Emmae's hand and spun her slowly around. "Splendid. You look every bit the queen." Hildin himself was darkly handsome in the same red, his sword sheath and dagger winking with jewels. His thick, sleek hair hung in loose waves around his shoulders. He spun her around again and into his arms, turning her away from him to face a cheval mirror.
"See what a handsome pair we make?" Her eyes met his in the mirror. "Oh yes, we've brought mirrors back into the Keep. Wherever we are, and only where we are, there will be a mirror from now on. Let Warin come. I want him to come. I want him to see me atop his throne. I want him to see me atop his woman." He nuzzled her neck, chuckling. "My woman, now, and my throne. Had we any time before the coronation," he murmured against her hair, "I would pull up your skirts and have you right here." He pressed his erection against her and her nipples hardened.
"But no matter," he said breezily, leading her away towards the door. "We have a lifetime to taunt my brother. Or at least until he grows a pair of bollocks and comes to let me kill him." He swept her out of the room to the assembly in the great hall. Gill quickly covered the mirror and followed.
Hidden just outside the city gates, Warin crouched with Connin and seven Travelers, assessing the odds. The gates were closed; everyone who wanted to see the coronation was already lining the streets around the Keep, hoping for a glimpse of the nobles and especially the new king and his beautiful queen. A small squad of bored but well-armed soldiers guarded the gates, some in front, and some above on the parapets.
Warin opened his mirror box. "If Emmae is within sight of her reflection, show her to me." She immediately appeared, queenly and sorrowful in a magnificent gown and his mother's pearls. His brother caressed her from behind, whispering; whatever he said to her brought color to her pale cheeks. But before Warin could gather his magic and step through, they turned away. He caught a glimpse of his cousin Gill, and the mirror went dark.
He closed his eyes for a moment, then turned to Connin. "We shall follow the Teacher's advice, then, and go openly into the city. Are you ready?" he asked.
"This is not our fight," answered Connin, "but we've known about this day and our place in it since your birth. Once this is over, don't expect to call on us again."
Warin grinned savagely. "I'm grateful nonetheless, and will make sure you know it whether you want to or not! Now," he said, standing up, "it's time."
Connin jumped to his feet and strode toward the gates, Warin and the Traveler men following quickly behind. "You!" he bellowed. "You guardsmen! Open the gates of the city! Your prince returns to take his throne!"
"Go away, Traveler scum!" jeered the captain in charge. "Our prince is inside. What play are you acting? I promise you, we won't throw coins."
"And I promise you that you know me," said Warin in a loud voice, joining Connin. "I am Warin, Prince of Tremont, eldest son of Gethin, and I have come back to take what's mine. Let me in." The captain drew his sword; his men followed suit, as did the Travelers. But Warin did not draw. Instead, he held his hands out to his sides. "Come close to me and tell me you don't know me. Tell me to my face I'm not who I say I am."
The captain approached warily, watching the Travelers for signs of ambush or falsehood. He looked in Warin's face, squinting. "You are very like him, I admit it. But it's been ten years since he's been seen here. How can I be sure?" Warin scanned the parapets until he saw a burning torch. He snatched a flame from it and formed it into a wand of light in his hand. "I've seen other nobles do that," said the captain uncomfortably.
Warin smiled grimly. "And this?" He spread his hands and the wand turned into a long staff. Warin spun it and struck the ground with one end. A wall of flames sprang up around the captain, who screamed in panic. Warin waved his hand; the flames died instantly, but he kept the staff in his hand.
The captain dropped to one knee. "It is you," he said, hoarse with emotion. "Your highness--your majesty, your brother has not governed well."
"I am here to rectify that. Will you and your men follow me?"
The captain stood and saluted, his right fist to his heart. "We are loyal to Tremont, your majesty, and you are its rightful ruler."
Warin nodded. "Very well. My first order is that you treat these Travelers with me as equals. They are my companions. Now, captain, let's stop this coronation." The captain signaled his men and the gates opened wide. "You are to make it known among the men that no matter what happens, the Princess Edmerka is not to be harmed," said Warin as they entered the city. "She is blameless in this."
They passed through the streets toward the Keep, gathering soldiers and onlookers behind them as they went, and word quickly spread in the city that Prince Warin had returned. Warin walked at the head of the mob, Connin at his side and the Traveler men at their backs. Strange, he thought, how quickly the habits of command had returned to him--as if he'd never stopped being a prince, almost as if he'd never been a woodsman at all. He put those pensive thoughts aside and acknowledged the shouts now ringing out all around him as he kept walking toward the Keep.
Inside the Keep, brilliant banners hung from the ceiling of the great hall. The lords and ladies gathered there for the coronation, however, reflected the kingdom's mourning for King Gethin; they were more somber, both in clothing and in mood.
Lord Hendas the Elder of Barle turned to his son, Hendas the Younger. "Hildin expects trouble. See the guards lined up against the walls?"
Hendas the Younger frowned. "Does he really think his brother will return? After ten years?"
"How lucky for us all if he would return!" said Hendas the Elder. "Even with the crown on Hildin's head, most of the lords gathered here would recognize Warin as the Heir. Hildin is unstable at best and insane at worst, and if his reign goes anything like his regency has, we're all in trouble." The fat lord shook his jowls sadly.
His son discreetly elbowed him. "Here he comes."
Prince Hildin and his stunning new wife walked down the aisle toward the throne room dais, the assembled nobility bowing on both sides in a solemn hush. On the dais, the High Priest of Pagg waited for them, attended by Gill and another page bearing the crowns.
Despite the occasion's formality, Hildin fairly danced up the aisle, moving quickly to kneel before the High Priest. "Make it fast," he hissed quietly. The startled priest began his planned chant, thought better of it, and gave the prince a quick blessing. He took the king's crown from Gill's hands, held it up, blessed it, and settled it on Hildin's head.
Hildin stood, stepped onto the dais, and looked down on Emmae. He took the queen's crown from the waiting page, held it up briefly, and placed it none too gently on her head. To Emmae, it felt like the weight of her captivity bearing down on her, and she could hardly stand it. Your time will come, she thought to herself. Watch for your opportunity and take it.
"Give me your hand, my queen," Hildin said quietly. He raised her up and brought her onto the dais to face the assembly, which dropped to its knees.
"Long live King Hildin! Long live Queen Edmerka!" cried out Gill, his young voice echoing through the hall. The nobles rose. "Long live King Hildin! Long live Queen Edmerka!" they dutifully repeated.
Not if I can help it, thought Emmae.
"That can't be the end of it," said Temmin, shaking his head slowly to clear the sounds of the phantom ceremony from it.
"Oh, no, of course not," said the Teacher. "Hildin is called Usurper, after all, and is conversationally left out of the list of kings. There is much still to tell you."
Temmin thought for a moment. "You called it the habit of command--Warin thought he'd lost it in the woods, but it came back almost immediately."
The Teacher nodded. "If you've been raised to be a leader, it's a habit that never completely leaves you."
"Allis said I had the habit of command. I don't think she used those exact words, but..." he trailed off.
"You do. Your mother and people like Jenks have made sure that you have retained the common touch--you understand and can talk to others as if they were your equals, even if they're not. That is a rare gift for a future king, Prince Temmin, and you should be extremely grateful that you have the natural ability and that it wasn't spoiled out of you. But you have also been raised to lead. It is your fortune, and your obligation. And now," said the Teacher, gesturing toward the door, "it is your luncheon."
The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.
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exciting! I can't wait for the next bit of the two kingdoms history.
Also interested to see if Temmin confides in the Teacher.
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i'm greatful for the hours but they are keeping me away from the story i love. And i do love it. Last chapters insight into temmins father, and the wonderful way Jenks helps temmin work though his anger were great (answers the question of wether or not you can write a fight scene
). And Warrins on his way to save his Emmae! I realy hate not being able to read the story right away. As always you craft your world with the skill of a master storyteller.
- Outside of a dog, a book is mans best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read. ~Groucho Marx
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Yay Warin yay!! Awesome
Yay Warin yay!!
Awesome chapter, as always! ^_^ I am coming to like the Teacher more and more.
Ooh, also I got my cafepress stuff in the mail today. There shall be pictures soon! ^_^
Professional lurker, at your service. ^_^
yay pictures!
did whatever you order turn out well?
<3 Emmae!
"Not if I can help it"--love her strong spirit and her determination to take Hildin down...can hardly wait for the next installment! Maybe after a sustaining luncheon?
Heterosexuality is not normal, it's just common. --Dorothy Parker
Huh?
Unless I'm completely confused, what our dear, determined Emmae ponders taking down isn't Hildin but herself. I think it was in the last chapter before the Great Temple Debauch that we witnessed her solemn vow to kill herself at the earliest opportunity because she couldn't stand the thought of living a hopeless life married to Hildin for any length of time.
Now, here's to hoping that this determination will switch targets as soon as Warin enters the scene. I could certainly stand watching Emmae knock Hildin off his boots.
Oh, she's already there
If she gets the chance, she's taking him down.
Heterosexuality is not normal, it's just common. --Dorothy Parker
Hmmm
You so make one think and rethink what they thought they thought, LOL. Bravo Mei! I am glad we have steered away from the temple again and back to the history stuff. I do love the exploration of the Temple, do not get me wrong on this point. I was, however, ready for a change of scene.
Reading , absorbing, pondering.
yeah me too!
Seriously, I was like, are we EVER LEAVING?! We'll be back, though. We're coming to the end of "Two Kingdoms."
Heh.
In the first part of this chapter, I suddenly realized that in my head, the Teacher sounds a lot like Count Rugen from "The Princess Bride". Then I read the coronation and all I could think of was Humperdink spitting out "Man and Wife! Say Man and Wife!" to the Impressive Clergyman.
And of all the ways to sneak into a keep, who would have thought that "knock on the front door" would be most effective?
Keep them coming, please, MeiLin. I love it!
Now that you mention it I can
Now that you mention it I can clearly hear "Mawwage" in my head. Not sure about the Count Rugen part though.
Of course if would work. At least in the right circumstances. If you were the guard, would you follow an asshat like Hildin, or a good man like Warren?
me too
yeah, I was totally getting a Princess Bride vibe off that scene,
"hello, my name is Prince Warrin, you stole my Emmae, prepare to die!"
lol
Yep. Me too. I only just read it and couldn't help seeing that. Of course, Princess Bride is one of my very favorite movies. At least the guards let Warin in, instead of hiding the key
I know it hasn't been long fr him...
...but part of me keeps wondering, "When is Temmin going to really get it?" As fascinated as he is by the stories, and as much as he is learning, it seems as though he does not really understand the full impact of what he's reading.
I know it's easier from out here, where we are not caught up in the actual events that are keeping much of his mind (and rear) busy and distracted, nor are we cosseted nobles who are, at least to some extent, unused to being required to think deeply and only recently discovering how useful it really is. I know all that, and yet part of me wants to reach through the page and smack some sense into Temmin.
Now, to take one more step back: I find that when I am frustrated or excited or amazed or distraught by what's happening to or around fictional characters - if I am crying or yelling at the author or the like - then I know I am reading something both good and personally appealing. Here's to you and your creation, MeiLin.
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
Random thoughts...
I find it difficult to express my thoughts coherently a lot of times, and today promises to not be an exception.
As Temmin gets to know his father more, he seems to be embracing the things that make him different. Something reminded me today of something Teacher said to him a few chapters ago about him "being different in all the ways that matter" from his ancestors (or maybe that's in the intro on the front page?), and Temmin didn't really have a response to that at the time, as if he wasn't sure what to think. Now, when Teacher mentioned how his father liked the lectures, and Temmin prefers reading, the prince practically jumped on the book. Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but he seemed even more eager to continue the story than he has been in the past.
When will society stop oppressing me with its unattainable standards?
Different in all the ways that matter
is one of the last things Teacher ever says to Temmin outside of a story. It's from the Prologue. Temmin jumped on the book because he hates lectures and doesn't mind the immersive stories. Remember that it's not so much reading as virtual reality.
Immersion
It's a really good author that can immerse me in a book like that. I really want VR to become a reality. I want to live some of the stuff I read. That includes this story.
Nice to be back with Emmae
Nice to be back with Emmae and Warin. I have missed them. And perhaps it gives us time to catch our breath. I felt breathless at the end of each of the Lovers Temple chapters. Not that it's a bad thing, obiously;)
i agree
I missed the Emmae/Warin storyline.. it's nice to catch up as it were.
Question about the whole "habit of command" thing; the way it reads it seems like it's restricted to royalty only.. Am i misinterpreting that? What about someone who is a natural born leader?
Just curious
"There is no charge for awesomeness... or attractiveness." -Jack Black
habit of command
It's just a turn of phrase. It's not restricted to loyalty; it's applicable to anyone who's been in command of anyone else. Are you a mom? You have a habit of command that some day will not be terribly welcome in your children's lives (think about your own mom).
Hmm...
Seems you never quite lose what you once had before all the time. First time commentor by the way, I found this story from ToMU and been in love ever since. Thanks a lot MeiLin for a great story to fill my days!
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