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Chapter 28 | The Tale of Two Kingdoms

Two Kinds of People

This chapter may be too intense for some readers.

The Teacher was indeed back before Temmin knew it, just as he was thinking about sneaking in a quick doze. "No time for that. If I'm not going to have you for the next two days, then I want to finish this part of the history."

Temmin grumbled and ruffled his hair until he felt a bit more awake. "I'm sure I'll fall asleep in the middle of it."

"I assure you, you won't," said the Teacher. Temmin snorted and blearily opened the book.

In the castle, Emmae and Hildin were retiring to their wedding chamber, after sitting vigil with the body of King Gethin. "Tomorrow I am crowned King, and I shall then crown you my Queen," said Hildin. Gill helped him out of his mourning tunic, and loosened the ties of his shirt. "All my ambitions shall be realized."

"Are you not the least bit sorry your father is dead?" said Emmae, pacing slowly by the windows.

"Of course I'm a little sorry," the prince answered. "But he was old. And he loved my brother more than me--no, he actively hated me. I expect our father's death will finally drag Warin out of hiding. He always was sentimental, and I've never completely believed that he would renounce his throne. But now that our father is dead, the prophecy cannot be fulfilled. He can never take the throne."

"The prophecy that he'd have to kill his father to take either the throne or a wife," said Emmae, turning to face him.

"Ah, you've heard it." Hildin laughed. "He never had any intention of marrying you, my dear."

"He didn't need to," she answered, turning back to the window. In the day, it afforded a sweeping view of the great forest, but now it showed her nothing but her own reflection--

Her reflection. "Warin?" she whispered, touching the glass. Over her shoulder appeared a pair of green eyes, and the shutters were drawn against the night and the glass.

"Ah-ah," said Gill lightly. "It won't do to be pining over another man on your wedding night, my lady." He slipped his hands around her waist.

"What exactly are you doing here?" she said, shrugging him away from her.

"You and I have never spent an entire night together, have we? Gill is always with me," murmured Hildin. Gill crossed to his master's side and poured out three cups of wine. "Always."

"Even on your wedding night?" she said, not looking at the cup Gill offered.

"Especially then. Take the cup, Emmae," said Hildin, his voice dark. She took it, her fingers shaking only slightly, and drank it back for the sake of false courage.

Gill stepped behind her and took the circlet and mourning veil from her hair. She felt his fingers move deftly down her back and then slip her gown from her shoulders. The familiar desire began to seep into her, mounting slowly. She sighed in resignation and stepped out of the puddle of black silk.

"That's my girl," the prince purred. "Give in now. It's easier on you. Though I must confess not as much fun for me. Oh yes," he said at her look, "I have enjoyed every moment of your struggles against your enchantment, little wife. Struggle on if you really wish to, I still find it highly diverting. Continue, Gill."

Gill untied the ribbon of her chemise and she stepped out of it as well, leaving her in only her stockings, gartered at the knee. He sat her down on a chair, undid her garters, and slowly rolled her stockings down her legs and off her feet. Gill kept the last foot in his hand, running his fingertips lightly up and down her sole until she wiggled in spite of herself. He took her toes one by one into his mouth, running his tongue over the pads and nibbling gently. Emmae melted into the chair, moaning.

"That's enough for now, Gill." Gill turned on his knees to the prince, making his way between his master's legs. Hildin bent and kissed him full on the mouth as he gathered the prince's shirt. He broke the kiss and pulled the shirt over Hildin's head, then discarded his own. "We will not be parted, Gill and I," Hildin said. "He is my faithful boy. Aren't you?"

"Forever, sire," said Gill, burying his head in his prince's lap. Hildin slid his hands down the young man's bare back, then brought them back to the blond head. Gill craned up for another kiss. Hildin gave it to him, opening Gill's mouth with his thumb and kissing him deeply. Still locked together, they rose up to their feet. Gill finished undressing them both, gasping from the kiss.

"Now," said Hildin, looking down on his page with hooded eyes, "let's take my lady to bed." Together they lifted Emmae out of her chair and then crushed against her, Gill holding her by the neck as he kissed her, and the prince wrapping his arms around them both from behind her.

Hildin slid a hand down between her legs and slipped his fingers into her curls. She cried out, and he chuckled low in his chest. "Oh, Gill, she is very, very wet." Emmae's head fell back on the prince's shoulder. He scooped her up and carried her to their marriage bed, laying her down in its center and settling himself near its foot. "I want to watch first," he said, pulling Gill onto the bed.

Gill smiled, kissed his master again, and slithered up the bed to lie next to Emmae. She kept herself stock still, eyes shut, giving them as little as possible. "It's no use, sweetheart," Gill whispered as he straddled her. "Feel." He took hold of one of her hands and brought it between his legs. Her eyes opened wide. He was harder than she'd ever known him.

"That's not for me," she said, her breath hitching. She didn't remove her hand for a long moment.

"Oh really? And here you're in such a state. Why is that?" he replied. He ran tracing fingers over her breasts, lightly teasing the nipples and then returning to soft circles, over and over. "It tells me that if it isn't the spell flooding you with my desire, then you must want me for myself. Is that it, Emmae? Have we finally won you, my prince and I?" His emerald eyes sparkled with dark amusement as she flinched under his fingers.

Gill increased the pressure of his hands, finally molding her breasts and rolling the nipples roughly between his fingers. Against her will, she began to undulate with pleasure in his grip. He lowered himself down, propping himself up on one elbow, and took a nipple into his mouth. He suckled at it, kneading the soft mound until Emmae let out a groan. He released it with a wet pop and moved to the other side. "You haven't answered him, girl," came Hildin's thick voice.

"I--ah!" Gill slipped two fingers inside her and took her nipple between his teeth. She could hear her own wetness with each thrust. He bit harder as Emmae's cries spiraled, and he slid his fingers faster and faster into her.

She alternately beat at Gill's back and clutched the coverlet, her hips working, until finally she screamed, a long, agonized cry of pleasure that left her hoarse and shuddering, clenching so tightly within her that Gill laughed as he withdrew. "She nearly broke my fingers, sire." He stretched himself out atop her, circled her in his arms--

--and neatly flipped them over so that she was above him. He pulled her head down to him and kissed her, running his tongue delicately over her palate. Emmae sucked on his tongue, lost, lacing her fingers behind his neck. Gill took her legs and positioned them on either side of his hips. "I think," he said in a soft and urgent voice, "that we have gone beyond the spell, haven't we?" He thrust his hips up at her, sliding his cock against her belly.

Emmae came to herself. "No!" she cried, suddenly trying to break free.

"None of that," said Prince Hildin, suddenly much too close. "Gill, hold her tight." The page pinned her against his chest. She felt Hildin behind her, his hands painting circles on her bottom. Something cool and slippery dripped onto her, slicking her crevice, and then a thumb slowly began to intrude into her ass. It burned.

She took in a ragged breath. "I beg you not to do this, Hildin."

"Beg all you want, wife, but a virginity is called for on a wedding night, and this is the one you have left." The burning faded into a strange mix of pain and ecstasy. The thumb retreated, leaving her both relieved and disappointed--only to be replaced by two fingers that stretched and twisted inside her.

She pulled against Gill's grip. "Ssshhh," he soothed, kissing along her shoulder and neck. "The more you fight it, the worse it will feel. The enchantment guarantees you pleasure, but you could have so much more!"

"More to the point," growled the prince, "you will hurt yourself. Give me entrance, Emmae, or I will take it."

Emmae shook and sobbed in Gill's arms. "Calm yourself, little queen," he murmured. "This will happen, depend on it. Here--" and he reached up and caught her mouth. She sank despairingly into the kiss, losing herself in sensation. Through the enchantment, she felt Hildin's desire unfurl and grow inside her, building at the base of her belly to join Gill's. Beneath her she felt Gill's hardness sliding against her. And behind her, she felt Hildin seize her hips firmly. He placed his cock against her ass and slowly pushed inside.

She screamed into Gill's mouth, and he sucked the scream into himself with a chuckling hum. Hildin advanced and retreated, advanced a little further and retreated, deliberately, again and again until Emmae felt his body pressed against her round bottom. Every hair on her body stood on end; every inch of her skin was achingly aware. "Oh, Emmae, I possess you completely, you are my wife now," he rasped. His hands gripped her so very tightly, flexing and squeezing, and his breathing was deep and gutteral.

"Give way, let it happen," whispered Gill. He stole a hand between their bodies and found his way to her clitoris. She breathed in harsh wails that kept time with Hildin's sure thrusts and Gill's busy fingers.

Confusing, overwhelming waves of pleasure traveled up her spine, fighting against her revulsion, and she found herself pushing back against the penetration, wanting more, until she was delirious and screaming again. Gill replaced his fingers with the length of his cock, grinding against her vulva just short of entering her. "Do you feel that? Do you feel my boy, so close, just a little push away?" said Hildin, close to his crisis. "Not this time--you're not ready--can't damage my little brood mare just yet. I'm making you ready for next time. Next time, he'll be inside you when I do this. Do you understand me, wife? We'll both be inside you, and you will love it!"

"No! I won't! No! Ohhhh!" she sobbed, even as her second climax hit.

"Fight it--struggle all you want!" Hildin took a fistful of her hair and arched her back against Gill's arms. "I love it when you fight me, little bitch--I make you come--just the same--hunh!" Hildin stiffened against her with a shout as he came, pulsing inside her and leaving marks on her hip where he held her. He collapsed against her back, slipped unceremoniously from inside her, and rolled off. "Take your pleasure, Gill," he said. "I have taken mine."

Gill flipped Emmae over on her back and plunged into her dripping cunt. She felt boneless beneath him, spread wide, no strength remaining to fight. There was nothing to do but let it wash over her. She began to shake. "It's all right," said Gill, kissing her ruddy face, "shaking is to be expected, I shake too sometimes, after he takes me this way. My lady, you are so very beautiful, and never more so than right now!" He kissed her unresisting lips and looked into her dazed eyes so lovingly that she couldn't help but brush her fingers against his jaw.

"I don't understand," she said softly. "You can be so kind, and yet you will do this--" He twisted his hips, and she cut her words off with a moan.

"I am his," he said, staring down on her intensely. "I am his and so are you. I would do anything for him--anything--and you shall too, of your own free will. I want you to love this, I want you to love everything we do to you, I want you!" He lowered his head, his cheek pressed against hers. "We'll be his, together," he moaned into her ear. His thrusts picked up speed, and he clutched her breasts. She felt her third release tumbling inside her, working its way up through her body. "And we'll do anything he asks--any--thing--any--aah!" Gill pounded into her in his final moments of passion, and it was enough. She curved up into him, crying as she came, the page sobbing in her arms as he followed.

Emmae floated for what seemed like a long time, insensible. When thought finally returned, with it came misery. She was Hildin's wife. Warin would never take her back now, if he ever came for her. She would live out her life a slave to the spell, subject to the desire of her new husband.

"Sleep now, sweetheart," said Hildin, stroking her cheek. She opened her eyes at the unexpected gesture. Hildin had taken her against him on one side, with Gill on the other. The page was already asleep, his smooth young face slack and innocent. "Tomorrow we are crowned King and Queen. You must be rested." She closed her eyes again, feeling the fresh despair within her fade to a dull, deep throb. "I shall win you, Emmae," she heard him whisper. "All it will take now is my brother's death."

Never had Emmae hated Hildin more. She couldn't wait for Warin. Death would come to this house, she resolved as sleep took her, and she would be the one to bring it--if she had to, only to herself, but if she could kill Hildin first, she would.

"I said you wouldn't fall asleep," said the Teacher, as Temmin blinked his way out of the story. His face was flushed and his breathing irregular.

"Why must you tell me all these details?" he said shakily, shifting carefully on the chair.

"I want you to understand the true history of your family, and its habitual uses of power. Think on that as you spend the night tomorrow at the Temple."

"I shall try very hard not to think of it, thank you."

"Pretending you don't find it arousing is pointless," said the Teacher, preparing to leave. "It's physically obvious even with your hands in your lap. What you might want to mention to Allis and Issak tomorrow is whether you imagine yourself in Hildin's place, or in Emmae's place. Or you can wait until they find that out on their own. Because they will, you know. Take Farrday to recover from what I am sure will be a very busy night. I shall see you early on Eddinday. Be ready to work."

The door closed firmly behind the black-robed figure, leaving Temmin red-faced and agape. In Hildin's place? Or Emmae's?! What kind of person did the Teacher think he was? He glanced at the clock. He had a few minutes before tea time to himself. He got up quickly and headed to his bedchamber, unbuttoning his trousers as he went.

What kind of person was he?

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

Creative Commons LicenseAn Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

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FST777's picture

Excelent chapter

You are good at psychological details. It's hard not to think about the same question Temmin is pondering. I really did enjoy the story so far.

One question: both you and AE use a lot of erotic / adult situations in your stories, allthough it's clear that it's not the main theme. Aren't you afraid that folks will come here just for that? Also, what is the purpose of making it such a central feature?

I see you use Drupal for this site. You might want to consider TinyMCE.
I use that on my site for quick editing. Could also be very suited for comments (allthough I do no use it that way yet).

MeiLin's picture
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thank you

especially for your remark about Temmin's question.

If people come here for the adult stuff, I'm fine with that, as long as someone's out there reading what I'm writing and enjoying it, however they want to enjoy it. Seriously, we take what we need and leave the rest from almost everything, don't we? I can't control that and I don't want to. I know there are people who come here for everything BUT the sex, and that's okay too.

Why the sex is a central feature: That's what comes out of me when I write. I can honestly say I'm not pandering to anyone but myself and my process, it's just where this stuff starts. This entire...THING...started with Emmae's story. As I started asking myself questions, and as my "beta" readers asked me questions, things evolved, and what was a very simple sexual fantasy story began to turn into something else. I got an idea for another related story and wondered how to tie them together. That's when Temmin and the Teacher appeared, in very rudimentary form, and my "betas" began asking questions about them. In short order, this story you're currently reading is what finally coalesced around that fantasy I'd been carrying in my head for several years.

The other thing I'm working on, on the back burner, started out as my thinking about a character I'd created trying to write Firefly fanfiction. I liked the character, and as I worked with her back story, you guessed it, it started out with an adult situation. And as I fiddled with it, it got more adult. (No Firefly characters involved--she quickly stepped out of that world into her own, and what that world ends up looking like I'm still not entirely sure, in fact, she may end up HERE, I just flashed on something, and wouldn't THAT be weird.) And by "adult," I don't even mean long drawn-out descriptions of sex, I mean concepts and situations you wouldn't put in a "young adult" novel.

I know it says something about me, and possibly not a healthy something, but I acknowledge I'm not 100% sane. Who is? English professors' careers have been made on what someone's writing says about them psychologically, whether there's sex in it or not (and I'm not saying I deserve academic scrutiny--please gods no). I don't know, ask my therapist, she's around here somewhere keeping tabs on me. And the thing is, as I futz around in history reading for ideas, this stuff (minus the magic) comes up again and again. Teacher says "Rape is in the history of every royal family," and that's no exaggeration. Sexual situations and misbehavior are the stuff of history as much as battles and politics.

This all looks defensive, and honestly, it's not. I've come to accept that this is what/how I write, after much struggle against it, and I accept that not everyone is going to like it. I accept that I may lose people after this chapter. You just got me thinking. Smiling

As to Drupal: I may give tinyMCE or one of the other AJAX-style editors another go. Their initial implementations broke the world, but that was years ago. I've been working with Drupal for a long time now. Smiling

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

It's a good story. ;) I come

It's a good story. Eye-wink I come here mostly for the story, and the psychology of the characters. The erotica is just a sideline. Tales of MU is one that gets on my nerves for having too much (to me) pointless erotica. I prefer the world, background, interpersonal conflict, etc. that's not all about sex.

Of course, nothing I've read here has bothered me. You made the distinction before between fiction and real life, and that's clear enough. Imagination is imagination, and it's fine to explore it. I've read worse stuff than this in a MFA fiction course, too, with less purpose and more random, violent, and vulgar sex (like, a crossdressing man getting gang-raped in an alley, with some descriptions I see no need to elaborate here).

Oh, yeah. And I am finishing my MA in English lit. and staring my PhD in the fall... hah! I could probably find some Freudian analysis if you want, although that sort of theory isn't really my thing. I'm a medievalist. Eye-wink I read dead languages and play with old stories. It probably comes out a bit in my own choice of stories.

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

Haha!

Hilarious, slightly embarrassing, and completely unintentional. I just saw the automatic title that was added to my last post.

Sonja's picture

Hildin is such a ... eugh.

Hildin is such a ... eugh.

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

Creepy. Good. But, creepy.

Creepy.

Good. But, creepy.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

TheGrayCrayon's picture
Devotee

chapter chapter chapter

just got to read the chapter and it was excelent as always. must sleep now. I'm working 25 of the 48 weekend hours and am exhausted. keep rolling it out and you know i'll keep reading it.

- Outside of a dog, a book is mans best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read. ~Groucho Marx
- Ying/Yang is harmony. Ying/Ying is.....a name for a panda. ~Castle

firesprite's picture

Speechless

My dear, that was... wonderful. I can't think of any other words. I know it may be extreme to some readers, but... your words, your descriptions... the feelings... I'm out of breath... not from being turned on (okay.. .maybe a little) but just from being swept up in the emotions of the scene. Keep writing, please. Never stop. You have talent.

MeiLin's picture
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*blush*

Thank you. I can't stop writing. No, really. I can't stop. I'm supposed to be doing things like cleaning house and sleeping, and I can't stop writing. Pathological, me.

Moo's picture

Thank you!

You have such a wonderful story (and I do come here for the entire story... The sexual elements are an important part of the story as it is written, but it would not feel as complete without the non-sexual elements). But still... darn you and AE for giving me more reason to procrastinate on my thesis! I really wish I had found this site after I was done, as opposed to nearly-but-not-quite finished... =)

Today's was squicky but necessary. I had been wondering how the wedding night would turn out...

MeiLin's picture
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just tell yourself

"They're only a couple thousand words"...AE and I both weigh in around 2500 words on average in a chapter. Quick reads! Eye-wink

Moo's picture

Yes, but...

They take longer!  You read them... re-read it... savor the story... await the next chapter with eager anticipation... and then write comments instead of, oh say, running spellcheck on your rough draft.  Can't wait for my readers to get to the part about the "re sluts indicate..."  

But as I finally finished my final rough draft (and the darn thing is due Monday), I'll have plenty of time to hang out over here... Eye-wink

balunr's picture

Excellent Story!

I've enjoyed every chapter so far, this was no exception. I like the way you are telling both stories at once, and as everyone else does, I look forward to finding out more about Teacher.

I have 1 request for you - would it be possible to put the date that the chapter is posted on the main page? I can never remember which chapter number I read last, but I can usually remember what day I was here...

 

 

 

MeiLin's picture
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I'll see what I can do

I'm not 100% sure I can, but I'll give it a bash.

 

ETA: Done. Hope that helps.

Lanir's picture

Thinking

I had the same question as Temmin after I got done reading. I can empathize with your thoughts on writing erotic content as well. Originally I wanted to be a story writer but my inspiration tends towards poetry and my creative side tends to flourish only under certain conditions. I need a muse. Some of the things I've written would disturb people and I never quite figured out what to think about that. Seeing you handle it seemingly effortlessly and with a great deal of class definitely got me thinking.

I mean, about something other than Emmae and curses and young bodies and... you know, I'm just gonna shaddup now.

MeiLin's picture
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get thee a pen name/persona

I am still "me" when I write as MeiLin, but I don't worry about how it reflects on my public self. Even though I really don't care if people know who I am, and most of my friends are actively reading this (and cheering me on). It's for my mom at this point. I want her to have some flimsy curtain of deniability, if only for herself.

What I write isn't even as scandalous as lots of stuff out there, as Chad and others have pointed out here, but "I was raised better." And that upbringing has thwarted me all my life, because like it or not, the sensual, the erotic, is where my writing always starts, and has almost since childhood, to the point where I gave up trying to be a dungeonmaster in D&D games as a teenager because things would just start to get creepy and weird. And that was when I was just building the thing out, I never got to the actual DM'ing for a game because I creeped myself out, I could only imagine how weird it would have been for the guys I played with. And it wasn't anything overt, it was just this sort of miasma of uncomfortable oddness. OK, with occasional flashes of overt.

In any event. I'm glad you think I'm handling this with class. I've decided since this is how I write, for good or ill, I may as well explore some of the thoughts I've had about this stuff. I've thought a lot about it since I found my sexuality, may as well put it out there for other people to think about, too.

Oh--AND GO WRITE. Even if it's disturbing to some people. I find lots of things disturbing, like, say, those creepy "Left Behind" books and the authorized Doctor Seuss books other people are writing with his characters (omigod, you want disturbing? Geisel is spinning in his grave at 30,000 RPM), but that doesn't stop them from writing 'em, do it? Smiling

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

And...

I should add, that every MFA person I know (which is quite a few, since they're in the same department as me) has a mind that is so far in the gutter that it's not just in the gutter but it's helping to shore up the walls.

And several of my professors have turned every discussion onto sex one way or another, and commented that 90% of everything was based on sex.

So, I'd say, at least by the standards of English departments (which may be a bit, ahem, jaded), your writing is perfectly normal!

I'll let you know when I figure it out.

Lanir's picture

Writing

You're right, I should write something. I think I've only written a few things in the last couple years. I'll make you a deal. I'll write it if you read it. Smiling  Just the first thing I write and one short poem (in case I write something really bad 'cause I'm rusty). Ok so it's a really lousy deal for you and you should probably say no but I figured what the hell. Not sure if I'll get something out anyway and this way if I do I can say it's all your fault. Smiling

MeiLin's picture
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deal

get crackin'.

Lanir's picture

Ugh

Finally got something new written. I think that part of my brain was rusted shut or something from lack of use. It's just a couple paragraphs, a snippet of a scene I whipped up and a poem from the last time I was writing regularly. I took a stab at making it interesting but feel free to tell me to keep my day job. Smiling

http://cisns.net/~lanir/muse

teehee's picture
Devotee

<--- suitably impressed.

Faerie Muse evokes some uncomfortable feelings in my chest, but it seems that's the effect you were going for. The imagery painted about the color red in your first poem is neat, and I really like the hair/wind dance of <3 in the second!

Keep going, who knows? Ms. MeiLin has developed a following based on advice she got from AE.

we're at the top of the world, you and I
<3 you, jamie dick

MeiLin's picture
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the advice wasn't personal

I didn't do that interview with her until after I'd launched this thing. I got most of it from the essay on her blog site about self-publishing.

Lanir, I'm trying to finish 34 and then I'll take a look, probably tomorrow.

teehee's picture
Devotee

my apologies

i didn't intend to imply that it was, but now that I check again with a critical eye, it does seem so. I must sharpen my meanings even more so when I write, especially around mistresses of words like you MeiLin! Thank you for sharing your gift!

we're at the top of the world, you and I
<3 you, jamie dick

MeiLin's picture
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none needed

I just didn't want people thinking I had some secret "in" with AE that I don't really have. I don't think she's ever even read this.

girlthing's picture

you know, I'm half worried

you know, I'm half worried that Hildin doesn't get killed, and he and Emmae are Timmin's ancestors. (say it ain't so!)
but yeah, although I think this chapter is well written and emotional, I am looking forward to something a little more consentual with Allis and Issak. Smiling

MeiLin's picture
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your wish

is my command. Well, not really. The story goes where it will. Smiling But Tuesday "where it will" is consensual.

Kitabare's picture
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You suck

I hadn't even thought of Hildin being the one to live until you mentioned it. Now that you did I'm afraid it might come true. But... I'm trying to remember. I have to go look something up now.

MeiLin's picture
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now, now

The answer is already in the story to date. Go back and read, y'all.

Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

I did

That's what I meant when I said I had to go look something up.

 

 

Temmin groaned. "Honestly, how much history do I need to know? I can
recite the kings of Tremont from the First Temmin! Temmin the Great,
Gethin the First, Hildin the First, Temmin II, Andrin the First, Temmin
III, Andrin II, Harsin the First, Warin the First, Gethin the Sad,
Warin the Wise--"

"You forgot Hildin the Usurper."

"Well, does he really count?" said Temmin, throwing himself into the library table chair.

"Hildin's hatred of his brother led directly to the uniting of Leutefloss and Tremont."

"Ah, now you're trying to trick me," said Temmin, arching a brow.
"Warin the Wise united the two kingdoms when he married the only child
of the last king of Leutefloss."

The Teacher slid a book across the table, neither large nor small,
covered in leather dyed Tremontine red. In dull gilt lettering on the
spine were the words "An Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom."

 

From that I would infer that Warin lives and Hildin leaves the story. Obviously there were things that were left out of the general history and this book fills things in.

Thinker's picture

Looking Forward

This is a very interesting story, and the questions raised in this latest chapter are very intriguing. I could talk about that for awhile, but what I really want to comment on is my high, yet fragile hopes for the future of this story. Not because I expect you to change anything for me, but because I want you to see how much you've made me care about this story!
I know you are writing from a bit more than experience... although I don't know what your experiences are, lol. But there is some kind of theory behind your depictions, right? I can't wait to explore the Lover's training with Temmin. That is the kind of thing that I read these stories for. Not because they get me off (these kind of things don't "do it" for me at least), but because they make me think. I am hoping to get a glimpse into your own understanding of sexuality, but at the same time I'm hoping to read something based on more than your own perspective. I just thought I'd share that since it keeps worrying me. Now you know. Whatever you choose to do, I can quit being worried. At least you know that one fan finds herself caring deeply.

MeiLin's picture
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I'd like to hear more of your thoughts

I'm writing from my imagination, my experience and the experiences of people I know. I'm not writing from any academic theories at all, merely from observation of people historical and in my life. I'm not an academic. I do read, a lot, about sexuality. It's an area of keen interest for the husband, and not in the prurient ways you might think; his (indirect) research tends to bleed into whatever I'm reading and thinking about just by living with him.

Unless I'm misunderstanding what you're asking me, which is probable. What's the question again? Smiling

Thinker's picture

Hmm, then with all those

Hmm, then with all those experiences, I hope we get a good representation of what might occur in a Lover's Temple. =)

The only other thoughts I can share were about your question. Which position do I imagine myself in. In one sense, I recognize that I identify with Emmae, but for several reasons, I suposse I was less than consciously avoiding being in her place because I do not enjoy the loss of control she experiences or small random things, like having my nipples pinched very hard. That makes me wonder. It seems that women can take a lot of pain with their pleasure, and some seek it out, but I have never enjoyed being hurt, and even though i can stand it, pinch too hard and I will be in a lot of discomfort for a few days, and simply wish that I could have done without that. I wonder if I am unlike most women or like most women? And if you could even tell. It's not generally considered very sexy to say "ow" in the middle of love making when your lover is trying so hard, and god knows porn stars wouldn't say "ow" if something hurt because they make their living off of enjoying whatever is sexy to most MEN. How much do women like nipple pinching really?

And despite the implication that I then must surely imagine myself as Hildin... his attitude is repulsive to me, and I think I would have a very hard time indeed getting those kinds of words to come out of my mouth. I know what I am like when I am "on top" with a Lover. And although I can be very possessive, there ends my similarities with Hildin's actions thus far. His motivation is to get pleasure, but more than pleasure, I am seeking the intimacy, which somehow binds me to a certain gentleness, not to harm.

What else can I say... I have always wondered what sex is REALLY like for other people, thus my hope and my musings. But once you finished this chapter, I realized how well you had described what was happening without imposing one person's perspective or feelings too much. Bravo!

Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

More character possibilities.

I tried to go back and find a clearer description of what Teacher looks like, but I'm only skimming and only catching vague pieces. My first impression was of Jason Isaacs, and I haven't been able to come up with anything different.

http://www.imdb.com/media/rm589273088/nm0005042
http://www.imdb.com/media/rm1015848192/nm0005042
http://www.imdb.com/media/rm2016123136/nm0005042

He has the presence, and the eyes. But I think I remember you said Teacher was somewhat androgynous.

Feh, I think you should have a page with the character descriptions where I can comment on these.... *thinks for a minute* Oh wait, you do! I'm tired. I'll probably compile a list of what we have so far and start a speculation comment there and just comment on the newest chapter whenever we add more speculation to it so people know that there are new comments and speculations. See, I'm rambling, I must be tired. That's one of the problems with typing how you would speak. >.<

Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

Now I remember why I forgot

Now I remember why I forgot about the character page. There is no quick link to it on the site that is easy to find.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

can do

Do you want separate pages for the main characters?

Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

That would be nice. Although

That would be nice. Although a link for the appendices at the top of the page, or on the chapters page would be more beneficial to begin with. Hmmm... I may have to brush off my photoshop skills to create the characters.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

too masculine

But good eyes. Teacher is sharper featured and more slender as well. It's the intersection of David Bowie, Tilda Swinton and Cate Blanchett. Not somewhat androgynous, QUITE androgynous.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

right

I sketched a version of Teacher. I'm not much of an artist, but it gives the idea, I guess. I'll try to get it online sooner than later.

Fayth's picture

Quite androgynous?

As in, Davey Havok from AFI (http://www.musicbanter.com/attachments/lounge/745d1125424568-dude-thread...) androgynous? More than? Less than?

NoodletwigMeow's picture
Devotee

Sketch of Teacher?!

Squeeee!!
*swoons*

... Refresh monkey-ing for the new chapter. Hee. ^_^

Professional lurker, at your service. ^_^

V's picture
Embodiment

Sweet irony...

While I was reading this chapter I thought that the music was oddly appropriate, flipped over to iTunes...and it had queued up "Wifeing - Theme of Love" from Conan the Barbarian. So singularly appropriate and yet so wrong, on a number of levels.

There's an idea, someone...genetic, adaptive music selection based on the content you're reading. Of course, it'll suck until something beats the Turing Test.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

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