Back at the Keep, no one said a word to Temmin about where he'd been or what he'd been doing, not even Jenks. When he returned to his rooms, Jenks merely murmured something about a bath waiting. Once he was in the water, Temmin said, "Well?"
"Well what, young sir?" answered Jenks, picking up the red silk cravat and examining the new and possibly permanent creasemarks in it.
"Oh, come now. You're not going to ask me anything about my day? Not a word from anyone about it! I'm quite confused, considering how interested everyone was beforehand. I fully expected Elly to be camped out on my sofa, with Seddy ready to take notes." He ducked his head under the water to wet his hair; water ran up his nose and he came up sputtering. "And!" he continued, snorting out bathwater, "you haven't met my eyes once since I've been back. Not like you, Jenks."
"No, your highness," he answered with a little smile.
"Well, then?"
Jenks handed him a towel and turned away as Temmin dried himself off. "Have you ever thought about your parents having sex, your highness?"
"What?!" said Temmin, horrified. "I should hope not!"
"And what about the princesses?"
"Jenks! What are you on about!"
"Only this," said the manservant, becoming quiet. "You are like a son to me if I may be so very out of line, young sir. I assure you fully that parents don't wish to think about their children's sex lives any more than children wish to think about their parents' sex lives." And with that, he finally looked Temmin in the eye, a gaze of deep affection, glee and a wee bit of revulsion.
Jenks chuckled, and Temmin burst out laughing. "Please let's get me dressed, Jenks, I'm absolutely famished and shall eat my cravat if I don't get some food soon."
"Eating is about all it's good for, your highness, what on earth did you do to it?"
"You don't want to know!" said Temmin over his shoulder as he strode into his bedchamber.

Temmin was ready the next morning when the Teacher entered his study. "How much did you see yesterday?"
"Oh dear," said the Teacher mildly, perching on the sofa arm. "What am I being accused of now?"
"Stop it. Big mirror in the corner of the room yesterday at the Temple."
"Ah. I looked in just long enough to make sure things were proceeding apace. No longer, I assure you." A smile quivered at the corners of the Teacher's mouth.
"Was the blindfold your idea? So I wouldn't see you watching?"
"Was there a blindfold involved?" said the Teacher, nearly yawning. "I didn't notice. Or perhaps it was already gone by that point."
"Damn you, that is the last thing I ever want you watching!" shouted Temmin.
"Child," replied the Teacher, "that is the last thing I'd choose to watch. Don't flatter yourself. One of the lessons I devoutly hope you'll learn at the Temple is that not everything and everyone revolves around the head of your prick."
Temmin rocked back on his heels in surprise. "What?!"
"You have been chased round this citadel by maidservants and young ladies in ballgowns, but remember that not all of them are enamored of you for your own sake, in fact, I daresay most of them are not," snapped the Teacher. "You are the Heir and as such you are almost literally irresistable, but not necessarily loved or even desired. You have power as well as youth and good looks on your side, but those alone won't sway everyone. I have absolutely no need of your power. In fact, I myself make up a good portion of your power. Youth and good looks hold no sway over me. Which leaves you, yourself. I have yet to see anything in you that would make me wish to look in on your more private moments of my own volition. Am I making myself clear?"
Temmin blinked. "I think so."
The Teacher sighed, exasperated. "Let's get on with the day. We shall begin with an overview of the conflicts with the Northern tribes."
"Gethin the Sad fought off the first Great Incursion," said Temmin, dutifully sitting down at the library table and fingering the globe as he thought. "Um, apart from that, we've been fighting them at the northern borders pretty much the last 800 years, haven't we? Small skirmishes at least?"
"What do you know about the movement currently agitating for outright conquering the tribes and expanding the Tremontine Empire into the Northern Wastes?"
"Why on earth would we bother?" said Temmin, surprised.
"Do you know where Arrentown is?"
"Yes, just outside our border in the northwest--oh. They discovered gold north of Arrentown last year, didn't they? Sedra mentioned it."
"They did."
"Well, that's a pretty good reason."
"Is it," said the Teacher.
Temmin's mind drifted as the Teacher went on at length about the cultural differences between the nomadic and barbarian Northern tribes and the civilized Southern countries, mostly notably religious, until finally the Teacher said, "Do have the decency to listen at least a little bit, your highness."
"Who cares about a bunch of deerherders," he complained, "even if they are woefully heretical? One god, and male at that. What nonsense. How can you have a Lord without a Lady? Even Farr and Venna have consorts. What use is a god with no partner? A God with no Goddess or even another God! No wonder He's cranky," said Temmin. "Is that what makes His followers so cranky?"
"I cannot speak to their religious experiences, your highness, only that they are held very deeply and that in their eyes our religion is the height of decadence and corruption."
"Is it lunch yet?" said Temmin crankily.
"It is now," sighed the Teacher.
After a simple repast of fresh pea bisque, two trout, cold roast beef with horseradish sauce, a loaf of good brown bread, hothouse grapes, and a really lovely, stinky, runny, tangy cheese from the southeastern coast, Temmin took the briefest of naps. His sleep was filled with fleeting touches and glimpses from the day before, but this time, when he was unblindfolded, he was lying not with the twins but with the Teacher. He woke with a start, just in time for the Teacher's return, though none the more attentive.
"To be fair, I'm surprised you've managed to pay this much attention today," said the Teacher when efforts to resume the history of relations with the Northern tribes fell flat. "Shall we go back to our ongoing history lesson?"
"Yes, please," said Temmin, relieved to be hearing no more of seal blubber lamps and dried reindeer meat. He pulled the book to him, opened its creaking leather cover and let his mind slowly open to the story.
Just then, the Teacher came into the room with a messenger following behind. The Teacher beckoned the messenger forward. "We have important news from Leutefloss."
The messenger bowed deeply and pulled a parchment from a pouch at his hip, handing it to the prince with an even deeper bow. Hildin took the parchment and unrolled it. Drawn on the parchment was the face of a handsome older man with an aquiline nose, crowned and grave. "My master, King Fredrik," said the messenger. "The message, I'm afraid, is keyed to the king your father, your highness," he added apologetically.
"As you can see, the king is indisposed," said the Teacher coldly. "It should work for the Regent."
"Speak! I listen," said Hildin formally to the parchment drawing.
The drawing blinked rapidly and began to speak. "King Gethin? Oh--Prince Hildin! Where is your father? How are you able to see this?"
"My father is on his deathbed," said Hildin. "I am the Prince Regent."
"Your brother?"
"Is still missing and is not returning. I am the Heir."
"I see," nodded the drawing. "I grieve already for your father, a good and pious man. My messenger has reached you in a late hour, but my need is urgent. I seek news of my only child and heir, the Princess Edmerka. She disappeared in the forest near our border some months ago, and I fear bandits though I have received no request for ransom. We have searched everywhere to no avail. I beg for your assistance, since you can see with your magicks into every corner of your lawful realm and as you know, my sight stops at our mutual border."
Prince Hildin's ears pricked up. He gave the Teacher a long, hard look, and the Teacher scowled back.
"I share your deep concern," said Hildin solicitously."How could she have been missing for so long without a trace?"
The drawing of Fredrik shook its head. "We thought she was safe at the home of my wife's family for the first two months, until the captain of her guards was found raving in a village many miles from there. He didn't know who he was or what had happened to my daughter. When I contacted my wife's family, they were completely unconcerned. Her father said he'd just assumed we'd changed our minds. Needless to say, we are very displeased." The drawing drew its eyebrows together. " Very displeased indeed. The last four months we have spent searching, with no luck. We've found many of her retinue, and her useless nurse, but all of them are witless. And we found them spread all over the kingdom! Not a clue as to my daughter's whereabouts. I am frantic.
"If you find her, Prince Hildin, I shall give her to you in gratitude. Your father and I have spoken of this before. It is high time she was married, and if I die without a male heir, our kingdoms would then be joined. After the way your father and brother led us against the Northern Incursions--"
Prince Hildin rose from his chair. "King Fredrik, I shall undertake the search starting this very night. I shall find her for you and happily take her to wife. I take my leave now and will be back in touch through this parchment as soon as I have any word." Hildin bowed deeply to the parchment and strode from the king's chambers to his own. Behind him, he heard the Teacher following after.
"Gill, quickly. Bring two mirrors upstairs to our guest's room." The startled page jumped up and retrieved two scrying mirrors from the cabinet and followed the prince and the Teacher up the stairs to Emmae's room.
Prince Hildin set one mirror at the bedside table and one before him. "If the Princess Edmerka is within the borders of our realm, show her to me." Gill watched as his master's reflection rippled and faded, and a new picture appeared in the mirror: That of the sleeping Emmae just across the room.
Hildin grinned in triumph. "I have the Princess! Soon I shall have the throne, and in time hers as well. And when my brother returns, it will be too late. I will be king, and she will be my wife!" His gloating laughter intruded into Emmae's dreams and she whimpered softly in her sleep. "We will need to tie up some loose ends, beginning with you, Teacher. The last thing I need is you flapping about. Go to your library and stay there. You are forbidden to help my brother. You must obey me, and you know it. Gill, set a guard on the room and let no one enter or leave. Search the room and the Teacher's person for mirrors or anything reflective. You know what to do." The Teacher stalked out of the room, white with anger, followed by Gill.
Hildin waited a day before unfurling the magical parchment again in his rooms. "King Fredrik, hear me!" he shouted.
The drawing blinked. "Speak, I listen. Oh, Prince Hildin. News, so soon?"
"I have found your daughter and have her here at Tremont Keep. Are you near the border?"
"Quite near, within a few hours' ride" said the drawing.
"Then bring a mirror across the border into Tremont. I will bring you the rest of the way by reflection as soon as you're across the border. I will look for you in three hours, and again at the beginning of each hour."
"Thank you! That saves me two weeks' travel," said the drawing. "I'll be off right away." And the drawing stopped moving and became just a piece of paper again.
Emmae awoke the next morning to find Meg bustling about the room. "Child, it's time to get up! See here, my prince has given you new dresses!" Meg lovingly spread out a blue silk gown. "I am to help you with your toilet and bring you to the great hall as soon as you're ready."
"What?" asked Emmae in sleepy confusion as she sat up. "Why?"
"I'm sure I don't know, miss," answered the old woman. "But I'm to get you ready as fast as ever I can." Emmae let Meg wash her, dress her in the blue gown, and brush out her lustrous chestnut hair, settling a soft blue veil over her head and fastening it with a circlet. "Ah! That blue sets off your skin and eyes just so! My Hildin will be so pleased, as pretty as a princess, you are, miss!" cried Meg, stepping back in satisfaction.
"No princess," murmured Emmae, "only a woodsman's woman. Or was." Tears pricked at her eyes, but she had cried so much in this place that no drops formed.
Meg shooed her out the door and down the long stairs to the great hall, where Prince Hildin and Gill waited outside the massive doors. "Meg," said the page, "I have need of you. Come with me." Meg looked perplexed, but trotted obediently after Gill down the hall.
"Why, Emmae," smiled Hildin, "you are as regal as a queen. Which is fitting, since you shall be one very shortly." Emmae looked up at him in confusion. "My father is dying, in fact, I would venture to say he may not last the night. My brother has renounced his throne and abandoned you. And while I'm not usually one for discards, in both of these cases I have no qualms. I shall be king, and you shall be my queen."
"You suppose I will marry you," she replied, blue eyes flashing. "And you also suppose that your kingdom will accept a commoner as your consort."
"But you are not a commoner." He smiled at her almost comically horror-struck face. "You, my dear, are the daughter of King Fredrik of Leutefloss. Your real name is Edmerka, styled Princess of Leutefloss. Which is an unfortunate name, I think you'll agree," he snickered. "I shall continue to call you Emmae."
Emmae put one hand on her pounding heart. "A princess?" she cried. "Worse and worse! I don't want to be a princess, I just want to go home to Warin. And even if I am this princess, I will not marry you, sir!"
"Ah," said Hildin, "but I know you will." He pressed her into the wall, slipping one hand around her waist and cradling a breast with the other. "Because I know that underneath this fine gown you are wet for me, Emmae," he whispered in her ear. His fingers found a hard nipple through her bodice and pinched it. She gasped and closed her eyes in pain and arousal. "I know you are burning and wet for me, and that if I wanted to, I could take you right here in the hallway and you'd let me. I could take you in the middle of the entire court, on the dais before the throne, all of them knowing that you are the Princess Edmerka. And you would not only let me, you'd scream out your pleasure before them."
He ground his hardness into her, his knee pressing her legs apart. "And I would, Emmae. I would fuck you--yes, fuck you," he hissed at her shocked intake of breath, "in front of the whole court, in front of your father, and then afterward offer you to whoever wants you and let him have you right there. I would watch you writhe in thrall to your enchantment in the arms of my lords. Your father would disown you, and after I have thoroughly shamed you I would then give you to the chief of the horse brigades to entertain his men. And that, my princess, is how I know you will marry me." She choked.
Hildin released her, but she stayed pressed against the wall, hands over her mouth, swallowing hard. "Now. We are going before your father, King Fredrik. Yes, he is in the great hall waiting for us, I brought him here through a reflection. I shall explain your intense emotion as relief at your rescue from the scoundrel who'd kidnapped you. And you will do your best to be charming and sweet and grateful to your rescuer. Won't you?" Emmae nodded wordlessly, and followed him into the great hall.
Meanwhile, old Meg had followed Gill into an unused room in a different section of the castle. He lit a candle, and the poor woman let out a small shriek. There in the middle of the floor lay Jessa, her eyes open and lifeless. Around her neck were the ugly marks of a ligature. "I'm so very sorry, Meg," said Gill, choking back tears as he slipped the garrotte around her fat neck. "But we can't let anyone live who knows Emmae has been here all this time." He throttled her until she was dead. He cried as he threw her body on top of Jessa's, snuffed out the candle, and closed the door.
"Well," said Temmin as he shook the book out of his head, "the sooner that Hildin gets his, the better, don't you think? And that page!"
"This is history, your highness, not a fairy tale," said the Teacher severely. "We already know what happened."
"Not this part, we don't. At least I never heard it."
"If this episode wasn't shocking enough for you to take seriously, perhaps the next one will be," sniffed the Teacher. "You surprise me with your callousness. It's not like you."
"Beg pardon if I don't take 800-year-old events to heart," said Temmin blithely. "I'm just not feeling that solemn today. Here, I'll be more sensitive: What did you do locked up in the library? Did they at least feed you?"
"It's time for dinner, your highness. Jenks will be in momentarily to scrub behind your ears, I'm sure," said the Teacher stiffly, sweeping from the room. Temmin hummed to himself, unconcernedly throwing a little ball of wadded-up paper in the air until Jenks came in to ready him for dinner.
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Parents having se..
..no, you know what? we're gonna stop that thought right there. Excelent chapter, and gold in the hills? possible war in the future? religious differences? you heard it here first true believers (well second as you probably read the chapter yourself) , this storys going places. Keep up the good work!
Wonderful
Wonderful, as always!
whee!
you got it this time! Thanks!
Hate it when that happens
Cravats used as blindfolds... Not really a favourite thing of mine, especially when you find it was your cravat only after cutting it because the knot was too tight to open blindfolded.
Yay update... boo my timing.
Unfortunately I'm too blown away after having just read the latest ToMU to read anything else right now. Will read and comment tomorrow. *goes to bed still flabbergasted thanks to AE*
yeah that was intense
Hope you enjoy this chapter once you get your breath back.
Speaking of AE, I interviewed her in email for my writers' space (on the economic model she came up with and that I shamelessly imitate). I'll be publishing the ensuing article here and on its website in a bit.
I hope you are happy!
I got up early to do my homework, but noooooooooooooo, I had to get an email saying that chapter 25 was up! Thanks for the fabulous diversion, but now it is off to build some maps on ArcGIS. Good times, good times.
GREAT JOB on the chapter! Keep it coming, girl!
Tsk
And here I had you pegged after all these years as such a disciplined character, THE Sharon.
Thank you! I love seeing friends here.
Hmm
Hildin is a pretty thorough bastard it seems. Although now I'm wondering if/when he'll off Gill. He doesn't seem to be the kind of person who gets more tame just because you've shared a bed with them.
oh, he gets worse
Believe it or not. He's probably the most over-the-top villain I've ever written, barring the Master (in Doctor Who fanfic--you cannot go too over-the-top with that character). Being my first original villain, perhaps I've pushed it a bit too far with Hildin. Sadly, I don't care.
Absolutely engrossing
I love the story your weaving, Mrs. Miranda, and can't wait to find out what happens next, in both time lines! Your site is nestled right next to Tales of MU on my Bookmarks list. Kudos, and keep up the excellent work!
thank you!
keep reading!
Silly teenagers
I'm going to excuse that as the reason for Temmin's lack of caring there at the end. Although he really does need to start taking his studies to heart. I don't think he's realized that his father isn't going to be around forever and that he's actually going to need to know all of this when that happens.
Hmmm. Just my musings here, you don't have to pay them any mind. But I'm remembering how Edmerka was before the enchantment. From what I remember she was obstinate and arrogant. I wonder if her father will brush off the change and attribute it to her having been a "captive". If not will he do anything about it?
Hildin is the epitome of a callous, spoiled royal. Here, he murders the very woman who helped to raise him and who considered him a son. He obviously didn't tell her who Emmae really was. If he had, and had asked her to keep quiet I'm sure she would have out of her love for him. However, maybe there are magics that could have been used to get the truth from her. That's assuming anyone thought to ask. But I think he had her killed because he just didn't care about her. After all, she was just a servant.
Poor Gill. I actually kind of like him, in an odd way. I think he's just loyal and misguided. I think he could actually be a pretty decent person if circumstances were different. However, at the moment, I'm rooting for Warin to kill him when Gill remains foolishly loyal to Hildin.
teenaged indifference
I'm drawing on my own memories of teenhood, and observations of teens I know now--basically good kids, including me, who are completely clueless and wrapped up in the drama of adolescence. Temmin is a good person, essentially, but he's also human, and young. To someone his age, the universe stops at the end of your nose. The universe begs to differ, and that's what humans call "your twenties."
Emmae/Edmerka is still quite obstinate, but as Emmae wasn't used to getting her way as she was as Edmerka. The interesting part will be when she holds both sets of memories at once. The arrogance has pretty much been beaten out of her, even when she gets her memories back.
Meg was simply old and in the way, poor thing. She loved her Hildin, but she couldn't be 100% trusted to keep her big trap shut.
Hildin suffered a deep wound as a child--there are few things worse than near-complete rejection by a parent--but, being cossetted and petted and kept from facing any responsibility, he grew up hateful and revengeful instead of regal.
When I think of Gill I always think of the puppies taken from their mother by the pigs in "Animal Farm." Hildin molded him into what Hildin wanted and needed. His feelings for Gill are probably the closest thing Hildin feels to love for anyone, but if Gill ever crossed him or seriously got in the way, Hildin wouldn't think twice. Gill doesn't have much choice in the matter; while he feels some tenderness toward Emmae, he is deeply, hopelessly in love with Hildin.
Huh...
Why IS Temmin being such a snot? Does the relief of sexual frustration make one a jerk? Or is his extra rudeness to Teacher a result of being spied upon?
So many questions, so little Chapter 26 to continue on to... *waits not so patiently*
Temmin is being 16
More to come.
Characters
Hildin has a flair for threats, even if they mostly revolve around the same things he does all of the time. I wonder how he would handle someone who laughed at his threats. I don't think he's too over the top; though if I could see the reasoning in his head, it would explain how he sees the world. Fantasy villains anyway, tend to be allowed to do whatever they can get away with. So, why not. Now if you had him torture small animals for fun, and it didn't matter to the plot, that might be over the top.
Temmin doesn't bother me much, in terms of the flippant attitude. I just see him as a little irritated. If he's a snot, well, he would probably act better if he had a reason to. The Teacher has been getting on his nerves steadily, so it's understandable.
I don't think Temmin was out
I don't think Temmin was out of line at all for his attitude with the Teacher. I'd be massively pissed if I knew someone was peeking in on my first real sexual experience. Frankly, if it were me I'd probably have completely lost my temper and tried to hit him.
And as for his attitude about the deaths of Meg and Jessa, I think it's pretty much just your average 16 year old self-centered-ness. Neither of those women were especially sympathetic characters, and while Temmin could have shown a bit more empathy it's not like he was completely oblivious about it. Maybe I'm just more sympathetic because I remember so well was I was like at 16, and Temmin looks like a saint compared to me.
As for Warrin, I'm really hoping he gets his comeuppance soon, and Gil too. Threatening Emmae like that, having his surrogate mother killed... Gil at least felt bad about killing them, but he still did it anyway.
Psst.
In the beginning of that last part I do believe you meant Hildin instead of Warrin.
"Beg pardon if I don't take
"Beg pardon if I don't take 800-year-old events to heart," said Temmin blithely. "I'm just not feeling that solemn today. Here, I'll be more sensitive: What did you do locked up in the library? Did they at least feed you?"
Sometimes a single passage can really bring out a character's mood. HAHAHAHA
Also, deerherder? How does that work?
The Northern Tribes
I'm borrowing from the Sammi (reindeer herders--srsly, do teh googles, I'm not making it up) and the Semitic/Arabic peoples (nomadic, rather ferocious monotheists). I don't have them entirely formed in my mind yet, but that's where I started.
Well whadya know,
Well whadya know, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sami_people
Learn something new everyday. I had this picture in my mind of a herder trying to keep some deer together and them jumping all over him to get away. But I guess they could live in a more rugged environment than domestic sheep or cows.
Interesting stuff, I look forward to seeing your world more fleshed out.
Continuity check
When he thinks about it consciously, Temmin has rather consistently denied that Teacher could possibly be the same one from 800 years ago, despite some clues to the reader that this might not be the case (it's MAGIC and Teacher swims in the stuff, folks...) When he questions Teacher about his experience at the end, did his subconscious let something slip through, or did the writer?
he's being a dick
pretty much.
Yeah...
Reading on, you handle it very well in the following chapter Kinda funny, that's the one where I see a bunch of other commenters on the same subject, but it reads clearly for me.
Since I haven't read ahead
Since I haven't read ahead yet, I'm going to go ahead and say does Hildin off Gill because he knew of Emmae too? Could he really be trusted that much? He knew about her too so, really, it'd be hypocritical if Gill was left to live as well.
And think about any teenager in a history class. So any of them think that anything they're learning is much more than a story? That's what it feels like for many people, not just teenagers. It happened so long ago that it's hard to empathize with anything that happened, even if it is your heritage. There aren't too many people that have a deep enough love for history that can connect with something that happened so long ago outside of just thinking, "ok, neat."
Subtle poke at the readers
Subtle poke at the readers waiting for Hildin to get his comeuppance there?
I'm also thinking Gill is getting offed soon... but I guess I'll find out since this is all published already and I can just keep going!
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