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Chapter 24 | The Tale of Two Kingdoms

Measurements

Temmin wasn't quite sure how it had happened, but he found himself standing stock still in the overheated room, unable to see. Issak had taken his red silk cravat from Allis's fingers and tied it gently but firmly over Temmin's eyes. When he had tried to reach out, what must have been Issak's hands had taken his and firmly moved them to his sides, with a clear if unspoken direction to leave them there. No one spoke no matter what he said or asked, and finally a finger--he couldn't tell whose--was laid against his lips.

After his cravat, Temmin's suit coat was removed, then his waistcoat. His braces were slid from his shoulders. One by one, his shirt buttons were undone and his shirt slipped off. There was no hurry in any of the movements; he thought about what the High Beloved had said about patience and slow revelation, but he trembled with the effort to keep himself both still and calm. His heart beat so hard he was sure it could be seen through his vest, and his breathing was increasingly irregular. Both Obbys had to be in the room still, and he wasn't sure whether that excited him, alarmed him, or both.

Small hands closed around his waist, guiding him gently back until his calves hit the low couch; the hands moved to his shoulders and pushed down. Temmin obediently sat on the couch, his knees higher than his waist, storklike and awkward. There was a stifled giggle, he thought from Allis, and at a nonverbal prompt he scooted back and stretched out his long legs. His shoes were removed, then his stockings, and he fell back against the pillows with a soft moan as fingers kneaded and pressed along his soles. For a few seconds, he didn't care if anything else happened; those hands could keep rubbing his feet forever as far as he was concerned, and he'd be perfectly happy. But in a very short time, he began to remember the rest of his body, especially the masculine portion of his body. It was straining against its confinement very insistently, and Temmin longed to touch himself, or for someone to touch him, but the hands remained on his feet, and his own hands remained at his sides.

Just before the temptation to do something, anything, became overwhelming, another set of fingers urged Temmin's arms over his head and slipped his vest up and off of his body, tracing back down over his ribs with a touch that almost tickled. He started to lower his arms, but the hands put them back over his head with a little pat he took to mean "stay put." The hands at his feet slid up his legs to his trouser buttons and then his pants buttons, deftly undoing them while touching his body as little as possible. His last remaining clothing was slipped down his legs. Hands picked up his feet and swiveled his legs onto the couch. He was exposed and vulnerable, spread out and blindfolded, gasping slightly and very, very aroused.

Something cool and slippery poured onto him, and a small hand closed around his shaft; he groaned as if he were dying. The hand's mate gripped him at the base, pulling the skin tight. "Oh, Gods. Oh--Allis--" he gasped, hips flexing uncontrollably. The hand stayed only on the shaft, stroking up, down, slowly and inexorably, never touching the head. Temmin began to babble, nearly crying, as his hips tried to set a faster rhythm, but the hand would not oblige. In seconds he was panting and frantic. The hand moved to his cock head and began to stroke him in earnest, from the tip to the root and back again, polishing the head on the downthrust. Temmin pushed into the slickness, open-mouthed, and the hand let him set the rhythm.

"Oh--Gods--Allis--I have to--I can't--Aaah! Please! Please don't--aaaah!" He felt his seed burst from him. All his bones turned to apricot jam, and he swooned, nearly but not quite unconscious, against the soft pillows.

"Now," said Allis from very far away it seemed, "this is what we have to work with: A very young man, inexperienced, willing to please but very much in the habit of being pleased." Who was she talking to? "He's had a few kisses from girls, and a few caresses from boys, but on the whole he knows nothing. I doubt he's even seen a completely naked woman before outside of the statues in the castle's garden. Where shall we start?"

"We have one good baseline measurement of his initial response time now, ma'am, I should think the next would be recovery time," murmured a young woman's voice.

"How very pretty he is, and how very pretty that was, ma'am," sighed another young woman.

"Hang on," said Temmin, coming to in alarm. "Who's here?!" He began to sit up, but felt a pair of distinctly masculine hands--he hoped they were Issak's--push him back against the pillows. "Really, I think you must tell me what's happening," he said, trying not to sound panicked.

"It's all right," soothed Issak--yes, it was definitely Issak's voice. Temmin felt a shifting on the couch, and his head was pulled into a fabric-covered lap. Issak's hands petted his hair. If the back of his head was any judge, it was Issak's lap as well. "It's all right," he repeated. "We aren't the only ones you'll be working with. The other two Supplicants are here. It's all right. You're safe." Issak leaned down and kissed Temmin's forehead, then removed the cravat that had served as a blindfold. Temmin blinked in the low light. Sitting on a cushion on the floor next to him was Allis, wiping her hands on a towel; she handed it over, and he wiped himself clean. When she saw he was planning on covering himself with it, she held out her hand for it. He gave it back reluctantly. Kneeling behind her were two unremarkable-looking girls close to his age or a little older. One was brown-haired and brown-eyed, serious and a little too plump in a plain slate blue muslin. The other was strawberry blond and blue-eyed, so slight she looked as if she might blow away in a stiff breeze; her dress and hair ribbon were pale yellow. The brown-haired one gave a small, grave smile, and the light-haired one merely looked on wide-eyed.

"I think you're right, Anda," Allis said cheerfully to the plump one, "response and recovery times are very good starting points, though I wouldn't put it quite so clinically in earshot of a lover. Now, come greet Temmin properly, girls." Issak helped him to sit up and kept his arm around Temmin as the girls rose from the floor and came toward him. They were much more graceful than he'd supposed, especially the fat one, Anda.

"This is Bessa," said Issak, introducing the strawberry blond. She kneeled between Temmin's legs, put her arms round his neck and kissed him sweetly, letting go of his bottom lip reluctantly. Her pale blue eyes searched his face; she sat back on her heels, apparently satisfied with what she saw there, and then rose to let the other girl take her place. "This is Anda," said Issak. Anda cupped his face with soft hands and drew him into a kiss that thrilled him to his toes. Before he knew it, Temmin had pressed her close to him; he could feel the tops of her big, soft breasts in her corset flattened against his bare chest even through the muslin. When the kiss ended, he gasped and stared dazedly into her slightly smug, round face.

"And there is your second measurement--recovery time, ma'am," said Anda demurely, rising to her feet.

"Anda is nearly ready to leave us," said Issak dryly. Anda inclined her head and bobbed a little curtsy.

"All this talk of measurements," Temmin said, looking beseechingly first at Issak and then at Allis. "I don't understand." Bessa tittered until Issak shot her a stern look, and Temmin resisted the urge to cover himself with his hands.

"It's very useful," answered Allis, "for us to have an idea how quickly you can be brought to your first crisis, and how quickly you're ready again after that. A man your age, the first one is usually over quite speedily, but recovery is quick and then one can take one's time. And women need time, Temmin," she said, stretching herself luxuriantly before folding her feet beneath her once again. "At least for their first. Rather the opposite of men, really. The first climax takes the longest, and after that she can just keep coming over and over, with less and less time between each one, if her partner is skilled. The older a man gets, the longer it takes him to recover after his first, but the more control he has over all of it. With older men, attention goes to the woman first. With younger men, attention goes to the man first. It's all a matter of timing. Now," she said, addressing the two girls, "off you go. We need to be alone for a while with our new Supplicant." Anda once more inclined her head, bobbed a deeper curtsy and gracefully left the room; Bessa followed, but looked deeply disappointed.

"Really, Allis, that was hardly fair, having those two in the room without my knowing it," complained Temmin a bit breathlessly as she slipped onto the couch next to him.

"Would you have enjoyed it so much if you'd known they were there?" she asked.

"I don't think I could have enjoyed myself much at all."

"Well, then," said Issak with a little shrug, "it's a very good thing I blindfolded you. We're teachers, Temmin, we have a responsibility to all three of you, and this was a perfect opportunity to show Anda and Bessa one way of evaluating a new lover." Issak was running a hand lazily up and down Temmin's back as he spoke, and he leaned his head against the taller man's shoulder. Temmin brought his arm around Issak without thinking, and stroked the soft, thick, black hair.

"You're very pretty together, and I'm feeling left out," said Allis with a little pout. Issak patted Temmin's thigh, making him jump slightly; Allis settled herself in Temmin's lap, twined an arm around his neck, and kissed him deeply, pressing against his renewed hardness.

"Why," he said as Allis trailed kisses along his jaw and neck, "am I the only one without clothes?"

"Because we like you that way," murmured Issak, turning Temmin's head toward him with his free hand. Issak kissed him, opening his mouth and biting at his lips, and Temmin pulled him closer. It was harder and harder to stay sitting up, and he found himself once more lying on the wide, low couch. "Enjoy this now," said Issak between kisses. "There will be few times here when all the attention is focused on you, and this is one of them." When Temmin turned his head to the right, there was Allis, waiting for a kiss; when he turned to the left, there was Issak. He moaned aloud, a series of soft, near-whimpers, as they ran their fingers over his chest and belly, grazing his nipples. Issak sat up and reached for a bottle on the table, then poured that cool, slick liquid onto Temmin again. "You will show us now," he said, "what you like."

"I'm sorry?" said Temmin, muzzy and blinking from all the kisses.

"Bring yourself," whispered Allis.

"You're not going to...?" he trailed off hopefully.

"We need to watch. We need to know what you like," said Issak, nibbling his earlobe.

"But I thought we were going to...?"

"Going to what?" breathed Issak into his ear.

"Speak plainly, Temmin," warned Allis, pinching his nipple.

"I thought I'd lose my virginity today," he finally choked out, taking himself in hand.

"Oh, no," said Allis. "Not today. Are you not enjoying yourself?"

"Oh--yes--" he grated as he began to move. "Just--not quite--what I expected."

"Where's the fun in the expected?" laughed Allis gently, licking at the nipple. Temmin took in a sharp breath.

"That's right," murmured Issak. "Show us. You're so very beautiful like this, Temmin."

The twins sat up and watched as he stroked himself, quick strokes and slow strokes, the quick ones soon overtaking the slow ones until he was pumping himself hard, his breath ragged and audible, his eyes squeezed shut. Neither of them touched him.

"Open your eyes and look at me," Allis said. "Open them!" He opened his eyes and helplessly stared into hers, panting and frantic. "Keep them there. Don't look away."

"Oh--oh--" His free hand fisted in the cushions until Issak took it in his own. It was so hard to keep his eyes open!

"Eyes on mine. Let it happen." At her words, he came, arching up with a long cry, then falling back. She seemed to suck his orgasm straight out of him through his eyes. Strange how you can keep your eyes open and not see a thing, he thought dimly as the last pulses of sperm jerked from him. He felt a towel wiping him clean; Allis kissed him langorously and then Issak did the same.

"That was lovely, Temmin," whispered Allis. He felt completely spent, unable to move a finger. His eyes closed, and he drifted off to sleep.

When Temmin awoke, it was to the almost inaudible sound of the handsome attendant moving around the room, still in only a scarf and a smile. Someone had covered Temmin with a blanket as he'd slept, and he clutched it to his lap as he put his feet on the floor, ruffling his blond hair with his free hand and yawning. "Where's Allis?" he asked the man, who was trimming candles and poking at the little fires.

The attendant smiled. "It's quite late in the afternoon, Temmin Supplicant. I'm sure you're very hungry." And he was--starving, in fact. The attendant gestured to the low table, where either a light lunch or a substantial tea waited for him. Temmin nodded and gratefully poured himself a cup of tea, gulping most of it down in one, heedless of how hot it was.

"Thank you," he said between bites of cheese and bread, "but where is Allis? Where's Issak?"

"They had other obligations. You are done for today," the man answered gently. He, or someone, had gathered up Temmin's clothes and cared for them almost as well as Jenks would have; they hung neatly on a little rack near the couch.

Temmin chewed thoughtfully. "They're really going to draw this out, aren't they."

The attendant smiled. "Your carriage is waiting for you whenever you're ready." He turned to go.

"Hold on, let me ask you something. Please," said Temmin. The attendant raised a brow and waited. "Were you a Supplicant?"

"Me?! Neya, no," smiled the attendant. "My family had neither the rank nor the money for such a thing. I began here when I was a child as a servant, and I'm still a servant, though now I'm a servant in training to become a priest of the Lover."

"What's your name?"

"My name?" said the attendant, surprised. "I'm called Senik."

"Thank you, Senik."

Senik gave him a slow smile. "You're welcome, Temmin Supplicant." He bowed and backed out of the room, closing the door.

Temmin felt more awake once he'd stowed away most of a loaf of bread, a couple of apples, some really quite excellent sharp cheese, and a few thin, salty slices of ham, the whole washed down with a very creditable pot of tea. He'd have a proper meal at dinner in a couple of hours--he hoped. He had no idea what time it was. He pulled on his clothes. He wasn't as tidy and perfect as he had been when he arrived, but he thought he wouldn't upset Jenks too much. He patted his pockets for his comb and found it missing. Glancing around the room, he saw a little sink in the corner, and by it, a vanity. He walked over, found a comb atop it, and began straightening up his messy thatch of hair, realizing only after he'd finished that he was looking straight into a large mirror with a good view of the room.

Teacher'd better not have, thought Temmin, momentarily horrified, or he'd...

Well. What could he do to someone like Teacher? He didn't know, but he'd think of something.

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

Creative Commons LicenseAn Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

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Kat's picture

^_^ Thank you for updating!!

^_^

Thank you for updating!!

faile486's picture
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Yay

Very, very good. I really wish my husband read more, because I would love to share this with him!

(PS it seems to be off by about an hour? Unless, as I said earlier, it's not pacific standard).

MeiLin's picture
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when did it go live?

Did it go live at 1 am? If so, then I know what to do with the dratted scheduler. Thanks!

Kat's picture

I got it at midnight, in LA,

I got it at midnight, in LA, so I think you're fine?

MeiLin's picture
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Pacific DAYLIGHT time

So -7 GMT, not -8 GMT. Thanks, Kat, that helps. It means the scheduler is working exactly as it should.

faile486's picture
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How did you get it at

How did you get it at midnight in LA and I got it at 1 am in LA = ( I r confused

MeiLin's picture
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I don't know

I even stayed up tonight to see if it'd go live automagically at 12 am and it did...I wish I knew what to tell you!

TheGrayCrayon's picture
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Got it tonight at 3 AM in

Got it tonight at 3 AM in Virginia so now i know when to check and i'm pretty sure that works out to midnight in LA.

- Outside of a dog, a book is mans best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read. ~Groucho Marx
- Ying/Yang is harmony. Ying/Ying is.....a name for a panda. ~Castle

Slagar's picture

What I wouldn't give

To think that there was someplace in this world that teaches people these kind of things. It's a shame that the only way around to learn how to be a lover is through trial and error, with all the negative connotations possible attached to those two words. Always feeling like you're on trial, or in error, when you're with somebody new. I think that this idea, of a school (or temple, if you must) for lovers is quite possibly your greatest idea so far (although I still like Teacher's character best). In any case, I really like the social and cultural connotations of such a place (not to mention that you wrote this scene perfectly; I was having trouble keeping my hands up, so I sympathize with Temmin), and I'll be following this arc with a great deal of interest.

Kit's picture

Read The Kushiel's Legacy

Read The Kushiel's Legacy series by Jaquline Carey. It's a bit more s&m, but it's got the whole temple for lovers thing. and the writing is excellent.

NekoMegi's picture
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I absolutely love that

I absolutely love that series. *hums happily* I want to tell everyone to read it, but I know too many people who would find the, um, nature of Phedra too weird and to some people horrifying.

And to MeiLin - excellent story thusfar, and damn you and the Obbys for dragging things out.

Fayth's picture

Kushiel series

People that find Phedra's nature too weird/horrifying really shouldn't be reading hardcore erotica anyway, I think. After all, while she is the most extreme example, she's hardly the only one.

Interesting to compare the Kushiel series to this one....

Scorpiocrone's picture

Whoa is it hot in here?

Where is the fan! Its it me or is it hot in this chapter!
Bravo Madam!

Reading , absorbing, pondering.

Sharon's picture

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm....

I like that you are drawing this out. Baby steps... This is a good tease for Temmin and he will learn ALOT about pleasing a woman this way. All virgins should go through these steps. Unahamedly.

MeiLin's picture
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is this

THE Sharon? Eye-wink Thank you.

SongCoyote's picture

I have only two words to

I have only two words to say:

If only.

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

Vered's picture

Reply to Slagar

Even though such a place would be quite interesting indeed, I also think that there is something incredibly special about exploring your sexuality with someone you love deeply. And, if both of you are first timers... well, then you're both equally nervous, but also equally eager to please. It's such an amazing and unique experience of shared emotion.

Slagar's picture

Perhaps

I've had several lovers, over the last few years, and I have been "in love" with some of them. The simple fact is, when you're new at it, the whole experience is a little unnerving. I was "in love" with my first partner, and I'm sure that made it a much more enjoyable experience, over all. I do not believe that you ever enjoy being inexperienced and nervous more than being confident in your abilities as a lover, and secure in the knowledge that you have at least some handle on what's going on (no pun intended). The woman I'm with now is a perfect match, and odds are good I'll probably end up marrying her (we've been together for some time now). My first time with her was much less nerve-wracking than my first time, simply because I'd learned my way around, so to speak (through trial and error, more's the pity). I think that being spared the nervousness and awkardness that most people have to go through would be a good thing. Perhaps you would miss out on discovering your sexuality with someone special, but I'm more inclined to believe that all most of us would miss out on is a lot of heartache and disappointment.

TheGrayCrayon's picture
Devotee

Erhm..my pants seem to have gotten quite tight...

Also excelent writing. Now if you'll excuse me i need to go compose myself. As always you keep writing it, i'll keep reading it.

- Outside of a dog, a book is mans best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read. ~Groucho Marx
- Ying/Yang is harmony. Ying/Ying is.....a name for a panda. ~Castle

La Voyeur's picture

ye gahs... the last two lines

ye gahs... the last two lines of this chapter just terrified me, and deprived me of some appetite. Nothing takes the jollies out of me quite like the thought of a nasty, horny old man watching in on the fun.

MeiLin's picture
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Teacher

would take great exception to that description. Smiling


pyrephoenix's picture

As much as..

you've set Teacher up to the various characters as being 'old and creepy', I confess a distinct liking. Not sure, though, whether that's my own imp of the perverse coming into play or just how you've written him; i.e., some characters are written to be hated, some to be liked, and some that let the reader decide for themselves. Can't quite decide which you're aiming for, though given my reaction to him I rather hope he's likeable.

(said imp is probably why I like the overall piece, however. Him or a close cousin, anyway ;p )

MeiLin's picture
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Teacher must remain

enigmatic for now, I fear. If you stay with this till the bitter end, I'll be very interested what you think.

pyrephoenix's picture

I'll stay..

but I really hope the end isn't bitter! (except in that it's the end, at any rate.)

MeiLin's picture
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Some bitterness in it is unavoidable

But I'm not sure if it's bitter like good chocolate or bitter like medicine. Time will tell, though I'm betting on the former.

Bov's picture

Great Story and woven history

Sigh, the multi-sexual/homosexual streak that is so prevalent in web comics and stories is starting to get old...

But aside from that, the writing and back story are very good. Great character development. You really pull the reader in to your characters. The back story and historical flashbacks give it such a rich third dimension.

Overall very engaging.

Kudos and Cheers,

Bov

MeiLin's picture
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Then human history must be very trying for you

...considering it's filled with both. Eye-wink It says more about where the younger generations are with their sexuality than anything. One could make an argument for it being trendy, but in my own case at least it comes from real life experience. That may say more about the circles I run in, but I doubt it. Secrets and secrets lurk in even the most staid cul-de-sacs. Perhaps especially there.

Thank you, I'm glad you like it despite its tiresome streak. Eye-wink Your compliments are very well taken. I hope you keep reading!

Chad-Writtenfire's picture

Hilarious ending. ;) Temmin

Hilarious ending. Eye-wink Temmin vs. Teacher, showdown at Eleven. Over a little thing like voyeurism...who would have thought!

Really, I think Temmin overreacts to it. Teacher seems almost inhuman.

JJ's picture

in sight of his reflection. - the mechanics of mirrors

Puzzled
Do mirrors give the full viewpoint of someone standing where the mirror is, or do they only show those who are in sight of thei reflection, that is standing directly in front of a flat mirror.

Hmm, mirrors on the ceiling! Evil

Donna's picture

My first time was me watching

My first time was me watching Family Ties and him having sex. I was bored, to say the least. I could easily live without it and it wouldn't make any difference on how the rest of my sex life has shaped up, but that's just me.

I think Temmin is just paranoid. He knows that the Teacher could spy on him but probably won't since I'd like to think he's a man of his convictions and will stick to his work. Good job on the sex, though! Very interesting! Can I join the temple? Although that'd require a waxing. I'd better make my appointment, then, huh?

Jay's picture

Don't ruin it!

A waxing? As in removing hair? Noooooooo!

I hadn't even thought of that. Trying to purge the thought of hairlessness in the temple... I had just assumed they'd have all the normal body hair. (No offense intended Donna... your comment just struck me *so* by surprise.)

I'm absolutely loving this story, it's the way books should be! Lots of sex, lots of plot, and amazing characters. Thank you MeiLin. I've recommended this story to some friends who I think aren't too prude-ish to enjoy it, and plan to continue recommending it as I think of who else might like it.

MeiLin's picture
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no waxing

In fact, shaving below the neck is considered barbaric, exotic and a little perverse. The women of Inchar traditionally remove all body hair; it is frequently mentioned in pornography involving hot-blooded Inchari girls, though the average Tremontine would consider it quite scandalous and slutty for a Tremontine woman to do it. Beloveds don't shave, for instance; some prostitutes do.

Jay's picture

awesome!

That makes it so hot! It's like you somehow took it in to your mind to write basically my ideal hot fiction. Thank you for reading my mind!

blwinteler's picture
Supplicant

Still late, but had to put in my experience

I have also had many lovers, many of whom I did love. My first is now my husband. My best, however, I'd have to say was when I was barely 18. He decided to be a teacher to me. It lasted hours. I learned a lot and it was amazing! I never knew more than his first name. *sigh* If only more people could have that experience. It is truly a wonderful thing.
And Meilin, I think we probably hang around more of the same types of people than just the spinners!

G.S. Williams's picture

Odd observation

So far, Temmin's father's kingdom seems to be autocratic, even dictatorial. There certainly seems to be an element of censorship when there's dissent -- such environments rarely co-exist with sexually promiscuous cultures, historically. Greece was more culturally tolerant, but they're the birthplace of democracy.

I guess I'm saying that the Lovers Temple seems to be out of place in Temmin's culture, unless it's kept very separate from the masses, which we wouldn't know from Temmin's perspective.

MeiLin's picture
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it's not a sexually promiscuous culture

Keep reading. There are definite rules, especially for women.

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