Chapter 20 | The Tale of Two Kingdoms
On Loyalty
As he ate a hasty lunch, Temmin sent Jenks round to his sisters' rooms with a message to please meet him in his study as soon as possible. He was just finishing his pudding when Sedra walked in, Ellika on her heels. He wiped his mouth. "I'm sorry to interrupt your afternoons--"
"Oh, stop, Temmin, we're your sisters and we all live on the same floor, not miles away. What's a-do?" said Sedra.
"Is it about Allis?" said Ellika eagerly. "Are you going to the Temple on Nerrday?"
"Oh, you will absolutely be the last to know about that, I assure you," said Temmin, blushing. Ellika tossed her head and snorted. "No, it's about Mama."
"Mama?" said Sedra, alarmed. "What's wrong? Is she all right?"
"Has Papa been naughty again?" cried Ellika.
"I have no idea about Papa and what you mean by 'naughty,' but Mama's quite upset," said Temmin. "Papa and the Teacher have decided to replace Sister Ibbit, and Mama is heartbroken."
Sedra let out a long breath and settled back onto the couch cushions. "Oh, no. I was afraid this would happen some day."
"Oh, who cares about that Ibbit, anyway?" said Ellika. "Good riddance, I say. She was always looking at me funny, as if she was weighing me on a scale."
"You know, don't you," said Temmin to his eldest sister. "You know about Mama and Ibbit." Sedra nodded slowly and sadly.
"Know what?" said Ellika, looking from one to the other with wide brown eyes. "Come, tell me! I know everything that goes on in this family! I hate not knowing things!"
"Mama and Ibbit--ehm--" began Temmin.
"Mama and Ibbit are lovers, Elly," finished Sedra.
Ellika's eyebrows flew toward her hairline. "What! Oh, no, no, no! I would have noticed something like that!"
Temmin shook his head. "It's true, Elly, she told me to my face. She came in this morning shouting at the Teacher, and if she'd had a knife she'd've tried to kill him, I swear."
Ellika stared at him, then at her sister. "And you knew all along, Seddy, and didn't tell me!"
Sedra shrugged. "You pride yourself on knowing everything that's going on, why would I insult your intelligence?"
Ellika ignored the jab and said instead, "How did you find out?"
"Ibbit loaned me a book, and in the back of it I found a love letter to her from Mama. I think she wanted me to know."
The three siblings sat staring at each other for a moment. "Ibbit's coming to the capital from Whithorse," Temmin finally said. "She and Mama will be allowed to meet, but only at the Sister's Temple. The Eldest Sister and the Embodiment of Venna are becoming Mama's new spiritual advisors, she's not allowed to discuss religion with Ibbit at all."
Sedra shook her head. "Mm. I don't like that. I don't think Mama should be around her at all. Ibbit tried very hard to get me to commit to the Sister's Temple for my spiritual home, but hearth and home are not for me. I chose Eddin for that very reason, and truth be told, much of what Ibbit goes on about is what Eddin stands for. The life of the mind. She declared for the wrong God, that Ibbit, and she's trying to singlehandedly turn Venna into Eddin just because she couldn't stand the idea of committing to a God. I don't care if They're consorts, They're not the same, at all."
"I wouldn't know a thing about that," said Ellika. "I declared for the Lovers because they're much more fun! Wouldn't you say so, Temmin? I hear your ride with Allis went very well!"
"Neither of you seem very concerned that our mother--who is married to our father, I might add--is having an affair with her spiritual advisor! Her female spiritual advisor!" said Temmin, his voice rising.
Sedra waved a hand. "Oh, do grow up, Temmy. Here you are, about to commit to at least two years in the beds of a girl and her twin brother, and you're shocked that our mother is a lover of women?"
"Honestly, Temmy," said Ellika, rolling her eyes. "I know you played around in the stables with boys, and Neya knows I've kissed my share of girls! Where you get your ideas, I don't know. These modern fads don't suit you."
Temmin goggled at them both. "This doesn't upset either of you?!"
"Well, of course it does!" said Ellika. "If Mama is to have a lover, and I'm certainly all for that, I'd rather she be someone more amiable than that prune Ibbit!"
"Papa and Mama were an arranged marriage, Temmin," said Sedra more gently. "Mama has never cared for the love of men that much. I hear she had one male sweetheart before she married Papa, but that nothing could come of it--he was a commoner." She frowned. "I'm not surprised she followed her natural inclination. I am more upset that Ibbit is trying to manipulate her. I saw this coming some time ago, and didn't know what to say or do that wouldn't end up hurting Mama."
"Well!" said Ellika, with a little flounce. "This explains Mama's terrible mood the last year. I thought it was Papa and all his mistresses, or that she missed Whithorse terribly, but I didn't know who exactly at Whithorse she was missing! I'll have to be on the lookout for a suitable replacement."
Papa? Mistresses? Elly matchmaking for their own mother? Temmin rubbed his eyes and sighed, just as the Teacher returned to the room. And now my afternoon is complete, he thought.
"It is time to resume our studies, your highness," said the Teacher.
"Oh, don't mind us, we were on our way out the door," said Sedra frostily; the Teacher winced. Sedra pulled Ellika up off the sofa just as she was preparing her most charming smile for the Teacher, and hustled her out the door, squeaking in protest.
"What was all that about?" said the Teacher as the door swung shut, narrowly missing the hem of Ellika's rose silk.
"Family meeting," said Temmin absently, moving to sit at the library table. "What are we doing this afternoon?"
"Studying the effects of loyalty, especially that which is unearned or unwilling." The Teacher pushed the book at him.
"Twice in one day?" sighed Temmin. But he was curious what happened next, and so he opened the red-covered book.
"Goodness, child!" came the voice of an older woman. "You'd as like to've scared me to death!" A pair of plump hands parted the bed curtains, fastening them back against the bed posts; light poured in from the windows.
"Who is it?" asked Emmae, squinting.
"Just old Meg, dear. I'm to take care of you. So says Master Gill." As Emmae's eyes adjusted, she saw the speaker was a fat little woman almost old enough to be her grandmother, with a broad, pleasant face framed in gray braids. She held a pitcher of water. "Up with you, now, let's have a look at you."
Emmae stood uncertainly, pulling her hair about her. "Oh, now, nothing I haven't seen before, sweetheart," said Meg, "We're all women here. I've a chemise for you, once you've cleaned up. See? Nice warm water I've brought you. Come have a wash," she coaxed.
Emmae took the sponge from her, and Meg smiled. "You are a pretty little thing." She busied herself airing out the bed. "No wonder the prince took to you. You're a lucky girl, Master Gill tells me they rescued you from some horrid shack in the middle of nowhere."
"Rescued me? They took me from my home!" Emmae replied angrily. "They took me from my man! I don't want to be here!"
"Now, now, dear," said Meg, taken aback, "no need to holler. I'm sure I don't know the half of it. You get yourself cleaned and dressed--see, a nice, new chemise right here on the bed. I'll go and fetch your breakfast and you can tell old Meg all about it when I come back." She turned to the wall and touched the magical lock. The door appeared and swung open.
"Wait!" cried Emmae. "Please--please let me out, Meg. I implore you. Please let me go home!"
"Oh, child," said Meg sadly. "I wouldn't betray Prince Hildin for the world. I was his nursemaid when his mother died. He was the last baby I took to breast and he'll always be my darling. No, my Hildin wants you here, and even were I to disobey him, you can't cross this threshhold anyway." She disappeared through the door, leaving Emmae to sponge the tears from her face and ponder her new caretaker.
When the door opened again, Emmae was washed and dressed. "Will I be given my own clothes back? Or at least some kind of a skirt and bodice? I can't run around in a chemise."
"I'm sorry, dear, but I was told this is all you'll be needing," said Meg demurely. "Master Gill hadn't intended to give you even this, but I insisted. Now. Here is your breakfast--honest bread and butter, a little nibble of fish, and a good sweet wine. Then I'll brush your hair out for you and you can tell me your story, eh?"
In spite of herself, Emmae was starving, and tore into the food. "Talk to me while I eat, please, Meg," she said. "Tell me why Prince Hildin hates his brother so."
"Oh, Prince Warin. Poor dear, it's not his fault my Hildin hates him so." Meg sighed. "No, it's their father. King Gethin. He took it badly when Queen Sella died, and blamed Hildin. She died bringing him into the world, you see, and the king--it was a love match, miss, if you can imagine! He mourned and mourned. His majesty never forgave my poor babe. Couldn't stand the sight of him. Sent Hildin away with me to the court of his cousin, the Duke of Whithorse. He grew up there, away from his father and older brother. I was all he had, excepting Master Gill, but then, Gill wasn't much of a playmate--the Duchess didn't give birth to him until Hildin had lost his first tooth, he was a bit of a surprise, Gill was. All their other children were nearly grown. But as soon as he could walk, Master Gill would toddle after the prince with all his might. I can still see him on his fat little legs..." Meg looked off into the past, chuckling.
Emmae finished eating and wiped her mouth. "If Prince Warin was the favorite, and the heir, why was he sent away?"
"Goodness, girl, where did you grow up?" Meg tutted, untying Emmae's long braid. I wish I knew, thought Emmae. "Everyone knows the prophecy."
"I don't," said Emmae, wincing as Meg worked on a tangle.
"When Prince Warin was born, the Traveler Queen was invited to the naming, for good luck, as she always is. Anything but luck, that one was! She foretold that the baby prince would never take the throne, or a wife, unless his father's lifeblood was shed. Well! If Queen Sella had lived, Hildin would very probably have been made the heir just on the strength of that prophecy alone, and Warin would have been sent away!
"But that's not what happened," said Meg, shaking her head as she dragged the brush through Emmae's thick hair. "My sweet boy was sent away instead. King Gethin brought us back to court once Hildin's voice dropped, but the boys never did get along. Hildin hated Warin for being his father's favorite, and since they'd spent so much of their lives apart, there was no brotherly feeling between them. Miss, I tell you, it made me so sad. It still does. Two brothers, with no love between them at all. Not long after Prince Warin reached his majority, he renounced his claim and left--took off in the middle of the night, he did, with only what he could carry. He swore he'd never return for fear he'd somehow kill his father."
Emmae thought soberly. "Was Warin ever a soldier?"
"Well of course, miss, he led our troops against the Northern Incursions the year before he left! I wonder where you've been. I'll say this for him, he's not my Hildin, but he was a brave commander. Never asked his men to do anything he wouldn't do. Always in the thick of it, he was." Meg began twisting Emmae's hair into a simple bun at her nape. "But here I've done all the talking and I wanted to hear how you ended up here, sweetheart. You're a lucky girl, catching my prince's eye. You're pretty enough and young enough that you may keep it longer than the last few, if you're cunning."
"I never wanted the prince's attention. I was happy at home."
"And where is home, dear? You sound as if you're from Leutefloss," said Meg. She fastened up Emmae's hair.
"My home is wherever my woodsman is."
"And who knows where that is," said Hildin, entering the room. "Meg, you may go." Meg gave him a love-filled smile, curtsied and left the room. "He's not coming for you, Emmae. You're just a bit of skirt to him."
"I refuse to believe that," she said, turning away to the windows. But inside, she was troubled. If Warin was a prince--and it appeared he really was--then why would he care to come chasing after a girl he found in such circumstances as hers? She felt the first tendrils of despair begin to curl around her heart, in concert with Hildin's fingers on her bare shoulders.
But Warin was coming for her.
He and the younger Traveler men rode hard that day toward the Keep, leaving the caravans behind with the women and children-all but the Traveler Queen. "I was there at the beginning, I'll be there at the end," was all she'd said when Warin had questioned her choice to come along. She galloped along with the men, betraying the great age she seemed to bear. Indeed, there were times when Warin would look at her and see that much younger woman again, but the glimpse was fleeting.
That night before he settled down to sleep, he took out the mirrored box and looked for Emmae once more. His heart leaped as a room took shape in the mirror. In the center of the room, as naked as the day he'd found her, stood Emmae, her skin golden in the candlelight. Tears stained her pink cheeks, and she looked breathless.
A figure joined her, a man barely out of boyhood, slender and fair. He was naked as she was, his arousal hard against his belly. "Gill," Warin growled to himself. "Cousin, your life is mine." Warin watched as Gill took Emmae's face in his hands and kissed her deeply. With the same hesitation Warin knew from their first days together, Emmae pressed herself against the boy, letting her head fall back as he moved his mouth down her body. He took a handful of her shining brown hair and used it to bend her back over his arm. Gill took a nipple into his mouth, and Warin saw Emmae cry out and pull Gill closer.
Suddenly, his brother stepped before the mirror, blocking Emmae from his sight. Hildin winked, blew the mirror a kiss and reached out. The image in the mirror vanished, and Warin saw only his own face staring back at him, twisted in anguish.
Temmin came to in the late twilight. "You said something about unearned and unwilling loyalty. What exactly are we talking about?"
The Teacher smiled faintly. "We've worked through tea. It's time for you to get ready for dinner. I shall see you in the morning." And with that, the Teacher left the study. Temmin realized he was starving, and hurried into his bedchamber to get ready.
Queen Ansella didn't come to dinner that night. The King said something about a headache. Temmin was about to ask more about it, but Sedra gave him a look, and he lapsed into silence. After dinner, he knocked at his mother's door, but Lady Donnis said she was not receiving company, not even her children.
"Donnis, is she all right? Papa said she had a headache, but I don't believe that."
Lady Donnis smiled sadly. "More like--well, more like a heartache, your highness."
Temmin took the lady-in-waiting by the hand for a moment. "Please, would you tell her that I love her?" Donnis nodded and shut the door. Temmin went to his room and spent a long time contemplating the fire in his study before finally going to bed.
The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.
Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!
An Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.
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Hmm, if Warin had been
Hmm, if Warin had been quicker, he could have stepped through the mirror and helped her yes?
Unless
Unless stepping through the mirror meant fighting his brother and Gill at once, on thier turf, and possibly with a good bit of energy expended in the process of travelling. I don't think the tactical situation would be in his favor if he stepped through the mirror alone right then.
But if you think about it..
Well, it would appear that Gil at least would not have been prepared for a real fight, being caught with his pants down quite literally, and if his brother was equally so, Warin might have had a great advantage, at least for the first several moments. The only thing Gil might have done is use the girl as a shield.
there wasn't time
It sounds like a longer moment than it was. And Warin was taken by surprise; he really didn't expect to see anything. First rule around the Keep is all reflective surfaces covered in war, and Warin knew Hildin would be in war mode. He was hoping to catch a stray glimpse of Emmae, and happened to catch his brother in a sadistic mood.
I see. I didnt accept reason
I see. I didnt accept reason like "it was a trap" because that is a rational argument and there is no way he would be in a rational mindset. But your explanation does make sense, length of the account in words doesnt need to correspond directly to actual time passed.
I was also curious if you would get into the actual mechanics of travelling through mirrors. Perhaps travelling through would leave him vulnerable as emerged in a swirl, or it would leave him drained for a moment.
Bait
The only reason the mirror was there at all was that Hildin was trying to bait his brother. he had all mirrors removed, but brought one in to a scene like that. It was intentional, and Hildin didn't join in until after he blocked the mirror. hence the status as both trap and insult. He is trying to emotionaly destabalize his brother, making his bid for rulership that much stronger.
A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down.
You forget who is in charge
You forget, Warin renounced his claim to the throne. He's nothing. Hildin is prince and heir to the throne. Warin would have gotten nothing more than a lifetime of dungeon solitude, if Hildin didn't have the palace guards skewer him first. I'm wondering if and when Warin is going to realize he's walking into a trap. Surely he realized the mirror was deliberate. But with the powerful alliance of the Travelers, this has the makings of one fantabulous battle.
Claims
Ahh, but legality always sides with the winner.
Meilin, yer teasin' us again with the loyalty bit!
And it's fun.
Love this stuff
I can't wait for your updates. I love the way this story is unfolding. I am as addicted to Two Kingdoms as I am to ToMU. Bravo!
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