Chapter 16 | The Tale of Two Kingdoms

Hung Over

The next morning, as the Teacher had predicted, Temmin woke late with a pounding headache, a dry, swollen tongue, and an unbearably queasy stomach. Every time he opened his eyes they refused to track, and the room turned slowly round and round until he closed them again. Jenks forced him to sit up and drink two large glasses of water, then laid him down tenderly again. "The first hangover's the hardest, your highness. Just remember this feeling if you ever get the urge to drink too much again."

"Oh, do shut up, Jenks, before I'm forced to hit you," groaned Temmin. "Or throw up on your shoes." Jenks merely chuckled and closed the bed curtains again.

Temmin closed his eyes and tried to sleep, and before he knew it, three hours had passed. He sat up. The bed was no longer turning slowly counter-clockwise, his tongue once more fit in his mouth, and the queasiness had transformed back into his usual ravenousness. "Jenks!" he called, and the man's head poked through the bed curtains in an instant. "Oh, hullo! Is there any chance of something like breakfast this late in the day? How late is it, anyway?"

"It is just past noon, your highness, and yes, I shall bring up a tray with a breakfast-like meal upon it. Would you prefer it invalid-style in bed, or are you feeling well enough to take it in your study?"

Past noon! He threw the covers back. "I'll take it in my study." Jenks disappeared to the kitchens, and when he returned with a tray, Temmin was sitting at the little table before the window, wrapped in his dressing gown and looking out at the midday in still-dopey astonishment. "How does Elly do it, Jenks?"

"Do what, young sir?"

"Stay up all hours and sleep half the day away. You'd never get a thing done!"

"The princess is not known for her industriousness, your highness."

"No," said Temmin, cracking the shell of his egg, "I suppose she isn't."

"And what are you known for, your highness?" came the dry, cool voice of the Teacher from the doorway.

"After last night, I hesitate to think," grimaced Temmin.

"Did you embarrass yourself? --Ah, no thank you," added the Teacher to Jenks, declining a cup of coffee from the tray.

"No, at least I don't think so. Everyone just seems so pathetically grateful about me and Allis!"

"'Allis and me,' your highness. And you're forgetting Issak."

"However one says it, it's embarrassing," grumbled Temmin. "It's worse than everyone knowing my business. They've actually all managed to become part of my business. Are we to be like some barbarian Southern realm, conducting public fertility rituals?"

Jenks took in a shocked breath, and left in high dudgeon to do whatever it was he did when the Teacher was around.

"Yes, actually," said the Teacher mildly. "There's nothing barbaric about fertility rituals, they're the backbone of our religious practice. And nothing you'll be doing will be conducted in public."

"Well, thank the Beloved for that, at least," Temmin said through a mouthful of toast and egg.

"I do wonder where you get your ideas about religion," said the Teacher.

Temmin shrugged and slurped his coffee. "Mama is devoted to Venna the Sister, you know. Rather inimicable to fertility rites and all that."

"That is a recent interpretation. Your mother is a good and devout lady. I hate to see her led down improvident paths. I shall speak with the king about finding her a new religious advisor. I take it you have made your decision in favor of the Lovers? Well done, your highness."

"I danced a great deal with Allis last night and she's coming riding with me tomorrow, but apart from that nothing official," said Temmin as he sawed at a sausage.

"A private conversation is just the thing. You may ask Allis whatever you'd like, and I strongly suggest you do just that. She is an open and candid young woman, and you should not feel embarassed or hesitant about asking her anything when you are together tomorrow. I assure you, she will be neither embarrassed nor hesitant about asking you questions. Now, do hurry up. You have things to do before tomorrow and I would like to get a little bit of work done of our own."

Temmin buttered his last piece of toast, slathered it with marmalade and nearly swallowed it whole. He brushed the crumbs from his moustaches, brushed down his dressing gown, and went to the library table. "What is it to be today? More tea and porcelain?"

The Teacher shrugged. "We could continue talking of trade but somehow I feel your attention will not be complete. Shall we continue with the family history?"

Temmin sighed. "Well, perhaps it'll put me in the mood for tomorrow's questions. And here I thought I was going for a simple, pleasant ride with a pretty girl." He opened the red-bound book and quieted himself as the words and pictures flowed onto the page and into his mind.

Hildin turned back to his sleeping captive. "Girl, wake up!" He slipped the silver ring from her finger and pocketed it; her blue eyes flickered and opened wide. She sat up and began to scrabble for something to hide her nakedness, to no avail; there was nothing for her to cover herself with but her hands. She gave up and faced the two men with as much dignity as she could muster.

"And what do they call you at home, sweetness?" said Hildin solicitously.

"Home?" she repeated in confusion. "I live with Warin. He named me Emmae. I have no other name, nor any other home. Please, where am I? He will be missing me. Take me back!"

"This is your home now, dear. I shall keep you safe until Warin comes for you. If he comes for you."

"If? I am his woman!" she cried. "Why would you keep me from him? Take me home, or I'll find my own way, naked as I am!" She slipped off the other side of the bed away from him and began feeling the walls for a door.

Hildin smiled and shrugged. "No door, at least not for you. Remember? I am a magician." He rose from the bed and advanced on her. "But by all means, please try to run. It makes the catching so much more gratifying. And I will catch you," he added with a grin. "It's a small room. And I doubt you'll want to run for long."

He focused on her with a cold heat that brought her up short. "You are not safe outside this room, you know. You are most definitely enchanted, and your enchantment requires your body to respond to me--to anyone. Doesn't it? You can feel it working now. And do you know why that is, girl? It's because I want you."

Emmae whimpered. Her soft pink nipples darkened and pulled tight, and she heard the blond youth swear softly under his breath. She leaned back against the wall. Aching desire began to coil through her, awakening her skin.

Hildin came close enough that she could feel his breath on her face and the heat of his body. "How does it feel to know what he did to you?" he said softly. He traced his fingers up her arms to her neck, leaving goosebumps behind. "My brother. He very probably did this, you know."

"No," said Emmae, her voice shaking. "He would never do this." His touch left her dizzy with want, and she kept herself from leaning into the teasing fingers.

"Someone did. And at the least, he took advantage of it, didn't he? He knew, girl, depend on it. How long did he wait before he had you?" he said, drawing firmer patterns on her breasts and belly while she struggled to control her breathing. "He had you the very day he found you, didn't he? I thought so," he said at her deepening blush. "Did he take your maidenhead? I wonder. It's long gone now." With that, he seized her soft mound, parting the lips and dipping his fingers inside. She was soaking, and he laughed softly to find her so. "But don't worry, pretty Emmae. We'll take care of you. My page desires you, too. Don't you, boy?"

"Yes," came the tense reply from across the room. "Very, very much, your highness."

"You will bring us such pleasure now that you belong to us," Hildin growled into her hair. She moaned and clutched fruitlessly at the wall as Hildin's fingers moved inside her. Though he stretched her cruelly, her body wanted only to feel him even deeper inside her. Tears ran down her cheeks as the prince withdrew and half-dragged her back to the bed, where he threw her down.

Gill was waiting. He pounced on her, kissing her and fondling her breasts in desperate arousal until she writhed on the bed. His cock pushed against the curls between her legs.

"Give over, boy." Hildin pushed the groaning page to one side and positioned Emmae's hips in his lap, spreading her wide. He put his hands beneath her and held her up, fingers digging into her bottom as he pulled her close. Still on his knees, he entered her, hissing at the sensation. She cried out and arched her back, her breasts bouncing as Hildin pulled her hips to him over and over.

This was nothing she was used to. Warin had been firm but gentle, and as focused on pleasing her as himself. Though the spell had compelled her body's response, her heart had responded of its own accord. Here, there was no regard for her pleasure, nor for her heart. Hildin shifted his position and pushed her knees up as far as he could, burying himself in her so deeply she let out a gutteral cry.

His eyes were wild and cruel, and his face was pulled back in a fierce grimace. He frightened her, and yet her body had never wanted a man more. "My brother's woman," he growled. "My brother's woman is mine now." His arms encircled her, crushing her to him as he bit at her neck. "You are mine, Emmae. Say it! I want to hear you say it!"

"I--no--" she panted, dangerously close to her climax. "I am his! I am Warin's! Oh!"

"Is this Warin making you cry out? Is it Warin's cock inside you? Is it?"

"No!"

"Whose, then?"

"Yours!" she sobbed as her climax began. "Yours, prince!" She screamed as she dissolved and reformed around him, shaking uncontrollably in his arms. He pounded mercilessly into her, refusing to let her orgasm end, until finally she felt him throb deep inside her. He let out a loud roar and fell atop her, sweating and nearly swooning.

Hildin recovered enough to roll off her. Once he caught his breath, he examined her coolly. Emmae panted and trembled, eyes closed and tears running down the sides of her face. "Most useful enchantment, this. Wouldn't you agree, Gill?" A strangled noise issued from where Gill sat at the foot of the bed. Hildin looked up at him and chuckled; the young man was nearly purple with need, his eyes starting out of his head. "Do you want her?"

"Gods, yes, your highness!"

"Then have her."

Gill fell on her and entered her immediately, wasting no time with preliminaries. He took one nipple in his mouth and the other between his fingers and grunted with pleasure as he suckled. Emmae wailed in time with his thrusts, curving herself to bring him in deeper, until she came with him.

"I'm sorry," he said, kissing her tear-stained cheeks afterward. "You're just so beautiful and I wanted you so badly. Next time I'll be more thoughtful of your pleasure."

"Next time?" she whispered, and began to cry in earnest.

"You always were a romantic, cousin," said the prince. He stood, already dressed. "Arrange yourself. Find a suitable chambermaid--and only one--to care for our guest, and be sure it's a woman who won't find her as toothsome as we do."

"I know just the one, my lord," said Gill, fastening up his hose and donning his tunic. "Old Meg. I'll see to it immediately."

"I should have thought of her myself." The prince tapped a spot on the wall and an entrance appeared. "Don't bother looking for the door, my dear, you won't even be able to see it let alone open it. Thank you for a lovely evening. I do so look forward to getting to know you better." He smiled and left the room.

Emmae pulled herself up to the head of the bed, still crying. Gill shushed her gently, and sat down beside her.

"It's all right," he soothed, stroking her hot forehead. "Turn around." He took a brush from a nearby table, and began untangling her long brown hair. "Given time, you'll be his, just like me."

Emmae pulled a pillow into her lap, struggling to bring herself under control. She needed to know more of this place and these men, if she were ever to get back to Warin. She did her best to swallow her tears. "He called you 'cousin.'"

"Yes. We share a great-grandfather--Harsin the First. Sadly, my forebear was born on the wrong side of the sheets--to a serving woman, not the queen. But the king my great-grandfather took care of her and her children, and here we are. We are nobility, not royals, but we carry some of the blood. And," he added, "a tiny bit of the magic." He made a gesture, and the candle flame leaped from the wick to his fingertip, danced merrily for a moment, and then returned. "No more than party tricks, really. The further my line goes from the throne, the less we'll have."

"Are you enchanted, like--like me?" It was so hard to think of herself as enchanted, and yet it explained everything. "How long have you been...his page?"

"You mean his lover?" Gill laughed. "I have officially served my lord for four years, since I turned 14, but I've known and loved him all my life. He was my first lover, and the only one I shall ever truly love. I serve of my own free will, and I don't exaggerate when I say I would do anything my prince asked of me."

"And yet you choose to torture me when you have each other."

"He has me," said Gill quietly. "I don't have him." He put down the brush and began braiding her hair for the night. "My prince takes whoever it pleases him, male or female. I myself am a lover of women, and would lie in no other man's bed but his. He knows this, and does not force other men on me now, though I would still accept it for his sake. We often share a woman, but never one so beautiful as you." He placed a kiss on her shoulder and tied off her braid.

"You're being so gentle with me."

"There's no reason not to be. I would rather persuade a girl than force her. Winning you over is a challenge I've set myself, little love. Though, truth be told, I have every intention of enjoying you every chance I'm allowed."

She gritted her teeth, but kept her voice even. "Why does Hildin hate his brother so?"

"Ah! So many questions, Emmae!" He turned down the coverlet and gently tucked her in. "You will have many days for answers, but for now, we are done." He walked to the hidden door and thumbed the magical trigger. The door swung open to the dimly lit corridor beyond.

Gill gestured, and the candle flame leaped from the taper at her bedside to his fingertip again, but this time he crushed the flame out in his fist. "Rest. It's early, but you should sleep. You will need your strength." He stepped into the hall and closed the door behind him. Emmae broke down, sobbing, her self-control coming to an end. She cried herself to sleep, missing Warin's arms.

"D'you know," said Temmin shakily, "I always thought I'd like to have a brother. Now, I'm not so sure."

"Most brotherly relations aren't as antagonistic as Hildin's and Warin's was," replied the Teacher. "And sisters can be just as bellicose. That's all for today, your highness. The day is nearly done, and you will want to go over your plans for tomorrow with your man, I'm sure. We shan't meet tomorrow. I give you the day to spend with Miss Obby. I shall see you again on Farrday. "

After the Teacher left, Temmin realized he was still in his dressing gown and pajamas. He hadn't had a bath or even brushed his hair, and his breakfast tray still sat on the little table by the window. The sun was low in the sky. Paggday was nearly over, and he hadn't done a thing to prepare for his day tomorrow with Allis.

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Katie's picture

Yeep.

Temmin needn't worry about being prepared for Allis, except mentally. I'm sure Jenks will have taken care of everything.

The sex made me sad. Sad

MeiLin's picture

Good Old Jenks

We'll see tomorrow what he got up to. I'm sorry the sex made you sad. Some of us are wired to like that sort of thing, at least in fantasy.

Voyeur's picture

I think it's kind of sad that

I think it's kind of sad that you like this sort of thing, personally. The body's physical reaction to the sex (or a description of it) shouldn't cloud the emotional reaction to the rape, which would be disgust and horror in most people.

M's picture

The point is that it adds

The point is that it adds emotion to the story, draws you in. Makes you all the more happier when the bad guys get their due.

MeiLin's picture

Rape is bad

Let me be clear. It's bad. I've been forced to have sex, and it wasn't fun. My husband was raped when he was younger. It wasn't fun for him, either. I just want to be 100% totally clear on that. I don't want to be raped, and I don't believe anyone else does, either.

Having said that:

Some of us are wired to find choice taken away sexy, if it's in a safe way. Fantasy is safe. If Emmae were a real person, would I be turned on by what happens to her? Absolutely not. But she's not. This whole thing started with Emmae's predicament, a fantasy of mine for years that I finally started writing down.

I suppose I should consider it a testament to my writing that it upsets people, because the first version of this story definitely did not get that reaction from people, and I had a lot of people read that draft, not all of whom I would consider "differently wired" like me--in fact, few of them would describe themselves that way. All of them asked for more description, more characterization, and the thing just grew until there stood "Intimate History." (Temmin's story was not part of the original.)

Don't be sad for me.

D's picture

Ran across this

I was doping some research for my next tattoo and ran across this one. I thought it might be appreciated here.
http://www.checkoutmyink.com/tattoos/tattoos-by-dionne/49719

MeiLin's picture

!

I'm amazed!

M's picture

=-(

Poor Emmae. Warin better show up and kick some ass soon.

MeiLin's picture

Remember

Hildin goes down in history as the Usurper, and winners always write the history. Eye-wink

M's picture

yes but

That's no guarantee that Emmae's suffering was short. He better show up soon and make their deaths cruel and unusual as far as Im concerned.

MeiLin's picture

stay tuned

More I cannot say for fear of spoiling my own story. Smiling

Kaisar Ryu's picture

Bare minimum suffering...

From what Teacher said, we know that Heldin (? think I got that right) the Usurper was a king in the chronology of history. By this we can surmise that he will be coronated. The poor girl will most likely have to endure for at least that long. We don't yet know how long of a time there was between the coronation and the inevitable conquest, but there will be a good deal more of her ordeal before that step in her tale is concluded. We shall have to wait and see...

Sharon's picture

Emmae's enchantment

This story gets more and more interesting. I find rape disgusting, but the enchantment makes it into a conundrum. If you want it, is it rape? If your body is screaming for it, is it rape? If you are in love with someone else, but dripping with desire, is it rape? Here is hoping that Warin sees her in the gramma's silver and comes to her soon, before she falls for Gill. He has the potential to be a rescuing party- Stockholm syndrome and all that.

Maeruin's picture

Typo ?

"You will bring us such pleasure now that you belong to us," Hilden growled into her hair. She moaned and clutched fruitlessly at the wall as Hildin's fingers moved inside her.

Shouldn't be Hildin instead of Hilden ? Or I misunderstood something ?

MeiLin's picture

ooops

Thanks, that's from the very first draft; the spelling got altered. Wow, how did that sneak through, that's like five drafts ago.

TheBoy's picture

find and replace?

find and replace?

MeiLin's picture

did that

Who knows how it snuck by. Did it again, and it was the only one left in the whole manuscript.

TheBoy's picture

It was the only one.

You hope... Eye-wink Proving a negative is damn tough.

Still loving the story.

Aaroc's picture

Awesome.

after having seen the ad several times while reading Tales of MU, I finally decided to take a gander at your story here. I'm loving it and I read all of what you have written so far in one sitting.

Now it's off to bed for me so I don't get fired tomorrow.

MeiLin's picture

hoorah!

Thanks for visiting, and I hope you come back!

Lanir's picture

Hi! I'm new here and wanted

Hi! I'm new here and wanted to compliment you on your rich writing style. At first I wasn't really sure the story of a young prince starting to leave behind boyhood would grip me. Then I looked up and I was on chapter 6 already.

Emmae's enchantment is an interesting idea. The closest analogy I could think of (for use in fixing a moral compass onto it) was being drunk. The after effects are about similar but the during is a bit more complex with the enchantment since you can know what you're doing is bad for you as you're doing it.

MeiLin's picture

Welcome!

And thank you for the compliment. I often worry that my writing style is a bit too rococo, but then, I usually choose subject matter that lends itself to that sort of thing. I mean, I'm not writing gritty, edgy urban drama hyar. Smiling

SongCoyote's picture

To respond to a previous

To respond to a previous comment: in my opinion, when consent is compromised, whether through coercion, emotional blackmail, or other duress, sex can be considered rape. That Emmae wants it so badly from Hildin and Gill is strictly because of the enchantment under which she labors, and (as is clearly shown) not from her own desire. But she finds herself unable to withdraw consent from them. She was given time (after the first event, for which I think Warin might forgive himself as I hope the reader will as well) to know and appreciate Warin, and to ask for his presence of her own accord. Though certainly her decision was influenced by feeling his desire, based on the story I feel that she truly consented when she invited him to her bed at last.

More shortly: it's complicated, isn't it?

And with that babble complete I return to reading.

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

Donna's picture

Em never consented while in

Em never consented while in the castle and didn't consent to Warin the first time so even though her body wanted it, her mind didn't therefore it was rape. The body has natural instincts to stimulation that the mind can't control. If a woman orgasms during an actual rape, does it negate the rape? Absolutely not but it's a bodily response that was beyond the realm of the woman to control. That's the kind of thought process I see Emmae going through. The internal is actually quite realistic. Her body is overriding her mind and causing her great pain, regardless of what it's actually saying.

And I agree with Mei. I'm not disgusted by this type of sex scene. No one's really getting hurt, the characters aren't real so where's the harm (yeah, I know, there's a HUGE argument in there, promoting acceptance of rape, etc)? You'd be surprised by how many people are enormously turned on by rape fantasy. It's not about being raped. It's about being entirely submissive in a sexual situation and trust your partner enough to allow them to act out the fantasy with you.

All in all, muy excellente. Figured that my nightly reading stops here, right before the romp in the woods. Gah!

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