Vennaday dawned overcast and gray, a typical Tremont spring day that would be glorious and miserable by turns seemingly every five minutes. After yesterday's lounging about, Temmin found himself actually looking forward to seeing the Teacher now that his morning routine of a ride and breakfast were finished. Whatever the Teacher would throw at him, it would serve to take his mind off the impending evening and its decision. No one had said anything to him, but it seemed clear that if he didn't make some kind of move to pursue Allis tonight, that was it. He wouldn't have a second chance.
"Good morning, your highness," said the Teacher, interrupting his thoughts.
"Good morning, Teacher. Thank you for the books," said Temmin, moving almost eagerly to the library table.
"Ah, did you have any questions about what you read?"
"Well, I was wondering," Temmin began, then hesitated. "Could you tell me..."
"Yes?"
"I was wondering," Temmin said cautiously, "exactly how closely the Obbys emulate the Lovers' relationship."
The Teacher deflated. "I was hoping for a theological question, something that might lead to greater discussion. Nevertheless," the Teacher brightened, "we can start there. How closely do you think an Embodiment should follow the example of the God he represents?"
"What is traditional?"
The Teacher sat on the edge of the table. "In the early days, the Embodiments were only called upon to take up the Gods on their holy days, and led otherwise normal lives--marrying, working and so on. As our civilization has grown more sophisticated, that has changed, and now the Embodiments are expected to take the Gods' roles throughout the year. Now an Embodiment must personify his God not just on the specific holy day for that God but on all the holy days and any time the God might otherwise be called upon. Usually that means at least once a week--for Allis, on Neyaday, and for Issak, on Nerrday. But that's not what you're asking, is it."
Temmin shook his head mutely.
"No. You want to know if they have sex with each other for pleasure as well as for divine reasons. I can't answer that. You'll have to ask them."
"Oh, gods, I can't ask that! 'Miss Obby, would you do me the honor of coming riding with me this week, and by the way how often do you screw your brother?!'"
"I would hardly call it 'screwing,'" said the Teacher coolly. "If sex were that casual for them, with anyone, they wouldn't qualify as Embodiments of the Lovers. Besides, that's exactly the sort of thing you can ask Allis. You will find her an extremely forthcoming young woman. It comes with the job. Now, onward in our studies of the kingdom's trading partners, turning to the Nijan Empire."
The only thing Temmin knew about Nija was how to find it on a globe, that it was the only kingdom as big as Tremont--bigger, in terms of sheer land mass--and that the East Nija Company is where the royal family got its supplies of excellent tea. By the end of the morning, he was also intimate with the basic outlines of the silk, porcelain, spices, exotic woods and drug trades. "We shall resume after lunch," said the Teacher, leaving Temmin to the tray Jenks had already brought in ("Lamb chops and peas, oh lovely!" said Temmin).
"Have you made up your mind about Allis?" said the Teacher when they picked up again in the afternoon.
"I feel as if my hand is being forced," complained Temmin as he sat down.
"In this matter, it is entirely up to you. There is no force being exerted upon you whatsoever. There will very likely come a time when your hand will be forced in some situation, and then you shall know the difference. Your ancestors have faced such times over and over."
"Really, your subtlety is overwhelming, Teacher."
The Teacher shrugged and pushed the now-familiar red-bound book his way. "Subtlety is wasted on the young." Temmin opened its covers and settled back in his chair, and the Teacher resumed the story.
"I will be waiting, however late you are," said Emmae. She walked with him to the edge of the forest and watched him disappear down the path to town. Hugging herself close against the early chill, she walked back into the cottage, dried her cheeks on her apron, and took up her sewing on the hearth, already lonely.
Once the sun was fairly up, it turned into another beautiful spring day. Emmae gathered up the linens Warin had left behind and her own things and headed down to the stream that ran near the cottage. She washed their clothing in the clear water, beating and scrubbing it on a rock Warin had shown her for the purpose, until the dirt was out and the clothes were fresh. She wrung them out as dry as she could, and then took them to the lavender bushes that grew in a low hedge near the cottage. Emmae spread them out on the bushes in the sun to dry, as Warin had taught her.
Stretching her back, she looked around the little clearing and spied a clump of daffodils growing wild under the trees. Smiling, she picked three of the bright flowers to bring inside, and walked back into the cottage. She crossed the threshhold and dropped the blooms in shock.
A handsome young man stood by the cottage hearth. His eyes were green and amused, his hair was golden, and he held his slender form gracefully and proudly. The young man smiled and said, "Don't be afraid, girl. My prince and I will not hurt you."
"No," came a voice from behind her, "there's no need for you to fear us, my dear." Emmae turned quickly and there in front of the door stood another man, taller, a bit older, darker. He looked so much like her woodsman that for a moment, Emmae wondered if it wasn't him. But where Warin's eyes were warm, the eyes of this man were cold, dark fire. His voice held all of Warin's deep soothing tone, but she heard only command and no comfort in it. To her horror, she felt a flush begin in her cheeks.
"I am Prince Hildin, brother of your...your husband?" the man said. Emmae shook her head and took a step back, coming up against the blond youth behind her. He took her by the arms gently but firmly. "Not your husband? I see," smiled the prince, coming closer. "Ah--and this is my page, Gill."
Emmae began to breathe faster. She could feel her body responding to these strange men, against her will--just as she had that first night with Warin. What was happening, and why couldn't she stop it? Her eyes stung with tears.
"Don't cry, pretty maid," said the prince. He wiped a tear from her cheek and put the finger in his mouth. "Gill, I believe this lovely child is enchanted. She tastes of magic. Taste for yourself." Emmae felt lips and tongue upon the nape of her neck and just stopped herself from moaning aloud.
"I believe you are correct, your highness," she heard the page say close to her ear.
"Magic?" said Emmae through her tears. "I have no magic!"
"Oh my dear," smiled the prince, "I have enough magic for the two of us. As does my brother, Prince Warin."
"Prince--my Warin is a prince?"
"And a powerful magician, as are all the men of our line. Poor girl," he said with all the sympathy of a snake for a mouse, "did he put a spell on you?" He tilted her chin up to look into his eyes. "And he never told you who and what he was. I'm very disappointed in my brother."
"Warin would never put a spell on me!" Emmae cried. The blond young man laughed softly and nibbled on her ear; her eyelids fluttered and she gasped in surprised pleasure.
"Are you so very sure of him? How did you come to him?" the prince said, moving closer.
"He found me, in the woods. I have no memory of how I came to be there, or who I was before."
"And you never suspected enchantment?" the prince whispered against her lips. He slipped his hands around her waist.
"I--" Poor Emmae could neither breathe nor think. If the page behind her weren't holding her firmly, she felt sure her legs would fold underneath her. She burned with desire for both men, and the shame of it was almost more than she could bear. She closed her eyes and sobbed, and the prince swallowed her cries as he kissed her. She felt the hands of the page move from her arms to cup her breasts, and then she felt a strange lassitude come over her. She looked down to see a silver ring on her right hand that hadn't been there before, and then fell into unconsciousness.
"I've put her to sleep. It won't do to carry a struggling girl through a reflection," said the prince as Gill scooped her up gently. "We must get back through the mirror before my brother returns--oh! It's not a mirror, it's our grandmother's silver service! How funny! I didn't notice when we arrived."
Prince Hildin walked to the hearth, waited for a bright flame, snatched it into a wand, and began writing on the table top. The letters burned and then faded into a glow against the wood. He dismissed the wand, and fetched the silver tray from its perch atop the cupboard, setting it against the wall. "After you," he gestured. Gill bowed slightly, his arms full of girl, and put his foot through the tray. He and Emmae seemed to turn to liquid; their forms swirled into the tray like water through a straw and were gone. Prince Hildin took one last look round the little cottage, curled his lip, and followed.
Hildin swirled into the unused room above his chambers through a tall cheval glass, and took his bearings. The room was paneled in dark wood, with no apparent door; a window faced west, covered with shutters against the afternoon sun. Gill had drawn back the bed curtains and placed the girl on the broad mattress; now he moved quickly to the cheval glass and turned it to the wall. "I will make sure this is removed immediately, your highness," he said to Hildin.
"Be sure it is, and be sure all reflective surfaces in the Keep are covered or safely put away," said the prince. "Tell the staff some nonsense about a quarrelsome lord threatening to come by mirror and kill the king, that sort of thing has actually happened before. I want my brother to return when I'm ready for him, not before. As ill as our father is, I am likely to be king very soon. I should hate to have Warin showing up before the coronation. In the meantime," he said, looking down at the insensible Emmae, "we'll have ourselves some entertainment at my brother's expense. My favorite kind."
At his master's gesture, Gill sat down on the bed beside Emmae and began undressing her. "I wonder who she is, your highness," he said as he tugged at her bodice.
Hildin took her small hand in his and examined it. "Her hands are not those of a peasant--these are signs of unaccustomed work--nor is her complexion. My guess is that she is a rich man's daughter who ran afoul of some common magician, perhaps a rival merchant's hireling. I suggest we find out."
He pulled a light wand from the candle burning at the bedside, and traced golden sigils in the air above her. Hildin studied the glowing silver answer. "Hm," he frowned. "Not at all what I expected. It's a spell, but I can't read it. Gill, leave off playing ladies maid and go fetch the Teacher."
Gill reluctantly touched a spot on the wall. A hidden door opened, and he left the room, returning with a tall, elegant figure in long black robes. The Teacher glared at the prince, and looked sorrowfully down on Emmae, who now lay naked on the bed. "What do you want?"
"She's enchanted."
"I can see that. Your highness," the Teacher added reluctantly.
"Tell me about this spell. I suspect my brother's hand."
The Teacher sighed. "Your father's last sensible order was for me to do your bidding, to a point. Unfortunately, your request falls under that command." The Teacher pulled another light wand from the candle and traced in the air, as Hildin had done, observing the figures gravely. "Prince Warin didn't cast this. This is women's magic--very old and strong magic at that. Emotional magic. There's only one person I know who could have cast it." The Teacher stared at the fading symbols. "It can't be broken, at least not by me. Very possibly it can't be broken at all. It's a kindling spell of some kind, meant to spark another's emotions within the enchanted."
Gill watched, fascinated, as Emmae's breasts rose and fell with each breath. As the color in the boy's cheeks rose, so did the color in the girl's, until she rubbed her legs together and moaned in her sleep.
Hildin smiled. "And I think it's fairly clear which emotions the spell is forcing upon her. Thank you, Teacher."
"What are your intentions toward this girl?"
"None of your concern, but when I'm through with her you can have her for yourself if you want."
The Teacher grew several inches in height and glared again. "If your father knew--"
"But he doesn't, and he won't. We both know he will never awaken again." The Teacher's pale gray eyes glittered with rage. Hildin just laughed. "Get out." The Teacher keyed the magical lock with a thumb and swept out.
Temmin blinked as he came out of the book. "The Teacher. You. You're telling me you were there, eight hundred years ago." The Teacher said nothing, merely watching Temmin's face. "Or was it an ancestor of yours? He was, wasn't he? It's a hereditary position, and you've just inherited it?"
"Now it is time for you to prepare for the dance, your highness," said the Teacher, ignoring the questions entirely. "If I keep you longer, Jenks will perish of nerves." Temmin turned to the doorway of his study, and there stood Jenks, lips pursed, holding the tea tray. "I shall not be seeing you tomorrow morning. I imagine you will be otherwise occupied with a hangover. I shall see you in the afternoon." With that, the Teacher gave a small bow and left the room.
Temmin turned to Jenks. "It's hereditary, right? He couldn't possibly have been there, in Warin the Wise's time?"
"I wasn't listening, your highness. But if I had been, I would say that I avoid anything to do with magic, whatsoever, even thinking about it, and I refuse to speculate at all about the Teacher. Something isn't natural about that one, young sir, and below stairs they're all terrified of him. Now." He put the tea tray down before the green velvet couch. "Take some tea and then into the tub with you. It's not time to think about him, it's time to think about the ball and having a good time."
Temmin threw himself on the couch and poured a fragrant cup, thinking for once of Nija as he looked at the porcelain cup filled with tea. He picked up a ham sandwich and munched thoughtfully. Choice taken away, Emmae's, and apparently, the Teacher's, or whoever the man in the story was. He had a choice. He was sure, when he saw Allis that night, that he'd know what it was.
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Excellent. I like the way
Excellent! I like the way some of the history is coming together in this, and I like the Teacher more now as well, with the seeming limitations upon his free will. It raises interesting questions as to how much he has exactly, and what the conditions of his state are.
Brotherly tensions increase, too. Ahha!
And that page/prince relation is entertaining. Seems like the perfect combination for loads of jokes.
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Why?
Theres a good reason incest is almost universally taboo in our cultures. Offspring of siblings have a high chance of producing deformed children. It doesnt make much since to dismiss this and have twins screwing each other (not in a religious context anyway).
Have you ever read George R.
Have you ever read George R. R. Martin's A Song Of Ice and Fire series?
Either way, first generation children of incest don't have a high chance of producing deformed children. And either either way, sex doesn't necessarily have to lead to the production of offspring.
The Lovers are not the Parents
Pagg and Amma are parents; Nerr and Neya are not. And as long as the Obbys are Embodiments (which they won't be their entire lives), they won't be, either.
yes
...and Jamie and Sersei's relationship was highly taboo. They kept it secret. However, I dont really think they have anything in common with MeiLin's twins... I dont see the Obbys plotting to take over or running off to fight in wars.
You're missing the point...
Cersei wants to keep their relationship secret because her children will lose their claim to the throne if she marries Jamie (ie people will see that they were his kids all along). Jamie is perfectly willing to admit their incest.
Also, House Targaryen was/is noted for their inbreeding.
There's historic precedence
in greco-roman times in egypt brother/sister marriages were not uncommon among the commoners, and it's certainly well documented among the ruiers--cleopatra married two of her brothers successively. to call one's lover "brother" or "sister" was a term of endearment
well
Those guys were just crazy, the pharohs actually thought they were gods for a while. And recall, they thought the brain did nothing (which is why it was removed and discarded in the mummifying process), I wouldnt trust them to know the reason their royal lines had strange deformities.
Again...
Right, and the people in this story might also not know that it was incest that was causing deformities. Regardless, it's FICTION! Anything can happen! For all we know, in this world incest might not cause genetic defects.
The poster above you was just saying that there was historical precedent for incest, which there is (you can't dispute that); he wasn't arguing that it was a good thing.
every human society is crazy
some are just more so than others.
M: your original post poses the argument (at least i thought it did) that incest is a universal taboo and it didn't make sense/ring true that it would be tolerated in a religious context or otherwise in a human or human-like society. i was simply pointing out that it was in fact within the religious and regular lives of at least one culture, though I'll grant you an ancient civilization and one in decline (greco-roman era egypt), at that.
Predates the Ptolemaics
actually.
Keeps getting better.
I've been lurking for the last couple chapters, and I have to say that your story is still improving with each update (or at least is drifting into areas I find more intersting, whichever). I especially like the Teacher character (and have since you introduced him), and am glad to see you develop him as skilfully and subtly as you are now. My only hope is that he doesn't turn out to be entirely bound to the wishes of the king, and instead is under some sort of self-taken oath (I've always hated genie characters). Here's hoping you keep it up for a while to come. As always, I'll be waiting on the next update.
-Slagar of Numenor.
about the Teacher
However it turns out, I only ask that you stick with it and trust me.
The Teacher is cool.
The Teacher is cool. Definitely liking him. Can't say I didn't see the kidnap coming but Warin had be become the Wise somehow! It's also nice to see, in that context, that the Teacher isn't a robot and actually has some remorse for another human being, he can feel pity. He's almost like Snape--there's a heart in there somewhere. He's not outwardly as assholic though.
And to add to the incest debate, there are some ruling families today that still inbreed in order to keep the blood royal. It's not close but they're still related. Take out the feelings and the societal constraints and what do you have? Two people that share a similar genetic make-up. What if they've never met? Take, for instance, the father and daughter in Australia I think it was that fell in love after meeting for the first time. They didn't know each other as father and daughter, just as two people. We think it's gross because we've been programmed to think that way. That's not to say I'd go out and screw my cousin. I would like my family tree to branch but strip away the external feelings and they're not different than any two people on the planet.
Inbreeding, though, does create for a weaker gene pool but that'll take a few generations to take effect. I think even the ruling empires that practice sibling marriages found out rather quickly that keeping it all in the family can get messy.
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