V's Bonus Story: Travels with Gan, Part One

For his points story, V asked: In her youth, did the High Beloved (Malla) ever have a sexual experience that significantly changed her outlook on life? The song (the future High Lover) Gan sings to her is based loosely on on a real medieval student's song, "To Lydia," as translated by John Addington Symonds. Mostly I took the rhyme scheme (ababccc) and scansion from it. This story may have more parts to it later, hence the "Part One" designation.

Kennerton, Barle, some time close to Farr's Day in the Year of Our Kings 931

The sound of a lap harp came low over the stubble of the hay field. The cut timothy lay in straight windrows to cure in the sun, which had hidden itself behind the rolling brown hills to the west of Kennerton a few hours earlier.

If you had followed the sound of that harp, you would have come upon a young postulant Lover and his girl, lying half-dressed against a haystack. His name was Gan, and hers was Malla. Malla's amber eyes were half-closed, and her honey-colored hair hung in long, tumbled-down braids. Her bodice and chemise were open, the cool evening breeze drying the sweat between her breasts, and her skirt was still pushed up around her waist. One leg was bent at the knee, and her arms pillowed her head.

Gan reclined beside her, playing loosely on his harp. He had discarded his smock at the end of the mowing, and had removed his shirt the better to feel Malla's skin against his own. His forearms were brown, his wiry body was pale, and he sighed with delight as the night breeze ruffled his unruly dark hair. Eventually his noodling settled on a song, and this is what he sang:

Stay with me, my Malla fair,
Reclining in the hay
The moonlight shining in your hair
Turns nighttime into day
It dazzles with its light
And overturns the night!
Ends the night!

Kiss me with your red red lips
That taste of sweetest wine
And nectar that the fairy sips
From honeysuckle vine
Your kisses make me swoon
Your kisses end too soon
End too soon!

Let me see your breasts so white
So I might rest my head
Soft as pillows, my delight
The fairest-ever bed
Such pretty rosy teats!
Your heart beneath me beats
'Neath me beats!

Have pity on my need
And let me spread your thighs
I'll beg and I will plead
For you leave me agonized
If with me you will not lie
I swear that I shall die
I shall die!

Oh, Malla do not leave
Oh, please don't leave tonight
I'll never you deceive
Take pity on my plight
Please give to me this boon
Though I will leave you soon
Leave you soon!

Malla let out a long, contented sigh. "Gan, that was awful," she said with a lazy grin. "D'you know why your eyes are brown?"

"Because I'm full of horseshit?" he chuckled.

"It's true, you know."

"And every word I sang was true, too, awful or no." Gan set aside the harp and kissed her, slipping his hand inside her chemise. "My favorite breasts, my favorite legs, my favorite cunny. Oh, Malla, I will miss you."

"Enough to leave the service of Nerr and not go to your post in Belleth Town?" she whispered.

He studied her face. "Are you asking me to?"

"Would you?"

He sensed it was a test, but there was only one answer he could give: "No. I can't, Malla, not even for you. We wouldn't even have met if I hadn't served my postulancy here. And now that I'm through, it's time for my posting."

A strange satisfaction spread over her face. "So," she said softly, "you'd let another man between my legs? It wouldn't bother you to know I was with another? Shouldn't I wait for you?"

Gan weighed the breast in his hand. "These are too beautiful for me to ask you to keep them just for me, when I'm going so far away. I do love you, please know that I love you, and I can never love just you. I have a calling to love many. When you find the man who can love only you, and you will, think of me only with kindness."

Malla stroked his cheek, and then covered his hand with her own. "D'you really think that's what I want?"

"Isn't it?" he said in surprise.

She tilted her head to one side. "You know that I've become a devotee."

"Yes, of course."

"I've been spending a goodly amount of time with the Senior Beloved. She's taken an interest in me. She's shown me many things." A little smile twitched on her lips.

"Such as?" said Gan suspiciously.

"It's funny how different the Petitioning Rooms look from the galleries," she yawned.

Gan sat up. "You've been in the galleries? Why did she take you there?"

"Because," she said, sitting up herself, "she's asked me to become a postulant Beloved. She says I have the knack."

Gan stared at her, stunned. "Malla--you can't follow me."

"I'm not. The chances of us both being posted to the same Temple are slim. We'll probably never see each other again once you've left for Belleth Town either way. What I wanted to be sure of is whether you will be happy for me. I wanted to know before I told you. You might have lied to me and told me to wait for you. I wouldn't have told you, then, and I wouldn't be upset at our parting."

"But what if I'd said I would leave the Temple for you?"

"I wouldn't have told you then, either. I would have encouraged you to leave anyway, with many self-sacrificing tears." Malla climbed into his lap, straddling his hips, and Gan obligingly put his arms around her waist.

"Which, if I were going to leave the Temple, I would have ignored," said Gan.

She kissed him, and kissed him again. "I knew you weren't going to leave the Temple--ah! Oh!" she sighed as he slipped his fingers just inside her and undid his trousers with the other hand.

"And how could you have been so sure?" he said, nibbling at her ear.

"Because--ahh--" She rose up slightly and slipped his cock inside her-- "I have the knack!" They moved together, a slow and comfortable rhythm they could keep up for a long time. "And because you are absolutely amazing in the Petitioning Rooms! Sweet Neya I've sucked cock, but you--you have to show--me how--before you go!"

Gan stopped rocking. "You've watched me?!"

"Mm, don't stop," she pouted. "Does it bother you?"

"No. Not at all." Still inside her, Gan picked Malla up and put her on her back in the hay. "It makes me love you even more." He resumed their rhythm. "Your kisses make me swoon, your kisses end too soon, end too--mmf..."

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SkyRider's picture

Very Enjoyable

I enjoyed this little snippet about Malla, and look forward to reading more. Also, the song was cute ^__^

V's picture

Excellent

Even after I figured I overcomplicated things, you went ahead and exceeded both my expectations and my hopes.

Yes, I'd enjoy learning more about these two as time passes Laughing out loud And it's very sweet to see that they meet several times over the course of their lives--that some people can connect and reconnect like that. I'm sure they're deliriously happy together.

Gudy's picture

Lovely

I love these small glimpses into the personal history of the various members of the cast. This one was no exception.

manoki's picture

how do they keep from getting pregnant?

Is there some kind of birth control in Tremont or are they just lucky?

Kunama's picture

Teehee

That last line made me giggle.
I see what you mean by part one. Huzzah for other characters!

Slaxor's picture

Nice

to get some background on those. If I ever get enough points(which is rather unlikely), I'll probably ask for one about Teacher.

So does this count as a regular update?

MeiLin's picture

it might have to

I don't have a single word written of chapter six yet. I may have to go back to "bonus stories and source materials only" for another week. I've got a thing with the family today, but I'm hoping to take pen and paper and do some outlining. I need a better idea what goes where in this story. I mean, I've got the basic story, I'm not flying blind here, but I don't have a draft of the story in story to work from as I did with book one.

My therapist and I sat down with all the various parts of me (going back to the "talking to characters" conversation elsewhere) and MeiLin has all the energy, that's for sure. The rest of me is asking that she share, or else the host body will get kicked out of the house, if there's a house left standing. (Things are a wee bit untidy right now.)

kawaiikune's picture

"your kisses end too soon, end too--mmf..."

That was my favorite part of the whole story. I had also wondered the birth control thing. There seems to be a lot of sex and not a lot of babies, although whatever they do can't be foolproof or else Harsin probably wouldn't have an illegitimate daughter.

SkyRider's picture

Birth Control

I know that many people are not magic in this story (aside from Teacher, the Travelers, and Temmin to some degree), but perhaps there is some sort of a charm that can be worn, or some kind of food that they eat to prevent the pregnancies. Also, we have not seen much of what happens after the sex - perhaps the women use some sort of douche or spermicide that we simply have not seen.

Nye's picture

That is a good observation.

That is a good observation. It would be interesting to know what they do about that. Of course we haven't seen a whole lot of male to female penetration yet, either. Maybe they just do the rest a lot

Han-pan's picture

Well, birth control...

Remember the mark on Emmae's body that prevented pregnancy? I'm sure the Travellers probably sell little charms for that and those in the Lover's temple probably get charms or spells to prevent that.

Nye's picture

I wonder how the High Lovers

I wonder how the High Lovers are chosen, then. A set like Allis and Isaak are not normal, it would seem.

MeiLin's picture

The retiring Most Highs choose their successors

When they begin to get weak, the Most Highs choose their successors out of a group they've been grooming and set to work imparting their knowledge in earnest to their successors. Gan and Malla are about at that point in the present day of our main story. Gan is 80 and Malla is 78 in KY 990 (yeah stop laughing, I hear you out there); in KY 931, Gan is 21 and Malla is 19. They have their little court of potential successors, Senior Lovers and Beloveds, most around age 50. We haven't met any of them yet.

Donna's picture

For birth control, it's been

For birth control, it's been widely used for millenia in the real world. I wouldn't doubt it was the same here. If a woman maps her period, it's quite easy to determine which is the most fertile time of the month, and which is the best to have wild, monkey sex with minimal risk. And that's just one method.

MeiLin's picture

if you can afford it

...and if she likes you, you can buy a charm from Maeb. Female Supplicants regularly get charms, but then the Temple invests in Supplicants. Most make do with the rhythm method, charting however they can. Most of the time it works, sometimes, surprise! Surprises at the Lovers' Temple are given to the nearest Mother's House. Some are adopted from there, some stay at the Mother's House and their mothers visit them and maintain a relationship as best as they can, some Beloveds leave the Temple and become mothers. It's up to the Beloved in question.

Nye's picture

Hmmm... the charm I get. What

Hmmm... the charm I get.
What about surprises for petitioners at the Lover's Temple... some surprises there may be what was wanted, but other... not so much

MeiLin's picture

can't talk about that yet

or at least all of it--be patient. Smiling

Unwanted children generally are given to the Mother's Temple, where they're raised in a Mother's House. Some are adopted out, but most are not. Often those children go into the service of the Mother themselves, but far from always; a good portion opt for military service. Being a child of the Mother is not a debilitating state, but unless you procure a rich sponsor of some sort or distinguish yourself in some way, you will get no more than a basic education. Still, that's more than many get, and the graduates of the Mother's House are usually in demand as clerks if nothing else.

Birth control for most folks falls into the charting category. There are condoms, but they're expensive to the point that people rinse them out and re-use them. (Yes, the Victorians really did that.) And they tend to break.

SongCoyote's picture

Oh, this is so very lovely!

Oh, this is so very lovely! I enjoy adoration and mutual appreciation that is unclouded by petty jealousies or the sharp, thorny side of overwrought romanticism. (Fanatics of any stripe are scary!)

Thank you for continuing to create these gifts for your fans. I have no clear idea yet what I will request when I earn one of my own; I have too many curiosities and wonderments about your stories to settle easily on one... yet.

Peace and joy be with you, and love always.

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

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