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Northwoodsman/Davik's Points Story: The Cavalry's Pride

Northwoodsman by way of Davik: Jenks' petition to the Warrior Temple (was he torn between several before dedication, etc). Or: Jenks in boot camp.

I don’t know if this answers the question, but this is what came out. In this story, Patrin is 24 and Jenks is 20.

Some time in Fall’s Ending, 966

“Standfast, wake up.”

Jenks rolled over and grunted. “Don’ call me that.”

“Standy, then. Shall I call you Standy?” teased the voice.

“You’ll call me Jenks, like you always have,” he groaned, opening one eye. “Farr’s breath, Pat, it’s nowhere near time to be up!”

“It is for us. Out of bed you come!” Patrin snatched the covers from the camp bed and turned it on its side, with Jenks still in it. “You’re an officer now, not a man of leisure.”

“When was I ever a man of leisure?” sputtered Jenks as he freed himself from the bed’s tangle.

“Our men have been up this hour or more, but the infantry is still quiet. Cavalry officers set the example to the entire Army, and so must be presentable when the soldiers arise. That’s how it’s done in the cavalry, Captain Jenks.”

“I know very well how it’s done in the cavalry,” said Jenks. “My family’s been in the Whithorse Regiment since it was founded.”

“Oh, I know very well about that, Standfast.”

Patrin’s batman came in with hot water for them both. Washed and dressed, Patrin shaved the gold stubble off his chin as Jenks blew on his first cup of coffee. “I’ll never understand why you keep clean-shaven,” said Jenks. “It’s a chore.”

Patrin paused, straight razor in hand. “I find it a good example for the rank-and-file. It shows I take care of myself every day, as they must if they are to be of use to the King’s Army.”

“You talk about them as if they’d never washed a day in their lives.”

“Have you seen some of the pikesmen?” said Patrin.

“Point taken.”

“It’s also for the cavalry’s pride, you know,” said Patrin, folding his razor. “And the cavalry’s pride--”

“--is the pride of the nation,” Jenks finished with him. He frowned at his cup and added a second spoonful of sugar. “Yes. The pride of the nation is very important to me.”

Patrin sat down. “Jenks, I know this has not been an easy transition for you. I wish with all my heart it hadn’t happened like this.”

Jenks shook his head. “It was bound to. I looked far, far above my station.” He grimaced. “Forgive me for speaking so plainly.”

“We have always spoken plainly with one another. How long have we been friends?”

“Since we were children. The closest of friends.”

“I don’t know why we should stop simply because you’re my adjutant,” said Patrin.

“It’s different now. I’ve broken her heart. I’ve broken my own. I should never have done what I did, and this commission--” Jenks put a third spoon of sugar in his coffee. “I’m still not sure I should have accepted this royal commission. I don’t deserve a captaincy at my age. I may have been famous at Farr’s Day, but I’ve never actually been in battle.”

“That’ll happen soon enough, trust me,” said Patrin. “I’m young for a Major.”

“You’re the Duke of Whithorse, and you’ve seen more action than most men ten years older than you.”

“Stay by my side, and so will you.”

“I will always be by your side, Pat,” said Jenks. “I should have been two years ago, but I just wasn’t ready to leave An--to leave civilian life.” He took a pull on his coffee and made a face. "Needs more sugar."

“You came when you were ready,” said Patrin. “And I’m glad you’re here.”

“How glad?”

“Very glad,” said Patrin, reaching for the bread basket.

Jenks stayed his hand. “Enough to give me the last muffin?”

“Enough to instill proper discipline in you,” answered Patrin. “Unhand the muffin and eat some toast, Captain. That’s an order.”

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

Creative Commons LicenseAn Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

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TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

That's a sweet story. I

That's a sweet story. I enjoy the sense of play between the two.

Is Patrin still alive? (I'm pretty sure he is...memory isn't 100%)

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Stormy's picture
Postulant

I think

Patrin is Ansella's brother and, as such, it is his death that Jenks constantly beats himself up over

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

Wiki says you're right.

Wiki says you're right.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Ilyndra's picture

This was really sweet!

I liked the interaction between the two as well. Patrin seems like a great guy, someone you could easily fall in love with actually.

Also nice to see a grumpy young Jenks. So much sugar, tsk tsk x)
I wish Jenks could find a lover or get married, he is such a treasure Smiling

Firesong's picture
Petitioner

Lovers

Ilyndra wrote:
I wish Jenks could find a lover or get married, he is such a treasure Smiling

Jenks apparently is known for chasing housemaids' skirts. Maybe he is not emotionally ready for a single, steady relationship. Britt is something of an in-between step, I think.

~ Serena Firesong ~

Vandole's picture
Postulant

Patrin feels so much like an

Patrin feels so much like an older, stronger Temmykins to me, wise beyond his years and instilled with a sense of purpose and duty, yet still playful, and definitely lovable. I'm mildly curious who Patrin's sweetheart was now, if he even had a major flame. I could see him being quite popular with the ladies around Whithorse. Big smile

I'm no end table, I'm a nightstand.

Raigne's picture
Embodiment

Not sure if this is why you said it

But it's been mentioned (often by Jenks) that Temmin resembles his uncle a great deal, and not just in looks.

When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth. -Arthur Conan Doyle
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It is pitch black. You are likely to be eaten by a grue.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Temmin and Patrin

Temmin is a great deal like his Uncle Pat, who he barely remembers.

Ilyndra's picture

Omg, I image so too He

Omg, I image so too Big smile He seems like such a great guy, I want to know more about him Laughing out loud *wishes she had points for a Patrin-story*

Blue Coyote's picture
Devotee

hmmm

Maybe I'm just reading too much into things... but I had a certain feeling about Ansella's brother Patrin and Jenks. Something about "closest of friends" in a culture that has a very casual attitude about bisexuality among men (or at least that "boys will be boys" and "men have urges" are pretty much carte blanc to do whatever, whenever with anyone they can get away with it). I'm much more interested in whatever Jenks did that made him think he'd betrayed or not stood by Patrin. My reading of past stories has been that Patrin died in battle and Jenks feels that he should have somehow been able to prevent it (therefore why he is with the self-punishing).
Great interplay between the two even if my purient supposition is only that... poor Jenks.

Capriox's picture
Embodiment

Aww... no wonder watching

Aww... no wonder watching Temmin mature is semi-rebreaking Jenks' heart. Poor Jenks. Not only were Ansella and Patrin his "liege" family with all the weight of that tradition, they were his beloved friends and he ended up losing them both =(

I concur, Jenks needs a sweetie of whatever persuasion will make him happy. Eye-wink

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Slagar's picture
Devotee

I like it

"Patrin’s batman came in with hot water for them both. Washed and dressed, Patrin shaved the gold stubble off his chin as Jenks blew on his first cup of coffee."

I want my own Batman!! Also, there may or may not be an "h" missing there. Great story, Mei! I really like this one.

Trust everyobody, then cut the cards.
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MeiLin's picture
Most High

From Wikipedia

A batman is:

a soldier or airman assigned to a commissioned officer as a personal servant. ...

A batman's duties often include:

* acting as a "runner" to convey orders from the officer to subordinates
* maintaining the officer's uniform and personal equipment as a valet
* driving the officer's vehicle, sometimes under combat conditions
* acting as the officer's bodyguard in combat
* other miscellaneous tasks the officer does not have time or inclination to do

The action of serving as a batman was referred to as "batting". In armies where officers typically came from the upper class, it was not unusual for a former batman to follow the officer into later civilian life as a domestic servant.

Ilyndra's picture

I was wondering about that,

I was wondering about that, English not being my native language, but I figured it was not the silly option and something more proper and war-rank like Smiling I was right, yay Smiling

Zandu Ink's picture
Embodiment

Since you've yet to post an intro

Hint hint.

What is your native language. I would assume Japanese, or perhaps Cantonese or mandorin (sp?) based on your avatar.

But you know what my manager Chip says about assuming...

Don't do it.

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TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

I've heard that it makes an

I've heard that it makes an ass out of you.

(leave me out of it.)

(also: Mandarin)

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Zandu Ink's picture
Embodiment

You want to do what?

With my where?!?

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Raigne's picture
Embodiment

I was going to say

and correct the spelling, but you got there first.

I'd have an anime avatar if it weren't for the fact that my sexuality is ambiguous enough on the net without having a male avatar to confuse it even more. Not that it isn't fun to confuse people, it just gets tiresome to have to keep reexplaining and even worse when they don't believe you, since all women online are G.I.R.Ls in the gaming world.

When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth. -Arthur Conan Doyle
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It is pitch black. You are likely to be eaten by a grue.

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

Is it your sex/gender, or is

Is it your sex/gender, or is it your sexuality that's confusable?

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

NorthwoodsMan's picture
Embodiment

certainly not appearance...

I know, I've seen pictures...

PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals

A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.

Raigne's picture
Embodiment

Yes.

Yes.

ETA: I assume by sexuality you're referring to sexual-preference. I consider sexuality to be the whole thing. I suppose I can elaborate a little, huh? It is hard to tell if I am male or female online. I have a lot of personality traits that are normally associated with men. Not that this is any kind of reliable benchmark, but even well trafficked "Guess my Gender" quizzes that track answers to make themselves more accurate and are sort of based on real psychology get it wrong. In addition, my web handle itself is not going to yield up any clues. I don't usually talk about my sexual-preference, and I make comments about both men and women of various kinds that could point in either direction.

This leads to a great deal of amusing confusion in many places on the internet, and if I don't tell them, most people have to ask. Many still won't believe me if they've already decided I'm male, and I have had to provide proof by hopping on Vent to talk to them. If I haven't announced it to the people on vent, they assume I'm male and haven't hit puberty yet.

When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth. -Arthur Conan Doyle
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It is pitch black. You are likely to be eaten by a grue.

Amy's picture
Supplicant

Many People

Have traits of both genders that they exhibit. & so what if quizzes get it wrong. You are you, & that is all that matters to me. I ask no proof of you other than proof that you have a working mind & a feeling heart. Both of which I have already seen in action

The fact that you choose to be ambiguous about both your gender preferences kinda reminds me of Berdache (those born with the soul or souls or the wrong or both genders in their bodies) A very sacred type of being in many Native cultures. But that could be me projecting, & it honestly does not matter to me. You are you end of story imo.

Anything that kills your inner-song is always going to be bad for you. - Personal Wisdom

Amy's picture
Supplicant

Please post

An introduction we all want to better meet you.

Anything that kills your inner-song is always going to be bad for you. - Personal Wisdom

Raigne's picture
Embodiment

I like this story.

And we actually finally get to meet the (legendary) Patrin!

When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth. -Arthur Conan Doyle
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It is pitch black. You are likely to be eaten by a grue.

Amy's picture
Supplicant

Just one problem

Just one problem with this story..... It's to short. I love the play between Jenks & Patrin, & the way that Patrin doesn't seem to care about Jenks having fallen for his sister. It seems to me that Patrin's only concern is for the heartaches that have resulted from the affair.

I propose that Jenks get a full time sweetie of his own. All in favour say "I". Big smile

Anything that kills your inner-song is always going to be bad for you. - Personal Wisdom

NorthwoodsMan's picture
Embodiment

seconded...

On both parts... Eye-wink

PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals

A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.

Ilyndra's picture

*In one big voice* I!

*In one big voice* I! Big smile

NorthwoodsMan's picture
Embodiment

MeiLin wrote:I don’t know if

MeiLin wrote:
I don’t know if this answers the question, but this is what came out.

Was shooting more for something about his training to be in the Cav, but bawls, I'm not going to complain about anything with Jenks in it. Espically since this was pretty close to what I was getting at with the other question I asked about how he was doing when Ansella got married.

PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals

A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.

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