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Chapter 6 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

Omens

Temmin was back in his study ready to work soon after lunch. For some reason, his head was clear today. Perhaps, he reflected, it had been yesterday afternoon's romp with Anda.

Would that he could arrange one every afternoon, but that wasn't likely, he thought, unless he took up with someone inside the Keep. And who could that possibly be? His body certainly responded to little Arta, but he couldn't do that to Fen, and besides, Jenks would find out and very possibly kill him. In fact, Jenks would find out and very possibly kill him if he took up with any of the maids, no matter how enthusiastic she was. No, Temmin thought, Jenks said to leave the maids to him, and so Temmin would.

Why was it taking so long to get to Neya's Day?

It was in this mildly frustrated but generally happy mood that the Teacher found him. "Here to study, already? I'm surprised," said the Teacher, looking him over. "I would almost think you were interested in the Treaty of Ilhovin."

"Actually, I rather am," Temmin said cheerfully. "You're telling it well, I'm actually learning something about our political history with a country whose king I'm meeting soon, and no one's getting hurt this time."

"Ah," said Teacher with an inscrutable look.

Temmin pulled the book to him and opened the red cover.

On the outskirts of Deneen Town rose a hill, the most prominent in the landscape. In the side of the hill was an opening in the hill, framed in black rock. On either side, torches flickered even in the day. And coming and going was a small but constant stream of traffic, larger today than usual.

This was the Temple of Harla. The Temple in Tremont might be the larger and more elaborate, but Corharla Hill was the first, Her Home on earth, where all true devotees must descend at least once on pilgrimage and where her most devoted sent their bones to be added to Her ossuary. It was here, before dusk fell and Harla's Day began, that Henrik of Belleth went to find Macca of Sairland, for Macca was a lay priestess of the Bloody One.

Henrik had left his flat, feathered hat, his dark blue cloak and his sword at the Temple entrance, and had donned the black robes of a devotee. He pulled the hood over his short, dark hair, leaving his hazel eyes in shadow, and headed down the dim corridors until he came to the royal shrine.

"Shrine" was a misnomer, thought Henrik, for it was huge, taking up an entire cavern of its own the size of Creithig's great hall in Cordeneen itself. The walls were lined with bones, both animal and human; those capped with gold and arranged in niches in the walls were the bones of the royal family of Sairland, going back a thousand years or more. At the altar proper, three figures robed in black stood, surrounded by animal skulls sporting massive racks of antlers.

Henrik paused, then approached the altar, stopping a respectful distance away. "My lady Macca," he called, disguising his voice as best he could, "I would have a word with you."

Macca turned, pushing her hood off her head. The torches reflected on her red-gold hair, setting it ablaze in light, and Henrik stepped back involuntarily. Physically he was much larger than Macca; he stood a good head over her, and where Ilhovin was wiry and lithe, he was thicker and more muscular. Even so, she was in her element, framed in black before the altar, her gray eyes piercing, and he hung back. "Yes?" she called out.

"I would speak with you alone, as a petitioner, please."

Macca didn't hesitate a moment. She dismissed the two priests helping her hang the antlered skulls and gestured toward Henrik. "Please, approach." He took a few steps closer as the priests left the shrine. "How may I help?"

"Perhaps I may help you, my lady," he said, pushing back his hood.

If Macca was surprised, her face didn't betray it. "My lord Belleth. It was my impression that Our Lady Harla is not as respected in Tremont as She is in Sairland."

"Tremontines prefer to think of the here and now, not the hereafter, my lady," he answered smoothly. "Before you ask, I shall tell you that I am here on my own behalf and not on that of the prince or the state."

"Very well," nodded Macca. "Again, how may I help, my lord?"

He moved closer. "You may tell me what your intentions are towards the prince."

"My intentions?" she said. "He has yet to state his own! It would hardly be seemly for me to state mine beforehand."

"The women of Sairland play the man so much, why not in this?" She curled her lip and began to turn away, but he stayed her, his hand heavy on her arm. "You know the wishes of his father and yours. Has Ilhovin any hope, my lady?"

"I'll tell him that myself whenever he deigns to speak to me on the subject," she said frostily. "Are you always so concerned in the love lives of your friends?"

"I repeat that I am here on my own behalf, not that of the prince. And I remind you that I asked to speak to you as a petitioner--what we speak of cannot be spoken of again."

Macca studied his handsome, slightly dissolute face. "Then I repeat for the last time, how may I help? What would you know that I may tell you? Because what is between Ilhovin and me remains between Ilhovin and me."

Henrik suddenly captured her by her wrists. "You may tell me this, my lady: If you will not have the prince, will you have me?"

"You shall release me immediately," demanded Macca, her voice dangerous.

"No, not until I've made my suit."

"Then make it quickly," she said, gray eyes flashing.

For the first time, Henrik saw Macca's wild beauty fully, and he felt his entire body on edge and aware of her. "Ilhovin is weak," he began in an intense rush. "He will never rule Tremont as he should; the kingdom needs a strong hand at the reins, and he has shown me in our time here that he doesn't possess the strength. He lets a woman set the terms of our treaty--oh, don't even try to protest, my lady, your reluctance is all too studied!--and he won't take you in hand as he should. He's no husband for the likes of you. He hasn't even bridled you yet, let alone taken the reins." He pulled her closer. "I, on the other hand, should treat you as you deserve to be treated."

"And how is that, my lord Belleth?" said Macca, strangely calm.

"As a woman, not as a peer, a woman to be loved and kept from the harsher things in life. I would become your strength, Macca, and you would be free to become the woman Amma made you to be and Neya wishes you to be. All that flashing wit, it's wasted on Ilhovin and is unhealthy in women. It's the mark of a thwarted nature, and were you my wife I would channel all that wit into its true course--passion!"

Henrik let go of one of her wrists and slipped a firm arm around her waist. "Only think. He is the Heir, the last of his line. If you were to marry me, to join Belleth to Sairland's royal house again, and if something were to happen to him, married to you I would be in the best position to rule Tremont. And both you and Tremont would have the king they deserve. Would he be brave enough to chase you to ground like this and--"

He kissed her, rough and demanding, and to his satisfaction he felt her solid body go slack against him. He let go her remaining wrist and brought his hands to her face, slipping his tongue into her mouth and letting her thigh slide between his--

--and suddenly his groin exploded in pain and his vision went white. When he came to his senses, he was on the floor. His mouth was full of blood, and he realized she had bitten the tip of his tongue clean off.

She spat the chunk of flesh at him, his blood trickling down her chin and her dagger in her hand. "You, my lord, are a false friend and worse, a traitor. We spoke inside Corharla Hill, and I am bound by my oath to keep this conversation between us. I leave it to you to explain the missing end of your tongue--perhaps," she said in her dry way, "a shaving accident, or better, a peckish whore. You will never, ever approach me alone again or I will kill you where you stand. I've given fair warning. More than that I'm not required to give under both Sairish and Tremontine law. Get up, sir, and get out. We are blood enemies from this moment on."

Henrik scrambled back from her as fast as his tender balls would allow and pulled himself up on his feet. "You bith," he stumbled out around his bleeding tongue. "You bith! I offer to betray my betht friend for your thake, and thith is my reward?"

Macca smirked. "I neither asked for nor wanted nor accepted your betrayal. Your offer was for no other's 'thake' but your own, and you should be glad your 'reward' was merely losing the tip of your tongue. Next time I may take it all."

"You'll regret thith! I'll make you regret thith!" He ran limping from the shrine.

Macca wiped her mouth on a handkerchief and tossed it into a nearby brazier. Henrik would hate her for this humbling, and she knew it. She had made a powerful enemy, both physically and politically, for she had decided in favor of Ilhovin and would have to deal with the Earl of Belleth, as wife, as princess and eventually as queen of Ilhovin. But she was a daughter of Sairland and beloved of Harla, and had no regrets. When the time came, she would have to make sure to kill Henrik before he had a chance to kill her.

When the time came for the great feast in honor of the Bloody One in Cordeneen that night, Ilhovin walked her toward the hall. "Where is my lord Belleth?" she remarked innocently as she leaned on his arm.

"Oh," said Ilhovin, "poor fellow, he came down with a sore throat, couldn't speak at all, coughing up blood, even! Your father tried to send the best Sister in the country to him, but his man says he refused, that he just needs to sleep. Truthfully, I'm rather worried. Macca, please, let's wait a moment," he continued, stopping her in an empty corridor. "Listen, tomorrow night I would like to speak with you at length alone."

Macca looked into his earnest face with its wry mouth and clear eyes, and she felt her heart swell. "Yes," she said impulsively. "I'll marry you."

"I'm sorry?" said the astonished Ilhovin.

"That's what you were going to speak with me about, yes? Then yes, I'll marry you. You're kind and intelligent and you make me laugh."

"I do?!"

"You do, my lord," she said, smiling. "I just don't often laugh aloud."

Ilhovin swept her close and they kissed, at first tentatively, and then with increasing ardor. For Henrik had been right about one thing: Under her cool exterior, Macca was a wildly passionate woman, and Ilhovin was wildly passionate for her.

And so the match was made, almost by accident, on Harla's Day, the unluckiest day of the year for a betrothal.

"Well, that's ominous," said Temmin, blinking.

"I am not usually one for omens," said the Teacher, "but that was one indeed."

"He's not one for omens, he says" muttered Temmin half to himself as he stretched. "Walking through mirrors and reading to me out of magic books and babbling about prophecies and he's not one for omens."

"An omen is one thing, a prophecy is another. One is a folk belief, the other I have personal knowledge of."

"One man's prophecy is another man's omen," said Temmin. "When's tea?"

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

Creative Commons LicenseAn Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

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Nye's picture
Supplicant

and how many prophecies has

and how many prophecies has the Teacher watched come to pass.

Macca is a strong woman. A shame Ilhoven hasn't read his besth friend better. Greedy bastard

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

And how ominous is ominous?

Dare I speculate that after Macca and Ilhovin marry, Henrik kills Ilhovin before Macca manages to off him? He does after all speculate about the consequences of something "happening to" Ilhovin...

Han-pan's picture
Postulant

She is, after all,

The Queen Who Ruled Alone. Sooooo my guess is def gonna be that, unfortunately, he will die in one way or another, whether it is Henrik's fault or not.

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Katie's picture
Supplicant

Ugh.

I could see where that one was going. Henrik badly underestimated-and continues to underestimate!- Macca. Serves him right to have his toungue bitten off, though personally if I'd had the knife I'd be cutting off something rather lower.

I see sadness in the future of this story. Sad

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BCT's picture
Devotee

I admire strong women.

I like Macca. I like Macca quite a bit. I'm looking forward to seeing her story progress. Sometimes it's hard for me to 'see' a character's face in my head, but her face is quite clear to me, and I rather like her hair. Sticking out tongue I can see the repressed Macca in Sedra, even.

I like Ilhovin as well, but there's not much of a point in getting attached to him, is there? I just hope it's not as simple as Henrik killing off Ilhovin...I think I'll keep my speculation to myself, and let my wild theories be disproved as the story moves on. ^-^

EDIT: Comments should not be made at one in the morning. Otherwise you wind up with funny things like "disapproved" instead of, you know, "disproved."

- BCT

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

"I like Ilhovin as well, but

"I like Ilhovin as well, but there's not much of a point in getting attached to him, is there?" This makes me a little sad...I'm already sort of attached to Ilhovin, and I relate to Macca. I think it's going to be very painful for her if something happens to him.

Daymon's picture
Petitioner

Unlucky

We will see why that was the unluckiest day to make a betrothal, sadly Ilhovin will probably be gone.

Macca is a very strong and sharp tongued as ever... or maybe sharp in the toothed would be better. Henrik deserved worse but it was a confidential meeting so she can't do anything else to him, it was an unlucky day for Henrik as well.

SongCoyote's picture
Devotee

What ho! Depth from the formerly shallow!

One man's prophecy is another man's omen," said Temmin. "When's tea?"

Temmin is gaining insight and wisdom without losing his basic practicality (which is a nice way of saying his attention to his appetite). Well done!

Sometimes I need to lift my head from the little bubble in which I live, where the vast majority of the men I know would all react with similar disdain and/or disgust at Henrik's attitude and actions, and remember that there are still a lot of men liek that in the world. Keeping this in mind will help me avoid them.

I certainly won't avoid your stories, though! More, please!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

V's picture
Embodiment

Well my first response is

"F***ing OOK!" but I know that isn't one of MeiLin's favorite phrases. Instead, to quote Leonard Pitts: "What I know reassures me. It also causes me to tremble with dread of the future."

Very nice chapter. I'd call it an evil cliffhanger, except the impact isn't moments away--instead, we're just watching the bow being drawn, the trebuchet wound. You've written very engaging characters, again, MeiLin--Macca is definitely my kind of bith, but I'm concerned both for her and for Ilhovin. Queen dowager is a title I'd hesitate to wish on my worst enemy--it's lonely at the top, and far lonelier when remarriage means a big step down in influence and power. It would be sad to see that wild passion with no safe, accepted form of release.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

MeiLin's picture
Most High

ooking

I'm not against it per se. I'm just against ook- or first-ONLY content. If you say "OOK!" however cleverly, and that's it, off you go to the bitbucket. But if you say "OOOK!" and then follow it up with more comments on the chapter, that's fine. Smiling

manoki's picture
Supplicant

excuse me but...

...what is ooking?

MeiLin's picture
Most High

a form of "first"-ing

Firsting is posting on a blog entry just to say you were the first to post. Usually "first" posts consist of just the word "First!" with any number of exclamation points afterwards. On some liberal blogs, it's "Frist!" as in Bill Frist.

Ooking comes from ToMU, where the fans are generally known as Refresh MUnkeys--fans who refresh the page over and over again in hopes the author has posted an update. Monkeys ook, therefore MUnkeys "ook" instead of "first." Ooking in some cases also means great approval, but because so many people ook before they've even read the chapter at ToMU, how do they know?

Ooking and firsting is officially frowned upon here at the History. Ooks are so bad at ToMU that I gave up on trying to read the comments because of them. Because I gave up, they may not be as bad now, but my experience there led me to draconian measures here--deletion of the post. As I said above, as long as you have something ELSE to say you can ook or first, but no ook-only commenting, no matter how clever.

V's picture
Embodiment

MeiLin pretty much covered it

but in this context, I meant it as a strong "Yeah. Oh hell yeah" sort of exclamation of approval.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

MeiLin's picture
Most High

those I don't mind

at all, at all. Smiling

Oddfish's picture
Devotee

But I don't want Ilhovin to

But I don't want Ilhovin to die! Oh well. I suspect that Macca would give St. Olga a run for her money if/when someone murders her husband. I'm also surprisingly fond of Harla. I don't normally care about blood and gore much (Don't dislike it, don't like it, just "meh") but I like Harla. I think at least some of it's the names, because they have a really gratifying sound. Plus, anyone with an ossuary...

Voyeur's picture

Oh hell yeah...

Macca is officially my hero! That was the coolest thing ever...

Cass's picture

Groining pains

I don't think I've ever been so happy to hear the phrase "suddenly his groin exploded in pain".

Kunama's picture
Petitioner

Harla

Ugh. I keep getting the name 'Harla' mixed up with 'Yun-Harla' in my head. I haven't looked around, but it seems Harla is the one who presides over death? Yun-Harla is the Trickster goddess from Star Wars... yeah I shouldn't be up, it's almost 4am.

Hurrah for Macca~!

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Star Wars?!

I had no idea. Sir is the Star Wars fanboy; if you freeze-frame the cantina scene, he can tell you the name and back story of every single character in the scene. It's really kinda sad. Eye-wink (Yeah, I should talk...)

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

Happily ever after?

I just had a thought. Maybe Ilhovin doesn't have to die! If he were off at war or something for an extended period of time, maybe Macca could rule by herself in his absence and he could come back and they could live happily ever after. Or maybe I'm just an optimist (although this is probably the only time hoping for war could make me an optimist).

Donna's picture

I'm wishing Belleth's dick

I'm wishing Belleth's dick meets his ear in the future, with Macca hanging an ornament from it. Sometime festive. Perhaps a Kingdom Condom, you know, just to rub it in a little more.

manoki's picture
Supplicant

well done, Meilin

I like how you wrote the scene between Macca and Belleth. It's hard to get across the mix of modern feminist ideals along with the Tremontine female roles and make it all sound reasonable and yet also convey who is the good "guy." Way to go!

MeiLin's picture
Most High

thanks!

From you that means something! Smiling

G.S. Williams's picture

"An omen is one thing, a

"An omen is one thing, a prophecy is another. One is a folk belief, the other I have personal knowledge of."

"One man's prophecy is another man's omen," said Temmin. "When's tea?"

I guess Temmin forgot that the "one man" he is talking to is his ageless Teacher, with a considerable amount of experience. Certainly more than young Temmy.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Tem is a goon

...who is somewhat of the age where one knows everything. Don't forget that. Smiling

PS: Glad to see you back!

G.S. Williams's picture

He IS a goon

Upon that we can agree. Unfortunately, he becomes more likeable as the story progresses. Way to make things appealing, MeiLin. Sticking out tongue

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