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Chapter 50 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

Regency's End

Nerrday and Neyaday at the Temple dragged by. Temmin tried to keep his mind on what he was learning, but so far all he’d learned was that Dorrig kept the rakes in the shed closest to the back gates, blood will stain grouting if you don’t get it up before it dries, and the only Postulant in the little group the Supplicants were working with who had softer skin than Anda was Davik, of all people.

The Temple was flooded with petitioners, far more than usual. They hurried through the main hall to appointments with the staff, or to offer little towers of fruit, flowers and sweets in arrangements of varying complexity at the feet of the various statues. Where do they all come from? thought Temmin, who hadn’t realized there were this many people in the whole world. Late in the afternoon of Neyaday, he unloaded his sorrows on Anda. “I don’t understand,” he said, pausing in his raking of the gravel in the pathways of the garden. “I thought we worked directly with the Embodiments and the Most Highs. Where’s Allis? Where’s Issak? Why am I raking gravel?!”

Anda sighed. “Listen, Tem, during the busy times we have to help out around here. And it’s good for you to understand everything we do to keep the Temple running. D’you think I’m happy to be out here raking gravel when I could be doing something pleasant like rubbing Issak’s feet?”

“That’s pleasant?”

Anda grinned. “He’s very grateful afterward. Spring’s End is our busiest season, just before Neya’s Day on through to Nerr’s Day. Once that’s over, the crowds go home and we’ll have time to do more than just clean up after them.”

“But couldn’t we be helping in a different way?”

“Next week, I promise, we’ll spend more time learning and less time cleaning.”

When Vennaday came, for once Temmin was relieved to spend the day at home rather than at the Temple. “You seem unusually cheerful this morning, your highness,” said the Teacher on entering the study.

“Any day not spent raking gravel is a good day,” said Temmin. “Am I going to hear more about Creith--about Harsin the Third’s reign?”

“This story has to do with his mother, and the hand fate dealt her. Another time perhaps there will be a story about King Harsin himself.”

“Say,” said Temmin, “something just made me think of this. Some day will you be telling my story to a descendent of mine, d’you suppose?”

The Teacher was silent for an uncomfortably long time. “Truthfully, I hope not. Anything is possible. I will tell you this--” The Teacher speared him with a deep, penetrating look-- “it is entirely up to you.”

Temmin found it hard to look away. “Up to me how?”

“Let’s continue,” said the Teacher, leaning back and waving a long, elegant hand at the book. “We’re nearly done.”

The night Creith turned 16, he sat with his mother, his child wife and the Teacher in his rooms. It was hard to say which one was more restless, the young king or the regent queen; Creith paced by the fire, while Macca stared into its flames, eyes darting with her thoughts. In the corner, little Katha quietly worked on her embroidery; in the year she’d spent married to Creith she’d avoided open court as much as possible, but on occasions like this that required her presence, she brought her work basket and found the most out-of-the-way spot she could.

“How will I know when the time comes?” said Creith.

“I will know,” said the Teacher quietly.

“Yes, but how will you know?”

“He will know, son,” said Macca irritably. “What is it you’re so eager to do that I haven’t done?”

“That you haven’t done?” said Creith, turning on her. “And what exactly is it you’re supposed to have done that’s so admirable, among all your wrongs against me?”

“Your mother has been an excellent steward, your majesty,” said the Teacher in the same quiet tone. “She gives you your kingdom in better shape than she found it.”

“I suppose there’s nothing left for me to do but enjoy it then, is that what you’re saying?” said Creith with a curl of his lip. “And what are you smirking at, little snow pile?” he said to Katha.

“‘Smirk?’” she said, not looking up from her work. “I do not know this word, husband.”

“Don’t call me that,” he said curtly, and took up his pacing again. “I’ll tell you what I’m eager to do. The first thing I’m going to do is call my wife--my real wife,” he spat at Katha, who flinched in spite of herself, “--back to the Keep, with our son. The second thing I’m going to do--” But he instantly fell silent; Teacher was standing stock still, gray eyes wide and unseeing. “Is it...is this it?” the young king said.

“It’s time, your majesty,” said the Teacher, coming back into the room fully. “You are king in your own right. Your majesty,” Teacher continued, bowing low to Macca, “it was a pleasure serving you, even as little as you allowed me to.”

Macca stood and raised Teacher up by the hands. “I’m sorry,” she said, voice faltering. “I’m--it was--I’m sorry...”

“Not as sorry as I am, ma’am,” said the Teacher.

“And not as sorry as you’re going to be,” said Creith. Macca turned toward her son. “I’ve changed my mind about the first thing I’m going to do. You’ve always had a fondness for Chalkhills, haven’t you, Mother?” Macca didn’t answer, but Creith only smiled. “I remember. Something about riding and the cliffs and the Sleeping Youth. You have an obsession with death, Mother, and that vile Goddess of yours.” Macca took a sharp breath, hand to her heart in shock at his blasphemy. “You’ve had so little time to contemplate Her in recent years. I think we should change that. Teacher,” he said sharply. “My first command to you is to take my mother immediately to Chalkhills and make sure she stays there. You are never to return to court, Mother. You are confined to Chalkhills until you die.”

Macca paled. “Creith,” she began.

“You will call me ‘your majesty,’ madam!” he roared.

“I will call you what I please!” she roared back. “You are my son! I have loved you and cared for your kingdom as if it were my own, and for what! For the sake of an ungrateful son who hates me as much as his people always have!”

“You took my love and my child from me! A fine way to show your deep affection, Mother!”

“You hated me before you ever set eyes on Milla, foolish boy! Creith, you cannot make a serving maid into a queen, nor a bastard into your heir!”

“I shall do as I please!” he screamed, “and you shall never stop me, ever again! Teacher! I order you! Get her away from me now!”

Macca felt Teacher’s cool hand close on her wrist. “I’m sorry, ma’am,” murmured a low voice, and she felt her insides turn outwards as she was pulled through a reflection, something she hadn’t felt since Ilhovin’s death.

Creith wasn’t satisfied with banishing his mother to Chalkhills. He had every mention of her after his father’s death removed from the histories, substituting mention of a Council of Regents that he made up out of whole cloth. Her portraits were removed from the royal gallery and from the college she founded at Summerford. He slashed the crown’s stipend for the Bloody One’s Temple to bare sustenance, and he brought Milla and their little boy back from Valmouth to the Keep. True to his word, Creith threw Katha out of her apartments to give them to his mistress, sending the poor little queen to one of the oldest, draftiest, most dismal wings of the Keep. “I’d send you back to Corland if I could, but I need that alliance. In any event, I can’t touch you until you’re 13,” said Creith. “May as well keep you out of the way till then. And who knows, maybe you’ll catch cold and die if I’m lucky.” For her part, Katha seemed relieved to be left alone another year.

But Creith reserved the bulk of his wrath for Mihall Wallek, his mother’s closest friend and the man who had kept him apart from his Milla. The worst he could do to Macca herself was banish her; she was, when all was said and done, his mother, and to punish her more severely than that was to tarnish his own reputation as king. But Mihall--he had other plans for the Duke of Valmouth, plans that he knew would crush Macca utterly when she found out.

“What is happening?” cried Nowa as the soldiers swarmed through Oakhills, the Duke’s country home outside Valmouth Town.

“We have royal warrants, Lady Valmouth,” said a captain. “Warrants for your husband, and your oldest son, Ilhovik.”

“But he’s done nothing! He’s only 14!” cried Nowa.

“By order of the king, Lady,” said the captain, calling to his men, “Search the stables!”

And in fact, that’s where the Duke and his heir were found, shoeing the fine horses in their stables themselves. Ilhovik was just learning how to work with the forge. Mihall had been born and raised a working man, and horses and falcons had been his life; keeping himself in practice as a farrier kept him in touch with the people he looked after now as a noble, he liked to tell his three sons. “Calm yourself, wife,” he told Nowa, kissing her on the forehead. “We will be home soon.”

But Mihall and Ilhovik never returned to Oakhills. The soldiers brought them to the Father’s Temple in Tremont, where they were charged with conspiring to rebel against the crown--charges brought by the remnants of Nowa’s family, under the king’s instructions. As soon as she heard, Macca sent many pleading letters on their behalf to her son, but Creith didn’t answer a one.

Mihall and his son were sentenced to death, but on the occasion of the birth of his second son by Milla, Creith declared a general amnesty. Instead of executing the Duke of Valmouth, he would be stripped of his title and lands, and sent out among the people with his family to make his living with nothing but the clothes on his back. By then, though, the cold, damp prison and its starvation diet had killed Ilhovik, and Mihall returned to Nowa alone, his heart broken. They took their two remaining sons and found shelter in a small town called Templestone. Macca sold some jewelry and secretly sent them enough money for him to buy himself a forge, and Mihall became a blacksmith, teaching his sons the trade after him. There are Walleks to this day in Templestone, shoeing horses, forging blades and gradually forgetting they were ever anything more than smiths.

“Poor Wallek. And Fen has no idea,” said Temmin slowly. “I cannot imagine hating someone that much, especially one’s own mother.”

“Harsin the Third hated many people, including me,” said the Teacher. “He was a high-strung, stubborn man, and I don’t know how much I could have done for him had I been with him from the beginning. One likes to think he would have been different had his father lived, but I don’t know. It’s impossible to say.”

“He hated you? Why?”

“I supported his mother. I tried in vain many, many times to get him to recall her from Chalkhills, but he refused.”

Temmin sat foward in his chair. “What happened to her, to Macca? How was she forgotten?”

“A subject we will take up after lunch,” said the Teacher. “If I have to listen to your stomach growl for one more moment I shall go barking mad.”

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

Creative Commons LicenseAn Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

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TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

one of the little things

I really like teacher talking about going "barking mad" in response to Temmin's grumbling stomach.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

thellieem11's picture
Petitioner

So much hate

I can hardly imagine holding so much hate and malice inside me like that... How could it do anything but poison and kill the one holding it?

I, too, like the barking mad in response to the growling stomach. It's a wonderfully animalistic mental image. ^_^

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

That went about as well as one would have expected :-(

And it clears up a couple of things as well. I'm with thellieem11, though, I'll never understand how a single person can hold that much hatred inside and not simply die from it all. And as much as Macca's banishment and excision from the records pains me, Katha's fate seems so much worse.

Andrea's picture
Postulant

Poor Katha

It's not right that she should have to be alone. Is there anything someone like her is able to do other than visit the Lovers' Temple? I'd assume not, since Ansella wasn't even allowed to keep seeing Jenks.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Katha's future

There will be more about Katha and Creith in an upcoming book.

Pikachu42's picture

I'm Just Wondering

if Creith actually tried to make his son the heir? Or if he finally consummate his marriage, and if so did that one (I'm assuming one because he hates her) time produce a son.

Oddfish's picture
Devotee

Ick, but...

Creith said he'd get a legitimate heir from her, and I assume he means to follow through on that. He seems like the kind of person to do it because he hates Katha, and would enjoy causing her pain with a humiliating and decidedly ungentle consummation.

Andrea's picture
Postulant

Or he could be like Harsin

Or he could be like Harsin (Temmin's dad) and actually be good to her in bed so she wants him but knows she won't be able to have him and will hate herself all the more for wanting him. So far direct and/or physical aggression seems to be more his style, but we'll see.

ZestyJester's picture

As far as i can tell Harsin

As far as i can tell Harsin harbors nothing like that sort of hatred for Anesella. Obviously he's not smitten with her, but he doesn't seem to feel that way towards anyone.

"There is no charge for awesomeness... or attractiveness." -Jack Black

Nye's picture
Supplicant

So sad

and not a shred of anything in the new king to hold hope for. What Macca thought of the Teacher, her son actually is. Hmmm...

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

Enid's picture
Devotee

O.o

That made me cry, quite a bit. I agree with theellieem and Gudy in wondering how one person can contain that much malice. I'd be shocked at that sort of venom directed at one's own mother, but honestly, I think Macca may have set herself up for that one, just a little, which is what saddens me more than anything, I think.

"I have heard the languages of the apocalypse, and now I shall embrace the silence" from Neil Gaiman's "The Sandman: Endless Nights"

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

I don't totally agree

I disagree, somewhat, with everybody else.
Sometimes, anger or hate can be an anchor holding you in place, or a guiding star.
It's not always a highly successful long-term solution, but over the short term, I think it can be pretty effective.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Lis's picture

See?

This is why democracy rocks.

537 guests O.o...holy cow. I know it was mentioned that there were about a thousand regulars but, wow.

greenpokefiend's picture

aw.. wow, the Traveler Queen

aw.. wow, the Traveler Queen doesn't joke about these things, does she.

You can't deny laughter; when it comes, it plops down in your favorite chair and stays as long as it wants.
-Stephen King

Starrysky's picture

Wondering

Hey I am new here and it’s my first post! So hey everyone.

But the big question I had on my mind about whether Creith will start treating Milla like he does Katha when he gets either bored of her and/or she crosses that invisible line that will make Creith angry?

I believe Creith is one of those people who'd you hate to make angry and you just want to stay out of their way as obviously shown with what he did to Macca and the Walleks. Bad and angry attitude with power. Very scary and one of the worst combinations.

At least Macca and the Wallaks will end up not being constantly right under Creith's eye in the end. Katha on the other hand will be. My heart goes out to Macca and the Wallaks, but not as much as it goes out to Katha.

Capriox's picture
Embodiment

Welcome and yay for your

Welcome and yay for your first post =D

I'd almost guarantee that Creith will turn on Milla and dump her as well at some point, possibly when her sons grow up enough to start making spoiled brat demands of their own. After all, it isn't like he has any incentive that we know of to stop being such an abusive asshole.

And I agree, the person worst off in this situation (in terms of innocence-plus-abuse) is Katha. I hope the Teacher is able to discreetly assign her some protective ladies in waiting or ensure that she gets supportive counseling at the Lovers' Temple or something.

Poor Teacher. In terms of personalities, he picked the wrong male bloodline to chain himself too, that's for sure!

ETA: 'Poor Wallek. And Fen has no idea,” said Temmin slowly.' -- Oh, Temmin, you adorable innocent. I bet dollars-to-doughnuts that Fen has at least a little idea of his family's history.

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The Disquieted Pen's picture
Devotee

Truthfully, he hopes not...

"'Truthfully, I hope not. Anything is possible. I will tell you this--' The Teacher speared him with a deep, penetrating look-- 'it is entirely up to you.'"

Gorgeous!
I absolutely love it!
The Teacher is a wonderful character.

Was there anyone who specifically inspired him? From history or literature or your personal life?

"Thunder only happens when it's raining.
Players only love you when they're playing.
Say... Women... They will come and they will go.
When the rain washes you clean you'll know."

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Teacher

Teacher came up out of the compost without much assistance from me. There are bits of Snape, bits of Doctor Who, bits of a favorite history teacher, bits of all sorts of people and characters in there. Once I realized who and what Teacher was, everything sort of fell into place around that character.

The Disquieted Pen's picture
Devotee

That makes sense but....

I've been wondering, can you tell us if he is devoted to one particular god or goddess?

If you can't, I'm sure I understand. If you can, I'd be very happy to find out.

"Thunder only happens when it's raining.
Players only love you when they're playing.
Say... Women... They will come and they will go.
When the rain washes you clean you'll know."

MeiLin's picture
Most High

All of them

...though Teacher has been closer to Eddin, Venna and the Lovers than any of them.

Someone's picture
Devotee

I agree with a bunch of

I agree with a bunch of others. Poor Katha...
Also, is every Harsin a jackass?

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MeiLin's picture
Most High

No

Just most Tremont men (the dynasty, not the country).

Firesong's picture
Petitioner

Most men of the family are

Most men of the family are jackasses? Why? That sounds like rather more than random chance. And, it must be rather wearing on Teacher to have to put up with 50 of them, or however many he's known....

~ Serena Firesong ~

ZestyJester's picture

There must be something wrong

There must be something wrong with me for not hating Harsin.. the current one. He's not that bad as far as rulers go.. I mean he's not doing anything revolutionary, that we've seen in story anyway, but I suppose things could be worse. He did give in to letting the kids grow up at whithorse.. (i hope that's the right name/spelling)

'less of course being a jackass is not necessarily a bad thing here O.o iunno!

"There is no charge for awesomeness... or attractiveness." -Jack Black

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

me neither

I mean, I don't love the guy, but he could be alot worse.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

NorthwoodsMan's picture
Embodiment

understairs...

We saw in the last points story how good things were with a happy and loving royal couple. What kind of hell hole is it to work in with someone like Creith as king?

PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals

A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

save up your points

and find out! Laughing out loud

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

zing!

zing!

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

NorthwoodsMan's picture
Embodiment

.

Isn't that my line?

PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals

A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.

Dani's picture

Hmm

And here I thought Creith was probably just going to off Macca as soon as he could. Perhaps there will be a chance for reconcilliation once he's older? Then again, seeing that Macca kept Teacher locked away when she knew he needed him... probably not. lol

But I'm happy to see more of the Lovers Temple! YAY! Let's go back there more often. ^.^

Starrysky's picture

Creith

I don't think Creith will never reconcilliate with anyone. It would mean that he'd have to admit to himself that he was wrong in some way. He is more likely to lash to others outside himself in my opinion.

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

Life

Life occasionally has a funny way of teaching lessons.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Dani's picture

But

Isn't that just what happened to Macca? Well, maybe it won't go as horribly wrong as we think. After all, the kingdom was running pretty well (from the way it sounds) under Macca's rule (aside from the occassional uprising). He really does just have to sit back and delegate the work to others that he thinks he can trust.

manoki's picture
Supplicant

I wish...

we'd gotten more of Creith's childhood. We only got a few glimpses of him hiding from Macca, running behind Nanny, and getting it on with Milla. So, here's my points question: who (other than Milla, Nanny, and Macca) shaped Creith's character during his childhood?

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

remember to put it in the

remember to put it in the right thread in the forum.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

MeiLin's picture
Most High

I feel as if I rushed it

These are drafts, and there are places where it's really felt. Creith's childhood is especially drafty. I may revisit this for print.

NuanaIvy's picture
Devotee

This chapter sounds like history to me...

And I don't mean that in a boring way! Recently, I've been reading/watching a lot of things about King Henry VIII of England, and I have to say that Creith reminds me of him a lot. Was this done on purpose?

Also, Katha makes me very sad. She reminds me of some of Henry's later wives. I can't wait to hear about what happens with them, but I also cringe at the idea of it.

(On a very side note, this should be my 50th comment! What do I do about asking for a points story? Laughing out loud)

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

answer

http://www.meilinmiranda.com/node/342
post here.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Andrea's picture
Postulant

Is anyone else able to edit

Is anyone else able to edit their posts? I went to fix one of mine and didn't see the "edit" option anymore.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

please don't put tech support requests in chapters

Put 'em here. That said, is it all your comments or just a particular one? Were you logged in for sure? Anyone else seeing it?

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

I see it.

But--only for comments of mine that have been replied to.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

NorthwoodsMan's picture
Embodiment

Yes, kinda

On my two entries for this chapter, the original does not, but the reply does.

PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals

A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.

Daymon's picture
Petitioner

Well it looks like it's a bad

Well it looks like it's a bad day in history for Macca, and for kindom in a way. To be ruled by a person with so much anger as Creith. Then again Macca was just to busy trying to keep the country going that she left him to himself and the court spoiled him.

Here is to hoping that Creith didn't rule very long.

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