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Chapter 46 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

Debts and Rewards

Temmin was grouped with the postulants for the second half of the day, leaving Anda and Bessa with Barik in the assembly room. But Temmin immediately regretted his wish to be just one of the group. The postulants spent the afternoon scrubbing down petitioning rooms between appointments--changing linens, sweeping, taking out any trash, washing floors when necessary. When it was necessary, it was rather a nasty business, but Temmin had mucked out stables before; by comparison, this wasn’t any worse.

Temmin was to be called last, apparently. He watched as one by one the others were called in to Barik to talk about their exercise of the morning, then came back to the group to continue working. Some returned happy, like Evra. Some returned looking much as they had when they’d left, like Mathanus. Some returned ashen-faced, like Davik. “Right,” he said to Anda when she finally came to fetch him, “why did you two get to help Barik and I got stuck cleaning? I thought we were spared this sort of work.”

“Because you don’t know enough yet to help Barik do the evaluations. If it’s any consolation, Bessa is taking notes and she hates that.”

“Oh, yes, I feel much better now,” said Temmin, rolling his eyes as he gingerly picked up a wet towel and put it in the laundry bin.

Barik was waiting for them in the assembly room, sitting in a big chair with Bessa primly taking notes beside him on a stool. “Not as bad as I feared,” he said once Temmin had settled on the bench before him.

“Thank you, Barik Lover,” said Temmin. “Wait--as bad as you feared? How bad was that?”

“I expected you to be as chuckleheaded as most of the nobility,” Barik answered. “But then, I should have remembered how well you handled yourself with the Embodiments. You behave more like an ordinary person than a prince, Temmin. You surprise me.”

“Ordinary is good, then?”

“Compared to how your kind usually act, yes,” said Barik. “But we look for better than ordinary when it comes to service in this Temple, Supplicant.” Temmin drooped slightly, and Barik smiled broadly. “You are better than ordinary. You are a Supplicant, and you were chosen wisely. We expect a great deal from you. Pay more attention outside yourself and you’ll do well here.”

“Thank you, Barik Lover,” said Temmin meekly.

“Now, open your notebook.” Temmin opened his notebook, and they went over his findings. He had correctly assessed almost half of his partners, “and that’s much better than most of this class of woodenpaws,” snorted Barik. “Most of them couldn’t tell which end of their partners was which. Next time you do this exercise--next time you have a partner for that matter--remember what I’ve told you.”

“But you haven’t told me anything,” said Temmin in surprise.

“I told you everything you need to know when I touched you,” said Barik quietly. “Now, go home. It’s past tea. Anda, take him back to the Supplicant’s Chamber and make sure he gets his tie on straight.”

“He knows the way,” said Anda irritably; Temmin nodded vigorously.

“Take him back, Anda Supplicant,” said Barik firmly.

Anda raised her eyes to the heavens and sighed, then led Temmin out the door. “What was that about?” Temmin’s voice floated back from the hall. Anda’s reply was grumbling and inaudible as the door closed. Their steps faded down the corridor, and the room grew silent.

Barik grinned down at Bessa. “Now, then. Who’s been a very good little girl for me, taking notes?”

“Me, Papa, me!” she squealed, throwing her notebook to the floor and herself into his lap.

“Oh, that’s much, much better,” sighed Temmin, sitting back in his chair before the little table by the windows in his study. He’d been home about an hour, and the remains of a once-sturdy tea littered the tablecloth. “I don’t ever want to have a day this busy again, Jenks.”

“Mm,” said the valet, handing him a stack of letters. “Your post, your highness. If I may be so bold, I would point out the presence of another letter from the Temple, sir.”

Temmin ruffled through the letters until he came to the familiar rose-colored envelope, opened it, and read it quickly. He frowned. “It says I’m supposed to report for Temple duty every day but Vennaday and Eddinday next week and every week thereafter!”

“I should think that’s to be expected, sir,” said Jenks. “You’re a supplicant, after all. It’s a serious business.”
“But how’m I supposed to do this, and train with Imbert, and do my lessons with Teacher? Am I supposed to do all my sleeping and all my eating for the week on Vennaday and Eddinday?! And when can I go riding!”

“I’m sure I don’t know, sir,” said Jenks, turning to go out the door with the tea remains, “but I know you’ll figure it out.”

“I’ll figure it out?” he said to the valet’s retreating back. “Why’s it up to me?”

“Because you’re an adult now?” said the Teacher, striding into the room. “Because it’s time you took these kinds of responsibilities on for yourself instead of leaving them to Jenks?”

“I don’t really see that,” said Temmin. “Papa has Winmer.”

“Jenks is not your secretary,” said the Teacher, perching on the library table. “He is your valet, among other things.”

“What other things?”

“And secretaries are not for deciding what you’re going to do with yourself. They’re for helping you do them.” The Teacher eyed the prince more sympathetically. “Perhaps I can help you with your schedule, or at least make things a little easier. Right now it is more important for you to finish your studies at the Temple than your studies with me. We have many more years together--possibly many, many more years,” said the Teacher wistfully. “We can limit our time together to Eddindays and Vennadays.”

“And you’d be all right with that?” said Temmin skeptically. “You wouldn’t secretly want me studying every spare minute?”

“Believe it or not, your highness, I have other duties as well. Tomorrow is Eddinday. Be ready to work after breakfast.” And with that, Teacher left him alone.

“Well!” said Temmin to no one. “What should I do with myself now?” Ellika was out; he’d already enquired. Sedra was closeted with Brinnid again. Mama was asleep, and he didn’t want to think about what Papa was doing. Instead, he thumbed through his mail. All it contained were invitations to parties he had no desire to attend. He would have to write and decline them, but he couldn’t remember where Jenks had hidden his stationery. “I found it the once, damn it,” he mumbled. He threw himself down on the green velvet couch and opened The Afternoon Spectator. “There’s nothing to do but read the paper,” he sighed; before long he was asleep, the newsprint tented over his head billowing and contracting with his snores.

Meanwhile, in the spacious office of the king’s secretary, two wide-awake heads were bent over their work at a partners desk. One was balding, and belonged to Winmer, the office’s owner. The other was covered in short red hair, and belonged to Fen Wallek, erstwhile junior footman and current sparring partner of the Heir. “There,” said Fen, handing over the paper he’d been working on, “is that better, Mr Winmer?”

Winmer held the sheet out and raised his eyebrows. “Better. Your hand is definitely improving. I can read it this time, for instance. But you have much more practice to do until it is anything more than adequate, Mr Wallek.”

Fen sighed and took the paper back. “Penmanship hasn’t been a skill I’ve needed much.”

“No,” sniffed Winmer, “I imagine not. There’ve been skulls to crack, one supposes.”

“Yes, actually, there have been,” said Fen testily.

The door opened without a knock, and the Teacher entered, nodding to them both. “What do you think of young Wallek here, Mr Winmer?”

“He can read,” said Winmer, ignoring Fen’s outraged look. “He can write after a fashion. I’ve tried to get him to tell me personal things about the Heir and he’s been appropriately vague. He hasn’t the faintest ideas about etiquette, protocol or court politics, but his basic grasp of history is sound, more so than I expected.”

“My brother is in university here in the capital,” said Fen, bridling. “We’re none of us ignorant, even though we are the children of a blacksmith. He’s quite well-read, my dad, for a blacksmith.”

“To be sure,” said the Teacher blandly. “Mr Winmer, what’s your conclusion?”

Winmer stood up and cocked his head. “Well, normally I would say it couldn’t be done, turning a footman--excuse me, a renowned pugilist--into a secretary. But I do love a challenge. All right, I’ll take him on as an assistant and teach him what I know. At least, the parts I can teach him. There are parts of my job, young Wallek, that are off-limits to you. And no part of your time with me may be spoken of, not even to his highness. From now on, you must practice complete discretion. Do you understand?”

“You really think I could do this,” said Fen, searching the faces before him.

“Most assuredly,” answered the Teacher. “You’re a bright young man, Fen, and you’ve already forged a strong personal connection with the Heir. I have no doubts as to your loyalties.”

“Oh, I’d do just about anything for the prince, sirs. And I’ll--eventually--make more money as his secretary than I would as his training partner? Or as a soldier?” he asked.

“Oh, most assuredly,” smiled Winmer.

“And I can still marry my sweetheart?” he said suspiciously.

“Secretaries are not a monastic order,” said the Teacher, “despite Mr Winmer’s bachelor state.” Winmer looked sideways at the figure in black, who simply raised a brow.

“All right, then,” said Fen. “Tell me what to do, and I’ll do it. How long before I’ll be ready?”

“When I say you are,” said Winmer.

“Well, how long’s that likely to be, sir?”

“Two, maybe three years. It depends on you.”

“I’ll be practicing my handwriting for three years?!” Fen despaired.

“At the end,” said Winmer evenly, “you will be able to tell the difference between a duchess and a countess at 50 paces, plot out the seating for a diplomatic dinner, manage his highness’s various intrigues, placate ambassadors and take dictation, all in a perfect hand. In short, Mr Wallek, you will be a gentleman of such upstanding character and discernment as to inspire the confidence of everyone who deals with you.”

“Oh, very well,” sighed Fen. “It beats the army.”

Winmer gave the Teacher a long-suffering look. “You will owe me one.”

“Oh, I’ll owe you several,” the Teacher answered.

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

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Comments

Marri's picture
Supplicant

Hahahaha. Poor Winmer. Also,

Hahahaha. Poor Winmer.

Also, Bessa + Barik = OH SO CUTE. Laughing out loud

"The worst thing in life isn't to die. The worst thing is to have lived but have missed it."
I will try to be good.

manoki's picture
Supplicant

Really?! :jawdrop:

I think Bessa with Barik is gross. He's her teacher/supervisor. And she called him "Papa." What's with that...?

MeiLin's picture
Most High

oh, manoki

At the Temple, there are no strictures like that--to the contrary. How do you think the postulants learn? Don't lay our society's expectations on Tremont's. That's one. For another, you may recall that Bessa has been looking for a "daddy" for a while.

manoki's picture
Supplicant

Daddy

For me Daddy means father. I would never call a lover, Daddy. Or Papa, which means grandfather in my book. And I would never want to play hide the salami with my father or either of my grandfathers. Yuck. If that's prudish, then I'm a prude.

I guess I need to get past the fact that Barik is teaching (everybody) about sex. But I still think it's not fair if he gives Bessa special favors and extra "lessons."

MeiLin's picture
Most High

two things

1) Bessa is not Barik's student. She's his assistant from time to time, and she learns from him, but she's not his student, nor is he in charge of her in that way.

2) Lovers often engage in play like this. It's a form of power exchange, among other things. I don't call Sir "Daddy," unless I'm talking to him around the kids; I'll occasionally say "Daddy, would you hand No1 Daughter her slippers?" or he'll say, "Mama, you've got No2 Daughter's jacket, don't you?" But when we're alone I don't call him that. For us, that's not sexy. For other people, it's incredibly sexy. Bessa and Barik are "other people." Smiling It has nothing to do with actual incest or pedophilia, believe me.

manoki's picture
Supplicant

Likewise.

MeiLin wrote:
1) 2) Lovers often engage in play like this. It's a form of power exchange, among other things. I don't call Sir "Daddy," unless I'm talking to him around the kids; I'll occasionally say "Daddy, would you hand No1 Daughter her slippers?" or he'll say, "Mama, you've got No2 Daughter's jacket, don't you?" But when we're alone I don't call him that. For us, that's not sexy.

Likewise. I refer to my dh as Daddy only when I'm talking TO the kids, not to him. I don't find it sexy to call a lover Daddy.

The Vixen's picture
Devotee

Occassionally I'll tease

Occassionally I'll tease Slagar by calling him Daddy. Due to a complicated issue involving my dad's present situation and the fact that I have never told my mom (his ex-wife) about said situation, I had to pretend that a Xmas present for Slagar was for him, so I wrote "Daddy" on the label as a pun.

However, I also detest most authority role playing (well I guess I like boss/secretary or cop rping, but I can hardly stand teacher/student). Only personally though.

"The hammer is my penis."

V's picture
Embodiment

I'm disappointed

Actually, I feel bad for Temmin, who got turned away empty-handed a chapter back, even after he helped Bessa discover that particular side of herself. This isn't the first time I've gotten a somewhat 'greedy' vibe from Barik, but it could be my imagination, shortsightedness, or intended characterization.

Cmon, manoki...you've never thought that one of your students was on the cute side? I've definitely admired a teacher or two. Plus this really hot librarian on another board I frequent... Evil

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

MeiLin's picture
Most High

how?

He's only appeared in two sequences! Smiling

manoki's picture
Supplicant

of course I have!

I'm human, after all. But I would never act on those thoughts. It would get me fired (for starters) and it's unethical. Not just the sex part, but the favoritism part. I don't think I could be objective in grading someone I was sleeping with. It's hard enough when I'm not sleeping with them! I grade my papers and exams without knowing whose is whose (they turn them in with ID numbers, not names). I try to be as objective as possible, but...

BTW, I agree with your assessment of Barik. There's something I don't quite trust about him. He seems a little slimey but can't put my finger on why.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

keep in mind

The only way to assess someone at the Temple when it comes down to it is to sleep with him/her. While experienced staff like Barik would be consulted on how a Supplicant is doing, there's no grading going on and the actual assessments would be made by the Most Highs and the Embodiments. Postulants, it's a different matter. But there's no way one single Lover or Beloved could "blackball" a postulant; there are too many staff members, and no one staffer is responsible for the same group of postulants for very long. They get handed off a lot.

manoki's picture
Supplicant

okay

Ya know, the term "teacher's pet" now takes on a whole new meaning. Eye-wink

I'll just chalk it up to this being an unfamiliar form of education for me. I actually wasn't thinking in terms of Barik "grading" his students, just that it's important not to play favorites because even if there are no grades, it makes other students feel left out, not as good, etc. And that causes all kinds of problems, in ANY kind of classroom.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Barik's feelings on the subject of Anda

is that if she doesn't like it, she can go dig someone else up. It's not as if there's a lack of willing partners around, and it's not as if he'll be working with both of them at the same time all that often.

V's picture
Embodiment

:)

Oh, it's not that I don't trust Barik, but first he goes for the hottest postulant, and then I still get the image of Temmy getting turned down by Bessa, who's hopping onto Barik's lap soon after. As I've historically been more the reserved one on the sidelines watching boldness and/or arrogance carry the day, I feel for Temmy.

It doesn't even matter that Barik might have had very good, unrelated reasons for choosing the hottest first...if you assume people's psychology will credit more attractive lovers/co-learners as also being more adept, there's sense in getting them to as high a skill level as possible ASAP.

I guess in the Temple, the "teachers pet" is expected to show up bearing a banana, not an apple?

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

fremmed's picture
Petitioner

I guess I just assumed that

I guess I just assumed that Barik was helping Bessa figure this stuff out. Or engaging in her favorite forms... Less about the greedy and more about the delving into spirit. Then again, I always have lived in ideal-land ... (sigh)

Do you think that the things people make fools of themselves about are any less real and true than the things they behave sensibly about? -George Bernard Shaw

V's picture
Embodiment

Naw

I'm pretty sure I'm not giving him due credit. I'm just getting cynical in my late 20s Eye-wink

$deity, I fear me at 55.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

fremmed

That's the read I had on it too.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

NuanaIvy's picture
Devotee

I was thinking

Along the lines of what you said, Fremmed, just also that it may be a reward for helping him out and taking notes. Just that. Since a kiss is a thank-you, maybe other play can be a reward. It seems to be what she likes best...

Excellent chapter! Smiling

The Vixen's picture
Devotee

I like Barik. He reminds me

I like Barik. He reminds me of some other literary figure, but I can't think of whom, maybe someone in Harry Potter. I seem to be re-using a mental image...

anyhow, he seems like a really sweet person.

"The hammer is my penis."

NoodletwigMeow's picture
Devotee

heeheehee

"Oh, I'll owe you several"
One of the best lines evar.

Another great chapter, Mei! ^_^ Thanks for working so hard on these; it really shows.

ETA: Why -isn't- Winmer married...?

Professional lurker, at your service. ^_^

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

Just throwing this out there, but...

Why aren't MOST "confirmed bachelors" married?

"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."

Oddfish's picture
Devotee

I wonder if that's consistent

I wonder if that's consistent in this universe. I mean, it's considered manly to prefer men, like Mathanus told us, so would it be such a scandal for a man like Winmer (Assuming, of course, Winmer is of such a persuasion) to have a companion? Of the live-in, public sort, anyway. Which makes me wonder what the general ground rules are for getting hitched, both for the upper and lower classes. I don't think I'll wander off on that just yet, though, because if I do it'll get reeeeal wordy.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

it's rather ancient Greeky

If you are the oldest son, especially, you're getting married and having kids whether you like girls or not. It's a patrilineal society, and everything passes to the oldest son. Winmer is almost certainly not an oldest son. And it doesn't necessarily mean he's gay; it means he chooses to remain unmarried. We have yet to learn more about Winmer, and while I have my ideas, I'm not going to expound on them here.

Heterosexuality is considered the "common" choice for love and sex, and among the lower classes very much the norm. It's partly why Temmin has this expectation; he spent more time among the lower classes than the upper classes. But the exalted, idealized choice among the upper classes is male homosexuality. Male relationships are considered more spiritual, more cultured and in every way "higher" than heterosexual relationships and especially female homosexual relationships. (This isn't me, this is Tremontine society.) Even men who don't have the tendency to enjoy sex with other men often indulge in romantic emotional attachments to men, rather in the courtly love vein.

I'll write more about Tremontine expectations of masculinity, but not in comments.

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

That reminds me-

I'm in a production of Lysistrata this weekend; in brief, it's about Grecian women who get fed up with the Peloponnesian War, and withheld sex from them to force them to make peace. It's absolutely hysterical, but I always ask myself; would that really have worked? I mean, with all those handsome young Grecian men running around, who would have needed women? And aren't you not supposed to spill your "potent seed" during time or war anyway?

"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Hilarious play

I think, since it's an actual ancient Greek play, it shows that no matter what the ideal was, most men liked playing hide the pickle with girls. Not all men, and not the same men all the time, but generally speaking they thought girls were teh sex. That's kinda the Tremont position, too.

Qendrix's picture

Some of us

Some of us are just picky I guess. But in my case I'd say I'm too nice and polite, which equates to boring in most women's books. But I am working on it and trying to be more exciting. *holding out hope*

Sig? No thanks, I don't smoke.

TheFerret's picture
Devotee

NO GIVE UP!!

Some of us still appreciate a well-bred man!!!!! (sorry, already snagged mine)

If guns are outlawed, can we use swords?

A's picture
Postulant

unless I'm totally missing the question,

"confirmed bachelor" is code for gay, gay, gay.

There is the rare hetero guy who never met his mate, or whatever, but I 've only known two of those my whole 36 years, and one of them, I'm not too sure was hetero.

Heterosexuality is not normal, it's just common. --Dorothy Parker

Serena's picture

I think there are a fair

I think there are a fair number of men who like women but don't want to commit to just one.

A's picture
Postulant

those are called Playboys

not confirmed bachelors

Heterosexuality is not normal, it's just common. --Dorothy Parker

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

because

Because they don't WANT to be. Sticking out tongue

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Seth Gray's picture
Devotee

Oh, Teacher

Not a cliffhanger ending, but I loved the last line nonetheless.

Sex, gays, and violence--Dead Boyfriend by yours truly. Volume One finished!

Andrea's picture
Postulant

Ooh, now this is a curious

Ooh, now this is a curious scenario. So Teacher wants Fen to be Temmin's secretary. It looks like Teacher is trying to bring as many normally-raised people into Temmin's future court (or whatever you'd call it) as possible.

Capriox's picture
Embodiment

I think so too. Ooh, and it

I think so too. Ooh, and it occurs to me that being a commoner also gives Fen the advantage of not having conflicting loyalties what it comes to politics - he's outside the whole noble system, so not a part of any internecine feuds or power struggles, etc. that might threaten Temmin.

Supreme Minister of All Livestock

"Use, do not abuse. Neither abstinence nor excess renders man happy." - Voltaire

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Winmer is a commoner

Secretary was originally a political post, but subsequent generations realized that having someone in the nobility controlling access to the king mightn't be such a great idear.

Stormy's picture
Postulant

Though it was a little throw-away line

This:
"Sedra was closeted with Brinnid again."
makes me very happy. And I think I"ll have to go the opposite way of Marri: Poor Fen! Laughing out loud

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

But...

good for Temmin and maybe Fen's brother! I wouldn't want to be Fen, but I'm excited to see what comes of this!

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

I'm also wondering if Teacher

I'm also wondering if Teacher knows about Fen's brother and wants to bring him closer to Temmin to open his eyes to other things that are going on in the kingdom. I think his friendship with Fen will do him good.

manoki's picture
Supplicant

Teacher knows everything

'nuff said.

Serena's picture

Teacher didn't notice Sedra's

Teacher didn't notice Sedra's forays to the Traveler camp for quite some time -- he found out after Temmin did, I think.

raecchi's picture
Devotee

I find Barik's line, "“I told

I find Barik's line, "“I told you everything you need to know when I touched you," unbelievably hot, and I'm not entirely sure why. I guess I like them (ahem) a bit cocky.

TheFerret's picture
Devotee

Yay Fen!

Moving back up - always good to see the good guys going back where they belong!!

If guns are outlawed, can we use swords?

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

this is why

This is why I check this RSS feed incessantly.

Expertly done. I think I enjoyed this chapter more than most, and I'm not entirely sure I know why. I did enjoy the multiple perspectives. The transitions were neatly handled.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

Same here

There was no big highlight - except perhaps for the "Fen will be Temmin's secretary" bit, which is squee-worthy in its own right - but there were so many little things that made this a very pleasant chapter to read: Temmin's assessment, Barik and Bessa, the interplay between Jenks, Teacher and Temmin, the banter between Teacher and Winmer...

Yes, a very pleasant and satisfying read. Smiling

Serena's picture

transitions

TheBoy wrote:
I did enjoy the multiple perspectives. The transitions were neatly handled.

I also enjoyed the multiple perspectives, but at the part when Anda and Temmin walked away down the hall and the point of view remained in the room, I had to read that paragraph twice before I understood. The subsequent paragraph cleared up the situation for me.

Also: yay Fen! I love hearing about him. And Arta too, but we haven't seen any family intrigue with her.

Andrea's picture
Postulant

Aha!

Here's where Temmin first met Barik, in case anyone else wanted to reread that chapter:
http://www.meilinmiranda.com/two-kingdoms-ch-33

::sigh:: Okie, no more procrastination... I guess I have to go study now.

Capriox's picture
Embodiment

Very good! It has all the

Very good! It has all the usual - Temple fun, poor Temmin being adorable as he's prodded into growing up, and a dash of intrigue (fairly benign in this case). Congrats on beating another enjoyable chapter out of the uncooperative muses, Mei =)

I wonder if Teacher knows about Fen's brother being a young agitator of sorts?

Supreme Minister of All Livestock

"Use, do not abuse. Neither abstinence nor excess renders man happy." - Voltaire

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

I really did enjoy

a lot of the parts of this chapter. The moment between Barik and Bessa actually made me stop and just daydream for a while. It was nice. Eye-wink And Temmin is still adorable, all the time. Teacher's going to have to beat the cute out of him before he can really be King.

"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."

NorthwoodsMan's picture
Embodiment

back rooms...

Mei, the things you leave to the imagination! Though it's understandable how Anda would be disappointed in Berek's decision. Though those that work hardest, get the best reward. On another note, it's nice to get a glimpse into the Teacher's duties, epically his behind the scenes finagling.

PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals

A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.

Daymon's picture
Petitioner

Teacher always plays a long

Teacher always plays a long game, and he has been waiting for Temmin for a long time. For one of the royal family to have magic again. Looks like Temmin needs to learn how to schedual what time he does things.

Good chapter MeiLin.

Qendrix's picture

Just got it

Okay it took me a while to understand why Anda was all ticked off, but I finally caught on. *sigh* I swear sometimes I am as innocent as Temmin is about these things.

Sig? No thanks, I don't smoke.

IEGeth's picture

Its been a while

Its been a while, but I have to say that this chapter included some excellent character development.
Also, the scene between Temmin, Jenks, and the teacher was a real gem. At least the Teacher insists on trying to get Temmin to at least a small degree of self-sufficiency.

“In food, as in death, we feel the essential brotherhood of man.”
-Vietnamese Proverb

MeiLin's picture
Most High

I'm glad you guys liked this

because it sure was hard to get out!

Capriox's picture
Embodiment

Mr. Winmer vs. Master Winmer

Okay, this is a bit nitpicky, but upon re-reading this chapter yet again, I realized that in the last scene with Teacher, Fen, and Winmer, Fen & Winmer address each other as Mr. Wallek & Mr. Winmer. I thought Tremontines used the more formal construction "Master Wallek" and "Master Winmer"? Although Fen being a low level servant, perhaps he'd get a more informal address, if any.

I only mention it because I remember something about Mrs. versus Mistress in the bonus stories dealing with whats-her-name that ran the brothel where the Obbys came from.

Supreme Minister of All Livestock

"Use, do not abuse. Neither abstinence nor excess renders man happy." - Voltaire

MeiLin's picture
Most High

nope

It's Mr and Mistress.

Capriox's picture
Embodiment

Thanks, MeiLin (and for your

Thanks, MeiLin (and for your response to my other comment too). I can be dreadfully oblivious sometimes, so it's lovely to be enlightened promptly & kindly.

I'm not looking forward to all the Ansella/Harsin stuff in the next chapter - Temmin, and especially Temmin/Jenks/Teacher is still the heart of this story for me! Although I do admit I wouldn't mind getting to spy more on Brinnid & Sedra right now - closeted together? Indeed, do tell! ;-D

Supreme Minister of All Livestock

"Use, do not abuse. Neither abstinence nor excess renders man happy." - Voltaire

MeiLin's picture
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Harsin/Ansella are not up next chapter

They're up next BOOK--book 3, "The Last Royal Mistress," which may not be what you think it's about. Eye-wink

V's picture
Embodiment

I bet

it's Ibbit Evil I also bet I'm wrong, tho, so calculate your own odds. But still, it's a plausible twist on "aha! I have out smarted them!"

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

my guess:

That the mistress -is- royal, rather than the fella.

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Ladyinahat's picture

I agree with the idea that Tremin's rule will be very...

from the people, for the people. Meaning that Teacher has it up his sleeve that his rule and the people around him are going to be very down to Earth. Not some nose in the air do what I say because I say it type rule. But there will be a lot of thought and real decsion making put behind everything.

Great Chapter MeiLin! Thank you

Someone's picture
Devotee

Marvelous

This chapter was simply fantastic. All the different elements just fit together /so/ well.

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Nye's picture
Supplicant

Delicious!

Bessa gets a Daddy, Temmin starts to catch on that his vacation is over. And a nice surprise! Fen as a secretary.... I can almost see it. That adds a whole layer of intrigue, though. Can Winmer fight, too? Seems Teacher is surrounding Temmin with bodyguards, and always has been.

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

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A pequiliar profession

Although, I found myself chuckling -- I suddenly wondered, perhaps, if being a renown pugilist might come in handy with particular clerical work. If for no other purpose than social engineering. "No, no, I said punch cards."

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I loved this but...

I loved this chapter. Absolutely adored it! I completely understand where you're coming from on the homosexuality perspective (although I wouldn't have found it to be notable among the up and up as it were, it's not mentioned that much), as I am a fan of the Greek time period in general.

And they way you're bringing in so many different elements of sexuality into one story is completely facinating! We're dealing with power plays on many different levels, and you take the time to explain it in story, rather then provoke internal termoil with the characters. You truly have a skill with this. I'm jealous! But just the simple acts of learning the body itself proves impressive.

Now, I have two questions. I know we learned that the little glowly sign can prevent pregnancy, but since it comes at a price or maybe a lot of people don't know of it, but what, if any, other forms of protection do they use in Tremont? Or is it one of those things where the poor just keep making more kids and the rich know better somehow?

And, while I loved this chapter, I just need to know... What's going on with the King and Queen?! It's driving me nuts!

MeiLin's picture
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i haz answers

What's going on with Harsin and Ansella:
The next book deals extensively with the Harsin/Ansella relationship, among others.

Birth control:
Both the Lovers' Temple and the Sister's Temple teach women charting. (Those two Temples do a great deal of work together for perhaps obvious reasons. They are across the Promenade from one another, but at every Lovers' Temple there is a delegation from the Sister's Temple and vice versa, just not back in the staff areas.) This is more successful in the middle classes than the lower classes. Prophylactics are available, but they're expensive enough that they get rinsed and reused. I know, ew, but srsly, they used to do that in Victorian days.

Apart from that, there are Mother's Houses for a reason.

Someone's picture
Devotee

Birth control

I take it that the magical 'marks' we've seen are so phenomenally rare (and expensive) as to be almost not worth thinking about?

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MeiLin's picture
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marks

Because almost everyone can't see them (you must be magically attuned), it's easy for nonmagical people to sell you a mark, do some boogety-boo, and send you on your way. So half the time, marks don't work because they're not really marks. A good 90% or more of the marks Travelers sell aren't really marks; the only one who can actually make a mark in the whole world is the Traveler Queen. It also leads people to doubt magic.

Vandole's picture
Postulant

Female Magic

Was the female magic once more commonplace? If so, what happened to it?

I'm no end table, I'm a nightstand.

A's picture
Postulant

for some reason

The "Secretaries are not a monastic order" line is the one that really makes me grin in this chapter. Funneh! Teacher is so dry and witty, there's more than a bit of Mei infused into the Teacher, methinks. Bit of an alter ego, there?

Heterosexuality is not normal, it's just common. --Dorothy Parker

MeiLin's picture
Most High

dry and witty?

I'm dry? Witty I'll give you Eye-wink, but dry?

TheFerret's picture
Devotee

Fell on the floor laughing

Finally. Ok, so it took somebody else finding that line funny to make it uproarious to me.

And, yeah, dry. Teacher def very very very dry. Mei...yeah.... I can see it.

If guns are outlawed, can we use swords?

MeiLin's picture
Most High

A knows me IRL

So who knows, maybe I am this dry, witty, urbane thing--so dry and so witty I escape even myself...

ETA: I'm glad you guys found that line funny. It tickled me to write it.

april.raines's picture
Petitioner

Liking more Fen

I'm glad there's more Fen. Reading the above comments were interesting. My take was that Teacher's sudden promotion of Fen had something to do with the 'Wallek' incident and Temmin's interest in that. Though I do like the idea of Temmin having a secretary who's a good friend. Jenks won't be around forever, sadly.

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