Chapter 40 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself
Killing Magic, Lost Bequest
What are you doing here?” said Temmin warily. “What have I done now?”
“Nothing, your highness,” said the Teacher mildly. “You have some time before dinner. I thought you'd like to hear more of the story since I stopped in a rather tense moment. You seemed rather agitated about being left hanging. Is this not a good time?”
“I was rather hoping for some time alone, if you must know,” said Temmin testily.
“I should have thought that tea with your fellow Supplicants would have obviated the need for 'time alone,' your highness,” said the Teacher.
“Shows what you know,” grumbled Temmin, blushing. Even so, he did want to know what happened, and perhaps it would take his mind off tea. He stumped over to the library table, sat down and opened the book expectantly.
On the walls of the castle, cheers had broken out when Henrik's arrow had hit its target. “You should never have been able to pierce his armor, especially at this distance! How did you do it!” said Lord Barle, slapping Belleth's back.
“I told you, family heirloom,” said Belleth shortly, his face dark. “He might be alive now, but he won't be for long.”
“You say it as if you're sad about it! Henrik, you've just saved us!” shouted Lord Leutefloss happily. “His men won't follow the Sairish bitch! We've won!”
“We'll see,” said Henrik moodily.
Meanwhile, Ilhovin lay in his tent, his face pale. His armor had been carefully removed, but the arrow remained in his shoulder; the healers couldn't break its shaft. “I don't know what wood this is,” said the first of them to Eldest Brother Annert, “but it's nothing I've ever seen. This is a troubling thing, Brother. He should have awoken long before now. This is no ordinary arrow, and I fear for the king.”
When Ilhovin finally came to, Wallek was there. “What news?” he said weakly.
“The trebuchets were not badly damaged at all. We're making repairs and will be ready to use them to assault the castle walls tomorrow,” replied Wallek. “The men are holding steady and are more determined than ever to end this rebellion.”
“Wallek--Mihall--bring me my mirror. I need to see Macca.” Wallek brought the small mirror Ilhovin's servant kept with him. “Show me my wife,” he said.
At the Keep, Macca had dropped off in her chair before the fire, with Nowa spinning quietly at her side. The Teacher watched over them both, and the mirror set up near by; it began to shimmer, and the Teacher stood up, saying, “Ma'am, we have some word.”
Nowa gently nudged her, and Macca woke up instantly. “Ilhovin? What is it?” The image cleared, and Ilhovin's ashen face appeared. Macca cried out, “What's happened? He looks hurt! Teacher, what's happened?”
“Lady Nowa, fetch cloaks for yourself and the queen, quickly,” said the Teacher, lips compressed. Nowa hurried off, and the Teacher helped Macca from her chair. “We will go to him immediately, ma'am.” As soon as Nowa returned and helped Macca into her cloak, the Teacher took their hands and pulled them through the reflection to Ilhovin's side.
“Harla help me!” whispered Macca, taking in the arrow. She dropped to her knees and took Ilhovin's cold hand in hers, kissing it. “Hov? I'm here, it's me.”
He opened his eyes. “Hello, love. Wallek says we're winning,” he said with a faint echo of his lopsided grin. “Oh, don't cry, sweetheart,” he added as Macca burst into sobs. Behind her, Wallek put an unconscious hand at the small of Nowa's back as the queen's lady began to cry herself.
“What happened?” demanded the Teacher of the Eldest Brother. “How did he get in range of an archer without his armor on?”
“I would put my own naked body before him rather than let such a thing happen,” said Annert stiffly. “He was neither in range nor out of his armor.”
The Teacher turned back toward the pallet where the king lay. Annert didn't think it was possible for that white skin to go any whiter, but what little blood was in the Teacher's face left it. “Oh, gods, no.” The Teacher kneeled down by the queen and examined the arrow, whispering, “No, no, no. This shouldn't exist!”
“What shouldn't exist?” said Macca sharply. “You will tell me!”
“This arrow. I thought these had all been destroyed! I destroyed these 400 years ago!”
“Apparently not!” she said angrily.
“Please,” said Ilhovin faintly. “Please don't fight. I need you both to listen to me.”
“I'm sorry, Hov,” she said quietly, tears tracing down her cheeks.
“Listen to me, Teacher,” he said. “Listen to me, everyone. I am dying--”
“No,” soothed Macca.
“Yes,” he said. “I am. When I lose consciousness, the queen is my regent. When I die, she is my son's regent until he reaches his majority. You will obey her as you would me. Teacher, will you recognize her as my regent?”
“Yes,” nodded the Teacher gravely.
“Will all of you present serve the queen as you would myself and my son? Swear!”
“We swear,” came the rumbled reply.
“It doesn't matter,” said the queen desperately. “You won't need a regent! You will live, and our son will be born, and you will live!”
“Macca,” Ilhovin whispered. “I love you. I will always love you, even after the Bloody One comes for me. Be strong for our son. Name him Harsin for my grandfather, and Creithig for your father. Tell him I loved him. I--I have to rest now, love.” He closed his eyes, and his chest still rose and fell with his breath.
Macca let go his hand. “Leave us,” she said to the assembly. Wallek and Nowa led everyone from the pavilion. Teacher turned to follow them. “You, counselor. Stay,” said Macca. She waited until everyone was gone, and then said, “What is this thing in my husband's shoulder?”
The Teacher grimaced, and for the first time Macca saw tears falling from those pale gray eyes. “I made it--we made it, the Traveler Queen and I. We made a quiverful of them 400 years ago, specifically to pierce armor I had enchanted. When the need for them passed, I destroyed them. Or thought I had.”
“Did you,” she hissed. “This is how you serve your king, with lethal carelessness? ” The Teacher didn't answer, but looked at the floor. “The arrow is in his shoulder. How is it that such a wound is killing him.”
“Because the arrow is enchanted for more than the piercing of armor,” the Teacher said, just above a whisper. “It is enchanted to poison the blood. There is no way to save him, ma'am.”
“Oh, yes,” said Macca, laughing bitterly. “Oh yes, there is. And you will find it!”
“No, ma'am. I cannot. Men's magic has no effect on living things, you know that.”
“You will find this Traveler Queen, then! If her magic is poisoning him, then her magic can cure him!”
The Teacher's head shook. “She is not within my sight. At this time of year, she is in Alzeh, to the south, out of our borders.”
Macca stared. “Your arrow is killing him, but you can't cure him. You can't fetch the one who can cure him. What possible use are you!” she cried.
“I often wonder,” said the Teacher quietly.
Macca slapped the pale cheek. “Bastard child of a bastard mother! You will do something!”
“All I can do,” said the Teacher, finally looking into the queen's eyes, “is protect you and your son. And I will do that, ma'am.”
“Just as you promised to protect my husband?” The Teacher gave no answer. Macca paced slowly up and down, rubbing her bump; the baby was kicking, little jabs that usually made her smile, but now brought only anxiety. “What happens to his magic?” she finally asked. “Surely it won't pass to the baby?”
“No,” said the Teacher. “It cannot pass to him before his birth.”
“It's at least two spokes yet, though! What will happen if Hov dies before he's born!”
The Teacher paused. “I'm not entirely sure. There is no one in the king's line to hold the magic. And so I believe it will pass to me.”
“To you,” said Macca flatly. “The magic--all of it--will pass to you. Will my son take it back?”
“No. Once it's come to me, it will stay with me. None of the men of the line will ever have it again.”
Macca studied the pale face with an intensity that made even the Teacher squirm. “This was your plan all along, wasn't it, counselor?”
“Believe me, your majesty, it was not. I don't want the magic I have. You must know that's true. He's told you, hasn't he? Ilhovin has told you my story, though I made him swear he would not tell anyone.”
Macca nodded slowly, her eyes hard. “Yes. Yes, he did, and I have kept my promise not to tell anyone, not even Nowa. But if you are all I have now, Teacher, to protect myself and my son and this kingdom, I swear to you that I will make sure you are never set free for this. Never.”
“Never is a very long time, your majesty,” said the Teacher, voice shaking.
“Yes,” agreed Macca. “Yes, it is.”
Macca sat vigil that night with Wallek, Nowa, Teacher, Annert, Lord Whithorse and Lord Kellen, but Ilhovin never woke up. Toward dawn his breathing slowed, and finally stopped. The prophecy was fulfilled, and Macca began her long, lonely regency on that ridge above Agrin Fields.
Temmin was silent for a long time after coming out of the story. He was not surprised to find tears in his own eyes, but when he looked up, he was shocked to find tears in the Teacher's eyes as well. “It was my greatest mistake as this family's counselor,” said the Teacher, head shaking. “I still grieve. I will leave you now, your highness.”
Temmin stared out the darkened window until Jenks came in. “Not even a candle, sir?” said the valet, lighting a lamp.
“As within, so without,” said Temmin. “I've had a rather emotional day, Jenks. Can you see to getting me dinner here? The last thing I want is to wrestle myself into my evening clothes and go be civil to my family. The very--last--thing.”
“Of course, sir,” said Jenks, concerned. “Anything I can help with?”
“No,” said Temmin, shaking his head. “I'm afraid you're about 360 years too late.”
The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.
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Whoa. Brutal.
Whoa. Brutal.
...
;-;
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So this is how the magic passes on.
I wonder if it really did all go to Teacher. It seems more logical for it to return to the land (fertile fields, fickle fae and free-roaming freaks galore!! *cough*), but the entire thing of how Teacher is linked to it all is still up for speculation.
Well
I've been wondering what's up with the Teacher. I'm glad we're finally getting something!
Now I'm curious
as to how Temmin seems to have the potential to get it back. Scary mirror-teacher visions?
"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."
Ditto
I'm especially curious about how cyclical it all seems. Temmin the first, versus Temmin the present. I wonder if the magic doesn't have its own cycle, that just won't be denied. Meh. I've been hooked for months anyways. This is going to get good, though.
Trust everyobody, then cut the cards.
-Anonymous
I would not want to be
I would not want to be Belleth right now for anything.
zing. Wow. Macca is -cold-.
zing.
Wow. Macca is -cold-. I like it.
It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan
you ever dealt with a mama?
Worst thing you can do is threaten the safety of a mama's kids. Macca feels a very lethal threat headed her way. She can't afford much sentiment. If you think this is bad, wait till Tuesday.
But
I dun wanna wait til Tuesday.
can't rush this stuff, sweetie
Plus also, I don't get paid enough to work that hard.
I know
But it doesn't mean I want to wait any more than I did
*gasp*
Once I am somewhat recovered from the scene with Hov & Macca, I will find myself wondering what need there was centuries before to create arrows to pierce armor the Teacher had enchanted....hmm...
This is so sad.
Temmin's getting perspective though, and that can't be bad, can it?
On a completely different note: So this means that 760 years ago the arrows were made, and the Traveler Queen was involved. Oh man, I hope we eventually find out when/how the Teacher stopped being able to go near the Traveler Queen!
By the way, I've been lurking since forever and finally caved and got an account. I love the story, Mei - keep up the good work! It gives me something to look forward to
Bad move, Henrik. Bad move.
I have a feeling that whatever ferocity Macca is releasing on Teacher is going to come down double on Henrik. But still, what Macca says... Does this mean that Teacher wasn't bound to serve the royalty for quite some time already? And is she really the cause of it? This has probably been the most informative chapter yet.
What I really want to know....
... is if Temmin will do his part and tell Sedra this story, or if Teacher does as he said and finds a way to show her himself.
If anything, I could see this bringing Sedra to reconcile with him.
I know I love Teacher all the more for it, he is certainly becoming my favorite
For What Has Gone
I live with sadness in my heart, and dream of lighter times
The weight of all I've seen and done is penance for my crimes
In service I have lived, and oft it seems I shall not die
So ever lives my sorrow, which my quiet eyes belie
There's none shall see beyond the veil I put before the world
Since olden times the banner of my soul is tightly furled
I live to pass my knowledge to the ones who'll hold the throne
And hope they'll keep their hearts and minds less burdened than my own
Offer me not pity; do not say you understand
For a thousand years I've walked this path and kept a steady hand
Upon the pulse of the land I love, and watched as thousands died
While few indeed have ever known how often I have cried
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
At least Henrik feels a
At least Henrik feels a little guilty.
I wonder how long Macca reigned... and how she was going to prevent Teacher from ever getting freed?
It is a hard blow to have all the magic tied to Teacher when his movements are so restricted, and he himself is so restricted. How is it that they didn't count the arrows carefully enough? That doesn't sound like him. A decoy, maybe? What problem was it they were created to deal with?
"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
A week I had to go without being able to read and THIS is where I have to stop?!?!??!
CRUELTY, Mei, CRUELTY!!!
Still love you, for some reason.....
If guns are outlawed, can we use swords?
Jenks!
There might be more Jenks in you than you realize
Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!
hee hee
I think I read your comment 3 times before I "got it". I must still be wiped out but good (2580 miles exactly in 73 hours. Ouch.)
Stories like this are why I would read for days straight on 4 hours of sleep or so and finish multiple books in a week. You know, back in high school, when we only (thought) we needed 3-5 hrs of sleep. The delayed gratification is k i l l i n g me - although, it's really probably killing me less than the nights I spent up till 3am catching up, when I first discovered this site.
If guns are outlawed, can we use swords?
more on Tuesday!
And I think you'll really like it.
So many questions. But what's
So many questions. But what's really knawing at me, what happened 760 years ago, from Temmin's perspective, that would have caused The Teacher to create arrow that could kill his King?
Upside is that having not read this until sunday, I don't have to wait as long for tuesday.
PETA = People Eating Tasty Animals
A failure to plan on your part does not constitute an emergency on my part.
The Story of the Arrow
is an upcoming book.
Speculation abounds
From what little knowledge we have of the period, unless Gethin III managed to get into as yet unknown trouble, the reason for those arrows might be that someone violently objected to the unification of Leutefloss and Tremont. Be that as it may, though, I'm sure it'll make for a great story.
As for Teacher, I half expected the magic to go to him (the other half was afraid it dissipated back to the land). It might explain why Teacher can't leave the Kingdom: the royal magic only works within the bounds of the realm.
Also, how close to the truth are Macca's words about a "bastard child from a bastard mother"? I suspect very close, indeed... I think we need a book about Temmin I. *nods*
Temmin the Great
...is the subject of the very last book, my dear. Sorry. You'll have to wait a very long time for that one.
Then wait I shall.
And enjoy every minute of reading what you grace us with in the mean time.
And the king passes
Poor Macca she lost her love, and now must reign over a kindom and raise a child. And boy do I feel sorry for Henrik when Macca catches up with him. She is going to skin him alive, and maybe everyone else that followed him too.
Looking at history
*a rough analysis*
Current year is 990 KY
The arrows in question would have been made around 230 KY
Warin and Emma married in 166 KY, and their son Gethin took the throne in 210 KY
It is possible that the arrows stem from some conflict that came about over the Tremont/Luetfloss union after Warin died, but 64 years is a long to wait to launch a rebellion. More likely the arrows were made due to some other conflict we just don't know about yet, possibly with Sairland or the Nijan Empire.
As for the why, the arrows were designed to penetrate armor and poison blood. Possibly, Tremont was doing poorly in the conflict in question and needed a weapon to help turn the tide. Also, it is possible the were made for some other more sinister one-shot-kill purpose.
Only time will tell I guess.
I'm guessing that there was a
I'm guessing that there was a conflict with one of the other nations that prompted the creation of the arrows. Probably Grethin, or possibly one of the kings before Warin's time, gifted a set of armor that Teacher had enchanted to the king/emperor/whatever of one of the other nations. When war broke out that forced Teacher to create the arrows.
Also if one of the arrows was used for there original purpose back in 230 KY, Teacher might have assumed that the spent arrow was gone for good, or that its power was spent. He then destroyed the other arrows thinking he removed any possible danger to his king. That leaves 400 years for some disgruntled nobles to find the remaining arrow and put it aside just in case there was a chance for they or there decedents to stage a coop
When you tweeted...
...that this chapter was going to be sad, I had NO idea how sad it would be. I expected Hov to die (as he had to, since this is the story of the Queen by herself), but I didn't realize how much the Teacher's grief would affect me, and how strangely cold I feel towards Macca. You'd think I'd have more pity for her - she loved him, and loved her child. But it hurts me that after everything, she chose to blame Teacher, and not to blame the archer.
I shall not take your tweets lightly again!
that was... moving. i'm
that was... moving.
i'm increasingly curious about Teacher's past...
now, i admit i never commented here, although i've been reading the story for quite a long time, but i want to ask MeiLin one thing. have you perchance ever studied any Slavic language? some of the names --Ania, Nowa, Mihall-- sound (or look) suspiciously familiar to my Polish ear...
Etymology, yes, Slavic languages, no
At least, not in depth. I love the English language, which is a thief of a language--borrowing and stealing stuff from all over the place. When I choose names, I try to find ones that have a commonality among many languages and then alter the spelling just enough to pull it out of the everyday. Or not. I know that "Mihall" and "Ania" are perfectly good (if transliterative) spellings in some languages for what in English we'd spell as "Michael" and "Anya."
they sure are! i was
they sure are! i was especially curious about "Nowa", it is the feminine form of "new" in Polish and is written just like this (though pronounced with "v") and i started suspecting things ^^' especially given that recently i've been encountering slavic (often Polish) words in various places where i didn't expect them at all (like Alice Fox's webcomic and some other stories)...
AND because i'm one crazy linguist
anyway, your story is great. very well written and absorbing. and good for me as a foreigner to learn new vocabulary ;Palso, i'm in love with Issak and i worship Teacher 
Hiyya n!
Always nice to meet another letter of the alphabet. Go get registered and then, years from now, you can claim you were one of the first 26!
Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!
Nowa
is pronounced as written, and I took it from a friend who'd just named her baby a variation of the name.
Ammert or Annert?
What is it? The Eldest Brother seems to go under both: Annert in chapter 37 and 40, and Ammert in chapters 40 and 42. (The wiki has him as Annert for now).
sigh.
Annert is correct. I was thinking about Imbert, I guess. *goes off to correct*...
Huh?
Google fails. "site:meilinmiranda.com Ammert" does NOT find all instances, apparently. There's another one in chapter 43.
Upon further inspection, Google seems to be completely ignorant of chapter 43 as a whole. Whiskey Tango Foxtrot?
I'll find it
It's corrected globally in the manuscript now; I didn't notice that one instance was in 43. Thanks!
I knew he had to die,
I knew he had to die, otherwise it wouldn't be called "The Queen Who Ruled by Herself", and I had a feeling that he would die before the baby was born, but still, it was so hard to read about two people who loved each other so much being forced apart so unfairly.
"The hammer is my penis."
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