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Chapter 38 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

The Battle of Agrin Fields

Temmin thought about the Battle of Agrin Fields all through lunch, wondering if the denigrated eyewitness accounts had actually been true. So much of what he'd been taught had been wrong; magic was real, not a country superstition. Even the stable hands' stories about the Travelers had turned out to be genuine, though he wouldn't put it past them to swindle people anyway. And how many of them actually had magic? So far, he'd only seen the Queen and her son do anything approaching real magic.

He looked up from his turbot to see his oldest sister smiling at him. “What?”

“Nothing,” Sedra answered. “You just appear to be thinking about something other than the plate in front of you for once. I think your studies might be getting to you.”

“Pfft,” said Temmin, returning to his lunch.

But he finished it in silence and excused himself, returning quickly to his study. “Eager again? Keep this up and you will quite turn my head, your highness,” said the Teacher as Temmin hastily fetched the book and sat down. “I'll have to end in the middle of battles more often.”

“You do that enough now! Do get on with it!” said Temmin irritably.

At the Keep, Macca and the Teacher waited anxiously for word. “It will be some time yet, your majesty,” said the Teacher.

“Can we not watch the battle somehow?” asked Macca, cradling her softly bulging belly as they stood before a mirror in her sitting room.

“Only in flashes,” said the Teacher, “reflections from shields primarily. It's rather disconcerting, but I can try. Show me the king,” the Teacher ordered the mirror.

Immediately a jumble of images filled the mirror, all of them focusing on Ilhovin--some close up, some far away, all of them swinging and jostling wildly. “Stop!” said Macca, turning away nauseous.

“I did warn you,” said the Teacher mildly as the mirror returned to placidly reflecting the sitting room.

“It's not enough that you enchanted his armor. Why aren't you there with him?” she demanded. “I would be with him if I could!”

“I was ordered to protect you. I can't go against those orders. And there is another reason.” The Teacher sat on the edge of a table. “When he was born, the Traveler Queen gave him his prophecy. All Tremontine royals have their future prophesied at birth, male and female alike. Your son will have his future foretold in his turn.”

“Prophecy?” said Macca blankly, sinking into a heavily cushioned chair. “Your people really still believe in prophecy?”

“You do not?” said the Teacher. “You are a lay priestess of Harla.”

“It is not prophecy when the gods speak to you directly,” said Macca sharply.

“Has the Bloody One spoken to you, ma'am?” said the Teacher carefully.

Macca considered. “What was this so-called prophecy?

The Teacher recited:

Prince to king, strong and hale
Son to father, foes assail
Friend to foe, end unrest
Killing magic, lost bequest

“I am the only magic wielder in the kingdom besides the king.”

“So you're to kill Ilhovin?!” cried Macca, backing away.

“I cannot kill anyone of Tremontine royal blood. It is impossible. But I fear my magic might be turned against the king in battle somehow. I've even told him not to count on my magical protection of his armor. I confess I don't understand what the prophecy means.”

“How can you not know what it means?” she said. “You're his chief counsel!”

“I thought you didn't believe in prophecy, ma'am.”

“I believe in doing anything I can to help my husband in the thick of battle, Teacher! That's what I believe!”

As she spoke, Ilhovin and his men were sweeping down onto the empty fields. Their enemies held their ground but no one rode out to meet them yet, the rebels' horsemen staying behind the battalions of pikesmen protecting ranks of archers, who began firing into the oncoming charge. The enemy trebuchet crews were ready, and the first stone took down three of the Brothers surrounding the king at once.

“Remember my orders! Let me take the lead!” Ilhovin roared as loudly as he could; he only hoped his cry would be passed from man to man. He spurred his horse forward ahead of his men until he was well in front with only a few Brothers, then quickly dismounted, the Brothers forming a protective half-circle of shields above him but leaving his line of sight to the enemy open.

Ilhovin removed his gauntlets. He scanned the area but knew he would find no open flame among his enemies or his supporters; he had come out knowing he couldn't depend on it, and that he would have to raise his power another way. Instead he put his bare hands flat on the ground and began to feel for the thrumming energy that came from the land. Slowly he pulled it up, like water from a reluctant well, until he felt it pooling in his hands. Around him he could hear enemy arrows thudding into the Brothers' shields, and arrows flying from his own men on horseback, mounted archers wheeling back around to give the next rider a chance to fire, in an endless loop. Ilhovin noted in the back of his mind that his men were obeying him and staying behind him, and nodded with satisfaction before gathering the last bit of energy.

Then, he pushed.

The ground rippled beneath his hands, a wave that gathered strength as it rushed toward the enemy lines. A rumbling, grinding sound filled the air. Chunks of earth flew up and out toward the ranks of enemy archers and the pikesmen protecting them. And still the wave of earth came on. The men before it began to scatter and run, but the wave caught them, flinging them high into the air, some to be impaled on their companions' weapons. The wave hit the trebuchets, knocking one of them against the other like the discarded toys of a giant, and continued onward to the earthworks before Marsury Castle. There it ended, but not before it buried 2,000 archers where they stood and cracked the outer ramparts of Marsury.

When the wave of earth stopped, Ilhovin heard no sound but his own breathing. He had thrown everything into that blow, and he hoped it has been enough. A wild, despairing keening reached his ears. He looked up and realized the rebels were retreating inside Marsury's walls--or what remained of the rebels. Apart from the entire battalion of archers he had buried alive, hundreds of men lay dead in Agrin Fields where they'd been thrown by the wave of earth, bodies broken. Riderless and wounded horses charged through it all, adding their screams to the chaos.

Ilhovin stood up and faced what he'd done. Killing never came easy to him, and this was no different; he was sickened. But he thought of his wife and his unborn son. He thought of his father. And he thought of Henrik, now cowering within the walls of Marsury, and smiled.

He pulled on his gauntlets, pulled down his helm and mounted his horse again. “Let's see how badly broken those trebuchets are, before the archers get their wits about them enough to fire at us from the ramparts!” he called. So badly shaken were the inhabitants of Marsury that Ilhovin's men were able not only to examine the trebuchets but get the toppled one upright again before anyone even so much as fired an arrow at them.

On the castle walls, the rebel lords reconnoitered. “Now what?” said Lord Barle. “Half of our forces are dead. Our outer walls are damaged. Our trebuchets have been captured, and men are deserting. There are goats and cattle in my stables eating my horses' hay! What are you going to do, my Lord Belleth!”

“He's not even bothering to hide,” muttered Henrik, looking down at the king as he moved among his troops, much too close to the walls. “He's just walking around in the open, mocking me. Very well.” He called his lieutenant to him and took a longbow and arrow from him. “I only have one of these. I have to make this shot. ” Henrik examined the arrow closely. It looked old, too old to use; its fletches were ratty, but its shaft was straight.

“What d'you mean you only have one arrow?” said Lord Leutefloss.

“Arrows aplenty, but only one of these. We've had it in the family since the days of Gethin the Third, waiting for just such a moment.”

“Your family has planned rebellion that long, then? How are you going to penetrate his armor--hit him in a joint? That would be a very lucky shot indeed, Henrik, and so far luck is against you.”

“Shut up, Rek. I just need to hit him. It doesn't matter where.” Henrik nocked the arrow, then raised and drew the bow. Ilhovin was barely in range, but Belleth knew he could hit his target. He steadied himself, sighted down the shaft, and let the arrow fly.

Ilhovin fell to the ground with a grunt, the arrow piercing his shoulder straight through his armor.

“Now? You're stopping now?!” said Temmin.

“That's becoming a very tiresome refrain,” said the Teacher severely. “I have to stop somewhere. If I told the entire story at once you would waste away and die from lack of food and sleep. Besides,” the Teacher added, “it's time for tea. I believe you have guests waiting for you?”

“Oh!” said Temmin, “that's right! I do! Where's Jenks?”

The valet entered as the Teacher retired. “I suggest you comb your hair, your highness, and at least put on your jacket,” he said.

Temmin dashed into the bathroom and splashed his face, then straightened his hair and shrugged on his jacket. “Do I look all right?”

“Retie your cravat, sir, and even I would call you respectable.”

“Good, good! Now, what are we laying on for the ladies' tea? Why haven't you set the table?”

“Here, sir?” said Jenks blankly. “I made arrangements elsewhere. I assumed you'd want to entertain them properly. Tea's set up in the Blue Salon.”

Temmin deflated. What was the purpose of having two Supplicants from the Lovers' Temple come for tea that far away from his bedchamber? Well, he thought as he walked to the Blue Salon, at least he'd be able to ask them about his upcoming Temple duty.

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TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

quite nicely done. I somehow

quite nicely done. I somehow doubt that this earthworks is the "killing magic," but hell. Could be...

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MeiLin's picture
Most High

the killing magic

is in plain sight.

eloriane's picture
Devotee

Could it be the arrow?

Could it be the arrow? That seems to be some pretty impressive killing magic, which could have interesting side effects. Especially since the heir isn't born yet. Where will Hov's magic go when he dies? And does the arrow's magical cause of death complicate the transfer of magic? Or was it part of their plan (and part of the arrow's powers) to end the magic?

ARGH! It's time for a new chapter! Right now! I can't stand the suspense.

Beebalm's picture

*grumble*

Isn't this around the right time for magic to disappear from the royal line? Must go find that date again.

Beebalm's picture

Dates

*grumble* Found the date that magic stops in the wiki, it's 632. And in chapter 35, 631 is right before Macca becomes pregnant. Boo!

Poor Hov, it sucks to be a tragic figure.

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

Prophecies suck...

...as their meaning usually only becomes clear in hindsight. I kind of understand why Brinnid seems to pay so little regard to them...

Anyway, the "Killing" in the 3rd line doesn't need to be an adjective, it could be the verb in that someone/something is killing the magic. Still, that arrow is mighty suspicious. It has, at that point, been around for 350 years at least, seems to be magical, and seems to be purpose-made as an assassination device (posing the question of who, exactly, made it, with the date when it came into possession of the Belleth family set to the reign of the first king of Tremont AND Leutefloss offering lots of intriguing possibilities)

This is getting more interesting by the chapter.

Spie kitteh is Spie's picture

Don't forget

the title of this book is "The //Queen// Who Ruled By Herself"....

I think Hov is dead.... or will be very very soon Sad

TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

concur. I was awful tired

concur.

I was awful tired when I wrote that first comment up there.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
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Kitabare's picture
Petitioner

Ha ha!

Temmin is starting to sound like us, complaining about the cliff hangers. I love it.

Now, what exactly is the nature of that arrow? My guess is it's some sort of anti-magic, magic thing.

NuanaIvy's picture
Devotee

I'm with you!

That's the nice thing about the-story-within-the-story part - Temmin practically IS us!!

Excellent chapter! Smiling

Voyeur's picture

enchanted arrow

enchanted arrow

Lanir's picture

I wonder...

... if anyone ever figures out it was an old family heirloom Belleth just shot Ilhovin with. That's the sort of thing that tends to get whole families murdered. Arranged marriages and peasants with no rights were hardly the worst parts of medieval style cultures.

Katie's picture
Supplicant

seems fairly obvious

to me, at least. I would guess the arrow was enchanted by Teacher at some point forever and a day ago and his magic has now been used to kill Hov, thus fulfilling the prophecy.
Still curious to see what happens with the magic though.

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teehee's picture
Devotee

smart cookie katie!

You know, that sounds about right... glad you thought of it, lady.

Will the magic go to Macca, since she is carrying the child? The period of time after a new ruler comes to power is tumultuous, as evidenced by the rebellion when Hov became king, but imagine what it will be like when a foriegner assumes the throne!

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Gudy's picture
Embodiment

I don't think so.

This arrow doesn't strike me as something teacher would create, or more to the point that the son of Warin the Wise and Emmae would order Teacher to create. OTOH, the royal magic of all those kingdoms seems to stop at the borders of their respective realms, so maybe he did, after all.

And no, the magic can not go to Macca. It goes to the next male royal heir, and apparently Ilhovin is the only one left. Maybe it would go to his unborn child, but it seems to me that the problem might be precisely that this doesn't work, either.

Katie's picture
Supplicant

Maybe not

But, it's already been established that Teacher put enchantments on Hov's armor and decided not to do more than that for fear of it turning back on him, and it's ALSO been established that the king himself put enchantments on all the weapons of his men. So why NOT an arrow?

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Gudy's picture
Embodiment

Just a hunch, really

Teacher simply doesn't strike me as the guy to forget about, or leave lying around, something that is as potentially dangerous to the blood line whose protection is his raison d'être as such a magic arrow. OTOH, both the kings and some of the major nobles closest to the royal line were capable of using magic at the time of Warin the Wise, so this leaves us with a relatively unknown group of people one of whom could have created that arrow (and being close to the royal line would have ample motive to do so) all of whom, including Gethin III himself, I believe would be more likely to do such a thing than Teacher.

Wumingde's picture

problem

the problem is see with the thought that someone other than teacher/thequeen enchanting the arrow is that enchantments disperse when the enchanter dies. at least i asume that that applies to magic in general and not just the kings magic. so unless SirRebel (forgot how to spell his name) has a Really old uncle hidden away in the attic the list of suspects is slim. unless its like a poison on the arrow or somehow enchanted by a god/ess.... hmmm

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

Good point

I forgot about that. Which means that if that arrow has been around since the times of Gethin III and is as magical as we assume it is, either Connin or Teacher must have had a hand in its creation unless it was one of the Gods or Goddesses, and I find that even less likely.

Color me puzzled.

Kunama's picture
Petitioner

Now?

You're stopping now?!

And I foresee a chapter or four of the present timeline to happen before we return to the battle too!

*sulks morosely at a massive hairball*

Paizleigh's picture

<insert :jawdrop: here>

“Now? You're stopping now?!” said Temmin.
I agree- That was probably the worst place EVER to stop (the best if you were looking for a killer cliff hanger [. . . >.< no pun intended]). Ah well- At least we're getting farther in teh story , and closer to how Macca became The Queen Who Ruled By Herself ^-^ Thank you for yet another AMAZING chapter. Now- to wait

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Oddfish's picture
Devotee

Lawl?

Did we the readers get zinged a bit by Teacher? Temmin whines about cliffhangers, Temmin whines some more about cliffhangers, Teacher pokes him about it-- have they been reading the comments somehow? Sticking out tongue

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

I'm pretty sure

that we did, at that. Sticking out tongue Nice, MeiLin, not only do you leave us on tenterhooks, but you poke fun at us, to boot! Eye-wink

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MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

Since this about when the magic leaves the line...

I'm going to assume the magic passes to NO ONE, except maybe back into Teacher? Not sure what the properties of the arrow are, but it's clearly gonna mess everything up; along with being able to pass directly through what I assume to be plate armor, it's almost indubitably got some sort of terrible magical suppression/dispersing/absorbing attribute that's not going to end well for anyone.

This is a sad story! Sad

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Daymon's picture
Petitioner

Poor Temmin

He forgot all about the guests he had coming, not to mention that he would need to eat eventually. And we all know how much Temmin loves to eat. It's funny watching him run around the room trying to get ready.

Clare-Dragonfly's picture
Postulant

Tremontine magic

Hmm. First Hov uses fire, then he considers using water, then he uses the earth. So the royal Tremontine magic is connected to the elements somehow. But is it all elemental magic, or is that just the most powerful, or the easiest for Hov to use in the heat of battle?

Yes, that's what I'm speculating about--not stuff about magic and prophecies that is surely going to be revealed in the next few chapters Eye-wink

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Sonja's picture

I think that there have been

I think that there have been too many cliffhangers lately. >.>

Haven't commented in a while, but I'm still really enjoying the story, Meilin.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

believe it or not

I really don't mean to cliffhang. No, seriously. Stop laughing, you guys!

I really don't. But until the very end of this there are going to be many, many things left unresolved, and wherever I stop it's going to be cliffhanger-y until the end because there is so, so much going on.

Katie's picture
Supplicant

waaaaaaaaaait

Do you mean the end of The Queen Who Ruled by Herself, or the end of The Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom?

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MeiLin's picture
Most High

the whole shebang

The History.

Katie's picture
Supplicant

Damn.

Sad Well that's ONE way to keep us reading eagerly for years. Eye-wink But so help me if you lose your steam and never finish the story....

NO PULLING A ROBERT JORDAN, OKAY???

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MeiLin's picture
Most High

I'll do my best

In fact, I'm writing a synopsis of the final story right now, in case I die before I can finish. Is that a real possibility? Well, anyone can get hit by a bus, but I've already died once, for realz, and while I "got better," I'm never going to be 100% healthy. It's why I focus on making money from my own efforts like writing rather than my web development work--the latter is far too much stress. The paid gig has been really stressing me out--it's STILL not done, and I don't want to take another one. I want to focus on this. It's why I've been stressing the "just one dollar" thing. Just one dollar, even a single dollar every few months if that's what you can do, keeps me from having to take paid gigs. It literally prolongs my life. This doesn't stress me. This invigorates me.

In case of my second death, Smiling, Sir has instructions to post that last story. I'm about a third of the way through it. It would be normally spread out over an entire book; I'm just doing a synopsis of the story, without fleshing it out fully. Here's hoping it never gets published. Smiling

Nye's picture
Supplicant

Argh!

I must agree with Temmin and protest ending right there. Dammit, the tenterhooks, they bite.

Seems a special arrow. I don't think it will go over well among the people, though. You'd think some captain would have kept Hov out of arrow range.

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Oddfish's picture
Devotee

Slightly off-topic

Regarding cliffhangers: I can't help but feel the term's being overused. I mean, there is a difference between a cliffhanger and an end. Of course, hats off to anyone who so thoroughly captures an audience that the line gets blurred, but still, we Cheez-Its should calm down before Teacher leans out of the monitor and pokes us.

Wait a minute, that's hardly incentive to whine less... Sticking out tongue

SongCoyote's picture
Devotee

Arrow's Purpose

Regardless where the arrow came from, I wonder whether it is actually being used for the purpose for which it was intended. It is obviously a tool of death (weapons usually are) but it seems far more than that.

Then again, it could be that it is simply a terribly accurate tool for killing, it's enchantment simply helping death along, and it's the timing of its use that kills the magic. Consider: when Hov's father died he had not used his magic in some time, and so had a great deal stored up. When Hov dies he will have expended everything he has, and that lack itself could be what breaks the chain of magic, or at least turns it into a finely-wrought but very delicate set of links instead of mighty binding loops.

All this is conjecture, though; time (and MeiLin) will tell. And soon, we hope!

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

MeiLin's picture
Most High

using magic up

Hov hasn't run out; he can only use so much at once. A blow like the one he struck at Agrin Fields can only be made once in a while. A king's access to magic is finite, though the magic itself is not. A king can only access so much magic at a time. While something like the earth wave dissipates, thus returning the magic to the land, an enchantment on a shield, for example, is active and in place until the object is destroyed, the king removes the enchantment, or the king dies. Every more-or-less permanent enchantment a king works diminishes his access to magic; it's using up his magic bandwidth, to put it in modern terms. Gethin chose to use his magic in enchanting objects, and so he didn't have much bandwidth left for anything else.

Ladyshade's picture

I think it's very interesting

I think it's very interesting that Henrik's family seems to have been planning mischief for a long time.

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GreenGlass's picture
Postulant

Reactions

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *inconsolable wail!*

..................... *sniffle*

No. ;_;

The rebellion is barely routed and he's already fallen. .>_<.

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<|.(

Ilhovin...

Lost Child's picture

Hmm.

For some reason I don't think the arrow is the "killing magic". I could picture the arrwo much better as a means to take the royal magic away from Hov, leaving him more or less defenseless. Otherwise, the magic would just pass over to his unborn child, wouldn't it? Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait till the next chapter...

manoki's picture
Supplicant

yeah, maybe he's just incapacitated

which would allow Macca to rule in his place without his actually dying. But of course, then it wouldn't be ruling 'by herself," would it.

Lost Child's picture

You're right,

and I'm quite sure that poor Hov will die, just... not yet, not by that arrow. But maybe that's just me hoping he will at least see his son's birth.

Donna's picture

Of armor, arrows and magic

When it comes to killing someone in standard armor with an arrow, it's not impossible. Body armor isn't the thickest but it covers the entire body. A suit of armor can weigh anywhere between 50 and 100 pounds on its own. Knights, for the most part, were unable to mount horses on their own because they needed help getting up. That's why if a knight fell off his horse, he was as good as dead since he's turtle himself.

The density of an arrowhead is grater than the density of any one spot of armor on the body, including the rather inefficient chainmail underneath. Considering that density and the velocity the arrow is traveling at, death by arrow through a suit of armor is highly possible. That's not including various infections that could be had if the wound isn't tended to.

In terms of magicking the tip of the arrow, when Teacher mentioned having his magic used against him to thwart the family, and then the mentioning of that arrow, I immediately thought that the magic of that arrow was the Teacher's doing. While he may be relatively immortal, he does still have human qualities and is this susceptible to human flaws. Sedra anyone? I think, at some point, Teacher magnified the death qualities of those bundles of arrows at some point (remember, he has to so what the Tremontine line tells him, if he was told to make a nuke, he'd have to) and they fell into the wrong hands. That's not out of the realm of possibilty at all.

Did this make any sense or am I just blathering? I'm still shaking off anaesthesia. I blame the drugs.

MeiLin's picture
Most High

I hope they're good drugs!

And I hope you're all right! Smiling

We'll see on Saturday, when chapter 40 goes up.

V's picture
Embodiment

Don't ask that!

When you ask if you made sense the engineer in my head forces me to respond.

First--we aren't really sure what armor Hov is wearing--I would guess chainmail or plate.

If the arrowhead and armor are made from the same metal alloy, they will have the same density. Period. If Tremontine metallurgy was sufficiently advanced, more than likely the arrowhead will have a different heat treatment, if steel, and possibly a different alloy. It will be harder and more brittle (prone to chipping and shattering) but that would give it an advantage piercing a softer, more ductile armor, which is designed to give way but soak up more energy (momentum) as it tears. Really advanced armor might be designed to be ductile but with the outer surface hardened--to blunt or shatter the arrowhead and make the impact easier to absorb.

As a side note: armor evolved in response to the threats of the day and lightweight/flexible = good...there are plenty of situations where running around in full plate armor is not your best option.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

Clare-Dragonfly's picture
Postulant

Armor

In Le Morte d'Arthur, the knights are always getting knocked off their horses, and then their friends come and get them new horses (by knocking an enemy off his horse). They don't seem very turtle-like. (Except in that you need at least one to write a paper for Arnie, and oh how I wish someone from my college were here to read this conversation.) And I should say Malory knew his armor and what knights were capable of.

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V's picture
Embodiment

My question would be

in these stories, can we really assume that the knights are acting alone? Reviewing the text here, http://etext.virginia.edu/etcbin/toccer-new2?id=Mal1Mor.sgm&images=image... I see what you mean (try searching on 'mount') but I rarely see any pages, manservants, footsoldiers etc mentioned, if at all. Do they stay out of the battle entirely, or are they omitted from the manuscript because they're just noise on top of the signal--they're so common that they aren't worth mentioning?

Certainly in Ch XVI p.29 you have "But when King Ban was mounted on horseback, then there began new battle" but then you also have "and what good men we lose, because we wait always on these foot-men, and ever in saving of one of the foot-men we lose ten horsemen for him; therefore this is mine advice, let us put our foot-men from us"

A knight may mount a horse procured by his friends, but he might still need 3 assistants to do so.

Random trivia provided without reference: I recall reading that a knight with his weapons, armor, horses, assistants etc carried about the same economic price tag as a main battle tank today, like the M1A2 Abrams. They're also somewhat similar in their roles.

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Clare-Dragonfly's picture
Postulant

Good point

I forgot about footmen/servants/etc.... probably because Malory doesn't mention them. Reminds me of Chaucer bidding one give him a book (modernized because I lent out my Riverside and can't check the wording)... no other mention of servants in his entire work, as far as I know, but they're around, just in the background.

Not so in the History! Which is a delight.

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MeiLin's picture
Most High

Armor, blah blah

I picture it as light armor, not the traditional welded-in-place guys. I should probably get with someone who knows more about it than I do.

Watcher's picture
Petitioner

Prophecies

I find myself wondering, if all members of the Tremontine royal line have their futures prophesied when they are born, what is Temmin's? Or his sisters' for that matter

MeiLin's picture
Most High

yes

But it's not time to know the ones for Temmin, Sedra and Ellika yet. Soon.

Clare-Dragonfly's picture
Postulant

Huh

I think we've heard a little about Temmin's, but I hadn't thought about Ellika and Sedra. I'm intrigued.

Clare K. R. Miller, author of Chatoyant College
http://clarekrmiller.digitalnovelists.com

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