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Chapter 36 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

The First Battle

Lunch, it seemed, would drag on forever, thought Temmin. Why couldn't people just eat and be done with it? But eventually, Brinnid made arrangements with Ellika for another ride in her open carriage that afternoon, Sedra announced that she was having friends to tea so she had best see to the arrangements for it in the Blue Salon, and the party finally broke up. He noticed Ansella pursing her lips at Ellika as she walked down the hall chattering away on Brinnid's arm; his mother gave some sort of significant look to Harsin that Temmin didn't understand. He shrugged to himself and returned to his study.

“Let's pick up where we left off,” he said to Teacher. “There's enough going on in the present that I won't mind some distraction from the past.”

Two days after their picnic, Macca and Ilhovin were eating a quiet dinner in their rooms when a mild commotion in their receiving room broke out. The door finally opened and Teacher stalked in, followed by the chamberlain. “I did try to stop him, your highness,” he said apologetically.

“No need, Teacher is always welcome. You look very full of news!” Ilhovin said after the chamberlain had bowed himself out of the room. “What is it?”

The Teacher looked at the floor and then at Macca and Ilhovin. “You have conceived a son.”

Macca started back in her chair and gave a small, good-natured laugh. “I'm sorry? I think I would be the first to know such a thing, counselor.”

“No, your highness, I would be the first to know. If you had conceived a girl, you would be right--you would definitely be the first to know. But the men of this line are different. I sense them the instant they are conceived. You are carrying a son, ma'am.”

Macca looked at Ilhovin. “He's serious.”

“Very much so,” said Ilhovin. “Have you told the king?”

“No,” said the Teacher, head shaking. “That is your place. I suggest you tell him soon, though. To be quite honest, I'm not sure how much time he has left. I'll leave you to your dinner.”

Macca and Ilhovin sat staring at each other for a long time after Teacher left. “A son,” Ilhovin finally whispered. “Macca! We're going to have a son!” He whooped as he pulled her out of her chair and began to spin her around, then set her carefully on her feet. “Gods! None of that now! Sit down again, darling, did I jostle you too much?”

“Hov, it's a baby, not a piece of porcelainware!” laughed Macca, tears in her eyes. “And I'm a woman, I'm not going to break! When shall we tell your father?”

“I want to wait,” he said, holding her gingerly. “I want to make sure. Yes, the Teacher would know, before anyone. But if something were to happen--”

“Nothing's going to happen,” she soothed. “Nothing. In six spokes we'll have a baby. Hov! The gods answered our prayers!”

Even so, they waited a spoke before they approached Gethin with the news. By then, Macca was sure the Teacher was right; she'd missed her cycle for two moons, certain smells were unbearable, and her stomach often rose up against her, especially first thing in the morning.

Gethin was by now just skin over bones; the wasting disease was close to claiming him, and the Sisters and lay healers could do nothing more than try to keep him comfortable. Most days he sat with Attik. Sometimes Attik would read to him. Sometimes Attik would have the footmen carry Gethin out to the garden and they would talk quietly among the falling leaves of early autumn. But increasingly, they simply lay together in Gethin's bedchamber, holding hands while Gethin slept.

“I'm losing him, Prince Ilhovin,” Attik said sadly the day Macca and Ilhovin came to tell the king. “He's a little further away every day.”

“Maybe he'll hold on a little longer now,” said Ilhovin, watching his sleeping father's face.

“I'll leave you with him,” said Attik, standing up.

“No,” said Macca, her hand on his arm. “Stay.”

Attik sat back down, nodding. “Geth,” he said, stroking the king's cheek. “Wake up, love. Ilhovin's here, with Macca and the Teacher.”

“Hov?” said Gethin sleepily. “Oh, son, there you are. Macca, my daughter. Come sit near me.”

“Father,” she said, taking his hand, for as the years had passed she had come to love Gethin dearly. “We have some good news. We think--we're fairly sure that I'm to have a child.”

“Teacher?” said Gethin, opening his eyes fully. “Have you sensed anything?”

“It's a boy, your majesty,” said Teacher quietly.

“We waited a spoke to make sure before we told you,” Ilhovin added.

“A grandson. An heir. I knew your birth prophecy couldn't be wrong. She said--the Traveler Queen said--you would survive your infancy and carry on the line. I knew she was right. Listen, Ilhovin,” he said laboriously, “now that you'll have an heir, Belleth--will make his move.”

“Father, he's never stopped moving against us.”

“I mean he will launch an out and out rebellion. I was wrong. I should have let you and Teacher have your way. When word gets out that Macca is pregnant he'll attack before the child can be born. Be ready, Ilhovin. I support you in whatever you decide to do. In fact--I may as well--say this now. Teacher, I am losing my strength. When I can no longer speak--I give my son Ilhovin the regency. You will obey him--as you would me.” Gethin lay back among the pillows, pale and spent.

“He's tired now,” said Attik. “I think you'd best go.”

Macca stood and kissed Gethin's brow, as did Ilhovin, and they left Gethin to sleep.

Gethin was right; the news traveled fast, and Belleth launched his rebellion within a week of Macca's news becoming public. Fully two-thirds of the nobility joined him against “the weakling and his Sairish whore.” Ilhovin gathered his loyal lords and the Brothers of Farr and went to war.

“Take advantage of Wallek,” urged Macca. “He is a master of archery on horseback, and he can teach you and your men a great deal.” And so Wallek was elevated from his status as Macca's master of horse, became a cavalry officer and stood at Ilhovin's right hand.

The first skirmish was far too close to the capital for Ilhovin's liking. The Duke of Valmouth had joined the rebellion, and had attacked a loyal garrison of troops at the valley's mouth that had given the duchy its name. The Brother of Farr who commanded the garrison had gotten a messenger through to the capital, and Ilhovin and Wallek rode to the defense of the garrison. He left his father and Macca behind with the Teacher to guard them, and he knew he would probably never see the king alive again; Gethin had lapsed into unconsciousness, with faithful Attik keeping vigil by his side around the clock.

When the royalist forces neared the garrison, Ilhovin and Wallek parted company, each leading his forces up over the passes around the garrison to flank the attackers on the valley floor. The Duke of Valmouth was a vain man who believed firmly in his own military superiority; he insisted no one would ever hazard the mountains, especially “that milksop Ilhovin,” and so he left them only lightly defended. Neither Wallek nor Ilhovin faced any serious opposition, especially Ilhovin and his magic as limited as it was, and none of the defenders were left alive to get a message back to Valmouth.

When they emerged from the passes, they found Valmouth's considerable forces arrayed before the garrison, dug in for a siege. Wallek and Ilhovin were outnumbered and on unfamiliar ground, but it didn't matter; they charged into the rebels, taking them by surprise. Valmouth's siege engines were slowly turned from the garrison onto the Tremontine cavalry, but Ilhovin lit arrow after arrow with magic fire, his own and his men's, and sent them into the timber of the towers. Soon the engines were ablaze.

“The land still recognizes me!” he called to his men as they regrouped for the next charge. “It is still ours no matter who Valmouth bows to!”

But before he could ride back down into the throng, Ilhovin was transfixed by a smashing tide of power, flowing into him like a spring flood. He screamed with grief, for it meant only one thing; his father was dead.

With a sobbing cry, he stood up in his saddle and flung his new power outward, and the valley went up in flames. Those rebels who weren't caught in the immediate conflagration were trapped, their retreat cut off by the fire. A cheer went up from the garrison, but it went unheard; the roar of the flames drowned out all other noise. Wallek, Ilhovin and the forces in the garrison rode out against the rebels, pushing them back against the wall of flames. The air filled with smoke, at first the acrid scent of burning wood and grass, but then the sickly sweet smell of burning flesh. Not one man among Valmouth's forces was spared, and Valmouth himself was found burned almost beyond recognition in the ruins of his pavilion at the back of his army, the only clue to his identity a ring Gethin had given him that was spared by the fire.

“Your highness,” said Wallek when they finally met again in the aftermath, “your magic--”

“My father is dead,” said Ilhovin bluntly.

Wallek immediately dropped to his knees. “Your majesty!” The rest of the company followed his example, and cries of “The king is dead! Long live the king!” rang through the gathered armies.

Ilhovin took his bloodied sword and tapped the still-kneeling Sairishman's shoulders. “I give you this holding as your own, Wallek, for your service and your faithfulness. Stand, Duke of Valmouth.”

It was the first battle in the war, it was the end of 631, and Ilhovin was king.

Temmin shook the book from his shaggy blond head. “I've read about this war. I always thought reports of magic in battles were just the fantasies of the men writing these things up. At least that's what my tutors have always said. Master Harms said they couldn't even properly be called histories, those accounts.”

“I assure you, those accounts are for the most part quite truthful,” said the Teacher.

“But I don't understand. Where did our magic go?”

“That,” said Teacher, “is about to become clear. Now, tomorrow you need to spend some time in the morning before breakfast working on your own fighting skills. Young Fen Wallek has been training without you at the Temple of Farr and has much to pass on to you, I'm told.”

“Oh, Fen! It's been days since I've seen him. Wait--Wallek? Have to be a different family! Descendants of dukes don't end up as junior footmen.”

“They most certainly do, but that is a topic for another day. Here's your tea,” said Teacher as Jenks came in with the tray, “and I shall leave you now.”

“Jenks,” said Temmin after the Teacher closed the door, “do you think it's possible Fen is descended from a Duke of Valmouth?”

Jenks shrugged. “Anything's possible, your highness. My mam always said her great-grandmother was the daughter of the Earl of Kellen, but while mine is a genteel family, we've never aspired to the nobility, sir.”

“Hm. I'm beginning to wonder if that isn't the wiser course, Jenks,” said Temmin.

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

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TheBoy's picture
Embodiment

big grin

Big smile at the finishing quip.

I need a boatload of points now--so's I can ask if Fen is a descendant of Wallek...Ah, well.

It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
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-NorthwoodsMan

thellieem11's picture
Petitioner

I get the feeling

that we'll find that out as a matter of course at some point in the story.

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

The Wiki knows

And from the way this is going, I get the feeling that we may end up learning how that came to pass, too. If not, that might indeed make for a nice bonus story.

As it is, I'm very much looking forward to learning how, precisely, the Tremontine kings lost their magic a handful of years into poor Ilhovin's regency.

thellieem11's picture
Petitioner

Oh Goodness

I shouldn't be ending this chapter in tears! The sudden transfer of magic is so bittersweet and so very intriguing. As much as I want to know how the story within the story progresses, I'm getting the feeling it will be several more updates before we go back to it. I could be wrong, but it seems like every time I want to know more, that's what happens. I hope I'm wrong.

Clare-Dragonfly's picture
Postulant

That magic stuff can be convenient

It seems like it would have been a pain to go all the way back to the capital, find out the king is dead, and then have Ilhovin be king. But they don't have to do all that, and can do it dramatically after a big victory instead!

“But I don't understand. Where did our magic go?”
“That,” said Teacher, “is about to become clear."

Ooh, goodie! Smiling

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Katie's picture
Supplicant

Wonderfully done

For all that battle scenes are difficult to write, that was excellent.

The first paragraph of the Book story has me curious. People usually 'stalk' when they're angry. Is Teacher angry, then, that Macca has conceived a son? Is that maybe because of the Traveler Queen's part in it?

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Oddfish's picture
Devotee

Theories, I haz dem

One, he knows what the political ramifications of this son will be, so he's a little keyed-up. Knowing that civil war is imminent would get to anyone. Two, Hov's assistant-person (Chamberlain? Guard? I don't remember his real title) said he'd been trying to stop teacher from getting in. I imagine Teacher would not take kindly to resistance at the best of times, and when he's gotten wind of soon-to-be catastrophe is hardly the best of times.

NuanaIvy's picture
Devotee

I haz da same theories

Yeah, I agree. I think Teacher is concerned because of the political and war ramifications from this consequence. It was more of a warning than a heralding. Also, can you imagine how jarring that must be? BAM suddenly you know someone ELSE has conceived a son!

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

Yay!

I am always so happy when you update. Smiling It completes my day!

However, I do have to agree with Katie; I definitely got the impression that Teacher is not pleased. This is probably because he knows something we don't, what with this tendency to know/understand prophecies and magic, so the son probably either means ill for Ilhovin or the kingdom. Sad

"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."

MeiLin's picture
Most High

stalking

No, Teacher was pissed that the chamberlain wouldn't open the door. Smiling

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

Oh.

Well, derail that whole hypothesis, then! Sticking out tongue

"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."

MeiLin's picture
Most High

aw, sorry!

Smiling

Nye's picture
Supplicant

Well, things are about to

Well, things are about to come to a head. Poor Hov. I do think it's about time Temmin learned about nobility, though. Younger sons and daughters and such can lose a lot within a couple of generations. It doesn't even take that long with lesser nobility. That's even assuming the family keeps title...

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

Marri's picture
Supplicant

Good for Temmin. Being

Good for Temmin. Being nobility would drive me insane. Nice to see he agrees Laughing out loud

"The worst thing in life isn't to die. The worst thing is to have lived but have missed it."
I will try to be good.

Lanir's picture

Eek... two thirds of the

Eek... two thirds of the nobility... ouch. I kind of had this feeling he should have dealt with Belleth right after he got back. It's so hard to deal with accusations like that. The nobility must have been pissy about something else as well (even if it was just "I'm not as close to being king or as rich as I'd like") for them to go for Belleth's lines the way they did.

Kinda feels like either Ellika or Sedra is about to get spanked. Kinda looks bad if the foreign king has the wrong daughter hanging off him all the time and Ellika's a flirt.

NuanaIvy's picture
Devotee

I read a lot of historical

I read a lot of historical fiction, and it seems that nobility is quite fickle and tends to defect whenever there's an uprising. Moral of the story: never trust nobility.

Blue Coyote's picture
Devotee

grrr

Ohhh, I had said and said that Gethin should have done something about Belleth, or let Hov do something about it. Hmmm, so it wasn't just "he loved his first wife so" as the reason Gethin never remarried. I wonder if Attik is the real reason why the nobles are upset? Just exactly how is homosexuality viewed by this culture? I get some really mixed signals of "it dosen't count" in a people know about it but don't care sort of way. But I'm a little confused(the whole Ansella/Ibbit thing... though that to me is more the misogynist- the king can have all the lovers he wants but the queen has to be locked in celibacy except when the king cares to be porking her).

A's picture
Postulant

Long, drawnout disinformation campaign

If you repeat a lie long enough and loud enough it will eventually be perceived as true. Especially if the king or heir does not open up a can of whoopass and disprove it right away.

Ultimately, and this is what makes it cool, the lie that Hov is weak, though it makes the rebellion possible, is ultimately what made him able to attack with the element of surprise and get medieval on 'em.

Bit like a fairytale...Eye-wink

Heterosexuality is not normal, it's just common. --Dorothy Parker

V's picture
Embodiment

Wow again

This chapter has really kicked off my speculation. I have two questions (that I expect to be answered by the story, not now):

1) How long was Macca the queen?
2) How long did she rule?

Speculation, spurred by Gethin's warning and later the battle: Ilhovin is slain before Macca gives birth. She holds the throne until their son is born, at which point he is crowned as an infant. She rules until he is of age. Plenty of people might want to overlook this "technicality", especially in a chauvinistic society.

Problem: The massive flood of power when Ilhovin dies entering a prenatal infant. Analogy: Frank Herbert's Alia Atreides
Hypothesis: Teacher diverts, captures, reduces it, or the infant simply can't handle it and much is lost.

Also note the following exchange:
“But I don't understand. Where did our magic go?”
“That,” said Teacher, “is about to become clear”

The gears, they are a-turnin'

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

Blue Coyote's picture
Devotee

my thought as well!

That is exactly what I was thinking but didn't have time to write. That Poor Hov is going to die very soon, possibly even before she gives birth, and that Teacher has to take the magic because that much power would kill an infant. It makes for a good tragedy (damn you Mei!) to have only had those happy years at the expense of the loss of her husbands honor and standing, and as soon as she gives what everyone wants-an heir- she loses him and has to rule his wretched hateful country full of spitefull traitors for his memory and their son.
Augh... maybe we could focus on the present for a little while...
Just what does that Ellika think she's doing? Does she really think she'll make Sedra jealous or something by flirting with Brinnid? Sedra is making her point that it is already signed and sealed, it dosen't even matter if he courts her or her sister, it's Sedra's blood that will be displayed like a trophy before smirking nobles.

V's picture
Embodiment

Different perspectives

I love these comments...more than one person has a very different perspective on certain things than I do--credit MeiLin for writing a story that's open to interpretation?

I'm pretty sure Ellika is thinking "Hey! He's really cute, and it's fun, and he's friendly! If Sedra's going to be a prude, that doesn't mean the whole family should" I don't think she's trying any sort of manipulation here.

I also don't see Sedra stewing because she's bitter about the circumstances. Brinnid's a stranger in a strange land, caught in the same circumstances, but he's doing his level best to get to know, and to woo, his future bride. He's been perceptive enough to dig right into Sedra's own little twisted bundle of issues since they stand between him and her heart, and I think she resents being read by a stranger so easily, as well as the digging-in-unresolved-issues thing Smiling Given her reactions to their encounters and his behavior, I still have high hopes for the both of them.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

Nye's picture
Supplicant

Indeed

While the groundwork is there, though, I'm still expecting a curveball

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

Blue Coyote's picture
Devotee

hope springs a turtle

Well I do have hope for them too! Read my other comments, I'm very glad she's not hung up on Connin-the-stalker and pulling an Ansella I-can't -have-what-I-want-so-I'll-make-myself miserable routine. But I do think she is making some sort of statement with her constant ditching of Brinnind. Perhaps that statement is "try harder". Perhaps Ellika is trying her wannaBeloved act again and trying to match-make and give Brinnid ideas/an inside view on Sedra. Can't wait to see either way.
Yes Mei is da bomb for making us all wonder these things.

V's picture
Embodiment

Agree

1) bahahaha @ "hope springs a turtle"
2) Agreed that she could be making a statement like "try harder"...less confidence (which is next to arrogance), more wooing pls k thxbai
3) Ellika...good point, it's not like we expect her promises to the High Lover (or Beloved, I forget) to stop her >.>

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

Neither Wallek nor Ilhovin

Neither Wallek nor Ilhovin faced any serious opposition, especially Ilhovin and his magic as limited as it was, and none of the defenders were left alive to get a message back to Valmouth.

This needs an extra comma...

"especially Ilhovin and his magic as limited as it was," -> "especially Ilhovin and his magic, as limited as it was,"

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