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Chapter 3 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

The 3rd day of Fall's Beginning, in the Year of Our Kings 626

Macca of Sairland stood up briefly in her stirrups, her gray eyes intent on the falcon wheeling overhead. Beside her, she felt Prince Ilhovin shift uncomfortably in his saddle. "What disturbs you, my lord?" she said, never taking her eyes from her bird.

"Disturbs me?" said Ilhovin, blinking. "Why would my lady say I'm disturbed?"

"You sit a horse very well, your highness," she said in her lilting accent.

"I thank you for the compliment," he laughed, "but does that shows an inner disturbance?"

"No," she said, sparing him an amused glance, "it shows you are well acquainted with the ways of animals, yes? A good rider can sense his mount's mood. It's an easy matter for one to use the same skills to sense the moods of those around him. Don't you? I do."

"Shall I attach significance to being compared to your mount, my lady?" said Ilhovin in a low voice, arching a brow.

"I read my dogs and my birds as well as my mounts," she answered crisply. Just then, the beaters flushed something out of the grass. "A grouse, by Palg! She stoops! Wallek!" she called to her falconer. The falcon streaked down from on high and struck the grouse hard, circling back to land the killing blow and bring it to ground.

The party rode up; Wallek dismounted and ran to take the grouse from the falcon, taking her onto his fist and slipping a soft leather hood with a topknot of iridescent green feathers over her head. He brought the bird to her mistress, the jewelled bells on the falcon's legs and tail jingling slightly as she settled on Macca's gloved hand. "I would tell you what a fine bird you are," she cooed as she fed the falcon a bit of raw rabbit meat, "but you don't give a fig or a feather for my opinion, do you, Fleet?"

"Why do you keep a pet that doesn't care for you?" said Ilhovin as they headed back through the forest toward the hunting lodge.

"Fleet is not a pet, she's my hunting partner," answered Macca. "And I don't 'keep' her. She flies free. Fleet stays because she knows with me she always has food, drink and safety. There is affection, I think, a very practical affection. I'm fond of her, at least!" Macca laughed. She tilted her head at Ilhovin. "I'm not surprised you're a little uncomfortable, my lord. I hear you don't hunt with birds in Tremont."

"No, my lady, not for the last 400 years. Nor do our ladies sit astride. When they ride at all, which is rarely, they sit sidesaddle." Macca gave a delicate snort, and he continued. "Though I must say, the trewes, or double skirt, or whatever you call your riding habit, it's very becoming on you."

Macca pretended to ignore the compliment. "I imagine our ways are quite strange to you."

"My lady, Sairish ways are the model for our own," replied Ilhovin. "Sairland is the birthplace of civilization, the very ground on which the classical poets, scholars and philosophers walked. We worship the same gods, though under slightly different names, we speak the same language--in so many ways, Tremont looks to Sairland as a child to its mother."

"And yet, like many a child, you believe yourselves to be greater in understanding than your parent."

"Is there no possibility of that?" said Ilhovin with a smile.

She looked cooly down her turned-up nose. "That Tremont has surpassed Sairland in wisdom?" she asked. "A strange way to woo a princess of Sairland, your highness." She spurred her horse into the stable yard ahead of him.

Ilhovin hung back. "Master Wallek," he said to the falconer beside him, "you've known her highness a long time, yes?"

"Since she was a child, my lord," said the sturdy man.

"My lady is quite dry in her humor. How can you tell when she's serious and when she's jesting?"

"That, your highness," said Wallek solemnly, shaking his head. "is a matter of time and experience. More than that it isn't proper for me to say." Ilhovin turned away, grimacing, and headed into the stable yard himself; he missed completely the grin that broke out over Wallek's good-humored face.

Ilhovin could have used the sight of that grin, though it might have caused him more consternation in the short run. Macca puzzled him thoroughly. Even in his short life he was used to girls going to great lengths to attract his notice. He was, after all, the Heir, and the undisputed one, at that. His mother died when he was 12, and his father Gethin had never remarried, saying prophecy and magic made the health of his one child a sure bet. Gethin never kept mistresses either, preferring instead the company of his closest friend, Attik. As far as anyone knew, Ilhovin was the last male of his line. No close cousins, no illegitimate brothers. No one in line for the throne, but him.

But Macca was not a girl. She was 22, a spinster by Tremontine standards, but not by Sairish ones. She wasn't the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen, but there was something about her that made him press his suit as much for his own sake as for his father's. Sometimes he'd almost swear she was encouraging him, but then he'd do or say something and that dry tone would come to her voice--like old parchment, it was so dry--and he couldn't for the life of him tell whether she was serious or teasing.

He wondered why he cared, but he did. She was so unlike Tremontine girls. Perhaps it was her independence. Perhaps it was how she never gave way in a discussion if she believed herself to be in the right of things. Or perhaps, he told himself, it was that damned confounding dry humor. Whatever it was, she was beginning to intrude on his dreams, and very improper ones they were. He dismounted, still distracted by his thoughts.

"My lady is certainly an opinionated woman, isn't she?" came a low voice at his side.

"Yes, Henrik, that's one word for her," said Ilhovin, turning to the Earl of Belleth with a wry grimace. "I'm not sure what to do. We've been here since Venna's Day, and here we are nearly eight weeks later and we're no closer to sealing either this treaty or this marriage. If I have to spend the winter bouncing off my lady's iron-clad wit I'll go soft in the head. Pagg's Balls, I've never had a girl play so skittish in my life."

"Why bother?" said Hendrik, removing his riding gloves. "We'll conclude this treaty to Tremont's benefit whether you marry her or no, and I certainly wouldn't want to be saddled with a mannish thing like Macca."

"Mannish? I think she's rather pretty, in a Sairish way." Ilhovin began walking slowly back to the lodge.

"Oh, to be sure," said Henrik, joining him. "But in attitude, she behaves as a man would--more like a wild horse that needs breaking to the bit than anything. Come to think on it, Hov, that may be your way in." He stopped the prince with a hand on his shoulder. "If she were a Tremontine girl, what would you do?"

Ilhovin shrugged. "I'd crook my finger."

"And if she resisted?"

"It's never happened, but if it did, I'd remind her who I was. But see here, Belleth, that won't work, we're equal in rank!"

"Ah, but not in all things! In the end, you are a man and she is a girl. You need to remind her of that incontrovertible fact, my lad. Remind her she's a girl and that eventually she must bow her proud head, and you'll have her."

Ilhovin looked at Henrik dubiously. "How many times has that worked for you?"

Henrik strolled into the lodge. "I've never had occasion to try it," he said smugly. "I pick easier targets than her highness."

Ilhovin sighed and followed him inside to the private drawing room set aside for him. On the table before the fire, a cold luncheon was spread--cold chicken, meat pies, cheese, bread and dried fruit. "I can't pretend to be smarter than she is, you know. I'm not exactly addle-brained, but she's brilliant," he continued, settling into a chair by the fire with a plate.

Henrik filled a plate and joined Ilhovin by the fire. They ate in silence. "You're over-thinking it," he finally said. "The one way in which almost every man is superior to almost every woman is physically. And listen, Hov, I've got four years on you. I can tell you categorically that women want to be overpowered. They love it."

"They do?"

"Which one of us is a devotee of the Lovers?"

"Well, you are, but--"

"Hov, if you want to get out of this place before Nerr's Day, I'm telling you," said Henrik, "you have to do something."

"I know, but I especially can't see Macca--what exactly do you mean by overpowering her?"

Henrik shrugged. "I don't know. Just show her who's the Heir."

A discreet knock stopped their conversation. "Beg pardon, your highness," said the chamberlain. "His majesty is ready to resume your discussions."

Ilhovin and Henrik hastily wiped their lips and fingers and followed the chamberlain into the king's study. He accepted a chair to Creithig's right and a goblet of wine from the attendant, who left the pitchers on the table and bowed himself out. In the room with Henrik and Ilhovin were Creithig and his chief counsellor Mellom and several lesser personages of both Tremont and Sairland, graybeards all.

"Ah, Prince Ilhovin! And how did the hunt go? Did Fleet catch us a little dainty for our dinner?"

"A grouse, your majesty," said Ilhovin with a small bow. "Your daughter's way with her bird is a sight to be seen."

"And your way with Macca? Any closer, are we?"

Ilhovin flushed. "My intentions are clear, King Creithig, but hers are not."

Creithig chuckled. "In time you will see your way to her. She likes you, no matter what you might think. Be patient, son. Now. As to the matter of our claim to Belleth, and Tremont's claim to the Far Isles--"

Ilhovin cleared his mind of Macca and focused on the task at hand.

"Why," said Temmin, coming back to the room, "were all my ancestors so focused on love?"

The Teacher gave an amused snort. "This is the 'intimate history' of the family, not the official one. All of it weaves together. The marriages they made, the children they had, the lovers they took all had bearing on the battles they fought, the treaties they made and the decisions that shaped the kingdom. My hope is that by giving you this insight you'll avoid some of their mistakes and come up with creative new mistakes of your own."

Temmin opened his mouth to issue a retort when there was a knock on the door and Jenks popped his head in. "Sorry to interrupt, are lessons done?"

"You're not interrupting," said the Teacher. "We are done until this afternoon."

"Ah, well, there is a young woman to see you, your highness," said Jenks. "A Miss Barrows. She said you'd like to see her immediately."

"Barrows? I don't know any Barrowses, Jenks." Temmin took the card Jenks proffered and read, "Miss Anda Barrows."

Anda? The Supplicant Anda? he thought. Why was she here?

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

Creative Commons LicenseAn Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

Comments

Elle's picture
Petitioner

Wow

Just...wow. I'm almost speechless (not quite, since I'm commenting Smiling ). I think Macca is quickly becomming my favorite character. I can't wait to learn more about her.

And the ending has me on the edge of my seat.

I love this whole story, but this chapter was especially well done.

NoodletwigMeow's picture
Devotee

<3

Love Macca. Ilhovin's gonna be in some deeeeep trouble, though, i think, if he follows Belleth's advice. I hope he has better sense than that.....

Hmm. Why WOULD Anda be there? ... *wonders*

Professional lurker, at your service. ^_^

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

Sound advice

"Remind her she's a girl and that eventually she must bow her proud head, and you'll have her."

Yeah, I can so see that going over well. Evil

I have to agree with Elle - Macca makes for a fascinating character. And also, why is Anda at the palace to see Temmin?

MeiLin's picture
Most High

wouldn't you

like to know! Evil

Cirne's picture

I would, yes!

Thankfully, I find it likely that we'll find out in fairly short order.

Also, I love Macca's characterization. I'm looking forward to seeing how her and Ilhovin's romance progresses!

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

Oh Anda

This whole Anda thing scares me a little. I feel like she wouldn't show up at the castle looking for Temmin unless something really terrible had happened, if only because he's so far above her station. I'm also wondering if things will turn steamy...

Hortaux's picture

-shakes head with a smile-

"Hov, I've got four years on you. I can tell you categorically that women want to be overpowered. They love it."

Arrogant much? XD Ah, Henrik. Don't lead wee little Ilhovin astray.

I enjoyed this chapter because Macca's personality became clear(er), and her chracter is one of the most interesting--- it'll be even more interesting to see how she acts when married to Ilhovin (if that happens at all, although I assume so, if she rules Tremont by herself).

Also, now a future chapter promises Anda, and I LOVE ANDA. :3 I really can't wait to learn about her background history. /excited

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manoki's picture
Supplicant

I had been thinking it was Sedra who ruled by herself

Sedra has always seemed more suited to ruling than Temmin (or certainly Ellika). I was imagining that Sedra married the Sairish King and that he then became disabled so Sedra had to rule even though she's a woman. But maybe it's Macca.

BTW, every time I read that name, I think of George Allen calling someone a maccaca. Kind of taints her character for me.

-Manoki

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

I don't think Sedra likes

I don't think Sedra likes people enough for rule. She might make the right decisions, but I think a lot of ruling is diplomacy, and Sedra doesn't seem to have a solid grip on that. She was surprised when her mother found a way for her to tactfully respond to a potentially offensive gift, and that's the sort of thing that needs to occur to a ruler. Temmin, on the other hand, is a little goofy and immature, but he's 16! He has a lot of training under Teacher left to bring him up to speed (not to mention the Temple's influence), and Jenks can help him with military training, but he has fundamental charisma, and he's not a fool. He just has a little growing up to do, whereas Sedra's bluntness, in a ruler, could start a war.

Temmin has a nice balance of Sedra and Elika's qualities. Elika can't grasp the gravity of a situation (as with Fen), but Temmin can flirt, which implies the potential for diplomacy, *and* he's very empathetic. He's just a little naive (and who can blame him!), and nothing will fix that but time. Harsin doesn't sound like he's going to die any time soon though, and I heard a rumor that Temmin had around ten years to get used to things.

I think Sedra will do well as the quiet voice of reason behind the throne of Sairland, but she has a strong potential to feel out of place with the hunting, riding, pants-wearing adventurous women in Sairland, when all she wants to do is walk by herself in the garden or curl up with a book. Macca seems intelligent, though, so hopefully that will aid her in fitting in in Sairland.

Kaisar Ryu's picture
Petitioner

Fun People

Dry Humor, Instant Quiping, a mind and Wit sharp enough to cut glass, I think I'm in love. (or would be were I to have actualy met Macca.)

A sucking chest wound is natures way of telling you to slow down.

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

Macca vs. Teacher

Macca reminds me a lot of the Teacher. I can imagine that they must have either though well of one another, or had brutal battles of wit (or both).

Katie's picture
Supplicant

Henrik's advice

Maybe Macca is the queen who ruled by herself because Ilhoven took Henrik's advice and she killed him? With words! Sharp, sharp words. Ouch.

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Han-pan's picture
Postulant

Macca is incredibly strong

So I can see her as a woman who could rule by herself. Especially in a given situation where Ilhovin (sp?) is the ONLY Heir, no dispute whatsoever, and if they did not have an eligible child before he died. Perhaps. -shrug- ^__^ But the line might end so that doesn't quite work out. But that's what came to my mind =P

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Daymon's picture
Petitioner

Quite funny

This is a good one, Macca really is a tough person to read. That makes me wonder how he is going to get her affection.

I like the Teacher here, I think this is my new favorite line so far:

Teacher: "My hope is that by giving you this insight you'll avoid some of their mistakes and come up with creative new mistakes of your own."

V's picture
Embodiment

Dry wit

Somehow, this whole chapter makes me laugh. A lot. I love the back-and-forth between Macca and Illhovin, who's clearly a couple steps behind.

Anda? My first guess is that she graduated and is coming to say goodbye (Sad), but my backup guess is that they're gonna show Temmybear that steaming hot sexin' isn't just for the temple anymore.

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

Han-pan's picture
Postulant

Well...

if you'll remember, Allis was very intent that his virginity stay intact. Sooo Idunno! Maybe they'll do other things, yeah okay I can see that. :3 But any more than that and somebody'll be unhappy =P

(PS: WherehaveyoubeenI'vemissedyouD:)

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V's picture
Embodiment

:)

I've been around, just haven't been posting til i have something to say. Oh, then I forced myself not to check yesterday since there wasn't going to be a chapter. Yes, when I posted, I meant the sexin' he's already been getting at the Temple...that is to say, plenty, even without losing his virginity.

Oh, and will we be seeing a post from you in the bonus stories thread soon? Laughing out loud

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

Han-pan's picture
Postulant

Mrao~

Not even in the forum!
Wellp. Ah did miss ya. Was wondering if you'd run off all aLONE and SCARED and oh wait, that's the bunny rabbit...anyhoo ^^

As we have seen, they did do plenty without that =P Though the last move was very interesting, not one I'd've thought up :3

And I did post. I was asleep when the post was made! I'm a sleepy girl =P I don't know what I want!! TT.TT Too many people, too many options. I would think of something with Sedra, but plenty of that is going to be answered over the next book =P SOIDUNNO -gonk-

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Nye's picture
Supplicant

I do like the independent

I do like the independent princess. All keep referring to particularly "Sairish" things, and I wish I had a better understanding of what that entails.

It is a risky thing to challenge a woman like that. All or nothing.

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

MeiLin's picture
Most High

Sairland and Tremont

Sairland is to Tremont what Greece is to Rome, or China is to Japan (both in classical times): The "mother" culture that in some ways is looked up to, in some ways resented and in some ways looked down upon. The Gods of Sairland became/were absorbed by the Gods of Tremont with slightly different names (there will be more on this particularly in a bonus story), Sairish poetry is the model for Tremontine poetry, and so on. We'll see more examples of this with both Brinnid and Macca.

At one time Sairland controlled a good chunk of the continent Tremont now controls, but as Tremont grew and Sairland's power faded it was pushed off the continent. Its last toehold was Belleth (think Normandy and Britain), which at the time of "Queen" was solidly Tremontine but Sairland had a nominal claim nevertheless. At the same time, Tremont had a similar claim to the Far Isles, which switched hands a few times among Tremont, Sairland and independent governments before being put firmly under Sairish control.

kawaiikune's picture
Embodiment

Sairland

I keep reading things about Macca and wondering if they're telling us secret things about Brinnid. It makes me hope that Brinnid is going to like Sedra for her seriousness and quiet strength of character. I can't help but think that if Brinnid genuinely likes and appreciates Sedra, he will make an effort to accommodate her and she will like him for it and be happy in the end. I hope that if they fight at first, they learn a lot from it. I get the impression that Sedra is going to need a lot of advice from her mother. Maybe she should pay a few visits to Allis and Issak. It surprises me that you have to stick with one temple; you would think that those who, like Sedra, are not flirtatious could use the most help from the Lovers' Temple, and so on.

Also, do we know how long it takes to get from Tremont to Sairland? It's clearly a journey, but I'm wondering how impractical it would be for family to visit.

theonefayth's picture

Trip from Tremont to Sairland

Actually, hun, this has been answered in a different chapter's comments.

The Author has spoken thus: It's not close enough for casual visits, any visit made would be a big To Do and involve staying for a bit of time.

Smiling.

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