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Chapter 29 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself

Impertinence and Propriety

So, my lady," said Brinnid in a low voice once they were seated. "Am I still impertinent, d'you think?"

Sedra fought against a blush. "The word I used was 'improper,' not 'impertinent.' And would you not consider that an impertinent question, sir?" she answered in an equally low tone.

"So the answer is 'yes,' then," he smiled.

Sedra coolly removed her gloves to eat. She would have pointedly turned to the Sairish noble on her right, but she hadn't caught the man's name and feared bungling it. She took a quick sip of wine for courage and turned back to Brinnid, smiling smoothly. "How do you find the capital, seeing it as you are for the first time today?"

"I find it a noble and charming city, my lady, but not half so much as its Princess Royal," said Brinnid solemnly.

"It's true, then."

"What is, ma'am?"

"One of your nobles, a certain Earl of Maccal, told me at the last ball of the year that the Sairish were prone to flattery."

Brinnid considered. "I believe what he may have said, knowing Maccal, was that we are prone to poetics, but any compliment paid to you, my lady, would be neither poesy nor flattery but the gods' own truth."

"I wonder at the compliment his lordship paid me in dancing with me."

"Oh?" said Brinnid, curious. He waited for the footman to place the shallow bowl of consommé flecked with green onions before him and then leaned in again. "Which compliment was that?"

"A rather back-handed one regarding my intelligence."

Brinnid sat back and studied her as she sipped delicately at her soup. "Teacher told me--"

"I should hardly put stock in what my brother's tutor told you about me," she said sharply to the roll in her hand.

"Your brother's tutor, ma'am?" laughed Brinnid. "That's how you think of your father's chief counsel?"

"My brother's tutor is all Teacher has ever been to me." In spite of herself, Sedra added, "What did he say?"

Brinnid studied her until she flushed. "He said you were a thoughtful woman, not a giddy girl. Would you say that's an accurate description, your highness, or have I been misled, d'you think?"

Sedra composed her answer carefully. "I would say that I am not likely to be described accurately in any respect by someone who knows me as little as the Teacher." With that she addressed herself to the plate put before her, and hazarded making small talk with the Sairish lord to her right, whose name she guessed correctly.

Brinnid watched her from the corner of his eye as he passed the dinner talking with Harsin. On the one hand, he'd been rebuffed. On the other hand, he was fairly sure he'd learned who his competition for the princess's heart was, and he was fairly sure he could make her forget that competition entirely. He took up his wine and downed it.

"Are you feeling well, brother?" said Harsin.

"Brother king, I have never felt better in all my days," grinned Brinnid.

The next morning Temmin was ready and eager for his lesson, or would have been if he'd been awake. "Let me sleep in tomorrow," he'd told Jenks, "I'm so, so tired and now this blasted reception--I need to sleep more than I need to ride." And so when lesson time came around, he awoke to find the Teacher sitting on the edge of his bed, cane in hand.

"Oh, no, you can't be serious!" groaned Temmin. "Jenks didn't wake me up!"

"Should I cane him, then?" said the Teacher, rising as if to find the valet.

"No, no, of course not!" said Temmin hastily. "I told him not to, but I didn't expect he'd let me sleep this late!"

"Take your punishment." Temmin slid reluctantly out of bed and assumed the position. Three strokes later he was red-faced and trying hard not to cry. "I will leave you here to collect yourself," said the Teacher, striding into the study and passing Jenks in the doorway.

Jenks kept himself busy in the room until Temmin had rearranged his nightshirt and blinked away the stinging in his eyes. "Really, Jenks, you might have woken me," said Temmin once he'd found his voice.

"I'm very sorry, sir," the valet replied as he opened the curtains to let the bright spring morning light into the room. "You said you wished to sleep in and I took you at your word. Here is a basin of hot water to wash quickly in, sir. I shall go fetch your clothing." Temmin watched his retreating back, wondering what had gotten into the man who'd been ordering him around almost as long as he could remember.

Once dressed, he found the Teacher perched as usual on the library table, by the now-familiar red book. Coffee, toast, marmalade, eggs and bacon waited on the table, and Jenks was already nowhere to be seen. He wolfed down his breakfast while the Teacher's fingers tapped an impatient rhythm on the table top.

"What if anything did you learn from your caning this morning?" said the Teacher when Temmin finally wiped his mouth and pushed the plate away.

"Ehm--to be more specific about when I wish to be woken up?" guessed the prince.

The Teacher's eyes rolled. "That's one interpretation. The one I'm hoping you take to heart is that you are responsible. Not your underlings. You. If those taking your orders fail to carry out your wishes, for whatever reason, in the end you are responsible, especially if your wishes are not specific enough or you have chosen to trust the wrong people. That is the price of power, your highness. Now. Are you ready to continue? Do you even remember what we were talking about?"

"Of course I do," said Temmin in irritation. "It's only been, what, three days?"

"It's been nearly a week. Very well, where were we?"

"Ilhovin the Peacemaker and the Sairish princess Macca just got married." Temmin blushed, remembering the intensity of his ancestors' wedding night.

"Just so." The Teacher waited as Temmin pulled the old red leather-bound book to him and opened it.

The passage across the sea from Sairland to Tremont had been rough enough, but the reception the Heir's convoy received once they arrived at the harbor in Belleth Town was worse. There was no delegation to meet them, and the usual salute given to visiting shipboard dignitaries--the tolling of the harbor bells, the soldiers lined up along the harbor ramparts beating their swords against their shields--was missing. No one was prepared for their arrival, and there were no accomodations whatsoever for his company.

Ilhovin was furious, so furious that as soon as his feet touched the dock he commanded the harbormaster be brought from his office next to the nearby custom house. The astonished harbormaster followed Ilhovin's men all the way to the quay, shouting that if the Heir were sailing into to Belleth Town he'd bloody well know it, wouldn't he!

When he realized that in fact the Heir wasn't coming, he was here, the poor harbormaster fell to his knees before Ilhovin. "Your highness! Oh, sir, I had no idea! His lordship said nothing--I mean--I got no notice--!"

"And where is his lordship?" said Ilhovin coldly.

"Oh, he's gone to the capital, sir, as soon as he arrived from Apecto! He said you were--well--" The harbormaster stole a furtive, rather frightened glance at Macca, who was looking around the bustling docks with great curiosity. The harbormaster continued carefully, "He said you were rather occupied and wouldn't be back to Tremont for quite a long time yet."

"Did he," said Ilhovin sourly. Perhaps he shouldn't have let Belleth precede him, he thought. "I need privacy, Harbormaster. We will use your office. In the meantime, you are to arrange for my company's comfort." The harbormaster agreed with many bows, and would tell his great-grandchildren what a gracious and merciful prince the Peacemaker was, for any other prince surely would have had him executed on the spot.

Leaving Macca on the docks to observe the unloading of their ships, Ilhovin and a small contingent of guards took over the harbor office, unceremoniously booting out the clerks. Ilhovin sequestered himself in the harbormaster's room and spread out the parchment with the drawing of Teacher on it.

"Teacher, hear--"

"Prince Ilhovin, I have been trying to reach you for weeks now!" shouted the drawing. "Why have you not been listening for me, at least every few days?"

"I--there hasn't been anything I needed to talk to you about," said Ilhovin, blinking. "I'm sorry."

"You will be more so when you hear my news. You need to return to the capital immediately. Your erstwhile friend is openly your enemy, your highness."

"Henrik? What's happened?"

"He has made it his life's work to undermine you by attacking your new wife. You must return now. Find a mirror and step through immediately. Tell the princess she must be a model of rectitude when she arrives. I'm sorry, but coming here will not be easy for her thanks to the Earl. Make sure that she is dressed from the skin out in the Tremontine style and behaves like a quiet, docile little wife. He has already stirred up a great deal of resentment towards your Macca. She must prove him wrong."

"Oh gods, Teacher, you have no idea what you're asking."

"I know exactly what I'm asking. The princess is no fool. She can play pretend for a little while. We will help her, you and I. Your highness--Ilhovin--come home. Now."

Greatly troubled, Ilhovin rolled up the parchment and returned to his new wife, who waited patiently under a hastily erected awning. "My darling, we must leave for the capital as soon as you can change."

"Leave? Hov, we just got off the ship and I'm tired! I want to feel the ground under my feet for a few days before we get in a carriage. It's a long ride to the capital, isn't it?"

"We're not going by carriage. I'm taking you through a mirror."

Macca cringed. "Father took me through, once. Very unpleasant. I don't like it, Hov. What is it, what's happened? Why the hurry?" She studied his face for a moment, putting together the pieces. "It's Belleth, isn't it. What's he done?"

Ilhovin shook his head. "I don't know exactly, sweetheart, but Teacher says things will not be easy for us--for you--when we get to the Keep. We must get you changed into proper Tremontine clothes," he said, fingering the plaid she still wore draped around her waist and shoulders. "And you must play pretend as you did at our wedding. Teacher says you must be the perfect Daughter of Tremont. That's all I know."

"That's all I need to know," said Macca, grim-faced. "And my horses? Wallek and the rest of my people?" For she had brought her old friend the falconer with her as her riding master, along with a number of ladies-in-waiting and maids to be her women.

"They'll have to follow behind us on foot. I can't bring that many people through at once."

"It's for the best," sighed Macca. "I don't want to appear as an invading force. Very well. Let's be about finding me the proper thing to wear." As she watched her women search for the right trunks, Macca thought increasingly dark thoughts about Lord Belleth. She should have killed him while she had the chance, diplomatic incident be damned.

"Somehow I don't think Princess Macca was much at playing docile," said Temmin as he came out of the book.

"Don't underestimate her as Belleth did. Macca was a woman who could do anything she put her mind to, as you will see. Now it is luncheon; we got a late start. Your sister could use your support, for Brinnid is to dine with the family in private today. I believe his personal cook is presiding in the kitchens for the meal."

"Really!" said Temmin, rising from his seat. "Well! I wonder what Sairish fare is like!"

"I'm sure I don't know," said the Teacher. "I shall see you afterwards and you can tell me all about it." And, slipping from the table top perch, the Teacher strode through the door.

Jenks came in a moment later and walked straight into the bedchamber. "Off with your clothes, your highness, you need a bath," he called.

"I thought you said these sorts of things were up to me now!" said Temmin.

Jenks paused. "Very well, sir. Do you think you need a bath?"

Temmin considered, rubbing the stubble on his cheeks. "Yes, I s'pose I do. Carry on, Jenks! I have a date with a Sairish chef!"

The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.

Scryer's Gulch stands and falls on its own, a true soap opera. Never look back, never revise, just make shit up to explain those plot holes away! Yeehaw!

Creative Commons LicenseAn Intimate History of the Greater Kingdom and Scryer's Gulch by Lynn Siprelle writing as MeiLin Miranda are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 United States License.

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lala's picture

You make late night homework

You make late night homework worthwhile. I'm excited to have The Book back!

thellieem11's picture
Petitioner

What a treat!

This almost makes up for this confounded insomnia that has been plaguing me of late. At least now I'm properly entertained and enjoying quality work instead of messing around on facebook and checking my e-mail every 5 minutes. I do so love having the book back and the exchanges between Brinnid and Sedra are perfection!

Daymon's picture
Petitioner

New Food....

Well Temmin is going to get some new food and is looking forward to it, just like him to think with his gut. Well I am sure Macca can play the docile bride very well.

GreenGlass's picture
Postulant

...date with a Sairish chef!

Hehehehe. That went by much too quickly. ^^ I'm on the edge of my seat for both stories!!!

I'm really hoping Brinnid doesn't get distracted by past lovers easily! I want them to get along!

Blue Coyote's picture
Devotee

LOL

Ah, you manage to make me laugh almost every time! Temmin getting wholloped for his own foolishness and then wondering why. "I told my valet to let me sleep in"... then "why didn't he wake me up?" Ah Teacher, you have a lot of teaching to do. Glad that Sedra is still able to hold onto her composure even with as flustered as Brinnid makes her, make him work for it girl! Men don't appreciate something that's just given to them. If he dosen't have to fight for you(or thinks he does) he won't respect you- Sairish upbringing or not, he knows Tremonitine women are milksops, show him otherwise. And glad to see more of Macca, she is way more awesome then the spoiled one whose name escapes me.

blwinteler's picture
Supplicant

Edmerka

or Emmae. And I agree. Macca is definitely an interesting, strong woman.

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

Oh, I DO love Macca!

I don't know if I just want to know her or to BE her. What a great character, she makes my inner feminist proud! I think it would be wonderful if every woman should be as strong as she is, but being aware of propriety and the concept of picking the correct time and place are every bit as important. There are certainly times when I've had to sit down, shut up and be exactly what was expected, too! Well done, and I'm glad to see the return of The Book as well. Smiling

"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."

SkyRider's picture
Devotee

Macca is Awesome

She is an exemplary character to me, quite the pillar of strength, but at the same time able to assume any role that she needs to fulfill. When I read about her, I can feel her pride, her prowess and her self-assurance - it is very powerful to read and I love it. I would love to see a picture of her whenever the time comes around. Keep up the amazing work MeiLin ^__^

girlthing's picture
Petitioner

I didnt even think of that! I

I didnt even think of that! I would also really love to see a comision of Macca. Smiling

fremmed's picture
Petitioner

Macca

I really appreciate the way you can make a strong woman complex. And I can't quite figure out why, but this is one of my favorite chapters so far.

Do you think that the things people make fools of themselves about are any less real and true than the things they behave sensibly about? -George Bernard Shaw

Voyeur's picture

nearly a week you say...

nearly a week you say...

V's picture
Embodiment

Whee

I never expected to see deception get pwned. But...
"Brinnid watched her from the corner of his eye as he passed the dinner talking with Harsin. On the one hand, he'd been rebuffed. On the other hand, he was fairly sure he'd learned who his competition for the princess's heart was, and he was fairly sure he could make her forget that competition entirely." Sedra, I love you, but this is why honesty is the best policy.

I liked the exchange with Teacher/Jenks--the point was clear even without the reveal. Macca rocks, and it's a damn shame she's stuck in a tragedy and doesn't know it Sad When I read the closing line it took me a moment--I thought that Temmin was picking up Jenks's women again >.<

Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!

Nye's picture
Supplicant

Huh

I like Brinnid even more now... very perceptive, and not swayed in the least

I hadn't realized that Teacher sat ON the table when telling the stories before... I rather like that image. And, yes, Belleth should have died. Somehow, almost every time a strong woman shows mercy and spares a man's life, it's a mistake. Yes, that's experience talking.

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

Nye's picture
Supplicant

Aside

Does Teacher eat? He said he didn't know what Sairish cuisine tasted like.

"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK

MsGamgee's picture
Embodiment

Hmm.

That's actually a really good question. I noticed that the style of writing when Teacher said that seemed kind of pointed, like we were supposed to take notice of it, but I couldn't figure out why. That would definitely make sense, with the whole immortal-magic-being thing.

"'Cause there's some good in this world, Mr. Frodo... and it's worth fightin' for."

Gudy's picture
Embodiment

Eeeeeeee!

Brinnid and Sedra and Ilhovin and Macca and Temmin, too! Laughing out loud

I so love to see Brinnid and Sedra interact, and the interplay between Temmin, Teacher and Jenks is always great fun, too. And while it looks like there's a lot of hardship and possibly tragedy looming over the horizon for Macca and Ilhovin, I'm glad we're back with those two as well.

Thank you, MeiLin!

NiSp's picture

undecidedly crazy

i can't decide who i want to hear more of first... i swear to not come back here for a week before continuing reading!! that way i can get a decent chunk at a time...
love your work, meilin Smiling

NuanaIvy's picture
Devotee

I was really worried...

...that Macca would put up a fight when it came to being the perfect Daughter of Tremont, but it seems not only is she smart, beautiful, and badass, she's also wise. How much more I like her than Emmae, who simply let fate carry her along.

Thanks, Meilin! Wonderful chapter, as always.

Yeti's picture
Devotee

Sitting on the sidelines

While I can't pretend to have enough information to make any judgments regarding their political machinations, on a purely personal note I really find myself rooting for all our Sairish characters, both current and in the History.

Go Team Sairland! Sticking out tongue

SongCoyote's picture
Devotee

Tasty, tasty Brinnid...

Oh, that Sairish Prince gets my knickers in a twist, let me tell you! He's exactly the sort that could rock my socks. Yum!

Ahem. And now, back to our show.

As for Macca's story, the Earl has already underestimated her - badly - once, and I think that when he manages to kill Ilhovin his suffering will be legendary. That, or Macca will simply behead him in a single stroke, spit on his face, and give him a decidedly improper burial.

Perhaps I should stop speculating, though, as I think I'm projecting more how I want things to go (except for Ilhovin's death, which I definitely don't want) than making any real preductions.

Anyway, shutting up now.

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote

girlthing's picture
Petitioner

As wobbly as Sedra is feeling

As wobbly as Sedra is feeling right now, it occurs to me that she is still being underestimated by Brinnid. I'd like to think she's going to put up quite the chase before she'll allow herself to get caught.
that courtship part of a relationship is my favorite part. (: especially when one party gives chase, hehe.

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