Camma set a tray down quietly next to her mistress's bed. She drew back the heavy window curtains, leaving the sheers in place to filter the late morning light, and cautiously peeked into the bedcurtains. "I've brought you some tea and some orange juice, miss," she whispered hesitantly.
"It's all right, Camma, I'm awake and not hung over in the least, just worn out," answered the princess, sitting up and stretching as Camma fastened the bedcurtains back. She accepted the hot teacup and took a deep draught, nearly emptying it despite its temperature. She flexed her feet experimentally. They were still sore; out with those dancing slippers, she thought. "Venna help me, what a night. I'm still tired. How does Elly do it?"
"You can ask her yourself, miss. She's in your study waiting to have breakfast with you." At Sedra's glare, Camma gave her mistress an apologetic shrug. "I tried, miss. She was more insistent than usual. Extremely so."
"Oh, in that case, I forgive you completely," sighed Sedra, pulling on an old but comfortable blue and gray striped wrap over her nightdress and sliding her feet into her favorite soft carpet slippers. "Force of nature, act of Pagg and all that, I know my sister." She walked into the study with the orange juice in one hand and her empty tea cup in the other. There at her table sat Ellika studying the color fashion plates of the latest Chodry's Ladies Book, her long blond hair still in its nighttime braid.
"Drink that juice, Sedra, you look horrid!" said Ellika, whose own brown eyes were as bright and shiny as ever. "Does sparkling wine always have this effect on you?"
"No, dancing half the night has this effect on me. Horrid? That's a fine way to greet one's sister at her own breakfast table." She leaned down and kissed Ellika on the cheek.
"Pfft," replied Ellika, "you know what I mean. You look half-dead."
"I feel half dead, thank you. Why would Papa not retire last night!"
"I'm sure I don't know, but he's hardly who I came to talk about."
"Oh, no, not this. Please, I haven't even eaten or read the papers yet."
"Sedra!" yipped Ellika, sweeping the stack of newspapers from her sister's place onto her own lap and thence to the floor. "How can you not be excited about Brinnid!"
Sedra sighed and rested her forehead on one hand. "Because I have a lifetime ahead of me to contemplate the man?"
"And contemplating him looks to be an extremely pleasant task. Why not start now!" Ellika pulled her chair closer to the table and plucked a piece of toast from the rack. "For instance," she said, waving the toast triangle like a little flag, "what do we know about him?"
"That he fancies himself sly and devious," said Sedra. "He sent me a secret present a week ago."
Ellika squeaked and dropped the toast. "Neya's little feet! What did he send you!"
"Nothing you'd be interested in, anyway. Falconry gear."
"Falconry gear?"
"Gloves, bells and a little topknot of feathers to put on a hunting falcon."
Ellika made a disappointed face, took a bite of her toast and swallowed. "What would a falcon want with gloves?"
"No, you ninny, you wear the gloves and the falcon perches on your wrist, though I think the ones he sent were more decorative than functional from what I've been able to find out. No one knows much about falconry in Tremont." Sedra ducked under the table to fetch her newspapers.
Ellika put her slippered foot on top of the pile. "Why didn't you tell me!"
"It wasn't appropriate! I told Mama!" came Sedra's muffled voice from under the table, full of annoyance. "Let me have my newspapers!"
"And you're sure they were from Brinnid?" Ellika said, lifting her foot.
"Yes! Ow!" Sedra bumped her head, but she emerged from under the damask cloth with her armful of news, triumphant. "He enclosed a letter."
"What did it say!"
"That he'd be giving me a falcon when we get to Sairland."
"For what?"
Sedra sat back in her chair. "Have you even been listening?"
"Of course I have!" said Ellika in irritation. "You haven't said anything! What kind of music does he like! What's his favorite sweet! Does he like dancing!"
Sedra looked at her sister in mild astonishment. "Temmin tells me you nearly flew at Papa and raked his eyes out you were so angry about marrying me off to a stranger."
"He's not a stranger now," Ellika said decisively. "I've seen him. And I like him. He's handsome and romantic and dashing."
"You haven't said two words to him!"
"I don't need to." Ellika held her head up haughtily. "I have the knack, you know." In spite of what that Issak thinks, she added to herself.
The king under discussion had been awake already for several hours at the Sairish embassy. The political aspects of the trip had been worked out far in advance, before he'd even set foot on Tremontine soil. Brinnid was here solely to collect his bride, and if his impressions from last night were accurate, she was well worth the trip.
At first glance he'd preferred the younger of the two sisters; Princess Ellika was the beauty, fast on her feet and so merry she made even the most tired and formal dance look new and exciting. By contrast, her sister the Princess Royal was serious and quiet, preferring seemingly intense conversations with friends to dancing. But when she'd finally taken the floor, first with her brother the Heir and then with her father, Princess Sedra was riveting, at least to him.
Brinnid judged people mostly on what their bodies told him, not what their mouths told him. Sedra, all unknown, had told him of her ruthlessly controlled passion and ambition. It was in her carriage, the way she held her head, the flash of her eyes when a partner went too far in flattery or held her a bit too closely. Anyone else watching her would have seen a gracious and regal lady. He had seen the queen she longed to be, and more; he saw the woman she would be in his bed. It sent an instant shock down his spine, and he feared he was already lost.
Dancing with her had confirmed everything Brinnid had already seen along with what he'd heard; the Princess Royal was no fool. They both knew she'd seen right through him the moment he'd opened his mouth. She'd played along until he'd told her how beautiful she was. He knew as a princess she was used to flattery, but he had been quite sincere and she had sensed it. The princess needs to be told more often how beautiful she is by a man who believes it, he thought, if that's the reaction she has to it. And he thought he might just be that man.
Now, Brinnid looked down on the busy main square of the capital from a bedroom window in the embassy. A splendid beginning to a courtship, he mused, and turned to his valet Stewn, who had been busy all the morning. "Are we packed?"
"Yes, your majesty, though I must say once again what an odd thing it is for us to come and go and come again."
"The Earl of Maccal came yesterday, and leaves today. Brinnid King is returning tomorrow, Stewn. Let's be on our way."
Back at the Keep, Temmin was watching as his own valet fussed with packing his things for the Spectacle and the morning after. "Do stop poking at things! You're making me more nervous than I already am!"
"I'm sorry, your highness," Jenks answered. "I just don't want to forget anything, and I want to make sure you're perfectly turned out."
"You've packed half my closet, I'm sure somewhere in there I'll find something to wear."
"If only they'd let me come with you, at least to help you get ready before the Spectacle," muttered Jenks.
"Well, they won't. Show me again what you want me to wear, and I'll make sure Senik wrestles me into it."
Jenks produced a piece of paper from his pocket. "I've written it down. Your best formal suit--I didn't want to gamble on a new one--a new starched linen shirt, a new high collar, a new lace stock. A white waistcoat with a jacquard pattern of your coat of arms. Your ruby studs, watch fob and cufflinks. Your best formal shoes. New silk small clothes, for tonight and tomorrow. For tomorrow morning I've packed your best day suit, another new shirt and collar, a brocade waistcoat of Tremontine red and bronze, your amber studs, fob and cufflinks, a Tremontine red cravat, and your second best shoes. They, uh, they told me they'd take care of your nightclothes." Jenks regarded him sternly. "I expect you to give this Senik person this," he said, waving the paper, "first thing you arrive at the Temple."
"Yes, yes, I will," said Temmin distractedly, playing with his watch. Three more hours before he could leave!
The valet sighed and shook his head. "To be on the safe side, I've already sent it to him by messenger. Now," Jenks said, changing tacks, "as to the matter of presents for the Holy Ones--"
"Presents?! I was supposed to get them presents?!" said Temmin, jerking his head up in panic. "Why doesn't anyone tell me these things! I have nothing!"
"That's why you have staff, your highness. Winmer has selected three different sets of jewels. You may choose from among them."
Temmin frowned. "That seems so impersonal."
Jenks shrugged. "It is impersonal, sir. It's Temple tribute. The Holy Ones won't be allowed to keep it when their service is over."
"Can't I give them something they can keep?"
"Another time. Now, sir. Let's have a look at the jewels."
Temmin sighed and ran his hand through his hair. At least it was something to fill the time.
In the king's study, the coming evening was also under discussion. "And what jewels did you choose for my son's present?" said Harsin idly to his secretary.
Winmer looked up from the appointment book. "A set of diamonds, a set of pearls, and a set of sapphires, all with royal rubies. Diadems, brooches, ropes, studs, rings. Whatever he chooses, the Temple will be pleased, sir."
"I have another task for you, Winmer." The small man waited expectantly, his lively face enquiring. "There is a housemaid here. Judging by her age and her uniform, she's a downstairs maid. Very young, very pretty, curly hair. Hazel eyes, I think--I didn't get a close enough look to tell. I think her name is Arta. Find out what you can about her from Affton, please."
"Certainly, sir. Should, ah--should I know exactly how to couch my line of questioning?"
"Be discreet."
"Ah," said Winmer with a little smile. "Discreet."
Comments
paternal competition
The whole Harsin sleeping with all the girls Temmin likes but is too nice to take advantage of thing makes me sad. I'm not sure if I'm more sad for Temmin, Harsin, or Allis and Arta and the others that will surely follow.
Speculation
Or: Behold, the wild theory in its natural habitat! Snrk.
Anyway, I don't see Harsin as much of a paternal figure, and I don't think I'm alone there. Temmin thinks of Jenks as his father more than Harsin, and when we see the two royal men together, Harsin is always treating Temmin as another man, more like a hunting buddy than a son. Which makes sense enough, since the kids were safely stowed at Whithorse for their formative years and since Harsin is basically your man's man (I think of Gaston from Beauty and the Beast, with the wonderful addition of brains). He's got an appreciation for women and enjoys discussing it; I suspect that he'd have liked Arta anyway, it just happened to be Temmin who brought her to his attention. I doubt Harsin sees it as competition so much as a shared activity to be enjoyed and talked about, like sporting or hunting or statecraft. It's still gotta be weird for Temmin, who's more discreet and sensitive, I just don't think Harsin is actively trying to do anything to his son.
This was EXACTLY how I read
This was EXACTLY how I read Harsin's desire for Arta. It wouldn't occur to him that sharing a woman with Temmin would be wrong let alone hurtful - he utterly fails to notice Temmin's dismay when learning that dad's fucked Allis, even though I'm sure Temmin's emotions were clear on his face. But then Harsin is NOT sensitive, either kindly or maliciously; he just lacks empathy.
I bet Harsin would have no issues 'sharing' a woman actively, as you suggest.
Though this would utterly horrify Temmin (if perhaps not as much as sharing with Jenks or um, Ellika, hehe).
What about Fen?
I feel the worst for him! Imagine if Harsin took a serious fancy to Arta. He's already been through thinking one member of the royal family is after her, and this time it won't be just him blowing it out of proportion! And I do feel sorry for Twenna, if Harsin were to switch his favourite.
Ouch
If Fen's reaction to the mere suggestion of Temmin's interest is anything to go by, this has the potential to get really ugly for him really quickly. I hope Arta has the presence of mind to remember that she can approach Temmin for help, and the opportunity to do so discreetly before things deteriorate.
There is, of course, the hopeful possibility that Harsin's interest doesn't come from his crotch but out of an interest to learn more about his son, but I'm not going to bet any money on that.
Temmin for help
But it sounds as though Temmin will be at the Spectacle.
For some annoying reason, I can't remember what this Spectacle thing is all about either.
I like how Harsin and Temmin are compared over the presents to the Temple. I don't know why, but it sits well.
"Presents?! ... I have nothing!" - heeheehee.
Points to Arcer! Though I
Points to Arcer! Though I can't see Harsin becoming seriously interested in Arta. He wouldn't appreciate that she really does love Fen (see: him refusing to allow Twenna near other men) And I can't see Arta being willing to give Fen up, since obviously a relationship with the king isn't going anywhere and we already know Fen isn't willing to discount other men just because they're royalty (see: drunken episode with Temmin)
Indeed
I don't think Arta is really Harsin's style, apart from being female and accessible. He'll probably see Fen blustering and Arta clinging to him, laugh paternally, and find another housemaid between there and the door. She's just not going to be worth the effort for Harsin, and the thrill of the chase wouldn't really be there because he could just have Fen fired and boom! it's over. I don't see that really appealing to the king, who seems to be one for hunting and games.
I don't think it's the
I don't think it's the effort, I think it is the fact that he is King and can have what he wants. Right now he has taken a liking to Arta, and Arta he shall have.
For some reason after reading
For some reason after reading the story and the comments after, my brain keeps wanting to draw direct comparisons between the Tremontine royal house and a herd of elephants. In both cases it's the old fart that gets all the nookie. Well, most of it anyway.
Ok, done grinning like an idjit... Have retrieved my mind from strange places. Lots of plot stirring here. After glancing back over it again I'm kind of impressed with how many different elements are all coming to a head in this one chapter. And it didn't feel rushed or hurried, it just flowed well.
Ohdear. . .
Now Harsin's going after Arta? That is no good. Thanks for the chapter, can't wait for more
what cracks me up
is that all the comments are about the last few paragraphs!
It is a bit unfair
to the rest of what is a most excellent chapter, true.
What struck me the most was Elly's side swipe at Issak, because I don't think Issak was telling little white lies at that point.
I'm also looking forward to seeing more of Brinnid and Sedra. They are both, taken singly, fascinating characters, their interplay has the potential to go several different ways and I'm intensely curious about which one it'll take.
Actually...
We saw Issak telling Teacher she had the knack, but never saw the exchange between Issak and Ellika first hand. He probably brought her down gently but still discouraged her somewhat.
Poor Jenks
He is just so flustered right now not being able to come with Temmin to the temple. That is also some list of cloths for Temmin to ware, that does sound like half a closet if not more.
Well Brinnid is going to keep the ruse up for a little longer by leaving and coming back, even though they both know it was him at the dance. I wonder if Sedra will act supprised to meet him or call him out about the dance.
Nice chapter MeiLin.
at this point
The ruse is for everyone else, not Sedra. It's just protocol.
hmm.
Yes, but Harsin must know who Brinnid is. Which is probably why he stayed so darn late. And, it appears, he said nothing to her about it. Is he, too, testing Sedra?
Not related much to story and
Not related much to story and somewhat annoying of me to say, but Ellika should die. Oh god, how I loathe her type of character. Loathe loathe loathe. We (me personally, at least) have seen some very good traits of hers before, but it's a sometimes-thing and... Just generally... She irks me.
But hey, at least I'm passionate enough about the story that I can express feelings like that
I do love the story though 
try being her sibling
Her brother and sister love her dearly, and sometimes they just want to go anywhere but where she is. Elly is due for some growing up in the next few chapters, never worry.
Yes, there is room for people
Yes, there is room for people in any world, I think, to grow and develop into their own person. Some people just need some help getting there. I look back and think how naive I was (and still am), but thank God for my trials and tribulations because I would not be the person I am now without struggling and learning on my own.
*snerk*
Brinnid's consistency in his ruse, even if strictly a formality, is fantastic.
I am eager to see how the
I am eager to see how the Brinnid/Sedra arc plays out; it looks very promising. I cannot say I am not looking forward to the Spectacle, either!! One thing that I don't want to see is what happens to poor Arta... I foresee a spat betwixt the King-Right-Now and the King-Perhaps-Later.
All in all, spectacular work as always. I judge not solely on the warm and fuzzies you give, MM, but also on the tummy flops and flips I get whilst indulging in your glorious masterpiece!
Nicely done
Another good chapter. While Harsin gives me a queasy feeling in the pit of my stomach, previous comments have covered that ground pretty well already. What I -haven't- seen mentioned is this passage, which is pure friggin' gold:
Sedra, all unknown, had told him of her ruthlessly controlled passion and ambition. It was in her carriage, the way she held her head, the flash of her eyes when a partner went too far in flattery or held her a bit too closely. Anyone else watching her would have seen a gracious and regal lady. He had seen the queen she longed to be, and more; he saw the woman she would be in his bed. It sent an instant shock down his spine, and he feared he was already lost.
Anyone know where to find a woman like that?
Brains + beauty + passion = bliss
heck, yeah.
"Anyone know where to find a woman like that?"
Well, yes. She's brilliant (didn't even bother with college), gorgeous (has modeled in real-human magazines), and passionately environmentalist. Also the whole reason I'm trying to finish school 3,000 miles away. But then, I count myself super-lucky with the less-than-three.
I really liked this update!
I really liked this update! It's nice knowing what's going on with everyone at the moment, rather than just one or two of the characters. I hope Sedra warms up to Brinnid and that they get to live happily ever after
Damn that Harsin Jenks shows
Damn that Harsin
Jenks shows he knows his charge too well
I guess we know what kind of husband will suit Ellika now
I think Sedra may be happier than she thinks in the long run, Brinnid sees her worth well
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