Chapter 14 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself
Clever
Twenna sprawled comfortably naked atop the coverlet on Harsin's bed at the Lodge. It was a beautiful, warm day, and the windows were open. At first, she'd objected: "We might be heard." But the king reassured her that while they were indeed attended, the guards were stationed at a distance and the servants were both indoors and discreet. Now she was glad of it, as the soft breeze dried the sweat from her body and she dreamily stroked her lover's dark hair as he lay with his head pillowed on her shoulder.
"Does he like the little house I've given you?" murmured Harsin into her breast.
She looked down into his handsome face; his deep brown eyes were hooded, and a lazy smile curled his delectable lips. "Who?" she said, dragging her eyes away from his mouth.
"Your husband, darling. Does he like the little country house?"
"Little?! Harsin, Middlemont is enormous! We'd never be able to afford to staff it! I haven't even told him of it. We can't accept it."
"Oh, my simpleton!" said Harsin "You get the income from its property, too. That should pay for staff and more. It's the least I could do--doesn't even come with a title. I'll send some of my people out there directly after Neya's Day until you can hire your own, in fact I'll task one of them to hire the staff for you. It's really a pity we won't be able to be there ourselves for Neya's Day," he continued, smoothing the glossy brown hair between her legs. "Little mink of mine. I should like to take you out to the fields and fuck you like the rustics." He dipped his finger just inside, and she wiggled obligingly for him.
"We just finished, sweetheart!" she giggled.
"When you are in my bed, Twenna my love, we are never finished."
She sighed as he stroked her. His hands were so strong, and they always knew what to do. "The house has its own income?"
"Mmhm." He kissed the swell of her breast and pushed up on his free arm, still keeping his other hand between her legs.
"How much?" she asked lightly as she studied the panels of the ceiling. The Lodge must be frightfully old, she thought; they were covered in glaze so ancient she could make out patterns in the craquelure, just like seeing pictures in the clouds or fortunes in one's tea leaves. She thought she could just make out Elbig's smiling face. Nearby was a bloody sword--no, she told herself, it was a needle and thread.
"Oh," he replied, planting kisses between her breasts to her throat, "about 5,000 a year."
"5,000--?!"
"I know it's not much."
"Harsin, that's more than Shelstone and Company has profited in two years!"
"Really? I had no idea you were in such dire straits, darling, you certainly never look it. There's that little money in tailoring?" he said, sitting up.
Twenna stared. "We're one of the most successful tailoring concerns in the capital."
"Must be terribly hard to be a tailor, then," said Harsin idly. "I know I'd never do it."
Twenna began to laugh. "I'm sorry, I'm just trying to imagine you sitting cross-legged on a table with a pair of glasses on the end of your nose and a thimble on your finger!"
"Is the picture coming?"
"No!"
"See? I told you I'd never do it." He sank his fingers in further, and her laughter ended in a breathy gasp. "I'm thinking perhaps we should celebrate Neya's Day early, hey? Shall I just turn you over my shoulder like a sack of potatoes, carry you out to the garden and fuck you for the benefit of the buttercups? D'you think it'd make the roses bloom more this summer if we drew down that blessing on them?" Twenna's breathing was coming faster. "Would you like that?"
"No, not where everyone should see us!"
"Why not?" He put his thumb on the little hard nub at the top of her vulva; her eyes widened and she clutched at his leg. "Are you ashamed of me?"
"No, of course not!"
He kissed her neck. "You do know that when you take Middlemont you will be tacitly acknowledging your place in my bed?"
"I--I already have!"
Harsin stopped. "Oh?" Twenna blushed thoroughly, realizing too late she'd said too much. "What do you mean, Twenna? How have you acknowledged me?"
"I--well, my ladies maid knows."
"And I would assume she's quite discreet or she wouldn't be your maid."
"Oh, oh yes."
"What else, darling?" he said, pinching her nipple just a bit too hard. "I know there's more. You are an abysmal liar. You will tell me."
"My driver wouldn't listen today--he would take the direct route to the Lodge no matter how much I begged."
"Sack him."
"Oh, that's Elbig's to decide, not mine."
"Ah, now we're getting somewhere," said Harsin, renewing his caress between her legs. "Your driver was acting on your husband's orders, eh?"
"Ah!" His fingers twisted inside her. "I wouldn't put it quite like that!"
"Really?" he said in a falsely casual tone. "How would you put it? If not you, and not your husband, who gave the order? Your coachman? I don't think so."
Twenna looked up at him in aroused confusion. "I'm sure I don't know what you mean!
"Gods, you're an idiot, Twenna--no, your husband is an idiot. D'you think I am some teenager to be led about by his prick?" he said, thinking of his son trotting up the steps of the Lovers' Temple. "I am the king. I have survived wars, assassination attempts and more. I know what Shelstone's doing. He's a loathsome little social climber who will give me his wife in exchange for money and position. He's not a tailor, he's a pimp."
Twenna gasped and her eyes filled. She tried to pull away from him, but Harsin pinned her down, gripping her mound painfully. "You're hurting me!"
"Then stop struggling."
Twenna lay still, her gaze a mixture of terror and indignation and her face a blaze of scarlet. "If my husband is a pimp, does that make me a whore, then?"
"Most certainly, my dear," he answered, lessening his grip on her and resuming his more pleasurable touches. She closed her eyes and fought a losing war against panic. "But I find I don't care. Because, and correct me if I'm wrong--" He brushed her hair away from her ear with his nose and whispered, "You're my whore, and my whore only, isn't that so?"
"I've barely slept with my husband!" she said, finally breaking down in sobs. "And no one else, just you! Only you! There's no one else but you!"
"And there won't be anyone else, darling. Some day there won't even be Shelstone. But there will always be me, until I'm tired of you."
Twenna took in big gulps of air as she tried to stop crying. Elbig had said Harsin wouldn't like a crying woman, and she had publicly ruined her reputation this afternoon on the way to the Lodge. Harsin's protection was all she had left, for if Elbig decided she'd wrecked his plans, he would be within his rights to divorce her. "What's going to happen to me?" she whispered.
"What's going to happen to you?" repeated Harsin, genuinely surprised. "I told you. You will remain in my bed until such time as I am tired of you. In return I will give your toad of a husband honors and grants commensurate with how much you please me until I am tired of him. And you will keep a lower profile, d'you understand? Everyone already knew you were my mistress. But you will not flaunt it in the streets. I will not have Ansella publicly shamed. She is the queen, the mother of the Heir, and my wife. D'you understand?" He punctuated the question with a gentle flick to her clit.
Twenna jumped. "Yes! I do! Elbig doesn't but I'll make him--I'll make him understand! I'm sorry, your majesty, I'm so sorry!"
Harsin smiled and kissed her tenderly. "There's nothing to be sorry about, darling." He slid between her legs and pushed into her. "I would never have had you if your husband hadn't made sure I'd meet you. And I would have been very sorry indeed to have missed all this." Twenna let out a long moan as he began to thrust, and she pulled her legs up as high as she could. He stopped his movements and looked down on her with a twisted smile. "And in truth, you really do enjoy your place in my bed, don't you?"
"Yes!" she groaned, moving her hips in frustration. "I love it! Please believe me!"
Harsin kissed her. "I do believe you." He began to move again and she let out an agonized sob of pleasure. "I can feel how wet you are, how you clutch at me." He pulled one of her legs fully up over his shoulder and got up on his knees, forcing her back on her shoulders with her hips in the air. He wrenched another groan from her as he pulled her to him over and over, sinking deep inside her. "I can see how close you are. Touch yourself, let me see you come, I love that."
Twenna quickly put her hand down where they were joined. From this angle, he could plunge himself all the way into her, as far as he could go. She thrust her hips up to urge him on. He filled her, possessed her, holding her legs so firmly in place she couldn't have escaped him if she'd wanted to.
She watched them move together as long as she could. His balls smacked against her bottom, his hips fused to hers, and she felt herself begin to unravel. She was helpless, she was powerless, she was his. He was in her so deeply he would always be there inside her, his strong hands were molding her to his liking, he was fucking her so hard now he was knocking the wind out of her with each thrust and she cried out and it was too late, she couldn't hold on, she fell and fell until the world dropped away.
When she came to, he was lying next to her, studying her face. His eyes beneath their heavy lids were hard, but she no longer felt afraid. "You belong to me, Twenna," he said quietly. "Not your husband, not his sponsor. Do you know who his sponsor is?"
"I swear I don't," she said, not meeting his eyes.
"I believe you. You will find out, and you will tell me." He turned her face to his. "You will leave Elbig's bed permanently, and you will both move to Middlemont as soon as the season is ended. I expect you to be there within the first week of Spring's End. Your butler and housekeeper will be assigned from my own staff." He pulled her close. "Find out what I want to know, and I will keep you under my protection as long as you keep me interested."
"And how do I do that?" she asked, suspended in his deep brown eyes.
"Stop playing dumb. It's true, I don't care for intellectual women in my bed. But I dislike dissemblers even more. Can you do that?"
Twenna opened her mouth, closed it, and nodded her head. If being more clever would keep her safe, she would work on being more clever.
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handily done...
That Harsin is a clever fella...
Very much enjoyed.
It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan
I thought I didn't care ...
much about what Harsin thought but he's turning out to be very interesting.
Harsin IS interesting, and
Harsin IS interesting, and this is a good plot thickener, but he really puts me on edge. Maybe its the fact that he is a father-figure, at least in name in the story and im at odds with mine. maybe its the lack of emotional depth, or the apparent self interest. Maybe i just got the wrong impression of the guy.
But ill be curious to see what happens next here
-The slave thinks he is freed from bondage, only to find a stronger set of chains.
He's complex.
He's frightfully intelligent, hard against others as well as himself out of necessity, and unable to ever let his guard down except, perhaps, with very close confidantes of which there are a very few at most. I picture him as someone who radiates power and, if necessary, menace at truly mind-numbing levels.
I don't personally like him, although I respect him, and I most emphatically would not want to cross him. That poor, misguided tailor is in way over his head, trapped in the play of two powers, his sponsor and Harsin, that are beyond his comprehension. I'd pity him if he weren't so unlikable.
Well
I didn't think the tailor had his plots quite right. Harsin doesn't come off as stupid, and he's had more than enough experience with mistresses, their ambitions, and those of those who may have controlled them. She's not at all subtle. Perhaps that's part of her charm.
I can appreciate that Harsin likes at least a modicum of common sense if not intelligence. It will be an unpleasant night for her. It will be more unpleasant when Harsin tires of her. I wonder if he'll let her keep the little house?
"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK
Probably she'll keep it.
Assuming they still have such things as "deeds" and "bills of sale" and other such legal mismash, he'd have to give her one; and it'd be hard to ask for it back.
Not that I'd put it past him, mind, but he does seem to disregard the property and he certainly doesn't need the income.
"The worst thing in life isn't to die. The worst thing is to have lived but have missed it."
I will try to be good.
Maybe not...
There's always that detail called "imminent domain," which the Commonwealth of Massachusetts has certainly exercised from time to time--the state "needs" (read: wants, for whatever reason) that land, so now it belongs to the state, in effect. I can't imagine the Kingdom would be much different. Whether Harsin takes advantage of a loophole like that remains to be seen, but it seems like he's aware something like that exists.
"Loneliness is not a problem. Loneliness is nothing to be solved." -Pema Chödrön
interesting perspective
Meilin, I like how you wrote from Harsin's perspective. I don't know if I could take his perspective, but you did it really well. What a cretin he is. I'd still like more detail on the things he was thinking, but not saying, to Twenna. We got those thoughts from Twenna, but not from Harsin. Why is he trying to protect Ansella's honor? Is it because he loves her or just because would it cause him trouble he doesn't want to deal with if Ansella gets shamed?
It's also interesting that Twenna was able to put aside her fears and have an orgasm. If that were me, I would have had to fake it for sure. Of course, that would never be me...
for some people
...fear makes them come harder. Seriously.
As for Harsin's motives re: Ansella, the comment downthread has it right. It's not just her honor, it's his, and that of his children; she is their mother and his queen. To shame her publicly is to shame the entire royal family. Everyone knows the kings have mistresses; it's how much they flaunt the mistress that tells the tale. As for how Harsin feels about Ansella, we'll see more of that later.
I'm not sure
how scared she was, towards the end. When she was realizing that her sexual manipulations were being swatted aside and that she was, in turn, being sexually manipulated herself--sure, that scared her. She realized that what she HAD been doing, providing sexual favors to curry political/social favor, was now what she would HAVE to continue doing. No change in who was doing what, but a big change in who might get screwed. But after all, she's just had her income quadrupled .
Tense, nervous, fearful for the future--ok, maybe. Much like Harsin would have been if she really had snared him and had genuine cause for extortion. But I'm fairly sure she was able to put that off until later, somewhere around the time:
Twenna let out a long moan as he began to thrust, and she pulled her legs up as high as she could. He stopped his movements and looked down on her with a twisted smile. "And in truth, you really do enjoy your place in my bed, don't you?"
"Yes!" she groaned, moving her hips in frustration. "I love it! Please believe me!"
That seems genuine to me--a little undercurrent of "omg, he always has to believe me now or I'm really fucked", but not "I can't stand this man now but must lie convincingly"
Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!
Wonderful!
This chapter was everything I had hoped it would be, we certainly saw a little deeper into Harsin's mind. The more I get to know him the more I respect his intellegence and motives.
From what we've seen Harsin may not be a "nice" or "good" person, but he seems to be a decent King. So of course he will leave her with the house as long as she doesn't do something stupid to displease or embarrass him or his Queen. And of course he will protect Ansella's honor - it's his duty, and he takes his duties very seriously, even when they run opposite to what he wants, such as his daughter's betrothal.
Truer words have never been spoken!
MeiLin said:
"To shame her publicly is to shame the entire royal family. Everyone knows the kings have mistresses; it's how much they flaunt the mistress that tells the tale."
Replacing "kings" with "presidents" doesn't make it any less true!
--The Good Doctor, Morganes
Maybe I'm alone here, but I
Maybe I'm alone here, but I actually kind of like Harsin. Given who, where and when he is, he's made a good show of it. His marriage was political, but he and Ansella both resigned themselves to that and keep their dalliances discreet. He has to marry off his children, but that doesn't mean he can't see them as more than pawns (I mean, I doubt Tremontine tradition would allow him to install Sedra as Heiress, so I won't scold him for not doing so). He could easily get stupid and cruel, but he stays sharp and I really haven't seen him actually be malicious yet. He's a little too hearty and manly, which weirds out Temmin beyond belief, but it's not with malice aforethought. So I'm okay with him. He's sharp and thoughtful, and I appreciate that in a character.
Harsin is scary!
...but he's a powerful kind of scary... the kind that makes a good King, particularly in difficult times. Mind you, I don't think I'd like him personally very much (and I'd do my best never to be put into the position of being his mistress) but there are many much worse traits to be found in humans who rule.
Methinks Elbig is going to think he's won even when he hasn't. Harsin is simply that much better at what he does than a pretender like the tailor. It's not because Elbig is a tailor, or male, or not nobility... it's just because he's not up to the King's machinations (neither would I be, likely). Such is life.
Thanks for the great story! I shall wait with bated breath for more.
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
Yeah, not too fond of Harsin.
Yeah, not too fond of Harsin. One can be a good king without being a prick about it. In the same breath, though, I'm not fond of Twenna either. I just don't like weak women and I certainly see her as one. I definitely understand the power a king holds and just what he can do to her but she is a whore and she had to right to cry when he pointed that out. I don't want to think she's that dumb that the thought never occurred to her but I don't know. She's selling herself for her own safety and for the upward mobility of her husband.
Eh, I'm not that fond of either of them but I do like reading about Harsin. A nice, twisted sadism there.
of course the thought occurred to her
It was a "does this dress make me look fat?" kinda comment. She was hoping Harsin would say, "Oh, no, of course not, darling! I would never say such a thing to you and I shall behead anyone else who would say such a thing!"
Wow
It's good to be the king. And this chapter proves that cliche. While I'm sure he's had to make a lot of hard decisions--one way or the other, I suspect he'll die with far fewer regrets than the rest of us.
It also goes to show that it's not just the dim-witted trailer-park cretin who can be sexist and cruel--they also come in the "OMG that's scary smart" variety.
"Stop playing dumb. It's true, I don't care for intellectual women in my bed. But I dislike dissemblers even more."
Certainly not someone to admire, but yet--someone to envy. "Now if I was that smart, and that powerful--surely I'd put all that ability to better ends"
Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!
Don't put Tremontine sexism on Harsin's shoulders
You guys keep saying, "Wow, what a sexist pig." Harsin isn't so much sexist as Tremontine society is sexist, down to its foundations, about which more later. No one even questions his assumptions, because they share them--even Sedra. She's mostly upset that she's a girl, not that women can't inherit, though she knows she's perfectly capable.
Why not?
Society is on Harsin's shoulders and nobody else is in a position to change it. If he's the king, he can change the rules and make new laws, right? I have a sense that Temmin's upbringing will make him more likely to notice the inequalities (in class AND gender) and to do something about them when he is king. Harsin is the role model for everyone else. Just because he grew up that way doesn't mean he isn't responsible for recognizing unfairness and changing things.
Harsin has it pretty good,
Harsin has it pretty good, and he works hard at making sure he's forging good alliances that will better his kingdom in the short and long terms. The kind of open revolt that would come from overturning hundreds of years of civilization-- backed by the gods themselves, who have temples full of devoted followers-- would run a little counter to both his personal ability to live fat and the well-being of the kingdom. Given that even the intelligent, socially-conscious characters have absorbed this doctrine (See MeiLin's comment about Sedra), Tremontine culture suggests to me that riots and royal beheadings are a pretty likely result. And that's assuming that Harsin can even conceive of doing such a thing in the first place, which I'm not sure he can.
He can't chage that.beause he's the king!..
beause he's the king!
If he were a tailor he could probably make his daughter heir to his wealth, and with the help of a good lawyer make it work in effect if not in actuality.
But a king can't look upwards to magistrates to enforce his contracts, but must instead rely on his supporters. Kings don't rule by force of arms (for long) but instead by the will of their allies and the lesser nobility. Were he to abdicate in favor of Sedra. She (and possibly he) would soon die of some 'accident' and Temmin would probably eventually become king.
Harsin
He's pretty much fit my impression of Harsin so far. He's somewhat of a Machiavellian manipulator of a ruler, and apparently much more proficient at the Xanatos Gambit than Elbig or his sponsor, as he can now use Twenna as his pawn, and has set up a situation in which he can receive intelligence on Elbig's actions. I'm thinking that in his long history as King and heir before, he has had quite a lot of women who think they can get what they want from him just because he's sticking his penis in them.
I'm worried Temmin won't turn out half as cunning as his father, and I hope not nearly as ruthless. Then again, ten years is a long time, and he'll hopefully get out of his training at the lovers' temple much less naive.
I'm no end table, I'm a nightstand.
Lovers' Temple
Yes, I think the Lovers' Temple training will definitely help Temmin. Since that temple has a reputation for putting out good rulers, I can't really see it producing one that's easily manipulated.
Indeed
Harsin thinks of Temmin as naive...but Harsin is naive in his own way. While he may be proficient at the machinations of life at court, he's clueless when it comes to the lives of his people. He doesn't even have a solid idea of what a good income is for John Q. Tremontine-Public: to him, 5,000 (insert unit here
) is lunch money.
While Temmin was mostly led to the Lovers' Temple "by his prick," he was also led there by a genuine concern as to redeeming himself, and learning what it means and what it takes to be King...or perhaps more importantly, what it means to be an adult.
- BCT
monetary units
I'm not going to make up some cheesy name for Tremontine money, so it's gold-silver-copper, in that order. (If I'm going to do cheese, it's going to be soap opera cheese. I'm not going to waste good cheese on the monetary system.) Staghorn Hall has an income of 5,000 gold a year. The average Tremontine makes between 25-60 gold a year. As an example, Arta, a downstairs maidservant, makes 10 gold a year, but she has no expenses for room and board; that's good wages for a young servant, and it's why she had to take the position. Fen makes 12 gold a year in similar circumstances, but his father, a blacksmith in Templestone, makes closer to 75-100 gold, depending on how good business is in Valmouth that year. The Shelstones, even at 1250 gold/yr, are very well-to-do. An additional income of 5,000/yr puts them into the out-and-out rich category.
ETA: Harsin knows very well how much 5,000/yr is compared to the average Tremontine income. If he cared, or if it were a metric that would matter somehow, he could probably tell you the price of a loaf of bread. But it isn't and he doesn't.
Ah, okay
Thank you for clearing that up. I read that as Harsin being genuinely confused. I think I wanted to see more than just condescension in Harsin's commentary, and so I read into it.
- BCT
As a whole
I don't think Harsin is that bad of a character. Dangerous? Yes. Without fault? Certainly not. But in terms of what the King could be, especially with simply a genetic lineage system, he's not bad at all. Perhaps this is simply because of the last eight years of the current ruler of my country, but Harsin's good points as a King seem to outweigh his bad ones to me. (I apologize for the political comment, but it was the only way I could think to express my perspective on the matter, not a view I wish to force on anyone else). And I had a feeling that his experience in the matters of mistresses was going to make Elbig's plot backfire on him, but sponser? Now that's interesting...
(Disclaimer: Point of view may be skewed by finding manipulations hot. I do my best to separate sex and morality, but I'm only human.)
It always pulls me back
Thank you Meilin, for being such a dynamic writer. You always seem to have something up your sleeve. Who needs friends when you are the King's whore, right? Oh, and do I detect a queer eye for the straight woman in Elbig?
we're at the top of the world, you and I
<3 you, jamie dick
Ahhhh I have found an ideal man to fantasize about.
Oooh, Harsin is just DELICIOUSLY sadistic.
I confess
He bothers me too.
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