Chapter 1 | The Queen Who Ruled by Herself
Ruffled Feathers
Farrday, the 38th Day of Spring's Beginning, In the Year of Our Kings 990
When the afternoon post arrived every day at half past three at Tremont Keep, Affton the butler stopped whatever stern lecture he was giving to the unfortunate footman he'd caught doing something dunderheaded and attended to it personally. He and the King's secretary Winmer would sort through it, dividing the letters and packages into neat stacks for each member of the royal household and any guests.
Morning and afternoon mail sorting were the only two times of the day when the two men weren't in active competition with one another. They were both of a height--small, compact men--but where Affton's face and demeanor were cool and removed, Winmer's were animated and warm. Winmer found the butler condescending, and Affton found the secretary overly familiar, and each felt the other interfered in his proper domain. But at mailtime, they took pride in processing the post together efficiently and having the stacks of packages, magazines, newspapers and letters ready to be delivered with the afternoon tea.
The largest stack by far was for Winmer himself to deal with: Sealed diplomatic packets (by separate courier directly to his own hands, but still arriving around post time); unsealed dispatches from Inchar; budgetary forecasts; and love notes from King Harsin's current mistresses, which he would tuck discreetly into his waistcoat away from discerning eyes. It would never do if someone were to recognize the handwriting of a leading socialite or wife of a lord.
As four o'clock approached, the tea things were readied and loaded as they were called for onto the big dumb waiters that ran from the kitchens to the landing of the living quarters for the royal family and their guests. One by one, the ladies in waiting, maids and valets would see their charges settled before their teas, and then would trot briskly below stairs to the workroom and back up bearing the post on silver salvers.
"A package for you, your highness, and please open it, I'm positively dying of curiosity!" said Camma as she bustled into the Princess Sedra's tranquil study with a pile of periodicals and a single box on the salver next to a small stack of letters.
"A package? Addressed specifically to me?" said Sedra, looking up from her tea cup. "Is there any indication who it's from?"
"I couldn't say for certain, miss, but the frank looks diplomatic, from inside the capital." The maid set the tray down on the table before her mistress and took a step back.
Sedra took up the package and frowned. "Very odd, Camma, did Winmer say anything to you about it? He normally opens such things himself."
"No, your highness, he simply gave it to me without a word."
"Then he knows what it is and where it came from--ah," she said, holding up a little pair of magnifying spectacles to her nose, "the frank--it's from the Sairish Embassy." She sat back among the couch cushions.
"Already!" exclaimed the maid. "Aren't you going to open it, miss?"
"You open it, Camma," she replied faintly. "I find myself uninterested."
"Nonsense, begging your pardon, your highness, of course you're at least curious. Very well, then, give it here." Camma took the proffered box, carefully undid the string and opened the brown paper to reveal a box covered in fine-grained buff goatskin. Camma raised an eyebrow at Sedra, who nodded; she opened the box. Inside, nestled in dark green silk velvet, was a pair of sturdy but elegant gloves of the same buff goatskin, their wide gauntlets finished with a dark green silk tassel.
Sedra sat up a little straighter. "Let me have the box, Camma." Camma set the box in her lap, and Sedra lifted the gloves from it. Beneath them were two compartments. In the first, she found three round golden bells, intricately engraved and studded with tiny emeralds. One was larger; the other two were a smaller matched pair. Each was attached to a slender leather strap.
The second compartment contained a little mass of iridescent dark green feathers, gathered into a sort of tassel. Sedra picked it up and examined it carefully. "Is it a powder puff, d'you suppose, miss?" said Camma doubtfully.
"No," said Sedra, putting it back in its compartment. "I'm not sure what it is, but I know it's not for that." She picked up the gloves again, and a letter, sealed with a wafer of dark green wax, slid out of the topmost into her lap. Sedra froze. "I do not think this quite proper, Camma, what do you think?"
"I think you'd best go see the queen with all this, your highness," said Camma, her round eyes wide.
"I agree completely." She re-wrapped the package and tied it perfunctorily with the string. "Please clear up the tea things, I shall have another cup with Mama. Oh--and Camma?" she said at the door. "By 'clearing up,' I mean finish off that cream cake yourself." Camma grinned and gave her a wink, and Sedra headed around the landing to her parents' side of the floor. A quick knock and she was ushered through the formal receiving room into Queen Ansella's pretty little sitting room, all done up in cream and blue and filled with spring light, spring air and spring flowers.
"A package?" said her mother, putting down her tea cup and patting the couch beside her. "From whom? Why didn't Winmer deal with it?"
"I don't know, Mama, that's why I brought it to you. I thought there'd be no harm in opening it, but then I found a letter inside, and I thought I'd best come to you before I broke the seal. It doesn't seem proper to me to be communicating in this way."
"You were always a wise and cautious girl, Sedra," murmured the queen as she undid the package string and opened the brown paper. She ran her fingers across the goatskin-covered box, unlatched it, and carefully picked up the gloves. "Hm," she said, and set them aside. She picked up each bell, smiling faintly as they jingled in her hand, and put them back, and then examined the odd little poof of feathers. "Pretty things. I have a suspicion. The letter?"
Sedra reached into the glove and pulled the letter out. "Mama, what are these trinkets for?"
"A gift," Ansella answered, "a very Sairish gift, and one that I suspect will ruffle a few feathers. I wonder if that's why Brinnid chose to send it to you directly rather than through diplomatic channels. I rather question his sense of humor."
"So this is directly from Brinnid?" said Sedra.
"Well, let's open this and find out for certain." The queen slid her opener under the green wax and spread out the letter so that Sedra could read along with her.
His Royal Majesty Brinnid the Third, King of Sairland and the Far Isles, offers this gift, hoping it finds favor with the lady. It is only a partial gift, the rest of which shall be given at our arrival. We anxiously await the day when we will set eyes on your fair face at last.
Brinnid King
"He's certainly silver-tongued, I'll give him that," chuckled Ansella quietly.
"A partial gift? I don't understand," said Sedra. "What's the other part to be?"
"There is a Sairish custom of hunting with birds. I suspect the rest of your gift is also feathered," Ansella answered, stroking the poof, "but still quite alive."
"A bird? A captive bird?!" Sedra gasped in horror. "We can never allow it!"
"My practical girl, superstitious?" smiled her mother.
"Not superstitious," snapped Sedra, "mindful of tradition and the law. Selling and owning captive birds apart from livestock is illegal and has been for 800 years."
"Not in Sairland," said Ansella. "And both the Tremontine and Leuteflossian nobility kept hunting birds themselves, long ago. I'm not entirely sure why we stopped, though I can't say I'm interested in the idea myself."
"I know why," murmured Sedra with an inward look.
"Oh? Why?"
"Just a story T--Papa mentioned once." Sedra blushed. "Apparently a Leuteflossian princess was held captive at one point and it wounded her so deeply she couldn't bear to see wild birds in cages afterward. When she married Warin the Wise, he ordered all wild bird sellers to end their trade, and he released his own hunting birds as well. It became both law and tradition that wild birds never be caged or confined. I'm sure if you asked Papa he'd tell you all about it."
"No, that's enough for me," sighed Ansella. "Your sister takes after me when it comes to history. I'm not terribly interested."
"D'you suppose Winmer knew what the gift was?"
"No, I'm sure he didn't."
"Well, then," said Sedra earnestly, "what do I do? I don't think I can accept it, but rejecting it would offend Brinnid."
"And you don't wish to offend him?" Ansella said mischievously.
"Mother, I have to marry him," Sedra answered sternly. "Why would I offend him before I've even met him?"
Her mother toyed with the tassel on one of the gloves. "Some men enjoy that sort of thing, you know--a snub. It sets them that much more eagerly on the chase."
"I don't want to be chased," said Sedra impatiently, "I'm not a doe to be hunted." She got up and walked slowly up and down. "I'm not a doe," she repeated softly, "I'm part of a greater bargain. He'll either want the bargain or no."
"Your conduct is part of the negotiations, my dear, as you well know. Perhaps, if he wants you badly enough, he will meet your demands as well as your father's."
"I don't like to hear you talk like this, Mama," said Sedra, frowning. "What demands did you place on Papa?"
"That our children be raised at Whithorse and that they not be put out to nurse. Other than that, I made no demands at all. It was a great honor to marry your father, Seddy, and while we haven't always had an easy time of it, I don't regret it--especially when I look at my darlings." She smiled and held her hands out to her oldest, who took them and sat back down close to her mother. "You never know, sweetheart, you may come to love Brinnid in the end."
"Do you love Papa?"
Ansella was quiet for a long time. "Yes," she finally said, "I do. Not in the way that most women would say they love their husbands. We rarely share a bed--haven't for years, but you know that. And we enjoy different amusements. But he's never shamed me with his mistresses. And he's let me have my way with you children, and that's what was most important to me. We share an affection and regard for one another. I know that this sets back your relationship with him, but don't think poorly of your father, Sedra. He is a better man than you know."
"I shall never think well of a man who would give his daughters away so callously," said Sedra bitterly.
"Your father doesn't do this callously, to the contrary, he has hopes that Brinnid will be a good husband for you. Your fate is not the fault of your father but of your birth," said Ansella gently. "I made sure you belonged to me while you were small, but now that you are grown, you belong to Tremont." Ansella stroked her daughter's cheek, and Sedra struggled to calm herself. "I wish you hadn't inherited my temper, sweetheart. My temper and your father's intelligence--a dangerous combination in a woman."
"I suppose that's one good thing," murmured Sedra. "Sairish women are held in higher regard."
"Yes!" said her mother, clasping her hands together. "Yes, that's very true! Oh, Sedra, this may turn out to be a very good match for you indeed, and I hope you are happy in it, truly!"
Sedra raised her eyes to her mother's, brushed a tear from the corner of one and smiled. "I hope so too, Mama. I will do my best, I promise. Now. What should I do with these things?"
Ansella sighed. "If you were Ellika, I'd say send them back. But you are not the coquette your sister is. She could make such a thing quite flirtatious."
"Elly could make falling off a horse flirtatious," snorted Sedra.
"In which case," said her mother, ignoring the remark, "I think we had best go with your strengths, which are intelligence, propriety and sincerity. It was very improper for him to send these things directly to you, as you know, but Winmer is complicit. We could ask your father directly, but he's so impatient with things like this. We could ask the Teacher--"
"No," said Sedra firmly. "I will not listen to the Teacher's counsel."
"More fool you, then," sniffed her mother, and Sedra scowled. "Very well. When you received the package, what were your thoughts?"
"I was intrigued, both with the contents and the letter, I confess."
"All right, reply to him that you have received his gift, that you are rather shocked at the impropriety of his approach, but that you are intrigued. That seems to me to be the best course of action."
"That seems rather flirtatious to me," said Sedra doubtfully.
"But it's the truth, isn't it?" smiled her mother.
"Yes," she answered, blushing, "it is."
The Intimate History books are drafts. Keep that in mind as you read. A fully edited and revised version of each book will appear beginning in 2010.
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I find myself rather
I find myself rather intrigued with Brinnid and that I want to like him.
This is promising. I can't
This is promising.
I can't wait to get to know Sedra better. And I am also curious about Brinnid. Can't wait for the next chapter
Politcal intrigue
I must confess that I am also intrigued by Brinnid. What possessed him to send the gift in such a manner? Has he heard of Sedra's disapproval, and if so is he trying to soften her up, or is he just that good of a guy to send presents to a lady/wife he has never met?
I think maybe that when he gets there he may offer to take her bird-hunting. To which, of course Sedra must inform him that the Tremonts do not hunt with birds as it is a tradition that dates back many hundred years. Brinnid will then apologize profusely and will sit and listen earnestly while Sedra regales him with the story.
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Or, ya know, maybe not.
My alignment is Chaotic Awesome.
Mystery date anyone...
He shows promise! Maybe he will balance out her serious side a bit? I think I could like this guy... Cant wait for more info!
Reading , absorbing, pondering.
What a cheeky thing!
...but I have a weakness for cheeky improprieties, especially those done with grace and humor. Part of my Coyote nature, I think. Like others who have commented, it definitely makes me eager to meet Brinnid. I only hope he turns out not to be too arrogant.
I wonder if alliance with Sair will (perhaps directly as a result of Brinnid's gift) have an effect on Tremont law? It wouldn't be the first time such connections had far-reaching effects.
As if I didn't already adore your writing, this chapter makes me hungry again for more and more. I am quite pleased with Book 1 and, now, looking forward even more to Book 2 than I thought I would. Thanks again for sharing your lovely work with us.
Light and laughter,
SongCoyote
I like Sedra
Smart ladies are always nice, though so far she seems a little serious.
Hopefully Brinnid will understand the tradition in of not keeping birds caged up. Though it will be seen if he chooses to follow the same tradition.
Nice intro to the new book MeiLin.
excellent
Great chapter, Mei, and a wonderful opening to book 2. Can't wait to learn more of this Brinnid fellow.
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Hurrah!
Great chapter. ^_^
Brinnid seems like he could be a decent sort of fellow, and I am already become fonder of Sedra. Also, I am glad to be seeing Ansella at more than just meals. Yay motherly interaction yay!
Professional lurker, at your service. ^_^
So many possibilities
Depending on how well-informed Brinnid is on both Sedra's hobbies and Tremontine laws and customs, this opens up a rather wide range of possibilities for Brinnid's character: anything from arrogant prick to subversively humourous and sympathetic seems possible, although I do hope for the latter.
I am intrigued.
I really hope...
I really hope that this marriage works out for Sedra. If Brinnid planned this himself, he seems to be rather witty and adept at confusing the bejeezus out of Sedra, and I think she would like a challenge.
It's been mentioned that Sedra takes after Harsin more so than do Ellika and Temmin. Teacher told Temmin that Harsin preferred lectures to reading out of the book, but Sedra seems to have heard the Tale of Two Kingdoms and taken it to heart - so outraged over possibly receiving a caged bird! Perhaps Sedra received more of Ansella's empathy than previously realized...?
- BCT
certainty
Why are you sure that she heard the story from the book, and not from a lecture?
(Though I agree, it's likely.)
It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan
Hmmm.
Interesting point, now I'm not so sure. It just seems that such a tale would be better told with the book, as opposed to just a discussion of the facts.
- BCT
Questions . . .
More than anything else, I'm chomping at the bit to find out what exactly the Teacher did to ostracize himself from Sedra's good graces. She seems so level headed that it would have to be something rather dire!
Hmm... interesting. Now, like
Hmm... interesting. Now, like Gudy already wondered, what does Brinnid know, and why did he send such a package? If he sent this and not something else out of ignorance for the tremontine laws and customs, it will tarnish his reputation a bit. But what if he knew exactly what he was doing and just wanted to see what reaction she'd show? Well, I am intrigued by this very question...
Well
Emmae's influence lingers, doesn't it.
Can't say as I like Brinnid that much yet. The gift seems at the same time too little and too much. Not personal enough and too many things at once. I would have advised him to send a letter and a simple gift, after trying to find out from the secretary what she was like. Given her habits, I probably would have sent a rare book. A book about Sairland would be good, but it'd have to be one that was somehow engaging and romantic, serious but not dry or authoritative. But time will tell how the two of them get along. I'm looking forward to finding out.
I'm wondering about Sairland's royal magic. Leutefloss had one, and so did Tremont.
I'll let you know when I figure it out.
Yeah, but
I'd've done something similar.
However:
Neither you nor I (to my knowledge) has been born to a throne and groomed to be a monarch. He, I suspect, is accustomed to (a) people assuming some familiarity with him (as a bit of a celebrity), (b) people accepting overly personal gifts, and (c) dealing with people as definitively not-an-equal.
Sedra, I suspect, will challenge him significantly.
It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan
I like it. A lot.
If you want to find out what someone's made out of, force their hand. The gift was indeed cheeky and designed to provoke a reaction...and so it has. Yes, it's "gift" but more than that it's "test" and probably "foreshadowing" (from the King, as well as MeiLin). I'm not much for conspiracy theories but I don't think I'm off-base here...if Sedra is intelligence, propriety, and sincerity, the King may yet be intelligence, boldness, and sincerity. It's possible that they'll be very good for each other.
And me? My bet's on "young, benevolent and hot". MeiLin crafts this stuff with an eye towards good steamy sex, you know
She might be counting on this match for drama, but we're going to be following "current" time for a good many books, I hope, and she can always use the big red book story for a little spice. I can't imagine that the erased Queen had an easy go of it...
I'm also rather fond of falconry...a sport of kings in many cultures and eras. The birds aren't caged, they perch and are restrained by leather jesses. Until they're used to hunt, that is--then they're set free, and the reason they return is the same one a golden retriever does...a bond between hunter and animal. I'll stop before I wax even more poetic, but...really cool stuff. A quick google discovered http://www.themodernapprentice.com/
Only critique: I got confused as to who spoke the second part in the following passage, and had to read it several times...my first instinct was that Sedra started speaking:
"More fool you, then," sniffed her mother, and Sedra scowled. "Very well. When you received the package, what were your thoughts?"
Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!
a new speaker always rates a new paragraph
That's proper style, and the style I follow here.
Aw crap
You mean I was supposed to pay attention in English class? >.<
Also, while perusing that website it turns out I was a bit too idealistic. To quote the falconer who runs it:
"Even birds recently trapped return to their handlers. Some of this is acclimation to returning to the falconer on cue, but much of it can be attributed to the bird realizing that the falconer provides good quality food, safe habitat, and security."
and elsewhere,
"These are animals that see you as a food source, not as a source of affection, and they do not give affection back. Working with animals is much easier when we see them desiring to be with us. Cats, dogs, and horses all have a built-in desire for relationships. Most of these species of birds do not."
It's definitely falconry equipment, however. A plume for the hood http://www.themodernapprentice.com/hoods.htm
and some bells
http://www.themodernapprentice.com/bell.htm
But if those gloves were supposed to be the gauntlet, that better be some pretty tough goatskin. A common cheap, modern gauntlet is a welding glove. Check out those talons in the bell pictures! I guess the pair is so that you can wear them to dinner, after you come in from hawking?
Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!
either tough
or presentation quality.
so many little threads to
so many little threads to starts drawing upon. I wonder about the bells.... They sound so pretty, but I must confess that my idea regarding them are probably wildly inappropriate.
I like this view of Ansella, though. She knows how to play the game, and she knows her daughters well.
"A gift of the spirits is in equal parts a curse." -AK
the bells
I didn't realize the conclusions that could be drawn from them until I put up the preview. Then I went, gee, I'm eviller than even I knew!
Indeed
The bells, combined with the feathers... I must admit that I did NOT think of anything remotely close to falconry. I was more like... hmm... tickle-y stuff... and... bells on leather! Oh my!
Whoops. *attempts to drag mind out of gutter*
Professional lurker, at your service. ^_^
I was trying to figure out
I was trying to figure out what the gloves had to do with feather ticklers and bells in the kinkiest set of circumstances...
didn't get too far.
It's supposed to be a challenge, that's why they call it a shortcut. If it was easy it would just be the way.
--Road Trip
"Funny. Terrible, but funny." (that's typically my aim)
-NorthwoodsMan
>D
This is an intriuging chapter; before this, we've never seen an 'embarassed' side to Sedra. And the line, "Your fate is not the fault of your father but of your birth," is so poetic and perfect for describing the situation Sedra's in. I wonder what the purpose of the tassel was... Hm.
I hope Brinnid isn't a complete jerk, and that Sedra finds the same contentment in her relationship to Brinnid that Ansella found. >w<'
| industrial art as applied to peace. |
Waaah!
I STILL don't know what the gifts are, though! Am I just particularly clueless? Three emerald studded balls that chime? A feather tassle? Gloves? Sounds like a box of toys that goes along with a copy of the Kama Sutra. Which would be wildly inappropriate in this instance, besides, the Queen said they were bird-related, which of course, tells me nothing.
Gah! How many chapters will it be until we find out? Five? Eight?
Ebil Mei is ebil.
Heterosexuality is not normal, it's just common. --Dorothy Parker
falconry supplies
We'll see them in action, or things like them, in chapter three.
Improvement, upon an already formidable talent.
Well, I stated in the first chapter of the first missive that you are a very capable wordsmith, but wondered about the setting.
I wonder no longer. Your world is deeply realized, and your characterization is quite lush. People are surprising, even the ones whom I'd expect to be quite staid. Also, I get a genuine sense of history here, of long, interesting lineages and rich, interesting lives.
Plus, there's there is an impressive cohesion. Sedra is surprised at the gift of the falconry equipment, the gauntlets and lure, because there is no tradition of falconry in Tremont. Why?
Because of Emmae's awful ordeal, and Warin's thoughtful gift. So very nice.
Although, I must confess, I find the Traveler's role in that distressing, to say the least. But I'm sure all will be made clear in time.
I've read every chapter avidly, many of them several times, and I'm quite hooked. Your History is a lush treasure, and even though I have much less time of late, I wanted to leave a bit of encouragment. Keep it up! This is top notch stuff, and if anything, your voice is getting stronger as you delve deeper into the missive.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Now I don't feel so guilty.
Now I don't feel so guilty. My first thought on the gift was "sex toys!" I was expecting Sedra to think the same way and get offended. Obviously our minds differ. At least for now . . .
Because almost all the readers
have dirty, dirty minds. Bad minds, BAD! *spank*
Oh dear, that isn't helping...
Wow! Sarcasm! That's original!
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