I am ready to reveal my work
So, here's the deal, I've been working on a few stories, one of which I've really decided would work best as a serial.
So I started working on it on my writing LiveJournal, and now I'm thinking I'd like a few people to read it and find any major flaws with it, grammar, spelling, readability, etc.
It's pretty much just a beta. I just want to make sure I have something people will want to read, before I start investing time into it.