Is it too late for the Bandwagon?

I've been writing... several stories, really. I'm trying to make myself concentrate on only one though, and that I've been uploading to and... Well no one is reading it. And I would really like it if people did?

I know this format isn't the best, but I think it'll be easy enough to follow, there are, after all, very few posts so far.

So if you don't read it I understand, I don't know if I'll be able to do a regular updating thing, right now I'm just trying to get the stories out of my head and into... computer Smile

But I'd love to know what you (all) think.

Gudy's picture


... The Plane Ride, and Blood Magic seems interesting, if a bit slow, so far.

Now, I admit to being a bit of a pedant when it comes to spelling and grammar, but I did find the number of spelling and grammar (especially tense) errors a bit on the distracting side.

(As an aside, I found the implied contrast between sourdough and rye bread slightly funny. You can't bake rye bread without souring the dough in some way, so most good rye bread (including Pumpernickel) is, in fact, sourdough-based, as is, IMO, most good wheat bread.)

FWIW, I think I'll keep on reading...

Mith's picture


I haven't actually edited it. Like, seriously, edited it. I will though, at some point. In fact, I'm going to do that now. The Plane Ride, yeah, I don't like writing in present tense, it's hard and weird sounding to me and I break out of it. But I am a masochist and making myself write things that are hard for me.

Blood Magic ought to pick up. I started it as a scene in my head, but it's been growing- I'm just not sure into what.

GreenGlass's picture


Aww, the link doesn't work any longer. Sad

Mith's picture


I kinda deleted it. :/

It was annoying me, and I was having trouble finishing it (or well, getting to the point where I can finish).

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