Beta Tester's Wanted/Needed
Today I got inspired to write a novel/web serial (i hope), and it's a scifi story, my first scifi story ever. I've got what I think is a solid opening paragraph, but I'm not really sure. I'd like to gauge you guy's reactions to it. If you like, I'll try to turn into into a web serial. If not, well it's back to the drawing board for me. So please read and be brutally honest with me.
My name is Josselyn Danielle. I was born on the 23rd day of March in 1984. You might be thinking to yourself why one such as myself would hold on to information like that. Others like me have long since forgotten their names, their original names, and in my opinion forgotten who they are. I don't want that to happen to me. I want to hold on to as much of my humanity as possible, after all I didn't ask for this. I don't believe any of us did, and I don't want to meet those of us who did. Sadly, what's done is done, it can't be changed, and I can't go back to what I was. What I can do is keep this evil from spreading, I won't let what happened to me happen to others. Maybe it'll gain me points when all this over. I hope so because I really don't look forward to what's in store for me at the end.