i bet i'm doing this wrong

But I want to see if I can get 3 story requests in a row rejected. Obviously, if it's taking me this long, I'm not thinking enough.

For my 3rd attempt at a pre-new system bonus story:
How's about the day Connin got Sedra to give in to him physically. What was it that made her willing to sleep with him. (or is that better put, willing to let him take his pleasure?) anyway....

I'll try to remember to not take 2 weeks to come back & see if this one works.

kawaiikune's picture

Embodiment

*that* has potential. I like it a lot! That sounds like it will be a very, very sexy story.

V's picture

Embodiment

Sexy or magical, one or the other. Either way--yeah, I think it'll pass muster, and yeah, should be a good story Smile

kawaiikune's picture

Embodiment

sexy *and* magical? Somehow it didn't seem like it was magical, but like it was more because she was turned on by sexy knowledge. I'll take it either way.

V's picture

Embodiment

I was thinking "it could be either" but wrote it in a way that clearly won't stand up to scrutiny

Andrea's picture

Supplicant

I'm really curious about Connin. And Teacher and Maeb of course, but Connin seems more accessible.

MeiLin's picture

Most High

I'll put it on the list. Yay you!

TheBoy's picture

Embodiment

I can almost see a gleam in her eyes...

Looks like my long-suffering question will have to wait. Wink

/pout

MeiLin's picture

Most High

let alone Connin/Sedra smut. Smile Over-exertion + not sleeping/nightmares = fibromyalgia flare. I am miserable Mei. :O But! I am still knocking stuff out, just not as fast as I want. I got a good start on ch 14 and I've finished ch 1 bk 1 rev 2 and have sent it to Netta the Edittah.

Actually, on the subject of Sedra: Once things have calmed down a bit, I intend to do a series of chapbooks about various characters before the story starts based on the bonus stories, ie, Sedra at the Keep before Temmin arrives, including her affair with Connin and her--whatever it was--with Teacher. One for Ellika, one for the twins (including the "accounts" stories). Possibly the story of Jenks and Patrin. Little books that won't be published here in finished form, apart from the bonus stories they're based on.

I feel a poll coming on.

TheBoy's picture

Embodiment

I was just kidding...The pool of bonus story possibilities just got so much bigger from my first couple to the end of the old points system.

MeiLin's picture

Most High

But I still feel badly about the whole thing. What a rollercoaster of a month.

TheBoy's picture

Embodiment

You doin' the best you can, without undue risk to self or others?

All we ask.

My mom quotes a character from kiddie TV in her youth: "the best I can do is the best I can do, and I'm doing the best that I can." We know you are doing the same.

NorthwoodsMan's picture

Embodiment

I'm all for the story of Jenks and Patrin!! Many votes for that.

kawaiikune's picture

Embodiment

I'm impressed you're getting as much done as you are with all that going on!

Those stories sound awesome! I can't wait to read them, especially Sedra's and the twins.

V's picture

Embodiment

Somewhere I saw you worrying about how many chapters you might be behind (I don't even know). I'd suggest wiping the slate clean (stop stressing) and, if anything, just putting them into a reserve fund to reappear as a few Saturday chapters if we ever miss the target. We understand that sometimes life happens and it might be easier to rebaseline and start fresh.

TheFerret's picture

Devotee

I feel for you. I'm sorry it's been a rough month, but I think we all understand! I'm not worried about WHEN anything gets written!

On this end, I've got like 3 paying projects that have just GOT to get wrapped up, then there's a load of probably 8 freebie projects we've given to friends getting married at church... In short, I think I have 3 pd wedding videos, 5 free ones, 2 spec photo albums, and about 5 other things i have GOT to get finished and soon.

20 more weeks, and I get to figure out how to have a 1st grader, pre-schooler, and new baby and me (plus house, hubby, and all the stuff I'll ignore like dishes and laundry). Thank goodness I quit working, other than for myself! Yes, I know it's been done before... I'll survive. As long as I don't forget to take my Thyroid and Zoloft!

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