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Tue, 09/09/2008 - 7:34pm — Bedazzled101
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Prologue and Chapter 1

Can I just say, it should be mandatory for every reader to go back and re-read the prologue once they have caught up to the most recent chapters? I have to say, it gave me even more of a thrill than the first time I read it(and that was pretty high up there).
And I have to admit, I usually don't re-read stories(except all Kurt Vonnegut Jr., and Joseph Heller's Catch 22), due to my short attention span...but I have now decided to re-read your work. I'm so excited!
Gosh, I just love Jenks, and I love the innocence of Temmin in this first chapter. He is so sweet and child like, I just want to pinch his cheek JK...LOL I also adore the banter between them both.
"If I didn't know that was from your sister I'd swear it was a love letter, you've read it so many times."-Jenks This line made me giggle, I shall say no more...

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