Viruslife's Story: A Bed of Grass (Alvo)

Eleven-year-old Alvo listened to the crickets sing. It was late; he didn't know how late, but the sky was black and crammed with stars, and it was finally cool after the hot, hot day. The air in the field where he lay with his best friend smelled clean if dusty, the scent of hay mingling with the honeysuckle climbing the stable walls in the nearby yards.

He shifted on his bedroll and tried to see the face of the boy lying next to him. "Temmy? Are you asleep?"

"Hm?" said Temmin, turning over. "No, are you?"

"No, stupid, how could I be asleep and talking to you?"

"I dunno, Alvo, maybe you talk in your sleep." Temmin stretched his arms and then settled them under his head. "Besides, you shouldn't call a prince 'stupid.'"

"If a prince says something stupid, I'm going to call him stupid. Stupid."

"Feh," said Temmin. "Look," he said, pointing. "You can see the Diamond especially well tonight, it's twinkling."

Alvo looked up into the sky; Temmin was right, the brightest star in the King's Crown was sparkling like a real diamond. "When do you go to court to live with your father?"

"Lessee--five more years."

"Are you excited?"

Temmin snorted. "Whyever would I want to go to court? Seddy and Elly want to go. Seddy says--" and here he broke into a very accurate impression of his oldest sister "--it is only in the more cosmopolitan air of the capital that she shall ever be able to find discourse worthy of the name." Alvo giggled. "Elly just wants to go to parties, I think. Parties are stupid."

"So you don't want to go," said Alvo softly, still looking up at the sky.

"I never want to leave Whithorse, ever, Alvo," said Temmin decidedly. His voice was tinged with sleepiness for all its decision. "Ever, ever, ever."

The two boys lay side by side in the dark. Temmin's eyes eventually slid shut, but Alvo turned over and watched as Temmin's breathing became even. "Temmy?" he whispered.

"Hm?" mumbled Temmin, very nearly asleep.

"I never want you to leave Whithorse either."

"Ha'right," said Temmin. He smacked his lips once, and fell fast asleep. Alvo listened to his soft snoring for a long time before he too fell asleep on their bed of grass.


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TheBoy's picture

ooh...

tough break for Alvo. (And his chipmunk bretheren Simo and Theodo...sorry, I'm a little punchy. I'm packing up almost everything I own right now.)


MeiLin's picture

what am I to do with you?

Now I'll never be able to type that name with a straight face again...


TheBoy's picture

I keep hearing this...

"you're incorrigible."

I will consider your voice added to the chorus. Please forgive me.

Immediately ETA: I'm approaching 50. Can my question be about Simo and/or Theodo? Eye-wink


Kitabare's picture

*sigh*

Add my voice to that chorus as well.

Although rather than a "you're incorrigible" you'll more than likely hear the dull thunk of a facepalm.


Paizleigh's picture

Awww. . .

Aww, that's sweet.


Scorpiocrone's picture

Ah Puppy love

Dont you kinda feel bad for Alvo. Hes so taken by Temmy and Temmy is oblivious.


BCT's picture

Temmy's Oblivion

That would be par for the course, wouldn't it?


MeiLin's picture

He's 11!

How many of you guys would have been aware of something even this subtle at 11? Alvo isn't even 100% sure what's going on. All he knows for sure is he wants to be near Temmin for the rest of his life.

As for obliviousness, I got hit on once by a famous person, and it took me 20 years--no lie, 20 years--to realize it. And even then I didn't realize it, someone else pointed it out to me when I retold the story of this person's peculiar behavior. So perhaps that's why Temmin is my dear. Smiling


V's picture

This begs more questions than it answers

This begs more questions than it answers, even tho we can presume they didn't get any.

Were they the young hot kind of famous person, the old but distinguished type of famous person, or the old and nasty kind? Were you filled with remorse when you figured it out? What would you have done if you'd realized it at the time?

But I agree with the "He's 11!" comment...fun to watch us readers pouncing at shadows.


MeiLin's picture

answers to some but not all of the begged questions ;)

I cannot say much about the person, except that he was a male person who was at least 15 years older than me, and not the sort of person at all that one would have thought would go around hitting on young women (I was about 23 at the time, I think).

Filled with remorse? No. Filled with LOLz? TOTALLY. Laughing out loud I STILL haven't stopped giggling. It was the most ridiculous thing, in no small part because I was so completely oblivious, and it's so obvious in hindsight.

If I'd realized it at the time I would have been completely flummoxed; I wouldn't have known what in the heck to do. As it was I was flummoxed and didn't know what to do; I couldn't figure out what he was on about, and why my boss was so mad at me! I didn't do anything!


Kitabare's picture

The beans...

... you must spill them. I want to hear this story, even if you can't say who it is.

Tell us, and let us decide how obvious it was.

*looks around for a red leather bound book*


MeiLin's picture

nope

some stories shall remain untold, even if you earn 10,000 points. Eye-wink


TheGrayCrayon's picture

AWWW.

that was beautiful. i realy love these little insights.


SongCoyote's picture

Detecting subtlety was

Detecting subtlety was certainly not my strong point at 11, though two years later was a different story, when the one who would be my first love first made overtures....

Two years after that I had some pretty interesting experiements in a treehouse Eye-wink

Light and laughter,
SongCoyote


Nye's picture

Temmy begins his trail of

Temmy begins his trail of broken hearts, completely oblivious. I wonder how many there were, really. So innocent.


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