Gudy's Bonus Story: A Balancing of Accounts

Gudy asked for his points story, and I'm paraphrasing, how did the Teacher find the twins, and how did Teacher decide to sponsor them for the Temple? He gets two questions for all the work he does in the wiki, but I reserve the right to answer in two parts. Here's part one, part two to follow soon.

Long, long ago, not long after men began reckoning years from the day of Temmin the Great's death, the Keep was still a small stone fortress, and the forest around it had just been named the King's Woods, for kings were new in Three Mountains. In these woods was a little sapling, and to this sapling one day came a figure in long black robes. On this little sapling was a spot where a knot would one day form, and to this spot the black-robed one affixed a little silver mirror. Long, pale fingers sketched a glowing gold sign over it, and then the figure disappeared in a swirl through the mirror itself.

Spokes passed, then decades, and then centuries. The sapling grew into a mighty tree, and the knothole grew around the mirror until it was hidden inside. Still, if you knew to look for it, you could see yourself inside the knothole--if you knew to look for it. The mirror never faded, nor did it crack; it remained as shiny as the day it was made.

It was at this mirror that a gray eye peered in increasing irritation this day in 982. Suddenly, the mirror began to mist over; the owner of the eye stepped back. A swirling mass passed through the mirror, out the knothole, and coalesced into a handsome young man with rusty hair and pale blue eyes. "Well?" said the Teacher.

"We found them," said Connin, panting. "Give me a moment." He propped himself against the tree.

"Is it that taxing these days for you to come through a mirror?" said the Teacher, arching a brow.

"What? Oh, no," said Connin, grinning. "I was leading the bouncers on quite the merry chase. Took me a while to find a good reflection. Apparently they took exception to someone just appearing in their midst and fondling the merchandise without payment. There," he said, standing up and straightening his waistcoat. "Better. After all, you can't send me into a whorehouse and expect me to leave the whores unmolested."

"You didn't—-" said Teacher with a slightly horrified expression.

"Of course not! I've had 'em in singles and pairs and groups, I've had 'em male and female, but I've never had 'em before their time. Nothing less likely to attract my interest than a child, in fact the mere idea is enough to keep my pecker in my pants for a good week."

"A whole week. You surprise me." The Teacher watched as Connin sat down on a nearby downed log and began paring his nails with his knife. "And they're what we were promised?"

"To the letter," said Connin, "but you know Mama's never wrong about these things. Wait until you see them, they're astonishing. I suggest you go collect them right away, though. Their mother left quite the debt, or at least that's the madam's story. She's raking in the gold--no silver for twins this rare, and this young. If you don't fetch them now, they'll be quite ruined very soon."

Teacher nodded. "What are their names?"

"Obby. Issak and Allis Obby. They're at Mistress Polls' place in the brothel district of Belleth Town, a very fine establishment, really, quite high tone, and patronized by the best of society. Been going there since not long after her grandmother opened it a good 60 years ago, and they've made a right go of it."

"I would hardly call a house that whores out children 'a very fine establishment,'" said the Teacher grimly.

"Not their usual thing, you know," shrugged Connin. "Merely taking advantage of a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity. Oh, don't purse your lips at me like that, not even you can deny the way of the world."

"In this, at least, I can." Teacher walked to the tree and peered through the knothole. "Show me Mistress Polls of Belleth Town." The mirror shimmered for a moment and the image of a carefully dressed and arranged, very respectable-looking middle-aged woman appeared. She was sitting at a desk going over the accounts, or at least that was the impression she gave as she peered at a ledger book through a pair of round spectacles. Teacher reached through the mirror, to coalesce on the other side.


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Blue Coyote's picture

Poor twins

Sad Poor twins, being sold as whores... and we don't even know how young they are in this. It also gives me pause to wonder how exactly they wound up in the Lover's Temple. I thought that a person had to be a virgin to supplicate to that temple? Or was that what he meant about them being 'ruined'? But if she's already making money off of them... Auugh! Mei! How can you make me contemplate that she's only renting them out in increments!?! Like the joke about the three-legged pig, it's just too awful.
And... am I first comment?
... Ook!
*runs away*


Shade's picture

Agreed

Their situation really is tragic ><. Teacher is more and more cementing his place as my favorite character which his various actions.

Much love to the bit with the sapling and the mirror Laughing out loud I love little glimpses into the past like that.

. . . what's the joke about the three-legged pig?


MeiLin's picture

they are 10 in 982

Their mother has been dead only a couple of months, and while she was alive she protected them as much as she could from Mrs. Polls. Now that she's gone, Mrs. Polls figures they're going to be whores sooner or later, why not sooner--especially while Issak is young and still marketable. She didn't turn them out of doors, she fed them well, she clothed them very well, what's the problem? Hers is the casual evil of the profit motive.


Shade's picture

That is very true, especially

That is very true, especially considering the background Polls comes from.

The casual evil of the profit motive is sometimes more disturbing than straight out evil, I guess. Sort of an ends justify the means . . .

I had a question about the partial selling too . . . from what we've seen of both Sedra's actions and at least one marriage ritual, the prime definition and proof of virginity for these people is the hymen and the breaking thereof. So could the twins have been providing other sexual favors or being the repository for those favors but still be considered virgins in the eyes of the Temple, as long as there wasn't any actual penetration in the case of either?


MeiLin's picture

Embodiment != Supplicant

The path to Embodiment is not via Supplicancy or postulancy. You don't have to be a virgin to become an Embodiment.


MeiLin's picture

and

you don't have to be a virgin to be a postulant, either. If that were the case, Senik would have been disqualified at a very young (consenting, partner-appropriate) age.


Gudy's picture

Teacher has more restraint than I

I'd have burned the place down, more likely than not. Nothing wrong with running a brothel, but whoring out ten year old children, slowly and casually destroying their self-worth and humanity in the process? If anything is inexcusable, this is.

Thank you, MeiLin. Even though that was every bit as dark and disturbing as I feared it would be.


blwinteler's picture

I did some searching

Didn't take long. I am pretty sure this is the pig joke:
One day a man drove by a farm and saw a three-legged pig. The man went up to the farmer and said, "Excuse me sir, but why does that pig only have 3 legs?"
"Well," said the farmer, "that there pig is very special. One time my wife was cooking something she stepped out of the kitchen and it caught on fire. No one in the house knew about it but the pig and he saved me, my wife, and my 2 kids."
"That's amazing sir but why does that pig only have three legs?" said the man.
"Then there was that time the pig saw a big storm coming and we didn't. The pig ran into the house and dragged us out to the storm cellar. If it weren't for that pig we would all be dead."
"But still, that doesn't explain why the pig only has 3 legs." "And I remember the time my youngest son was stuck up in a tree but I was too far away to hear him scream. The pig came running towards me and led me to where he was."
"Well, that is miracle but how come that pig only has 3 legs?" the man said quite annoyed at this point.
"Well," said the farmer, "with a pig that special... you have to eat 'em real slow."

Ok, now that that is done, I can't wait to see part two! This was already quite intriguing. Thank you for the story MeiLin Smiling


V's picture

Yup

That's definitely the one Smiling I've heard the punch line as something more like "You don't eat a pig like that all at once"


Blue Coyote's picture

pig joke

Yeah that's the one... although I heard it a little bit differently, the pig had a peg-leg and the punchline was "Ya don't eat a pig that good all at once!"


thellieem11's picture

Details

The devil is in the details. I quite enjoy the bit about the mirror.

As much as I hate what that woman was trying to do with the children, I can understand her thought process. It's screwed up, but to one with morals such as hers, it makes perfect sense. And one really can't blame her. It's the way she was raised herself. Connin said the place was established by her grandmother 60 years prior. It was in her cards to become a madame.


MeiLin's picture

correction

I forgot as I wrote that the construct "Mrs." isn't Tremontine. I've edited and subbed "Mistress," which is correct.


Nye's picture

foretold twins, too. It's

foretold twins, too. It's nice to note that Teacher and Maeb do manage to talk a bit through Connin... and Connin can do something of use.


MeiLin's picture

Connin's plenty useful

especially if you need subtext.


Clare-Dragonfly's picture

Oh my

Promised? By whom, I wonder? Nerr and Neya, perhaps?

Also, caught an error: "Still, if you knew to look for it, you could see yourself inside the knothole--if you knew to look for it." Unless you just mean to emphasize the condition, of course!


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